Reviews by BlueDiamond
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner

All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85743
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

 Thank God, you moved this story.  I love it and can not for the life of me find anything that is so offensive in this story for FF to find fault with.  This is the most believable and tasteful and loving story.  I am glad I have found this site and MyVampFiction for you authors to continue on.  I really like this site(TheWriter'sCoffeShop).  Take care and look forward to more.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great that James got what he deserved.  I am on pins and needles to find out Bella and baby are ok.  Don't let her lose the baby.

Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: The Best Revenge is Good Sex

Billie?  There are so many beautiful girl names.  I like Mae.



Author's Response:

My grandmother was named Wilhelmina and everyone called her Billie which is why I picked it.  I had been trying to find a story to use it in and it felt right for this Bella to be into the boys names for girls type of thing.  Thanks for the review though and your opinion, I love hearing from you guys!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Carnage

Your writing style is great, but, I really don't like the over gore and bizarreness of this.  It goes to far in taking the baby and then to have Bella have to have complete hysterectomy.  It was bad enough in the beginning to have both Edward and Bella act so completely imature about this.  I want to stress again the writing is great but don't like the shock value used.  Now we have the police giving him the address on the sly.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Game On

Love, love, love, your Edward and also Jasper and Emmett.  I like the true and more charasmatic Edward.  I miss that the movies don't capture the sexy/velvet voice of Edward.  I also love your Bella in this.  Thanks.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you like my characters.  I'm having a good time with them :)  I love Rob's real voice, actually, and think they should have just made Edward British.  I wouldn't have protested.

Thanks for your review and I'm really thrilled to hear you're enjoying them.  I think that I'd like to spend time with all of them in real life if I could, though my time with Edward would need to be private!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference

Ha, Edward is on his way and you know he is pissed.  Look out.  Can't wait for next chapter.  Really like when you do your football commentaries for the games.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I love writing the games, making them come to life.  Love that you enjoy it too!

I'm glad you're excited for next chapter!  We'll have to see what happens!  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum

Really liked all the banter and picking on each other.  Great laughs,



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  I love writing them all together and having a good time :)  More soon!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

Heck what could she have reservations about?



Author's Response:

The speed of them moving in together, her father's reaction, word gettting out about that to fellow reporters...plenty of things really.  It's not like she took days to answer him though ;)

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Home Sweet Home

That information was in the nick of time.  Love the description of the ring.  I don't prefer white diamonds either.  I like my blue diamond and it matches the color of my birth stone.  It was a choice between a darker blue like a saffire and the blue/green of my birthstone.  It is different and cool.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Thinking back on how Renee didn't believe Bella about the abuse, it makes hard to feel as bad for what Renee is going thru now.  Sounds like she never didn't anything to protect Bella.



Author's Response:

sigh* yeah I know, I have the same feelings about Renee, I don't know if she deserves a second chance with Bella, I think in the end it will come down to if she can convince Esme that she deserves one, up until now she really hasn't done much as far as mothers go, she was too selfishly wrapped up in her own wants, I guess only time will tell... Thanks a bunch for taking the time to push that little review button... MWAH!~!!!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Ok, this is really interesting and confusing, but is coming along.  I have a question as to whither you are calling the town Forks or Folks.  In summary you called it Forks, but in the chapters here so far they keep calling it Folks.  Which is it?



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Thank you for your review... I am happy you are finding my story interesting and I will try my best to fix your confussion, The town if Forks and I thought I had fixed my mistakes but I must have missed some sorry... Again a big thanks for taking the time to push that button....

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I am trying to understand why you needed Bella to be turned on by Jacob.  I am not a JakexBella fan at all.  They were only meant to be friends.  Also this doesn't make sense with what you have been building up with Edward and with what you have been hinting about with Bella being sexually abused by Phil.  I will try to not let this turn me off completely and try to move on and give it a little more of a chance.



Author's Response:

Hello again, Don't stress I am Team Edward all the way and there is no E / B / J love triangle in my story, Bella is not exactly turned on by Jake... the feeling are from a different source, he just happens to be standing there... Having said that, you can't blame the girl for looking when there is a half naked man boy standing at her door ...  Bella is in the stages of finding herself and her sexuality, Yes she has been abused and she is suffering, but for the first time in her life she is feeling things that she hasn't felt before... I hope that helps... Thanks again for pushing that button

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Now I am more confused.  Why did she have that reaction of arousal to Jacob when Edward was there and why wouldn't he have attributed that to her sight of Jacob and gotten all pissed?  Or was it because Edward was there that she even had that reaction?



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Soooooo sorry to confuse you, Yes her reaction was totally because of Edward.... she doesn't know he is there but she can feel him, (hense the arousal) My Edward is not as jealous as S/M's Edward, and he can hear in Jacob's thoughts that he is concerned for Bella as a person and he is not trying to steal his girl, so there is no real reason for him to be pissed... Love that you want answers and that you are still reading Thanks a bunch....

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I am getting through this and it is really interesting and complex.



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! I'm sooooo happy hehehehehe..... my mind gets a little carried away sometimes so feel free to yell out if you have any questions, Thanks for reviewing Your Ace!!!!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I love to see Rose protrayed in a more positive light like this.  She died so violently and does possess the good trait of family loyalty.



Author's Response:

I had to write Rose this way, I always felt that after what she had been through and the fact that she is so loyal to the cullens that she would want Edward to be happy and being all bitchy to Bella was uncalled for I thought... So thrilled you like my Rose

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

This is getting better and more better.  So many possibilities.  



Author's Response:

sQuEaL!!!!! YAY!!!! Thanks a bunch, I can't wait for you to fly through all the chapts, trust me when I say that things don't slow down from here.... thanks for your review

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Edward is so adorable in his love for her.  I always want Charlie to know the truth about their world so he can stay in Bella's life or world.



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Don't you just wish he was real!!!! I know what you mean about Charlie, he deserves to remain in her life... Thanks again!!!!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Great chapter.  Look for more and can't wait to also see the waking up and living again of Marcus.



Author's Response:

YAY!!!!! Happy New Year, Thanks soooo much for your review, I will update asap, I can't wait for Marcus to come completely to life either, you can be sure it's not far off.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

Please get the next chapter up.  need more.



Author's Response:

MWAHHAAHHAAhhA I promise I won't make you wait too long, Thanks soooooo much for reading my story and for taking the time to review MWAH

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

It was very enlightening to see Bella's work.  Love insightful Emmett.



Author's Response:

I love Emmett, he is the perfect bib brother...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Just love your story here and just couldn't stop and reply til I got to the end.  I like your slow burn and build up of the relationship and trust.  I believe I am from your same neck of the woods.  2 mi into NY from NE PA border.



Author's Response:

Yes... we are close I actually live outside of Allentown PA...I'm glad you like the story...lml

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was a great declaration of love from Edward.  So sad and horrifing what James did.  Need a hitman for James.



Author's Response:

I watched this news show once and there was a guy who said that every city should have a hired hitman, Becasue some people just need to be shot...lol That is a true story ,,it was on 60 minutes, like 20 years ago,  and to this day whenever my husband and I read about something horrific, we look at each other and say "Some people just need to be shot" ...James is one of those people....lol...thanks for reading ..lml

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Of I felt so bad for B with E making her feel unworthy, it was sad.  And, yes I know he will have such a good reason, it still didn't make it easier.  She is used to doing things on her own and especially with the shelter. 



Author's Response:

But she agreed to be his submissiive and follow his rules, and there are times when you have to pay the piper...thanks for reading ..lml

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: photos

thanks for the pics.



Author's Response:

Your welcome, I'll post more as we go along ...

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105128
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Loved it.  Interesting and promising to be different.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am striving to make this as differant as possible. Next chapter will be up soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Thanks for the chapter.  I can't wait to find out about Bella's past.  So many questions.  Keep it going.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying it. Bella's past will be an interesting part of this story. In too many stories she waltzes into town and everything is hunky dorry. So the though came up that what if it wasn't and tha dah a new story is born. I so hope you continue to read it! Thank you!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

I so loved the chapter!  Dom Edward is hot.  I am confused, what did she do wrong for him to punish her?  What were the answers to the other questions in your author note in chapter 2?  More, More, More, can't wait.



Author's Response:

She didn't obey when he ordered her to release, she talked back and tried to wait for him. its not her decission to wait for him. she agreed to do as she was told and he told her to. hence she disobeyed his order. So far everyne who lives this lifestyle has agreed she disbeyed and need to take the punishment for not complying. Yeah since I dont live the lifestyle I had to check into it. I can not tell how much I have learned about this alternative choice. it's very interesting and I found I am fascinated completely.

The answers you seek will be revealed. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Really liked how Bella described Master Edward.  Great job look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to review it! More to come real soon! Hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Panicking Dom

I love Vamp Domward.



Author's Response:

Me too! Vamp Doward is so much fun to write! Thank you for reading it. More to come soon.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

I take it Leah and Jacob trained her.  Interesting.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

Great ending to that chapter.  So sad that Esme got sucked into Tanya's schemes.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad you are getting back into this.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

About time he figured out she was his mate.  Just can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Yeah he can't resist forever. but now he has to get her to feel the same way. thanks for reading and reviewing! nails233

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

Great chapter.  So like this Edward, he is different.  Still wish Esme was never involved with that Tanya bit with trying to violate Edward.  It still saddens me for Esme to be thought of that way.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I can't believe you don't have more reviews on this story.  I know it is one of my favorites and there are probably alot of people reading it.  It is a great and different story.  I will be more dilligent and review each chapter.  Keep up the great work.  Thank you.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Can't wait to find out what happened.  I am going to go right now and check out your other published stories.  Thanks.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Ringtones & The Prodigal Son

Can't wait, hurry back with the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Soon..I'm almost done the next.  posting either tonight or tomorrow..Thanks!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389607
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Great start can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank You... I´m glad you enjoyed it and I promise to update by tomorrow... thanks for reviewing...


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

Great what Alice cooked up to get Jake.  Personally I just can't wait for Edward to find out it is Bella to be the new sub to train.  Just for him.



Author's Response:

 

Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!!  *Happy Thanksgiving*


Laterzzz:P

 

Krazi

xoxoxo

 

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

The stalling or build up on these two having their test scene is killing me.  Can't wait. 



Author's Response:

  Lol!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Wow, what a great twist, loved the chapter and Seth.



Author's Response:

Glad that you enjoyed it!  Seth is a real cutie pie!  You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing!  The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming!  For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter!  Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Laterzzz:)

~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

That was perfect.  Can't wait for him and her to find out about each other.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

Wow, that was great and loved all the pics and that was a long chapter worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Will totally look forward for next chapter.  What is with Bella having school starting soon?  I thought she was done with school and was practicing with Jasper's law firm.  Or do you mean more sub training?

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward decided to come back to Bella, only to find she had left town with Jacob?  Would he have the persistance to find her? Would Bella and Edward get their happily ever after, in spite of the werewolves, Tanya and the Volturi?  canon

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 149 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 667044 Read Count: 181679
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 121: Chapter 121 A Romantic Evening, Part 2

He is so intense and adorable.  Love how he fell asleep.



Author's Response:

SOOOO glad someone else loved how he fell asleep.  I envisioned a baby kind of dong the same thing where they fall asleep and release their hold on the nipple and there is still milk pooling.  It's so cute when they do it, and i would imagine it to be REALLY cute for Edward to be seen like that, so still and gentle.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122 Reactions

He is in so much trouble with Bella, lol, and he will feel like an ass when he finds out.  Too funny.



Author's Response:

Edward needs to learn to check out things before he goes off the deep end!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127 Unexpected

OMG, that was a perfect song and loved it so much.  Really liked the last part with Tanya translating and running out.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49807
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am so enjoying this.  Hurry back need to know what in the box. How but a gheco

 

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is certainly showing promise! I am thinking of Edward as Dr. Crotch Candy.

Blood Master by Wonwordful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by IpsitaC77

Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss

COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131671 Read Count: 94016
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2015 Updated: 23 Jan 2017
Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 12 May 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum

This was a fantastic story. Loved it all. Can't  say enough good things and enjoyed the humorous  parts of Edward and Bellas' interactions. Thank you and excellent  writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! If you enjoyed the humorous parts, you might want to keep an eye out on the reworked version on Fanfiction, that one will probably be edited quite drastically from chapter 3 onwards and will be more lighthearted than this one :) I'm hoping to start updating regularly in September :) take care! 

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 10 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap

I started reading this and I have to this is really a Gem of a Story! Different and funny and enjoyable. I am enjoying  this Edward and Bella. Thank you!

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 10 May 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Of Vampires and Alcohol

A very good point made in this chapterodactyl about how vampires waste there time and could be so much more. I guess the Cullen appeal is that they do in the instance of Carlisle especially  makes better use of his ability as a doctor.

Reviewer: BlueDiamond Signed
Date: 10 May 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9 - Ambush

This Edward is so complex and awesome. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews! Glad to hear you're enoying the story <3