Reviews by BORN2BAVAMPIRE
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullen's have just moved to Forks, there first day of school is boring as many. Until Bella Swan a strange girl who seems to avoid the people at Forks high, she is what as known as a freak. But how could she know of what the Cullen's are?

Smut in later chapters

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38083 Read Count: 42574
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2010
Reviewer: BORN2BAVAMPIRE Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

iappoligise for being a critick but i am a stickler for corect grammer, one of my pet peaves is when people type or say me and ( insert charicter name hear) ( insert what they they think or do hear),l just as you did in the last paragraph, line, or what ever you want to call it. Enstead it should be "Alice and I"

Sorry if i sound crule or mispelled any thing, i realy like your story.