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Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103462
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 : Ruin

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 : Shattered Comfort

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 : Strategy

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 : Masochists

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Pre-game

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drafted

Loved your a/n.

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: For Her

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Lost

Sorry, I didn't leave much love in prior reviews. I was selfish, and didn't want to waste time to get to the next chapter. You had me-hook, line, and sinker from the get go. I'm loving it. Oh, Bella is awesome!
Janell

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! And I got a kick out of all of your smiley faces :) 

And thank you for thinking Bella is awesome. A lot of readers are very rough on her, it breaks my heart. And just a heads up... I just posted the EPOV of chapter 7, Sugar and Spice. It's on my profile, called Dinner at the Hales'. 

 

I hope to hear from you again! 

CM

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Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Breaking Point

I think Riley and Alice's lil' dress are going to work wonders on Edward.

Author's Response:

Riley, at least ;) I'm not sure the lil dress will ever see the light of day. Or club... but I suppose anything's possible.

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Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dirty

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Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Firsts

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Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Little Things

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Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Revelations

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

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Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Closer

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Beautiful Life

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Trouble

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Different

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Things

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Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: All Work and No Play

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Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Like it Could Be Anyone Else?

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Date: 06 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: From the Ground Up

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Imperfect Timing

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Karma Killer by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
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Bella & Edward are undoubtedly the best kept secret in Forks High School, dating in secret but their relationship is doomed to be exposed and the consequences of this will rip both their worlds apart. Who, if anyone will come out of this mess unscathed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Drama, Romance
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 128963 Read Count: 36593
[Report This] Published: 27 Aug 2011 Updated: 13 Jun 2014
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Date: 06 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Puzzle Pieces

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Date Night

After all he has been through, he still hasn't learned a thing.

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Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chasing Cars

I wonder if this will make him go talk to Bella.

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 38: To The Rescue

Emmett to the rescue

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Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: A Formal Outing

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 37: It's Good To Talk, Isn't It?

He should have invited her to janets for his appt. Edward needs all the help he can get. He even did a shitty job w/ jake. He got lucky with him.

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: White Flag

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Building Bridges

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Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Regrets & Decisions

Fucking Crazy!

Author's Response:

Hopefully in a good way if I shocked you?

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Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 28: A Mothers Love

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Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Home Sweet Home

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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing x

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Revisiting the Past

Glad to hear from you. Don't worry about being un-beta'd. :)

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome To Hell

Wasn't expecting Edward. Kudos to you.

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: An Education

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: An Evening With Mr Jack

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Bourbon On The Beach

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Drunk & Disorderly

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Morning After The Night Before

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Mr Brightside

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Beach Boys

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Mount Esme

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner Dates & Discussions

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Decisions, Decisions

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: First Time

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: escapes and goodbyes

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Beach Party

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: We Need To Talk

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Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Morning After The Night Before

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Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Fun & Games

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HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!

Author's Response:

Happy New Year to you too! Thanks for reading! See you next year

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Date: 16 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Anniversaries & Adverseries

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Author's Response:

Thanks for continuing to read and review:

I did promise a sneak peek of the next chapter and here it is, please remember this is not finalised yet so could changed before I publish it:


As I pulled into the parking lot, I could see her getting out of Mike Newton's car. He was being the perfect gentleman, although I could see his hand dipping a little too low on her back for my liking, and obviously Bella's as I saw her push it away. She glared at him, and he held up his hands in mock surrender. I could see that she was mad. My girl looked hot when she was angry. Mike had asked to pick her up from home. She mainly accepted to stop others from asking. I just wished that it was me that had her on my arm, that people were looking at us as a couple, talking about how good we looked together. But no, I was alone and would fade into the background.


It was bad enough that I was going, but I wanted to see Bella and this is the only way. We were hoping that we might be able to manage some time alone, sneak out unseen into one of the changing rooms and have some real fun. Then again, she looked stunning. She wore a midnight blue that accentuated her every curve. The dress was short and showed off her long legs and I felt that familiar stirring within me. My Bella had an amazing body and curves that I spent hours appreciating. Just the thought of another man looking at her, let alone putting his hands on her filled me with jealousy.


Then Jake tapped on the window of my car, and I jumped in fright. I got out of the car and we made our way into the school gym where the dance was being held.
"Wow looks like the Snow Queens Palace in here. Bella should be quite at home." Snickered Jake.
I just laughed at him. She had gained quite the reputation as none of the boys at school could win that stupid bet that they had going, and none of them could work out why. If only they knew the truth. I wasn't sure if I would be the school hero or not. Would they believe me?

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Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Friends and Enemies

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Date: 28 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: In & Out Of Conciousness

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Date: 09 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Friends Will Be Friends

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Date: 23 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Revelations

Wow!

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Thanks for reading and reviewing! Is that a good wow or a bad one??? 

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Date: 21 May 2012 Title: Chapter 29: A Mothers Love II

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Contemplation & Reflection

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Shattered Dreams

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Down to Earth

Can't wait for next chapter

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Into The Lions Den

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Moving On

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Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 113005
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?

Fic diving, and this looked good. So, here I am.

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Playing With Fire

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: A Fine Line

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: On the Edge

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Slipping

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Beginning

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Two Steps Back

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Test

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Flying Solo

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Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Surprise!

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Home for the Holidays

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Countdown

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Chicago

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Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Hot Commodity

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Minneapolis

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: We Need to Talk

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Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Seattle

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: New Year, New Beginnings

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Los Angeles

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Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Second Thoughts

Edward's gonna be hurt that everyone doubts him and doesn't think he's changed. But even more so if Bella does again.

Duplicity by loopylou992 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

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A pair of golden handcuffs keep him married to a woman he despises. Then a chance meeting changes his world, he discovers the true love he always wanted.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 54352 Read Count: 8222
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Dec 2012
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Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

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Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 08 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Be careful what you wish for.

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Duplicity

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