Reviews by SassenachWench
Summary: Past Featured Story

reborn

Let me preface this by saying, I have cherished my writing fan fiction. I've loved every chapter, every story, every review, and every fan. It's been a thrilling and fulfilling seventeen months.

All things have to end though. I'll be graduating college in the spring, and by then this final project will be complete. I won't be writing fan fiction anymore, but will be moving on to continue my freelance work that I'm doing, and also writing my own novels. Before I start that though, I want to leave the fan fiction world with a bang.

This final project will be a series of four stories. "Reborn in Twilight," "Broken During The New Moon," "Fighting an Eclipse," and "We Are Breaking Dawn." That's right, I'm rewriting the saga.

Some may consider it a ballsy move, some may see it as stupid. But since my writing fan fiction has been me molding the characters to be my own, what other proper way is there to leave fan fiction, other than rewriting it.

I mean no disrespect by doing so. I enjoyed the saga very much. Still, I think I can do a decent job at making it something different. Not necessarily better, just my own.

There will still be similarities to the saga of course. No character names or couple pairings will change. Only the characters personalities may be different. Something else that I'll do, as I do in all my stories, is make multiple character POV's. I think it helps character development, and makes it a more rounded and complete story.

There will be obvious differences also. The vampires will not be the same type. No sparkling or dazzling here. Parts will be darker, and parts will be funnier. No differences are meant to upset anyone, or offend, it's just the way I write and tell the story.

I hope this will be enjoyed, and I hope I receive the much needed feedback in reviews.

Let's get started.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Rewrite of the Saga
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46952 Read Count: 21127
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2011 Updated: 01 Nov 2011
Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- There is Something There

ROFL! Bella is awesome :)

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Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Symphony

Yes, Edward, resistance is futile ;)

I love that your Bella isn't as shy as the original. She takes the oppurtnity to turn her clumsiness into a joke. That's nice.

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Curiousity

Nice chapter. I'm anxious for another Biology encounter :)

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Pursue and Worry

I like how you have the Cullen's interact with each other. They seem more like a family and that they actually like each other. 

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Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Control

I like the changes you are making to the vamps. Can't wait to see what else you do with them. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Uphill Downhill

I like that little twist of Bella waking up in the forest. 

 

Charlie has always been one of my favorite characters and I love that you have him being so sweet. 

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Date: 03 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Visions

I like this beginning. I'm interested to see where you go with this and what changes you make. 

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Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- The Dreams

I like how you have Bella dreaming about her future since she was a child. It makes her becoming a vamp seem more like destiny :)

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Endure Whatever Comes

:)

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Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Put On Some Sneakers

I love seeing a little bit of the girly-girl coming out of Bella in this chapter. I can't think of any girl that doesn't like to pamper themselves just a bit like that :)

Summary:

crow

 

After Damon lost the love of his life over a century ago, he dedicated his entire existence into finding her. Only the longer time progressed, he began to lose hope. He became angry and vengeful. What happens when he finally thinks he found her? Only to find that she hasn’t any recollection of him. That and she happens to hate Damon and everything he stands for.


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Damon/Bella
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I love
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104363 Read Count: 11076
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 20 Jun 2015
Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: CHAPTER 2 WELCOME TO MY HELL

My heart is breaking for Damon and the loss of is family.

I can't wait for Kol to get what's coming to him.

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER 1 MEETING DEATH

Very ineteresting start. I already can't stand Kol. Love Damon :)

Summary:

slw

What happens when Bella’s finally had enough of Edward’s crap? He dumps her and something in Bella Swan snaps. What part will a certain beloved X-Men play in her life? Will he get her to come out of that shell of hers? MATURE! FOR A DAMN GOOD REASON! One Shot Story… Will consider otherwise if enough interest is taken. Bella/Logan aka Wolverine pairing.

A O/S.  The Sequel is called Taking the Plunge

 


Categories: Twilight, X-Men, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Logan (Wolverine)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites E
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11081 Read Count: 4239
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, you have really opened my eyes to crossovers. I really liked Logan with Bella. I'm so happy to see it is a full story. Time to eagerly hop over to that and get started :)

Summary:

tp

Sequel to Sex, Lies, and Wolverine. Rated MATURE! Explicit content! Read at own risk!

 

 


Categories: Twilight, X-Men, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131164 Read Count: 57591
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2014 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: CHAPTER 8 THE TRUTH

I teared up a bit for Rosalie.

Edward and Alice are going to suffer in their deaths. I don't think Bella will settle for anything less.

I love Jasper and Emmett and I love that you've got them on Bella's side.

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Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 15: CHAPTER 15 CALL ME LOGAN BABY

I like the new abilities you've given Bella. Very nice :)

LOL, now Logan is as a Dom is pretty damn hot. 

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Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: CHAPTER 16 BEAR NECESSITIES

I bet Jean went to Magneto. 

I loved the bit with the bear.

when the soldiers appeared my first thought was WTF is Jean up but even that didn't seem right. Then I remembered Stryker. This next chapter should be interesting. 

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Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: CHAPTER 17 I HATE FAMILY REUNIONS

you keep me guessing and I just can't get it right. This is a very good thing. Keeps me on my toes. 

Damn straight Bella should've kicked that guy out of the cave. What a douche. 

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Date: 24 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: CHAPTER 18 DAMN ESPIONAGE

:)

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: CHAPTER 7 THE LEAP

Bella has some awesome friends. I love how you've shown the loyalty they have for all the X-Men.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: CHAPTER 6 BELLA’S TERRITORY

Husband gave me some crazy looks when I busted out laughing at Bella getting lost in the moment and not seeing the occupants of the room.

Damn, that was cold what Jean did. Something has definitely snapped in her. I've just been waiting for Professor X to step in on the games she's been playing.

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: CHAPTER 5 DATING LOGAN’S WAY

I'm looking forward to the meeting with Charlie. That should be quite entertaining :)

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: CHAPTER 4 TRAINING WOLVERINE’S WAY

It seems jealousy brings out the Pheonix in Jean. It was awesome how all the X-Men put her in her place and reminded her about who they are and what they do.

I'm ready for a Volturi ass kicking :)

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: CHAPTER 3 WITHIN THE SHADOWS OF WOLVERINE

Edward is such a douce in this. I can't wait to see him and the Volturi get what's coming to them.

It's nice to see a man standing up for Bella but letting her still have her indepence.

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: CHAPTER 2 GINGER WITH ISSUES

Wow, talk about jealous bitch. I knew that lesson would not end well.

Nice twist there bringing Aro into this and the deal from New Moon. I have to wonder if Aro even knows what he's getting into.

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Date: 21 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: CHAPTER 1 REVELATIONS

I like the idea of Bella being a mutant. It explains so much about her and how she can block people and vamps from her head.

I wanted to slap Jean when she finally decided to dump Scott for Logan and thought Logan would just jump for joy.

Oh, I have a feeling school is about to get much more interesting.

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Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: CHAPTER 14 HOME SWEET HOME

:)

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Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 13: CHAPTER 13 ONLY THE STRONG

I just knew you would find a way to make her like Logan so they could be together forever :)

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Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 12: CHAPTER 12 NATURE’S A BIT@H!

Wow. That was one crazy chapter. 

i love how Logan's marking saved Bella. The polar. Ear was awesome :)

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 10: CHAPTER 10 BOMBSHELL

I just knew jean would betray them to the Volturi and they would double cross her. 

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 11: CHAPTER 11 WORLD’S APART

I knew the Volturi would be no match for the X-Men. That was a great battle :)

it was awesome that Bella got to take out Edward and Alice. 

Why do I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Jean. 

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Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 9: CHAPTER 9 BRINGING OUT THE WOLVERINE

Nothing better than sexy fun times in your childhood bedroom ;)

of course the pack would blame Bella. Glad she has Logan to protect her and keep her grounded.

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Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 19: CHAPTER 19 THE WOLVERINE AND HIS BOMBSHELL

What an epic battle. Seeing the Wolverine come out was terrifying and awesome. 

I love how you write your battle scenes. They are easy to follow and I can picture them in my mind.

I loved that Logan got his revenge on Edward. 

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Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: CHAPTER 20 UNFINISHED BUSINESS

Jean with the brotherhood cannot be good. Definitely a big war coming. 

You're killing me! First Logsn sniffing her all up to see if she's pregnant and then Hank's wise crack about educational videos. Love it!

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Date: 26 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 21: CHAPTER 21 THE WONDER THAT IS BELLA SWAN

It breaks my heart to see Bella struggle so much worrying about the baby. You are spot on with her worries. I love that Logan has embraced it and is looking forward to being a daddy. I can totally see him being like that :)

So glad Bella set Scott straight. Time to man up and get over the women he can't have. Find him a new woman that is right for him and will cherish him.

I was crying for Rogue. It sucks to have her powers. I keep waiting for Hank to come up with something so she can have some type of normal interaction with a boyfriend. If anyone can do it, Hank can.

Oh damn, I forgot about Jasper and Emmett not knowing about Edward and Alice. This could go good or bad. So glad I don't have to wait for an update. I just love seeing the next button :)

Bad Medicine by BertieBott Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Past Featured Story

bm

 

Summary: On the flight home from saving Edward in Italy, Bella has a decidedly different reaction to finding out the truth behind him abandoning her. While running from her demons, Bella crosses paths with a couple of new ones, one of which she has no desire to run from… New Moon A/U and set in the beginning of season 10 in Supernatural.

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Categories: Supernatural TV Series, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Dean
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites E
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18605 Read Count: 4324
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2015 Updated: 30 Jun 2015
Reviewer: SassenachWench Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three: Cure

Oh yeah, a new favorite crossover pairing for me now. Loved it. Can't wait for more Supernatural from you :)

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Bad Medicine

I did. iPod see that coming. Of course I shouldn't be surprised Edward would be the reason of her death. 

 

I really like Bella and Dean together. I think I've found a new crossover I like :)

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Date: 02 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Symptoms

Oh damn. Loved it! Bella leaving Edward is always an AU that I LOVE :)

Jane cowering down to Crowley and calling him sir was awesome! Dean, sigh, what can I say but damn that boy is awesome. Bella needs a real man like that.

Can't wait to see how Dean deals with the rest of the cold ones and for him and Bella to formally meet :)