Reviews by Jilli90
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

double wow, sick, sick people in this cult. Then again so are the authors of this story and I LOVE the stuff you girls come up with. Keep the disturbing stuff coming!! 

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

wow, discussing and yet additive. I wonder when and how Charlie is going to find out about stupid Renee and what she did... Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

Wow, just keeps getting creapier and creapier (yha I know creapier is not a word). As always looking forward to the next chapter!! :)



Author's Response:

We might just have to make it a word for the Father.  He is creepier...than creepy

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

That cannot be good...

 Love this story!!

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Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

Wow, this is why I love your stories, just the right amount of drama and suspence to carry into the next chapter. :)

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Love it.

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

I love your writing and look forward to the up coming chapters of this story, no matter where it takes us the readers!! Can't wait to see what else happens! When does Charlie come into play?

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

You girls are very demented and its great! Love this story and cannot wait for the next update!

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Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Oh boy, Felix, he could be trouble or not for Charlies character. O thought tht maybe Felix would be the one to contact Charlie b/c Bella kept telling Felix about her dad. I don't know wha to make of this yet, except that the battle is far from over for all the characters involved and Im looking forward to reading every chapter!!

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Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

Love it, you girls never disapoint!!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

Love it!!

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Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

OMG, I really want to Bleach my eyeballs and my brain out from that cerimoney, oh man what a way to loose your verginity, oh man such a private moment. How sick is the Father? How did Esme and
Carlisle end up in this cult? I am to assume Carlisle has been in the outside world for his schooling, so he must realize this 'religion' is diffrent and possably wrong (abduction,brain washing, molestation, abuse)... Oh sh#t!! Anyway, this is a great story, all your work is great, love it all and cannot wait to read the next chapter and definatly will be purchasing Training School when it comes out in book form! You Girls ROCK!!

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

Wow what a twisted, sick mind! This just keeps getting better and better! Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much..  I hope you have a wonderful weekend.. and we will see you next week.. Enjoy!!

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Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Poor Charlie, Felix should do the right thing (for himself) then dissapear, after all Aro is crazy and the Athorities will just get people(inosent people) killed. Sounds like a nice big rock and a hard place! Sounds like Charlie should just sit back and wait for the fall of Aro which will be coming soon (maybe?!?) b/c he's in a no win situation. Love this story, cannot wait for the next chapter, you girls always keep the readers on their toes!! :)

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

Oh man Aro is crazy! Maybe someone should find away to assasinate him (ahm Carlisle with a syringe and vile in the "meditation" room). As always looking forward to the next chapter and more of the do gooding Cullens and crazy Aro!!

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Oh wow poor Dr C's soul, that was so horrable to read and equaly as hard for his character to go through, and yet I know when I need a dose of gore, I can turn to you girls and you do not disapoint!! Thanks for the weekly dose of shock and awe and I'm looking forward to the next chapter as I head to the local 24 hour Walmart to procure bleach to wash the weirdness of The Family out of my head. The best part is that I love this story and your writing is great, cannot wait for the next chapter!! Waiting happily for the next dose of As the Twisted Family/Cult Turns!!

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

OMG, holy hell and any other explitive that cannot be posted in this review! I know the wait for the next chapter would be worth it and it was! Poor Bella! Waiting with joy for the next chapter in Father Aro's evil world! :)

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I blame Renee for this whole mess, what a selfish, flaky bitch!

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Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Yes, time to get out the Aro special mix of cool-aid. Someone needs to open up a can of whoop ass on him before Bella and the Cullens end up dead.

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

love it!! Always worth the wait!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514810
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Aw shit, how much worse can this get? But the worse it gets for the characters, the better it is for the readers. Love it.

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Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Awesome, glad you kept writing this story. I always look forward to reading the updates.

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Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Love it!!

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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Love this story, glad James charactor will get everything he deserves and more, revenge is sweet.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625091
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
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Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

This is a good chapter, but I have a very bad feeling the shit is going to hit the fan very soon. Should a get a box of tissues and barf bucket for the next chapter. Or how about a gun for Esme, so she can put Carlisle out of everyones mysery. Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked my little stepping stone.  the next chapter will be full blown drama

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Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I think Im going to vomit; poor Edward and Bella, talk about manipulation and abuse. Can this get any worse? Can't Edward and Bella just run away? Can't he hid her in the trunk of his car as he leaves for work, drive to the airport, pay with cash and they are both never seen again? Actually, someone will end up having to paralyze Carlisle or kill him for this to be over. Trembeling for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

The next chapter will hopefully be ready by the weekend. I promise not to leave you hanging for long. Everything is quickly coming to a head.

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

WOw, that was brutal. Thank goodness Bella finally told Edward about daddyC's threats to anally rape her. Hopefully this plan keeps Bella safe. Some ones going to die soon, I hope it's daddyC and that Esme gets her freedom from him.

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Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

This is awesome, i have followed this story from FF.net, to your blog and now to this site. I hope Bella and Edward get what they need to survive together (I still say a certain evil male character should be killed, but thats just me).

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Wow, this poor girl (character) just keeps being tortured by the bad hand life has given her. Will she ever get a break and a better life the life she was met to have.  I love this story, and look forward to the next chapter to come.

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

yes, the jerk (evil Dr C) is dead. Ding Dong, the Dr C is dead! Someone finally dropped a house on him and his disgusting nephew. I think a round of therapy is needed for everyone. I hope Esme turned him into plant food for her garden. I love this story and will be sad to see it end.

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

A novel would be cool. I love this story, Ive followed it from ff.net, to your blog and now here. I love your writing and would enjoy reading from Esme and Renee's point of views from the past, maybe even of the boys growing up under the evil mans grasp. Love Perfect wife, sad to see it end and look forward to your future writings.

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Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

YOUR STORY IS THE BOMB!! I look forward to reading what ever you write next. As for chasing this story around the internet, it WAS SO worth all the pain of wondering where the story was and if it would continue. I never lost faith the story would go on and Im sooo glad you killed Papa C, he was a mean a##hole. Looking forward to what comes next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
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Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

great story!

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love this story, I was board and looking for something to read. I started reading and then looked at the author, to my surprize it was someone who's work I love (Perfect Wife). Yes, my night just got brighter with something of quality to read before bed. Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you like it

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh man, out of story, I wanna read more, Im very addicted now.

:) My addiction to this story and your work is second only to Emancipation Proclimation (sorry that story rocks, along with the completed Perfect wife, hehehe).

Looking forward to more posessive Edward and the drama that is sure to follow.



Author's Response:

Please don't apologize.  I freaking live for EP updates!!!!

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yay you updated!! Your writing is some of my favorite out there!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I promise no three month wait for the next chapter.

Take care!

Mic

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow, good chapter, Bellas character is stuck in a war zone.

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love it!!

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

wow, good cliffy, can't wait for the next update of the Red headed step child!

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

WoW, the more drama the better!! Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

love it!

Summary:

Bella can no long hide behind her intellect when she has a stroke. She can't hide from her childhood love when he shows up back in Forks, either.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26330 Read Count: 9907
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
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Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Awesome, the whole thing.

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Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Awesome, the whole thing.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
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Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

love it!!

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Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

great story

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Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

love it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
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Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

This is a good story, Im normally not into Bella/ anyone else, but this is tastefully done and includes a story line with a good explination for all the sex! So that said, I cannot wait for the next chapter and to find out which wakko want to abduct Bella!!

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

This story has no words to say how great it is!! Can't wait for the next update!

Summary:

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Not everyone's life is easy, sometimes it's hard, Bella Swan knows this better than most. She's a broken girl. Her mother has died and her father beats her. Can the new kids save her? Will she let them? read what happens...THIS IS AN 18+ STORY DUE TO SOME OF IT'S CONTENTS.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142425 Read Count: 19249
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2023
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Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Peaceful Redemption

This story is great



Author's Response:

thank you so much

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Goodbye, My Only Friend

love it



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and reviewing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55128
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
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Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is great.

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Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This is great.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated

Aww, the Tin Man grows a heart and realizes he's in love... Now edward needs to stop being a jerk, tell Bella he loves which could probaly make her stop and think twice about killing herself, and then he can change her and live happly ever after.  Well, not realy angestward is still going to be in the picture and it will probaly take more then a majic wond to make a happy ending for these two characters. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Being Away from Her

Aw poor Bella and Edward, sounds like she may become a vampire soon (really Eddie loves her too much to let her die). Hope your mom is doing better. Love your story.

 



Author's Response:

lol, well I cant' answer if Bella will be a vamp, but she will be telling her story soon.  I promise!

 

Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next chapter.  Don't hurt me!

Emmett spoke up. “Will she be ok Carlisle?”

He nodded. “She should be fine. She’s dehydrated, and has lost a lot of weight.  From the look of it she hasn’t slept and it looks like her body just gave out. It happens to people that push themselves past the point . . . “

Carlisle cut off when Esme gasped and Rose called out, “What the fuck!”

I had been avoiding the thoughts of the women to give Bella as much privacy as I could, but immediately I saw what they had seen.  I shot off the couch yelling. “What kind of sick sadist did that? What happened to her?”

I started pacing and was growling. Jasper put a hand on my arm to calm me.  I wrenched away from him. “Leave me alone!”

He didn’t take offense but spoke in a calm voice. “Talk to me brother. What did you see? What happened to Bella?  Is she ok?”

I tugged at my hair. “Yes, no, I don’t know. She’s . . . marked.” I couldn’t bring myself to say more.

Emmett came up to me. “What’d you me marked?”

I swallowed and put my hands on my hips trying to get the vision out of my head, but it was burned there and would never leave.

“On her stomach . . . it looks like she was cut with a knife . . . multiple times . . .” I took a deep breath.  I couldn’t even say it.

Carlisle spoke. “What else son?”

I looked at him and whispered, “Someone branded the word ‘MINE’ over it.”

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Now that She's Home

Love it, looking forward to find out what happened to Bella's charactor and how the Cullens react and try to help her heal.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  i can't wait for the Cullens to help heal her!  I love them all soooo much!!!!

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story

Oh crap, that just makes me want to use stronger language and throw up. Storyis still great, looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

trust me I TOTALLY understand and from the reviews I've seen most readers understand as well!

 

hanks for reading, I know it was difficult.

Rose kissed Emmett and told him she would be right back. As she came up to my room she was already thinking to me. "I know that had to be hard for you to hear Edward, but you really blew it!"

Huh? What was she talking about?  I didn’t do anything?
Rose came in and saw the confusion on my face. "Don’t look confused. You did nothing for Bella. You gave her no comfort!"

“What do you mean?” I asked. “I was holding her the whole time! Giving her every comfort I could!” I was livid at the accusation that I hadn’t been there for Bella. Of course I had.
Don’t get pissed at me. Tell me oh supportive one.  In all the rounds of hugs and comforting what did you say to Bella?

I searched through my memory trying to figure out what I’d said that had Rose so mad. As I searched the reason for Rose’s anger became apparent. I hadn’t said anything to Bella the entire time. I was so focused on not blowing up I didn’t speak to her. I wasn’t a total failure, I had given her strength through my touch, but I couldn’t believe I hadn’t spoken one word to her. I cursed myself for the idiot I was.

"I see you got it.  Listen it isn’t the end of the world but tomorrow when she wakes up you had better start sucking up! Seriously, she needs to know you don’t hate her, blame her, or think less of her."

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Into the Night

aw such a sad chapter, hope Bellas character gets the help she needs. love this story and looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I promise, she will get the help she needs, I promised a fully healed Bella, and I will deliver!!!  Edward would kill me if I didn't!

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

Such a great story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it.

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Balancing Relationships

Yes a update!! Love it, good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the update.

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Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Ignoring the Holidays

Love this story but I think I say that every time I reveiw, but that is the truth. Cannot wait until the next update!



Author's Response:

trust me, I don't get tired of people saying they love the story :)

Summary:

These are the out takes of other Cullen's POV during the story,

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18212 Read Count: 1986
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 03 May 2010
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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Thoughts of a Suthern Gentleman

MASH is the best. I grew up watching reruns in the 1980's with my parents, when I say grew up I mean from around age three until now and I own all the episodes on dvd and watch them on cable. Hahha Pioneer Aviation, hahahh. The character of Hawkie is the best prankster and yet very human and imperfect all at once. Your story is great, so are the outtakes. I look foward to reading more. Poor Bella, hopefully everything will turn out right in the end, hopefully she gets a happy ending and I have a feeling that the Cullens will do anything to make that happy ending happen. Love your story!

Laters

(stole that from Master of the Universe, if you have not read that, please do, its great, along with Emacipation Proclimation, how can you not resist Papa C in a very dangerous and powerful position. I am such a lazy person, too lazy to look up the correct spelling of Carlisle when there is a town named Carlisle here in Pennslyvania. Duh).

 



Author's Response:

lol, I'm reading both MotU and EP.  Who isn't!!!!  lol

 

I love MASH too!!  glad you liked the Pinoeer Aviation!  I had fun with that!  You're the 2nd perosn to comment on it!!!!  people are missing a good sitcom!

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Secret Family Meetings

Its offical, you have good taste; MASH, MofU and EP. Your golden in my book. Off to catch up on the rest of your story and its outtakes, I ve had a buisy few weeks and now I have some time to catch up on my FF reading before summer semester starts.



Author's Response:

that's cool!!! Glad I'm in the club!!!!!   Hope you get caught up on all your FF!!!!  That is fun but can be daughnting!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if a Vampire Singer was not about blood lust instead its involuntary, unpreventable and irrevesable form of true love. What would you do if you waited a century to find it? What would you do to keep it? ANYTHING! AU reg.pair. Re-writting earlier chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124314 Read Count: 67388
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I only read the first chapter and I likr it.

Summary:

I have searched for her since the day she was born, My singer. A singer is a precious gift. Its one I will protect and treasure always. That is if life doesn't screw it up! AU reg. pairs OOC  EXB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43691 Read Count: 24311
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Renesmee, hate that name, love your story.



Author's Response:

not my favorite naqme either but decided since i haven't in any of my other stories i would this time.. lol

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Time to shred and burn Tanya, what a surprise she is in for. These Voltori are more likable then when they are evil.



Author's Response:

i dont know shredding and burning might be too easy!! the volutri may be likeable but you know how family can be when it comes to torture of a loved one...

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love it!!

Hiding Bella by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/hiding_Bella_Banner.jpgI found a secret hiding in the Alaskan wilderness while on summer vacation. Now I need to keep that secret safe and protected. But what affect will it have on me? What will happen if its exposed? What will I sacrifice to keep it safe? AU,REG PAIRS  EXB

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79986 Read Count: 22413
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

love it!!

Victim by tima Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

victim

 

She once lived the life of luxury with her husband, James, but then he became abusive. With the help of an unlikely friend, she escapes James' abuse, becomes Bella Swan, and starts fresh in a new town. She meets a handsome young man named Edward who will help her heal, but will she ever fully get over the abuse she suffered? 

When James gets wind that his wife isn't dead, what lengths will he go to take back what he feels is his?

Rated for future sexy times, some scenes of violence, abuse, and cursing.

(loosely based on Sleeping with the Enemy, but with large differences, and a Twilight twist)

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166331 Read Count: 17131
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Christmas with the Cullens

James, run him pver with a car or push him down the stairs or something, what a jerk! Sounds like the Cullens should invest in some body gaurds to keep James away. love this story, looking forward to the next chapter!

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Carlisle dressed in nothing but a towel, oh how sexy! Great story, adding it to my alerts list.

The Faith by TwilightDramaTeach Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

The Faith BannerThe Faith BannerIsabella Swan lives a solitary existence.  She is the only child of a single parent father.  Bella is also a daughter of The Faith.  She is isolated and segregated, but all that is about to change.  Today is September 13.  It’s Bella’s sixteenth birthday, and at 11:58 pm, the time of her birth, things will never be the same.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8920 Read Count: 2581
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Faith

wow, speechless...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  I hope that speechless means you enjoyed.

TDT

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Im caught up now, and cannot wait for more of this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

run

 

An evil Volturi experiment, Werewolves and Vampires, Imprints, and our favorite clumsy girl. This will be a much different Twilight story...Summary is in the first page, so click it!

Disclaimer: I do not own Stephanie's characters as you all know. I hope you enjoy!

fs

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Renesmee/Jacob
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 80 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141698 Read Count: 16318
[Report This] Published: 21 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57- Romance Lotus

This is a great story. I usully don't go for the Twilight gang and another character, but Revi just works. Looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

thank you! hope you keep liking it

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123450
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The Second Year - First Six Months

I am now addicted to your story!! Love it!!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

This story is great! It is so great to see the charaters from Twilght being imperfect. Tanya being a even bigger b#$tch, Esme and Carlisle's marriage is on the rocks and Rose and Alice are little, inmature babys- sounds like real life to me! <!-- /* Font Definitions */ @font-face {font-family:"Times New Roman"; panose-1:0 2 2 6 3 5 4 5 2 3; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:auto; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:50331648 0 0 0 1 0;} @font-face {font-family:Georgia; panose-1:0 2 4 5 2 5 4 5 2 3; mso-font-charset:0; mso-generic-font-family:auto; mso-font-pitch:variable; mso-font-signature:50331648 0 0 0 1 0;} /* Style Definitions */ p.MsoNormal, li.MsoNormal, div.MsoNormal {mso-style-parent:""; margin:0in; margin-bottom:.0001pt; mso-pagination:widow-orphan; font-size:12.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman";} table.MsoNormalTable {mso-style-parent:""; font-size:10.0pt; font-family:"Times New Roman";} @page Section1 {size:8.5in 11.0in; margin:1.0in 1.25in 1.0in 1.25in; mso-header-margin:.5in; mso-footer-margin:.5in; mso-paper-source:0;} div.Section1 {page:Section1;} -->

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

Love it, I enjoy reading mature Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months

Love it, this story is so much better then it looks. Glad your wrote it!

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is good.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ohhh, this is great. I love that there is mystery surrounding this, not all like this is the bad guy, go hunt him down. 

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Alistair, what a great use for that strange vampire!! Love your story!!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love it.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: When the Missing Come Home

Love it

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Sorry I keep saying this, but I love your story! I have no other way to describe it besides one of my favorites!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow still good, still can't wait to read the next chapter.

Summary:

Edward and Bella overcome a challenge post-eating disorder; having a successful pregnancy. And everybody gets excited when a new baby is born!

A novellette post Blackbird Fly.

Baby Girl Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14429 Read Count: 5685
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 28 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Every time I see Blackbird Fly posted on one of the FF Sites, I read it. This story hit home for me, it should have been my childhood best friend growing up, marrying, recovering from her eating disorder and starting a family. Instead she died 5 years ago from Anorexia and even though we lost touch, it still hurts. Thank you so much for writing this story and reminding me how hard life can be sometimes and for your story helping me get past my own eating issues and the guilt I some times feel for not doing more to try and help my friend. Thank You so much.

 



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. So often, eating disorders and recovered victims are shown in the spotlight, but the people who succumb to the disease are forgotten. And it kills me inside. I hope her soul is at rest.

Summary:

A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES but canon pairings. Very, very AU.

WARNING: This story contains much in the way of lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49922 Read Count: 11468
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Out of the Past

wow!!

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

fug

Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

This story is great, it was diffrent at first, something Im not used to reading, Im very glad I gave it a chance. I was wondering when the Cullens would come into place, glad Edward and Bella are off the streets and that they both will be dealing with their ghoasts. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you gave it a chance too! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Outtake: Crazy Ex-Girlfriend

Wow, dirty!! Sorry thats all Ive got right now, my brain is fried, test today and two more on thursday, ugh. Can't wait for your next update no matter which of your stories it is.

Ps: Sam and Dillon did the deed, and more drama is on the way. Hopefully I'll have it ready to send to you by the end of the week. Your stalker fantacy is coming back in this instalment (Papa).

See yha

Jilly



Author's Response:

Oh Be nice now...you know I have daddy issue's...lol. I will be looking forward to stalking fictional Papa!

Thanks for the coffee. :) Diane

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When the disarmingly handsome Edward Masen turns up as a new patient, the life Dr. Isabella Swan has carefully put together will be shattered forever. What will it take to put the pieces back together again? What does it take to heal?

Many thanks to fuzzyltlwingedthing for the new banner!

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 334239 Read Count: 64023
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yha, Philly, know it well :)! Love this story!!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Philly, yay. Poor Edward :(

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it, love it, love it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Yay, the Cullens are going down the shore next week!! love Cape May and the Victorian houses and the fact that its one of the only beach towns where you can go to a small club and have a drink! Bella is such a good person, but she needs to get over that so she can be happy with her life (ahem Jake) and safe from James. Ps Bella, I know a few people who can put a hit out on James, give me a call will yha (or how about pushing him in front of  SEPTA bus, but not the 27, thats how I get to college!) Bella and Edward soon right?? Love this story, sorry for not reviewing for a while, buisy with school stuff, finally caught up on your story. Love it, cannot wait for the next chapter.

In the words of Emitt (sp??) from Master of the Universe:

Laters Babe.

Philly Jilly :)

(yha I know, I have a account with the 3 major twilight FF websites, oh well it's a small addiction :)



Author's Response:

Good to have you back, PhillyJilly!  B&E coming soon(ish).  I can count the chapters in my head, but I'm not telling.  I wish I could get to Cape May before writing this next chapter, I fell like I need a refresher.  Haven't been there since last summer.  But seriously, with these two, all we need is a little bikini, some sand and a lifeguard stand at sunset.  Sigh.  

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

Love this story as always. But dang you made me hungry for a steak sandwich and I don't have school until Thursday morning! Esme and Nessie should make a good next chapter. Garret is giving me the creaps. Its about time Edward and Bella got a personal relationship going and the truth is I could never see him as Bellas lawyer.  In this story a more mature Edward and Bella make the perfect couple!

Can't wait for the next update!

Philly Jilly

Different Beginnings by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

How would things be if Carlisle turned Bella first 100 years after he was turned? what if Esme was Emmett and Edward's real mother and they were all human and Jasper found Alice whlie Alice was a newborn and they found Bella and Carlisle then Rosalie joins???

follow from Carlisle's POV first then goes to Bella's, possibly other to come, as we see how things would be like if there were different beginnings for all of our favourite charactors.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51670 Read Count: 7151
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: How It All Starts

This is good!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Companion Made for Just Me

This is so great and diffrent from any FF Ive read (Ive read alot with being sick and unemployed). Thanks for writing it and I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you and it will be up in a few minutes

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 If you take a Vampire against his will, is it a Crime?

All I can say is wow this story rocks!! Thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Jilli, I was really surprised at the response I have recieved from this story. I guess everyone likes a Bella that takes no crap.

Thanks for the coffee cups, I always love those and for taking the time to read and review Bella's evil ways....Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Jasper's Capture

Wow is she evil!!



Author's Response:

My 'evil muse' is working overtime. :) Thanks for those coffee cups girl! Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Local News

Wow, this is crazy and I love it!! Don't piss Bella's character off, she's gone mental and taking it out on Papa C!! Rape of a male vampire if you will call it that... there are just no words for that. This is great, Im now addicted and have to add this to my alerts.



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you love this story...Yep Bella's gonna get her some.....Glad you added me to your alerts. Hope to hear from you next chapter. Thanks, for the coffee.....Diane

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Fire, Fire, Fire

wow, I think Daddy C needs some help. Bella is evil and its great and so entertaining!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement because I am loving evil Bella...she's fun to write. Thanks for the coffee !!!!   Diane