Reviews by kelsdavy
Baby Girl Grey by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

The Untold Story of when the Grey's had a daughter


Categories: Canon, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22961 Read Count: 9226
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2014
Reviewer: kelsdavy Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Speed Preperations

He lost his mind w a list. He shd say they had awful names. Why would she ever ask? Dr Greene sucks. Not reassuring and scaring her on more kids. She knows they want more.

I wish it didn't jump from 3 months to  8 months crazy fast! Heck not even one sexy scene! Boo.

As an author, it was clear after drama filled first birth, the second should and would be calmer. Or it appears too redundant.

Reviewer: kelsdavy Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: The List

35 wks is full term baby. No nicu unless complications. Vaginal birth also common after c section (v bac) the third and any future babies should be fine. Sheesh! 35 wker hospitals with no nicu deliver them!

Summary:

Christian and Ana have a chance encounter that will change the course of their lives forever.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Alternate Universe
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons, Pure Romance, Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52365 Read Count: 15899
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2014
Reviewer: kelsdavy Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Cringed at "bastard" ana was really ooc. Too ooc and he should be able to wipe the b troll very easily. Wthell