Reviews by eschoenh
You Will Be Mine by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mine

 

Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

The Volturi doesn't give second chances. They also don't take no for an answer. OOC, AU. All normal disclaimers apply.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55858 Read Count: 55655
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Read all of this in one sitting. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

He made some really good points in that last paragraph. I wasn't sure I completely agreed with him altering her memories during her change, but really, she never listed to a word he said. Now I totally get why he had to do it.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Looking forward to finding out what happens in the next chapter.

Dazed and Confused by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Peter Whitlock/Bella Swan Twilight Alternate Universe Multi. Chapter story. No time to spend on something you all don't like. :-) So, if you like it, you gotta let me know. Pete's a vampire, Bella is a fallen angel. Mature content/language/lemons. Snarky, OOC Bella. She's kinda Badass in this.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6341 Read Count: 1526
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2014 Updated: 17 Sep 2014
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Any chance for an update? I love this story.

Summary:

Bound and Dangerous

 

 

 

Sequel to Bound to Family.  A continuing story of Don Edward Cullen and Donna Isabella Volutri-Cullen as they begin their new adventures in combining two power crime families together, while exploring their Dominant/submissive relationship in Master Edward's playroom.  Can they keep their families safe, their relationship safe, or will outside forces tear it apart?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90815 Read Count: 229377
[Report This] Published: 09 Aug 2015 Updated: 19 Mar 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh my goodness. I'm going to cry. I can't believe you ended it there.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow. It felt like I was right there in the room with them.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Moved over here from FFN so that I could keep reading the story. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

So glad you moved and I hoped that you didn't have too many boxes to unpack.  haha.  Here you will see that I post pictures with each chapter, so you may want to go back and reread the other chapters and enjoy them.

Summary:

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A chance meeting in Las Vegas changes everything.  Suddenly a future that had been a brief glimpse of, is possible, and there is nothing the Blood Line will not do to make it happen.


anner credit goes to:


Gyllene Minion to 4Padfoot

Gyllene Minion to 4Padfoot



Beta for this story is the most wonderfully patient:


jessica-alex


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Eric Northman
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37815 Read Count: 20773
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2015 Updated: 10 Sep 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Tears Like Diamonds

Glad they came up with a solution that will hopefully work. So neither Bella nor Eric will be with any one else sexually? I was worried there for a second that Bella, in particular, would have to be.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Got Me Feeling Like a Devil

Finally he's there!

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Gotta Keep Your Head Calm

Oh my. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 I Came in the Ring

Such a good chapter :)

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Finally Seen The Light

I can't wait for the IRL meet for Eric and Bella.

Mate by she_viking Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

mate

“His gaze travels up and down my body, and I watch as he palms himself through his jeans, almost as if he’s unaware of it, but I can tell he’s straining against the button fly. Then, he leans over me again, and this time I don’t shut my eyes.

 

“Mate.”

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15277 Read Count: 8395
[Report This] Published: 05 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Feb 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I have read this story numerous times on both FF and TWCS. I just love it so much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177659
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - you are mine now

Came over from FFN to read this here since the other site is down. I enjoyed the chapter. Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Dr. Edward Masen is in for a surprise when his best friend and fellow colleague Dr. Carlisle Cullen invites him out to spend an evening with him at an exclusive member's only club. What Edward does not know, is that the club caters to a select few who share in a unique fetish within a certain lifestyle choice. He meets a brave little girl named Bella Swan who is more than happy to pull him into her world and introduce him to the wonderful lifestyle of Bondage, Discipline, Sadism, and Masochism.

 

It is a story about two consenting adults who venture into the relationship of a Dominant Daddy/little girl.  

 

If you do not fully understand the dynamics of this type of lifestyle I can only inform you that this story has nothing to do with incest, nor are the characters role playing / age playing in any way. It is a relationship where they practice total power exchange in and out of the bedroom on a 24/7 basis.  

 

If any of what you have read so far freaks you out in any way, then I must warn you now...this story may not be for you.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35176 Read Count: 172125
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 May 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

aww thank you!

Kiss Cam by hapakids Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

kiss cam

 

 

Bella Swan had always wonder what it would feel to be on the Kiss Cam. One day she finds out, but it wasn't from her boyfriend at the time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1958 Read Count: 1218
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2016 Updated: 03 Mar 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute story. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Summary:

Through an unexpected twist of fate, Bella gives Edward what he's been waiting for; something he's wanted for quite some time. However, under the circumstances, he's unsure whether to accept.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8545 Read Count: 1339
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2016 Updated: 09 Mar 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much :)

Fyre

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

Bella is so much better when she's not a pushover.



Author's Response:

Hi there! I'm so glad you think so. It always bothered me that she wasn't more assertive, especially in NM. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it so much.

Much love,

~Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

ilck

 

Edward Cullen is a probation officer. He is used to handling some of the toughest hardened criminals out there. That is until he meets his new proby...Isabella Swan.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54473 Read Count: 43905
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13 The people vs. The truth

If Edward kills him without first getting ahold of enough evidence to show Isabella was innocent, then she's stuck forever taking the blame for Jess' death :(

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21 Bella’s virginity vs. Edward’s primal urges

Bella is so broken :(

And that would kind of be a kick to the gut hearing that someone only wants to sleep with you to hurt someone else.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 Isabella vs. Daddy C and Daddy C

two Daddy C's had me cracking up

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Isabella vs. Edward

I realize Bella is scared and doesn't trust anyone, but honestly she's getting a bit annoying with this. Edward has proved that he can be trusted and he can help, yet she continues to push him off. Honestly, at this point, I would just say f it and leave her to herself. She thinks she's a big girl (even though she called him from a closet), so leave her be to deal with whatever it is. Cruel? Maybe, but she's really not doing herself any favors by acting this way. On a side note, I'm enjoying your Edward.

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 184179
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad Bella has hope that Edward is alive. I hope it doesn't take too long to get them reunited.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is going to give me a heart attack. I'm glad they at least know where the ladies are.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella's words at the end gave me chills. I can't wait for her and Edward to be together again.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight/The Originals. Bella/Marcel. Bella finds herself alone in a bar on Valentine’s Day in New Orleans. Who does she meet? Who will give her another chance to find love? ONE SHOT. COMPLETE.

 

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Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Marcel
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4735 Read Count: 1996
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2016 Updated: 14 Jan 2018
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Summary & Disclaimer

I enjoyed this. Thank you.

Summary:

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After getting her heart ripped out Bella is offered a choice – of sorts.Where will it lead?

 

Rated NC-17 – for EXTREME violence, language, and sexual content featuring some harem and lesbian. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!

 

 


Categories: Twilight, The Walking Dead, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Negan
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63808 Read Count: 11741
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2016 Updated: 13 Jun 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 06 May 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Reveal

I love when Negan takes Bella out with him on collection runs. They have great chemistry and work well together. It's fun to read.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Others?

Ick on having multiple women, but I still enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 01 May 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Batter Up

I'm liking Desi so far.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Daddy's Girl

I was so proud of Bella in the beginning for telling him she was a no-go until he got rid of the other women, but then she gave in at the end. Oy girl. Make him work harder for it! Another good chapter.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wasn't sure I would like it, but this was one of the best chapters I've read in a long time. Wonder who Negan killed. Bella might not want to know, but I sure do ;)

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 (Not so HEA)

Fitting end to the story.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 18 May 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Monsters

Wow. So sad for Bella. I literally have tears right now.

Summary:

She stole my snack and I will not stand for it.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 305 Read Count: 303
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2016 Updated: 02 Jun 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 9029
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Something unique. I'm interested.

Summary:

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Bella is hurt, Jake's a moron and Charlie finally opens his eyes. Eclipse AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1562 Read Count: 1358
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2016 Updated: 01 Jul 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. It has alwyas bothered me how the kiss was handled in the book/movie.



Author's Response:

Thank you,glad you enjoyed it xx

AAP

Sunrise by flamingpen18 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 203]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has always "sensed" that she was meant for something more. When she moves to Forks, Wa., she finds out that she is more a part of the supernatural world than her dreams could have ever prepared her for. With help from the Cullens, Bella will embrace her destiny.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45225 Read Count: 27016
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2016 Updated: 15 Oct 2016
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Maybe Bella has a similar gift to Alice, except her preminitions come only while she's dreaming. More please :)

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay! So many good things this chapter. Last chapter when Edward was commenting on Rose's horrible thoughts about Bella, my first thought was that her mate had originally been human, so she's a huge hypocrite. I'm glad Carlisle said exactly what I was thinking. Then Bella and Edward going on a date! And I'm so glad Bella sticks up for herself and doesn't continuously put herself down in her mind.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm so intruiged by this whole Bella dreams thing.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Goodness that sounds painful.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I wonder what Bella's powers are.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wish Edward would go with his instincts instead of allowing people like Alice and Carlisle to dictate his relationship, but I understand his desire to seek them out since he's out of his element with this.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So glad Edward wants to change her. This is much better than the original Twilight :)

Looking forward to the confrontation with the wolves.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Not what I was expecting, but I like that it's unique. I wonder when Bella's change will occur.
I hope we get to see Jake go down soon for hurting Bella and breaking the treaty :-p

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Dang. Poor Bella.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would love more. I like that Bella has a backbone, and that Edward isn't running away from her. I can't stand Jake, so I would like to read some bashing ;)

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Another great chapter, although I kind of wish Alice would butt out and let them go at their own pace. I think Edward should be taking his clues from Bella on the speed of their relationship, and not Alice, afterall, Bella is in the relationship too. I really can't say enough how much more I'm enjoying your Bella vs the original one.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So much fluffy sweetness, I might get a cavity ;)

I love it.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Jeez Jake was creepy. I'm glad Bella has no interest in him.

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

All kinds of feels from this chapter. I just love them.

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64410
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: eschoenh Signed
Date: 23 May 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

First kiss, so cute!