HA HA I found you little one shot!!!! Wow it was good to finally read it. Fanfictin is still a b**ch but we won't talk about that.Dude first of all I loved it. You made a  Jalice who was so them you know? I loved rawr Japer at the beginnig while hunting ;). The part while they had a silent conversation was so spot on. Loved it. You did surprise me. I I thought that everything would be rainbows and butterflies... How wrong was I??? I felf so bad for Alice for what they did to her. I know at the time their methods was severe and tough but poor girl :(

I'm so proud you nailed the dinner scene * pom pom cheer*. It was perfect. Know I understand why you said it was "kinda" a Jalice story. I have so many question. What was real? Did she find Jasper? was this part of her vision? She still at the hospital? So many questions but I liked it because it made me think. The ending was great. I was like awww.

I say good luck for the contest. I know it was such an headache to post that os but you did it. Like I said ealier I liked a lot. My jalice heart is happy right now. Again good  luccccckkkk!!!!!

Crazy_Angel xox