Reviews by chedoo28
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135059
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

this is extremly raw with excellent writing, i could feel my emotions going in every different direction,i hope everyone finally gets a clue when she tells what happened.

excellent writing and chapter,c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i feel so sorry for bella,all the emotions that she must be going through must be more than hard for her,you as a writer must have amazing strength to be able to sucessfully portray them as words for us readers to fully understand what she is going through.......excellent job,i also feel this with you other work.

thank you until next up-date.c.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

my tissues are ready i always cry when she explains what has happened to her,looking forward to next ch. excellent job again.c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

have to admit this ch.got me angry,not so much the ch.,more the way will and cat are reacting to bella telling what happened,such small minded people,i think they might be in for a shock,i don't think jasper or rose are going to allow them to leave bella or alice and em. hopefully bella can start the healing process properly now that she has been able to let it out what has happened,i loved how you displayed everyones reactions to what she has told them,,,looking forward to what comes next.until next time .c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ooohhh will and cat are being too quiet,do you think that maybe there children saying that ,that they will realize bella is gong to need everyone's help? i'm so glad that bella has that kind of family behind her,hope the bitches from school get an ear full ,hopefully rose and alice will rip them a new one,maybe bella will stand up for herself,

excellent ch. looking forward to more.c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

way to go bella,boohoo for all those who were sad when she dissapeared,don't think any of them could of come close  to feeling what bella did.it's really strange how some peoples minds work,,,,maybe it's a coping mechanisum(?),,they have to  try and defend their own,when most of them aren't even that close,and how hard it was for them to cope with everything,,,blah.....how can they think what jess and lauren did was ok!....it truly baffles me.

any way,excellent ch.,looking forward to more.c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i hope they can find bella in time,,,,,, i will  help lead the hunting party,they really are morons,,,,,i still really don't get how they are scared of bella.maybe renee and esme will try castrate varner, after he has met with carlisle and charlie,don't think will and cath will be that supportive,

another excellent ch.,until next time.c.



Author's Response:

It's really more of the fear of the unknown than it is of Bella. None of them know how to be around Bella becasue they don't understand. The problem is, they never will.

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

ok cried my heart out for edward and emmet,in this ch. hopefully this will help bella and she won't hold it against the others,so much  heartache before they can find happiness,,,,,, yey,the mob has decended upon varner,he must go!

anyway,excellent ch.think this is the first story that i have seen such heated reviews from readers,your doing an excellent job with such a hard and emotional subject ,keep up this astounding work.until next time,,,,.c.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Emotions are definatley running high!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

bella is in serious need of a punching bag,and some heavy music ,help releave some of that anger,,,,,

thanks for such a quick update,looking forward to the next ch..c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

thank god edward was there to help bella through all of it.i hope she continues positivly.

excellent as always,can't wait for more.c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

looks interesting,willing to give it a go,in't in my fav's,looking forward to next update,

thanks.c.



Author's Response:

Hope you like it so far!
hope to update pretty regularly too!

thanks for reading & reviewing.

XO
Jaime

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

excellent ch. really excited for finding out what the scream was all about,hope you up date soon.c.



Author's Response: sorry for the delay in replying!! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! hope you like what's coming up!! xo jaime

Summary:

This is a one shot or short story based on a ‘what if’ scenario. What if Jasper gave up on being a vegetarian vampire? It’s something I thought up while re-reading New Moon. This takes place somewhere between Eclipse & Breaking Dawn.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4369 Read Count: 108
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 11 Oct 2010
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bloodlust : A Jasper One Shot

good one shot...sorry to see the cowboy go.

thanks.c.

Prophecy by VampaliciousCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Prophecy

Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?

The Prophecy

The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.

OOC for some characters

Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.

Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One

Up Now: Part Two; True North

Character List for Part One & Two

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2011
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: C5 Finding Jasper

lovin your story, i am really excited for more, hope you can  update soon.c.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, glad you are enjoying reading Prophecy. Next update hopefully later this week :)

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

O.S.M evil cliffy,lol, please don't leave us hanging for too long,excellent ch. .c.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New Moon AU. Edward Cullen is more than shocked when, five years after he left Forks, Bella Swan calls - warning of Victoria's intended attack on the Cullen coven – and insisting that the vampires need her help.

A tale of love, revenge, forgiveness and forever.  

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11407 Read Count: 3637
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 28 Dec 2010
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Hell

interesting start,looking forward to see where it go's,until next time.c.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of Bright Star, chedoo28! I'm glad that you are enjoying it, and I hope you continue to.

:) Little Miss Mionie

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Scars

wow, excellent ch., god edwards a idiot ,take it hes going to go with the whole whoah is me , i hope bella put certain cullens in their place? really looking forward to next up date.c.



Author's Response:

Thanks soooo much for reading and reviewing Bright Star, chedoo28 :) Edward's a bit of an idiot, yeah. Bella does put a certain Cullen in their place! Chapter three is now up :)

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Reconcile

FINALLY !!!!!!! he gets a clue,,,,i know bella loves him but i would of made him sqirm a little more for forgivness,,i know it sounds bitter but i guess bella is too good for that. looking forward to what's to come next,cheerio for now and merry christmas.c.



Author's Response:

Nahh most people say Bella should have made Edward squirm more - but then again, she does more here than she dos in New Moon! Different circumstances, I suppose, though. Thanks for reading/reviewing, chedoo28 - and happy holidays to you too!!

:) LMM

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Change

excellent story,looking forward to more of your work in the future =), hope you have a fantastic new year.c.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, chedoo28 :) You have a great new year too!

Love,

Little Miss Mionie

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389608
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

oh like it ,i want more please.c.

Author's Response:

Sure thing... thanks for the review.. promise not to keep you waiting long...

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

yay , so looking forward to O.G.J.B sounds like fun ,still want more moRE MORE, excellent ch.until next up date.c.

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

wwoooooohhhhhooooooooo,this was excellent , i want more, MORE, MORE,plz , PLEASE update soon.c.



Author's Response:

I promise not to make you wait too long! Lol!

Gosh I´m so blown away and humbled by everybody taking time to stop and leave me so much love for this story!  I had no idea that ppl would love it so much!  You guys are the best and this is the best Valentine´s Day present ever!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Happy Valentine´s Day Everybody!


Laterzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

 

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

excellent ,very nice lemon also, got a wee bit teary at the airport,,, looking forwrd to whats coming next?......until next time,cheerio .c.=)



Author's Response:

So, I get you all worked up then make you cry? LOL Thank you for the review-they really are appreciated!

Clean Slate by llwarner Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A story about falling out of contact and how fate always has plans for us even if we believe it doesn't. How we choose when the slate can be wiped clean and who we really want to be.

Canon Pairings.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17019 Read Count: 825
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 09 Nov 2011
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so was it edward or some one else , please hurry,lol, only joking i can wait....hopefully!  (excitedly waiting), c.



Author's Response:

I know I keep saying he will be in the story soon lol. I write as it comes to me and sometimes it doesn't come out the way I thought it would. I promise soon he will arrive!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

excellent start, waiting to see what happens next!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so my question this time.....will jacob get a chance? or is bella never opening that door!.  i will wait for edward, lol, just not too long of a wait!,lol.

excellent ch. cant wait for next one.c.



Author's Response:

You never know lol... I am an equal opportunity kind of girl but always and ExB happily ever after. He is coming soon.  I am having a bit of writers block with this next chapter.  If you like this story you can check out my others too. Luck and Fate, La'Arte Della Danza and Gucci and Guns.  Thank you so much for all the reviews. Keep em coming!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wwooooohhhhhoooooooooooo, yes im that excited,what a way to leave a cliffy,(evil woman)lmao. cant wait for the greeting at the airport, REALLY looking forward to whats next.c.

La'arte Della Danza by llwarner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

Italian for the 'The Art of Dancing'. Bella Swan a veteran dancer, had plans to visit her dad before she left for school but something tragic happened that changed everything. Will she give up her dreams of school for something different or will La'arte Della Danza save her?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12105 Read Count: 1051
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2011 Updated: 10 Nov 2011
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

<3,<3,<3......................... OK, i am hooked on another of your stories,yey, hope you update soon, looking forward to whats next.c.



Author's Response:

Good I am glad you like this one too.  I am hoping to keep a somewhat regular schedule for updating each story sometimes is will be once a week other times it will be more.  Keep your reviews coming I LOVE them!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow,so does esme rip them a new one,lol , i could see her going mama bear on them for how they acted. excellent ch. looking forward to more.c.



Author's Response:

Of course she rips them a new one, if those were my kids it would not end pretty.  Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

glad your not rushing E&B, hopefully it wont take too long on them getting some action, maybe a little kissy face,lol. looking forward to more.c.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

hi!, this is the first review i have done in a while and would just like to say OMG your story rocks.    while reading this chap. my hubby and daughter both had a WTF moment looking at me while the tears were streaming down my face and i tried to explain what had happened so far to make me cry, my daughter thought it was sad that bella lost the baby ( plus she is only 8) and thought that was the reason for the tears, ok so not all of them. (*chuckles*) and my hubby replied ' why are you reading it still if it makes you cry?', yes hes a tool.lol. i dont think he has an emotional bone in his body.  anyway back on track...... oh yeah' .... excellent and very emotional story/ chapter , i cant wait to see the fallout from Edward leaving,hope Bella doesnt make it too hard for him, can understand his point of view, will be very annoyed with him if he comes back with tag along following him, guess i will just have to wait and see?!!  love your work so far and i am patiently waiting for next update , all the best c xx.