Reviews by mrsguinn
The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47777
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That's what I'm wondering right now...  So how do these two meet?  You have my interest.  I'll keep reading!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Freedom

Hoping for Bella to find her self esteem.  And for Newton to GET HIS!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Illumination

Who takes that long to read a damn letter?  Lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I can't even put into words how good this story is. I think about it for days after your updates! I want to see "the movie"!!  So so so so so so damn good! Thank you! Keep writing! d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I love this story! I love where it's been, where its at and where it's going!!! Thanks for the long meaty chapter! Sooooo good. Thank you

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Set after Italy when Bella asks the family to vote, Alice see’s something she never thought could happen. When Edward attacks in a rage Bella is hurt and is forced to be changed. But nothing goes as expected, going to sleep in one time and waking in another.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter, Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 39999 Read Count: 30426
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2016
Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes! I like it!!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ok, that chapter was a bit hard to follow but I think I got the gist of it. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 22

What a fucking beautiful twist to the original story! Sorry to swear but I love what you did there!!!!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 24

Uh oh! I see you're going with insane Edward. Ha ha. I've seen this character a few times. It's interesting. Kind of focuses on all the things wrong with Edward's character in the original story. Thumbs up!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Holy crap! Even though I half expected this, it still caught me by surprise! So good!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

yes! happy!  Thank you =)

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So did Peter hear the comment about Jasper?  If so, will he ask her about it?

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Woohoo Bella got her spunk back!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ooh I like the new element of with Peter!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ah, so romantic.  Love it!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I already love your characters !  Can't wait to see where the story goes next. 

SoCal by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SoCal

Being with them wasn't the problem, but losing me was. A life filled with sandy beaches and sunshine, I felt safe here. Nothing bad ever happens in SoCal, except maybe bad Mexican food. Or so I thought. This isn't your everyday love story. Based on the movie Savages.

 

For Annie, an Edward, Bella, Jasper- polyfic    

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218114 Read Count: 43822
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2015 Updated: 11 Feb 2022
Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow!!  Sorry I haven't reviewed previous chapters but the way this was formatted on my phone it just read straight through. Forgive me for that because your story definitely deserved reviews before now! This story has so much depth that you can continue it for a very long time if you choose too. I can't wait to see what's next for these three. Let me just say that I adore the pace of this story. It's perfection! Thank you d84;a039;

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Construction Zone

So so so good!



Author's Response:

Awe, thank you so much! new chapter posting in just a sec. see you next time :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Incident Ahead

I love this big dynamic family!



Author's Response:

thank you so much! they are a handful at time lol. see you next week :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Exit Only

Phew! I skipped the review on the last several chapters because it was so intense that I just couldn't help but go right for the "next" button! So good😀👍

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Barrier Ahead

Good stuff!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Danger: Falling Rock Zone

I can't stop laughing! Who hasn't that happened to? When your kids hear something they're not supposed to and then rat you out! Ah ha ha



Author's Response:

this one is hands down the most loved chapter i think. if no one sai anything, they usually stopped in here to leet me know it cracked them up. so glad you enjoyed it too! thhank you so much for all of your awesome reviews! see you one moe time for the epi :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Potholes

Awe poor Edward. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Caution

Again, poor Edward

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Crossroads

Ha ha! Gotcha Bella

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Steep Ascent

Yes! That was awesome!!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Detour

Wow ok that was definitely an unexpected turn. So exciting even though it's heart wrenching. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Yield

Oh I think I know where this is heading and I'm sure it will be an agonizingly slow process but I think it's going to be awesome!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: No U Turn

Wow! So good!

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Green Light

Ahhh! I'm both excited and scared to click the "next" button. 

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Slippery When Wet

Ok, your Edward in this story is quite yummy! 😀

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Road Work Ahead

Oh I can already tell that this is going to be good 😀



Author's Response:

Omg! I just realized I have all these reviews for old chapters! Tomorrow I'll read through them and give you an awesome reply. So sorry I didn't see them before!! Welcome aboard :)

Fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Rest Area

Usually my favorite relationship in a story is Edward and Bella but occasionally another one will steal that spot. In this story, it's definitely Jake and Seth!!



Author's Response:

aw, this makes me smile so big! i'm glad you're enjoying these boys so much :)

fyre

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - Tow Away Zone

Ooh new twist. Interesting!

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 98047
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Eeek this is stressing me out! But I'm still loving this story!



Author's Response:

Stick with it its about to change direction x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Uh oh! I think she's gonna be pissed when she finds out!🙀 But this story is so intriguing. I love it and can't wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Yes I think he is going to be in for a shock

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Thank goodness the girls came to her rescue. Maybe now Bella can get it all sorted out!



Author's Response:

Yep I'm sure that Rosalie will sort her out.

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Ummm how about tomorrow! Lol. This is going to be interesting 😀



Author's Response:

Hopefully interesting

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oh good! I don't have to mention about Garett then. Lol. Edward needs to do some serious grovelling. Hopefully Bella will give him another chance. Men are so dumb sometimes lol. 



Author's Response:

Yes I'm trying to come up with some suitable grovelling

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Please tell me Edward is going to tell her soon!  Killing me! Ha ha. Great story! Thanks 😀



Author's Response:

It is getting harder and harder for him to own up x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

This was a great chapter! Totally built up the anticipation!!  Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying this x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

That could have gone so many different ways but I really like the path you chose! I agree, Bella definitely needs time to process the info. Very satisfying chapter. Thank you d84;a039;



Author's Response:

She has some thinking to do and needs to sort her own feelings out first x

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Yes I think we're in a really good place. 



Author's Response:

I agree I think the tide has turned

Reviewer: mrsguinn Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Hmmm, I hope the boys can come up with something good! I can't wait to hear what's happening in the girls corner 😀



Author's Response:

You really think with beer and pizza involved they will concentrate ?