Reviews by Baandfam69
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

My opinion is to disregard the negativity. It's great that people are seriously interested in your story and are chomping at the bit to get more, but RL sometimes...sucks ass and it's better to wait for a quality chapter than hurry through to appease someone else.  A short chapter isn't a bad chapter.  If quality was measured by length, there would be no such thing as poetry.  Keep up the great work.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

Pierced and tattooed Sexward....All I can say is...thank you. It doesn't get better than that. And ballsy Bella? Bonus.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

I'm interested in reading your story but the only thing coming up is the Author's Notes and the Chapter End Notes.



Author's Response:

There's a glitch or bug here today. It's happening to every story, not just mine. :-)

It's up on Fanficiton.net and Twilighted if you don't want to wait for it to get sorted out here. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad to see an update on this story and congratulations on Baby #1 and 2.  I can't wait to see what the next chapters entail.  If I can be of any help, let me know.  Welcome back to the fandom.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I was unaware that your story had been plagiarized. Who did it and how many other stories were targeted?! Stuff like that really bothers me. I hope this didn't have any negative effects on your story or your process



Author's Response:

There were 15 authors in total that were stolen from. Leah210on ff.net had taken all of our stories and plugged in the wolfpack names to our stories. So my Edward was a Jacb and Bella a Leah.  We had lots of support and they came down in a day, which I am grateful for. I am looking at the bright side, I did have a few readers come my way because of it. I messaged her readers and lead them to the real story.

 

Thank you so much for your support of my story.

Here is a teaser for the next chapter

She opened the door and narrowed her eyes. He was in uniform and while Bella had set the appointment, she hadn’t expected him to actually show up after he alerted the press. Bella knew he must have been in his fifties but he looked late thirties at the most. His dark skin and long braided hair told her that he was Native American. He was not unattractive but his eyes looked weathered, dim where they should have held a spark.  In his hand he held an old notebook, nothing fancy and it looked well used. There were papers popping out the sides and the edges of those were rolled and torn.

 

The police officer stood on her porch and Bella at the door with her hands on her hips.

 

“How could you?” she accused. “We have been beating off reporters since I talked to you. Why would you do that to him?”

 

 

 

---Also you can see an additional teaser on Facebook on the FanFicAholics Anon Updates Forum

 

 

 

 

 

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Whispered Words

Sometimes it takes me a couple of days before I read my updates because this story breaks my heart.  I want to hug and nut punch Edward at the same time.  Your writing truly captures the frustration of the characters.  HEA? God I hope so.

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142307 Read Count: 86912
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2021
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Seemingly Out of Nowhere

Don't be afraid to hope even when you feel hopeless. I've been through a similar situation these last 2 weeks and if it wasn't for hope, I would have lost. Stay strong and be honest with your feelings. This is definitely not the time to say "I'm fine" when you're not.

Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Seemingly Out of Nowhere

Don't be afraid to hope even when you feel hopeless. I've been through a similar situation these last 2 weeks and if it wasn't for hope, I would have lost. Stay strong and be honest with your feelings. This is definitely not the time to say "I'm fine" when you're not.

Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Taking Responsibility

I just about died when Bella gave such a Vampire Edward speech. While I'm pretty confident that this will end up being an angst-filled road to a HEA, that still broke my heart a little.

Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Taking Responsibility

I just about died when Bella gave such a Vampire Edward speech. While I'm pretty confident that this will end up being an angst-filled road to a HEA, that still broke my heart a little.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Teen mother Isabella finds herself in a precarious situation. The person, who has given her and her baby a home, has passed away. The landlord wants her out at all costs. Insert DSHS worker Edward Cullen. What happens when he steps over the line of his job? What happens when Isabella is more to him than he expected? A/H, M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42147 Read Count: 22702
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What is Tanya's issue with Bella? Does she have something against her? She's a slum lord and I hope Edward hands her her ass. I hate bullies.



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

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Banner created by Evilnat

Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130198
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That last line was epic. Ironically enough, I think I still have some of those stickers.... I love B's pov and hope there is a HEA in there future.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86188
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Dr. Gerandy is a spiteful, close-minded son of a *****.  Let's hope Edward and the rest of the staff threaten one hell of a shitstorm....  Hmmmm, something like the blue flu perhaps?

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

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Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82046
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm interested to see where the story goes. Carlisle's teaser offers you a great opportunity to explore the edges of your imagination. Perhaps Esme and Eilzabeth find an old Cygnarian fable about the outsider and his mate and their power is supposed to save the universe. Perhaps Bella's flying skills are as good as Edward's and they lead the battle against the enemy.  Have faith. You've kicked ass so far.

Summary:

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Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192180
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Def. interested in a PDF. Great suggestion.

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Totally respect your decision. I try to hold off until my lunch break to read my ff updates and yesterday's post had me on the verge of ugly crying. What a beautiful, poignant and heart-wrenching story.

Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Considering I ended up in tears during my lunch break yesterday reading my update, can you lie to me and say this will be a HEA? Someone needs a HEA.



Author's Response:

Hi.  Please go read the author's note on Chapter 2.  I've agreed not to speak openly on the topic of HEA for those who don't want to know.  Thank you for reading!  :)

Under Construction by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

Under Construction

 

Bella Swan, a divorced adoption attorney, is relishing her time with her two hot and attentive boyfriends, Edward Masen and Garrett Keyes. Never in her wildest dreams had she ever considered being with two men, let alone two men who adored her as much as they do. Their relationship is perfection. With all new relationships, they are trying to navigate the ins and outs of being together. Their little bubble of sexual exploration is threatened when Bella is sent to New York City for a high profile adoption proceeding.

With a heavy heart, Bella flies out to New York to meet her new clients, close friends of Aro Volturi, her former boss. Carmen and Eleazar D’Amato are finalizing the adoption of a child that they fostered for almost a year and a half, but dealing with them is easy. Running into her ex-husband is not. He manages to appear everywhere once he found out that Bella was in New York. His new marriage has crumbled and his estranged wife has taken their child, hiding him away from James. His job is hanging by a thread and he now blames Bella for everything.

On a whim, Edward and Garrett fly out to New York to surprise Bella. She loses herself with them, but they had an audience. But, who and to what end?

 

Banner by Mina


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33096 Read Count: 45293
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 16 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well damn, I saw that coming.  James is massive clingy little douche of a man who has to make someone else suffer for his mistakes. I'm hoping the third part of this tale involves the trio kicking ass and taking names...together.  Love all your stories but this chapter got me all choked up. Damn holiday hormones.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After his brother dies in a car accident, Edward returns to his hometown to raise the little boy that was left behind. But raising a baby alone isn't easy, especially for a man who has spent the last few years partying and avoiding responsibilities. Can his beautiful bookworm neighbor be his saving grace? Daddyward. Lemons. Paige Edwards Sherry Neal

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 171760 Read Count: 102779
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2017 Updated: 28 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Baandfam69 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Paul's Story

Pardon my French but....oh shit. I suspected Paul had been part of the events of that night about 2_3 chapters ago. I'm hoping Edward makes it through this.