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You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104536
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Sandy74 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

I am so glad they  finally decided to communicate.

I'm still mopping up tears here.  Really good story.

Keep up the good work OK?

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: Sandy74 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Unleashing the Lioness

I have laughed and cried through this whole story and hope you keep writing until it is finished. Leaving out the Voltaire and Italy didn't hurt a bit as far as I can see.  I have read th twilight saga many times and love it, but I always thought Bella was way too wimpy in New Moon. I always thought she should fight back. Your version is just what I thought it should be.  Thank You so much. Need more chapters to complete the happy ending... O.K.?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I promise I am working to complete this story and hope to have it finished before the year ends.

 

Much love,

~Lisa