Reviews by twifan20
The Lost by Mamasutra Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

Bella Swan was not normal. She had been born with the gift of seeing the dead, but to her it was a curse. She had sworn off her abilities as she returned to her hometown to live out her final year of high school in an attempt at being normal, but nothing is normal when you are the one hope at redemption for the spirit of a lost boy. *paranormal romance & drama* beta'd


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 115308 Read Count: 9384
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

As much as I hate the fact that ff made you take your stories down, I have to admit that I have loved rereading this story here. 

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Where I Belong

Hopefully Bella told him about Lauren taking the money



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. She did ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

I can't believe how wonderful Edward was. He really could have been a jerk and treated her badly. I can only imagine how shocking that kind of news would be.

I'd hate to see his parents reaction if they didn't even like the girls he dated...

Emmett cracks me up... can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Edward's a real sweetheart. And he wants to do better than his own father. That should be a good motivation. If you like Emmett, you should love the next chapter. There will be more of him, but some Alice and Jasper, too. See you then.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 13 part 8

If I didn't already love Elizabeth, I would now!! ;)

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Banners by Mina! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

I really wish Bella would have some guards with Edward's mother. Just because they may have Esme doesn't mean all of her minions have been captured. Who knows if Esme isn't working for or with someone else as well...

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52

Please tell me someone has thought of keeping an eye on Edward's mother?? She's looking for revenge and I can't think of a better target...

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Banner by: AstridGreenEyes-Banners

Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229009
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I can't wait!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171332
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I have to admit that I was worried she would be one of those girls who didn't bleed their first time...

Nightmare by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary:

Summary: There's a serial killer on the loose and he calls himself Sent From Hell. Edward is a little strange and his past is jaded. He's let his crush on Bella be known, but she's scared of his unknown past. When Bella is hunted down, will Edward be her saving grace or will he be Sent From Hell?

 

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68989 Read Count: 29033
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm actually shocked that I guessed right! You guys always leave me guessing till the end. It's one of the things I love about your stories! ;)

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Is sent from hell Jasper? Him being a virgin would explain why Maria felt the need to keep being a prostitute.. Wanting to feel wanted by someone. Especially if she knew he was lusting after Bella. Maybe the professor is his master? It would explain the sister lying for him... or maybe I'm just overthinking everything! lol

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: Edward adopts jennifer and decides to move back home for a new start and family support. He soon after meets his sister's friend Bella who lives by the beat of her own drum. Even though the whole town seems to dislike her, Alice swears she is a great friend. So many questions to be answered so read and found out.

Banner by: Canadiantwilight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 63750 Read Count: 54495
[Report This] Published: 14 Nov 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2016
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm not sure who I liked more in this chapter! Emmett is always great and I loved him with Jen but having Bella tell Esme off was so much fun!

Can't wait for more...

Tie the Knot by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117195 Read Count: 55452
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2017
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Perfect Date

These two really need to learn to stop putting things off... I love yous... Bella's work... Edward's "friend" being at the party... lol



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I agree, it would be way easier if they just told each other what's going on, but something's always getting in the way. Well, the party is next. And interesting people will be there.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135034
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm not sure I could make it past c... ;) lol

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Every time Edward mentions her husband I just want to shake her! lol I'm not sure how she plans to explain her lack of husband at the delivery... Though hopefully she won't have to!

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I wonder if Edward has even considered that the babies are his?? I can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't believe I'm about to type this but... I love this Tanya! The only thing she could do to make me like her more is to have a run in with Emmett... with her car, fists or anything else she has handy will work. lol

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 25 May 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I can't wait for James POV! There's something I don't think I've ever typed before. lol

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 333022
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

No one thought to ask why a pregnant woman was smoking?? Is she really pregnant or hoping to steal Bella's baby??

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I guess we know why the paternity test says Edward's not the father...

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I have to admit that I feel much better about Edward now. Actually I find myself feeling a little sorry for him.. it's one thing to learn she was raped but having to watch it must have been torture.

So was it Alice or Angela who helped Ben? Maybe both? Jasper?

 

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So, Alice set Edward up to be alone with Angela? I'm assuming since I didn't see her being at the table mentioned. I'm sure Angela was pissed. lol

Every time I read the interactions between Bella, Jessica and Lauren it makes me hope Bella wasn't really alone in the first chapter. I would hate to see her lose them too...

Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm just afraid that Edward went there after finding out who his grandfather has been having lunch with. I'm sure it will be seen as her trying to manipulate another member of his family. The good thing is I can't see his grandfather letting anyone say anything bad about Bella or Ethan!

Summary:

Skin Deep Banner

Some secrets will damage your reputation.  Others will ruin your social life.  But then there are secrets that will change the way the world looks at you, now and forever.  What would Edward be willing to do to keep such a secret?  And who will pay the price?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3367 Read Count: 31094
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2017 Updated: 09 Mar 2020
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2019 Title: Skin Deep

I’m not sure if I love Alice or Edward the most in this chapter. ;)

Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You evil cliffy geniuses!! lol

Summary:

 

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52301
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: twifan20 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I know he means well but having Charlie talking about "making women scream" really creeped me out! lol