Reviews by mrsrpatz
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116432
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yeah I guess I saw that one coming. I wonder if Edward is going to blow his secret relationship with Bella.

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well that went better than I thought that would. I think that he would have been worse off if Jasper hadn't been there.

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Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I am glad that everyone is ok but I have to agree wth Edward and Emmett that things need to change and Bella needs to have a little less freedom right now. It wasn't her faul and I can see both sides of this but they should all be happy that noone got seriously hurt.

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Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That conversation didn't go well with her parents and now she doesn't want to be with them. I hope that Emmett can talk to them and make them understand that she needs time to work through everything.

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Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well I am glad that they talked and they stopped being mad and thought about the situation and are taking things how they are and not how they could have happened. I wonder how well things are going to go with Seth now that there is an investigation going on with great possible charges.

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Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I really don't know who is worse Rose or Bella!

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Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....

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Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....

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Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Uh-Oh Edward is in trouble now.....



Author's Response:

I believe a shit storm cometh his way LOL Thx for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

How could he not have told Bella about that! That is terrible that she had to learn it from facebook.

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Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't believe that Edward told Emmett!! That says alot for him. Next we get to deal with Tanya again Oh Boy!!



Author's Response:

Yes Edward may actually be an adult after all...perhaps!  All kinds of fuckery on the way in the next few chapters ;) Thx for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh God they are both Pregnant aren't they? Emmett is going to kill Edward if that is the case!

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Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well I guess that it is kinna Renee's fault that she got pregnant but in her defense she doesn't know about Bella and Edward. I wonder how Emmett is going to take this news?

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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am cracking up! I can't believe that after Emmett calmed down he wouldn' t even listen to them.

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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well hopefully the baby survives all of this! I am glad that Emmett stepped in and supported both Edward and Bella in this.

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Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Well I think that things are about to get very interesting.

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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh wow that is quite the story that Dammon has come up with!! I just hope that her firends and her and Edward can move on from this and start planning for their wedding and the baby.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153118
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning Of The Truth

I am thinking that Bella is going to get more than answers to the questions that she has.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. And I think you may be right.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What Happens Behind Closed Doors

Well it looks like Edward might just have his work really cut out for him with Rose.



Author's Response:

Of course, I couldn't make it easy on him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Most Basic Facts

Well I think that Bella is starting to really see what is going on with this lifestyle and how different it is thank she thought it was.



Author's Response:

They had to open her eyes eventually. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family Ties

I wonder what Alice spent allof that money on? I also wonder if Rosealie is getting the vibe that Edward is attracted to Bella.



Author's Response:

But really with they way Alice shops it really wouldn't be hard for her to to spend that much.

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

Well I bet that Bella never thought that she would witness this when she got started on this story.



Author's Response:

You know it.

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

Well it is a good thing that Bella is so intregued about this lifestyle because I think that anyone else would have run away from what they saw with Alice.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

That was a horrible story that Rose told and it is good that she told someone else and that it made her feel better because parents shouldn't do those things to their children.



Author's Response:

I know and the worst part is that there are monsters out there that are really like this.

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Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

I am really shocked that Bella is willing to try this because she seemed in awe of what was going on around her. I wonder what Rose and Alice are going to thing about this.



Author's Response:

I know but you know what they say love is blind.

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Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

I wonder if Rosealie is going to let Bella into their lives because it seems that she is a part of it already without trying that hard.



Author's Response:

Do you even have to wonder, does Rose ever make anything easy.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

I didn't think that Bella would put that out on the table this soon but I think that it was the best for her to do.



Author's Response:

After all that she has heard it was only right for her to do the same.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

I am glad that Rose seems to be ok with Bella coming to join their family.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing every chapter, it means a lot to me.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

Well I am glad that Bella isn't running for the hills because I think that Rose may like to have another person when she is against Alice on something.



Author's Response:

I know it would be so much fun to be able to play for both sides. Now they have a tie breaker.

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

How sweet is Alice helping those girls get all set up and makes sure that they have anything that they need.

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Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions

Well I think that Sobian and Bella are going to be great friends.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

I am sad to see this story go but it was a wonderful story!

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

It is great that Emmett and Jasper came home safe too and that they are all staying in Chicago.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

That had to be hard for Edward. To see your child and she doesn't even know who he is I really hope that Cherie bonds with Edward.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

Aww... Kids amaze me every day! At least I know that mine does!!

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

I was scared there for a minuet because I thought that something was wrong with Edward. I am glad that it was just a telegram wishing her a happy anniversary!

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

I guess that they need to take more truth to Bella's dreams than they have been. I really hope that Edward gets home to meet his little girl.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

YEA!!! I am really glad that Edward is going to come home even if it is because he got hurt.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

While it is sad that Edward missed the first year of his daughters life it is good that he is going to be home soon and will get to see her.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

It is kinna scary that Bella is having dreams like that about Edward and something is telling me that they are dead on in what he is dealing with.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

Aww.. The baby is here!!! It is exciting that the next letter that Edward will get from her will probally include a picture of his daughter or son in it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

I want to strangle that nurse. I had a nurse that I had to have removed and couldn't come back into my room after a car accident because she wouldn't listen to me that she was hurting me and my family could hear me telling her to stop what she was doing outside. I hope that this news reaches Edward soon.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

I really hope that Bella's dreams about Edward being a POW aren't real because then he may never get a chance to meet his little girl.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

It is so sweet that Edward wants to honor the people that he was close to that have passed. I wonder if any of their names will be used.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

Wow I guess that Aro and his brother are stupid. Sending someone to attack the one person who can bury them was a stupid move which I am sure that they will pay dearly for and I bet they should be glad that Edward isn't home to deal with them.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Corporate Hat Trick

I have seen that house and it is beautiful to see! I don't think that is the last of Aro that we have seen but hopefully he has learned not to mess with one Isabella Cullen.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The New VIP

Oh I can't wait for this meeting it is sure to be an amusing one because I am thinking that Aro is going to try to throw weight around that he doesn't have anymore.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Blessed Revelations

I am glad that everything is in motion and I can't wait to see how Aro deals with this because I am thinking that he isn't going to be real happy about this.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Crucial Correspondence

Lets hope that the Admiral is understanding and that he allows Edward to send word to Bella. I can't wait until he reads the other two letters that he has because one of them will change his life forever.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Eyes of A Soulless Man

I think that Bella needs to tell Carlisle what is going on at the office and see what he has to say about getting Bella and Marcus the help that they need right now to keep the company floating in Edward's absence.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Good News and Bad News

Bella and Marcus need to find a way to gain the controling factors of Cullen steel before his father run it int o the ground. Oh and Yea!!! Bella and Edward are gong to have a baby even if he isn't going to know it for a few weeks!

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chaotic Days and Lonely Nights

I hope that Bella gets what she wishes for even though it would be hard to do it by herself.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Secretive Provisions

I am loving this story and I can't wait to see what happens. It is good that the girls found somewhere else to live because that should make Edward feel a little better.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Savoring Every Moment

That was really sad! I hope that the boys get back soon and safe! It is amazing to think about all of those guys leaving for war and it isn't unlike today when they leave.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: To Protect

It is good that Bella is able to help Edward and still have her independence while he is gone!

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Conundrum

I am really glad that Bella met Esme like that because it gave her a look into her true character and let her see that she isn't after Edward's money she really truly loves him.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Shaking Off The Dust and Looking To The Future

Wow I really hope that they are going to be nice to Bella when they meet her. Her mother was verry terrible to both of them on the phone and I wonder what her father thinks about all of this.

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Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Perfect Beginning

I don't know what it is but I am very intreged by this story because of the time frame of it all. Back then it is amazing how many people got married like Bella and Edward did and when they came back they lived long happy lives together even if they hadn't known each other but days when they got married.

My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 BPOV

Poor, Poor frustrated Bella!!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: My Happy Ending?

What happened to Jasper??? I hope that Jacob and the other wolves didn't do something to him.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: My Happy Ending?

What happened to Jasper??? I hope that Jacob and the other wolves didn't do something to him.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: My Happy Ending?

What happened to Jasper??? I hope that Jacob and the other wolves didn't do something to him.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 EPOV

I can't believe that Jacob thought that he could take all three Cullen boys on. He could have been in serious trouble for attacking them across the line into their territory.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Wow who would have thought that her sleep talking would allow him to move forward in their relationship.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - EPOV

Wow who would have thought that her sleep talking would allow him to move forward in their relationship.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 BPOV

They are so sweet together! I hope that Jacob doesn't do anything stupid.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 BPOV continued

That is so sad that Jacob would think that Bella would just forgive everything that he has done. He tried to kill the boys and that was the final nail in his coffin of friendship with Bella.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 BPOV

Poor Bella now she has a broken hand.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 BPOV

Wow Jacob just doesn't give up does he. Does he even care what his presence is doing to Bella?

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 EPOV

Emmett sure knows how to push Edward's buttons doesn't he! I am crackin up at all of his thoughts on Bella's hicky!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 EPOV

Those two are really pushing their boundaries aren't they!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 EPOV

And so we are now going to find out what Jacob is doing. I would have thought with the treaty and all Sam would have rained Jake in already.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 EPOV

Holy shit!! I didn't think that he would kick her out because of all of this. I hope that he comes back to her and this isn't like when he left her in the woods.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 BPOV

I hope that Alice gets to Edward fast because Bella is going to fall apart without him!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 EPOV

I didn't think that Edward was going to make it back in time. It is terrible that she was thinking about killing herself.



Author's Response:

Hello!

Thank you for all your reviews :) I'm glad you are liking the story

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 BPOV

Wow I didn't think that he would ever give in and do that but I guess when you think that you have lost your reason for living you will do anything when you find out that they are still there.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 EPOV

I really don't think that she needs to worry about him leaving her again..

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 EPOV

Just who is Charlie that mad at?

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 BPOV

So I wonder how Charlie is going to take this news.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 BPOV

Well Charlie took all of that alot better than I thought that he would have. He was mad at Jake not Edward!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 EPOV

Charlie is a very amazing man. He is letting his little girl go because he knows that is what she wants.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 'The Quileutes’ Narrators POV

That is terrible that he honestly thinks that  Bella wants to be with him. Jake needs help and he won't listen to anyone and that is a bad situation. This situation is going to get really bad and somehow I think that Jake is the one that is going to lose because the pack will protect the treaty and the Cullen's will protect Bella with their lives.

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 JPOV

Jacob needs to be stopped he is insane!!!

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 EPOV

Now who is teasing who???

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 EPOV

I think that I have to be with Edward I really hope that his family especially Emmett were far away from the house.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 BPOV

That wasn't really nice of Edward to get her all worked up and then leave like that!

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 BPOV

It is nice that all the Cullen girls are getting along finally! It is terrible that Bella is blaming Jake running away on herself when the truth of it is that he is the one that couldn't let go.



Author's Response:

Hello!

(Great name BTW!;))

I had to have Bella get along with Rose as well as Alice. I love Rosalie, she's one of my favorite characters, she's a main character in all of my stories.

I know, writing Bella's thoughts about Jake was sad, but I think it's how she would have felt. I can understand how she thought that as well, but it is sad.

Thank you for reading this and taking the time to share your thoughts with me.

~Mel x x x

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 EPOV

I am glad that Edward came right back to her because if he didn't I think that the whole family would have had it out with him.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 BPOV

Poor Bella this is suspose to be a happy time for her and now Jake has ruined this yet again.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 EPOV

Poor Edward! He is never going to live this down.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 JPOV

Oh this is going to be bad because now Alice won't be able to see what is coming.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 JPOV

Oh this is going to be bad because now Alice won't be able to see what is coming.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 JPOV

Oh this is going to be bad because now Alice won't be able to see what is coming.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 BPOV

What are they going to do with all the humans there to celebrate with Edward and Bella!

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 JPOV

Well he was too late for the wedding but not the after affects of it.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 EPOV

That is so selfless of her and it is a good thing that they are going to leave and take the fight away from the rest of the party.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 BPOV

Awww. This is sad that she is having to leave before she knows that they are all going to be ok.

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 BPOV

Well that bitch Tanya! I can't believe that he did that to Bella and her family!

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Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 JPOV

I can't believe that he is really that stupid not to know that he has seriously hurt her so bad.