Reviews by mrsrpatz
My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 EPOV

Just bite her already!!! I can't believe that he is fighting this question right now!! She is dying.

 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 EPOV

I am glad that he was the one to change her. She wouldn't have made it if he had waited for someone else to come and do it and then she would have been gone forever.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 41 BPOV

Well she took to that well didn't she?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 BPOV

Now they get to do something to Tanya for her disreguard for members of her family.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 BPOV

Wow they really killed Tanya!! I hope that the rest of her family doesn't start a fight with the Cullen's over it.



Author's Response:

Hey,

Thank you so much for all of your reviews, I love to see what you think of the story, it makes me wanna keep writing.

I think Bella had to kill to Tanya ... to show that she could protect her family now, after them having done everything for her before - she can now protect them.

Love, Mel. x x x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303632
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

HAHA Mike and Tyler are together!!! That is funny. And now that I have read some of this story I am pissed off at Rose and Emmett you would think that they would at least try to support their sisters!



Author's Response:

Thanks:) I knwo about Rose and Em.....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Are they going to try to stop Alice and Bella again?? I must say that this is a great story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

And so now I guess that the shit is about to fly!



Author's Response:

Er, yep

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am shocked that by their parents disowning Bella and Alice, Rose and Emmett stepped up and chose to be there for them.



Author's Response:

I know!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

And now we know that they will all be ok.



Author's Response:

Yep:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It is so sad to see the narrowmindness of some people. I had a friend that told me that she was gay when I was a sophmore in High School. We went to a school in a small town so of course when people started talking about her they started asking me if I thought that it was weird and I told them that I didn't because she never pushed what she wanted or believed on me and I was ok with her being gay.



Author's Response:

I grew up in a small town too. One of my best friends was gay. He didn't come out until just a few years ago but you know, people around here still talk about it. It makes me sick becasue he's still the same great guy he has always been. He just happens to like guys too:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am just glad that Rose and Emmett are going to be there for them all.



Author's Response:

Me too. Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh shit they have awaken the mama bear in Esme! This is going to be bad for Bella and Alice's parents. I am glad to see that Edward's parents accept them for who they are.



Author's Response:

I woudn't want to face Esme...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am totally with you on wanting Esme and Carlisle being my parents. I know that if I was in this situation I would want my parents support. I know that my dad would stand behind me because he has in everything that I have ever done. I got pregnant  2 years ago and while I was almost 28 my dad was my rock because I had no one. My son's father left all my friends left and all my mom told me was that I should have an abortion.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you have your dad. My mom is great like that too. My inlaws.......well, we wont get into that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

all I have to say is Way To Go Charlie!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I started to like Charlie here.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well three out of the four of them aren't that bad.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Those four what are we going to do with them?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was really sweet. Now they all need to be there for Jasper!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was really sweet. Now they all need to be there for Jasper!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am glad that most of their parents accept them. Now the only ones that are left are Jasper's. I wonder how that is going to go.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Now they need to work on getting Kate away from that ass that she is married to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Now they need to work on getting Kate away from that ass that she is married to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow!! That was terrible. Now they all know just how strong she really is.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It seems that Edward and Bella are getting to spend time together alone.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I didn't think that he would be that stupid to attack her at her work where is brother-in-law and father-in-law also work.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well I am glad that the nightmare is over for Kate.



Author's Response:

thanks for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Maybe the universal front is the way to go. I am glad that Kate is ok but what is going on between her and Gar?



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh wow is this story going to get more interesting?? Are four of the parents going to suddenly decide that they need to be together too?



Author's Response:

perhaps...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh what are these boys thinking??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh what are these boys thinking??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh what are these boys thinking??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awww.... I really didn't see that one coming! I wonder what is going on with Alice's and Edward's parents?



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh boy! That is shocking but at the same time not because we know how Renee and Charlotte feel about each other so we should have known that this was going to happen. I am happy that they are going to get married.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That is amazing that she finished that when she was like 20 years old. I hope that Mike and Tyler will listen to what happened to Bella before they go off the deep end and think that Edward or Jasper would ever hurt her.



Author's Response:

THanks for the reviews:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I wonder what they got for christmas?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

And so I guess a trend was started in their families and they are all TOGETHER!!



Author's Response:

lol, I know. They are like bunnies ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Aww.... They are so cute!! I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I am cracking up that Renee has planned their wedding! but it is going to be perfect.



Author's Response:

lol, sound just like Renee to me!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So they are going to get married on Valentine's day!! that is cute.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

they all seem to be getting along well!



Author's Response:

Yep:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow Carlisle is leaving and letting Bella run the company!! That is amazing for her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow Carlisle is leaving and letting Bella run the company!! That is amazing for her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow Carlisle is leaving and letting Bella run the company!! That is amazing for her.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So they are all going to take Edward's last name! I am sure that Esme and Carlisle will be so proud of them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So they are all going to take Edward's last name! I am sure that Esme and Carlisle will be so proud of them.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

And I think that they are right people just don't understand or some don't want to.



Author's Response:

Very true:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Now that is a good Question that hopefully will be answered soon for us. I cracked up when Charlie yelled that if he wasn't getting any noone else was either. That is funny.



Author's Response:

lol, i loved that part too:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I didn't expect that to come out of Angela's mouth! That was kinna funny!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It is good that Angela and Ben took their relationship better than they thought that they would. I hope that with Carlisle moving and opening up a branch in Forks that Ben gets even more work.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It is good that Angela and Ben took their relationship better than they thought that they would. I hope that with Carlisle moving and opening up a branch in Forks that Ben gets even more work.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It is good that Angela and Ben took their relationship better than they thought that they would. I hope that with Carlisle moving and opening up a branch in Forks that Ben gets even more work.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Mike and Tyler's mother's are my new heroes after that! That was sweet that they stood up for them!



Author's Response:

thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

So Lauren is gone now! I can't believe that she tried to blackmail Carlisle!!!



Author's Response:

She's not smart!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

That was a good surprise gouing to see art!



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

So they are married now! I wonder what is going to happen to them now?



Author's Response:


Thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Aww.. Now Bella and Alice are the only ones left to become cullen's!!!



Author's Response:

Yep:) Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Charlie and Peter got caught!!! That is funny!!! And they talk about the kids being bad at least they didn't get caught.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

HAHA!! I thought that Sam was going to have a heart attack!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Sam is going to need a vacation after all of them leave! LOL...



Author's Response:

I know!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Well I guess their secret about the beach is out in the open now!!



Author's Response:

lol, yep. Sam didn't waste any time in telling them :)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

They are getting married tomarow! I think that it is sweet that everyone stayed together as a family for the last night before they got married.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Aw that is terrible they find out that Alice is pregnant and then they get into a car accident!! I hope that Alice is ok. What about Bella?



Author's Response:

Thanks:0) check out the sequel!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41877
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Devil in Disguise

What a sorry excuse for wanting to off your wife. I can't believe that. Now I wonder what Alice is going to see in Edward's future with Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow I can't wit to see what hapens with all of them. I can't believe that they have gotten away with two murders.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Sinful Pleasure

Wow they are all pretty good at keeping from getting caught.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Fallen Angel

Well so much for Edward thinking that Alice didn't know about his meeting Bella. I really hope that they all think about what they are doing before they follow through with this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Phantom Desire

It is so sad that Bella is clueless as to what is going to happen to her. I really hope that she at least knows that Mike isn't being faithful to her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Death By . . .

Well I guess they are going to keep this one closer to them than the rest of them aren't they?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Angel of Death

Well at least he told her the truth about the spark. How lucky was it that Bella wasn't hurt more than that when she fell down the stairs.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Passion and Fury

What a sad person who can't even pay to take his wife out to eat!! I hate that she is still with him and that Edward is still going to have to kill her. I just hope that he can get out of that even if it is for a lot of money.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Soulful Brown Eyes

Well I guess that Bella isn't dumb as to what Mike is doing. I hope that she leaves him because then Edward wouldn't have to kill her because she would be divorced from him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Visions of Duct Tape

Well finally she says that she is going to get out of her marriage that is a joke! I am glad that Alice and Emmett have found love but can't they realize that by continuing to have a hit on Bella is robbing Edward of his chance too?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Shaken to the Core

OMG!! Bella killed Mike didn't she? I really hope that is the case and maybe they can say that he came after her and it was self defense!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Quicksand

Wow I didn't think that it would have been Lauren but I am kinna glad that it was but now Mike is going to be even more ready for her to die.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Dismal World

Well I am glad that Mike is going to get what he deserves now!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Dark Abyss

I really hope that Jacob isn't lying and that the hit on Bella is finished as will her husband be shortly.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366931
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

I am cracking up that Alice was behind them getting together after all. That sneaky little pixie!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

I am cracking up that Alice was behind them getting together after all. That sneaky little pixie!!!



Author's Response:

Of course it was Alice!  She is a natural plotter and schemer even without seeing the future!

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55122
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Research

That is funny that Edward came in there looking to do research and got a job!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster

I wonder what Leah said to her to let her guard down enough to have sex with Edward in her office.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: An Officer and a Gentleman

That is sad that someone broke into Bella's apartmant but it is a good thing that she wasn't home. What is Edward going to do now that Bella fired him from working at the bar.



Author's Response:

Okay love, I'm gonna comment on most of the reviews but not all, mainly to answer or chat about things you bring up!  Thank you though for taking the time to review every chapter.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Cleaning Up and Baring All

That is sad about all of the stuff that got taken from her apartment especially her engagement ring. I really hope that she doesn't get that mad about the fact that Edward told Alice about her coming to christmas.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees

How amazing are they that they are buying her a whole new wardrobe for christmas!



Author's Response:

Alice is definitely going overboard and bringing the family along with her, but its a sweet thing after what she's been through.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree

It really is a small world that Rose and Bella know each other. I wonder what secret she is keeping from Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Buried Under the Guilt

That is so sad that she had her future ripped away from her when she was 20. I have cervical cancer and endometriosis running in my family which sometimes makes it hard to have children. I was blessed to be able to have one but now have problems that will probally make it hard to have children later on. I really hope that they talk to each other and work things out.



Author's Response:

My mother had cervical cancer, which is why I first thought about it...I've always been worried about having it before I could have a family...that was the birth of this story.  I've had some amazing people tell me their stories and I appreciate you sharing yours.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Another Country Heard From

Oh no there is something wrong with Esme!! I hope that she is ok!! It is good that Leah went to talk to Edward because it gave him more insight into Bella!



Author's Response:

Leah is all about Bella being happy and she knows that despite his issues, he's good for her as long as he can be there fore Bella.  We'll get to Esme in another review...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing

I really hope that Esme is going to be ok!! It was really sweet that Bella came to make sure that they were all taken care of even if her and Edward are figuring out things right now.



Author's Response:

Bella knows what they are going through and she couldn't sit by and let them suffer, even if Edward and her are having issues, she loves that family and wanted to be there for them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Someone to Watch Over Me

That is so sad. I really hope that when Esme wakes up she is he and remembers her family. It is good that they have each other to lean on because it is sad when a family doesn't come together to help each other through something like this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Way Beyond Empty

That was sweet that they have a song about Bella even more amazing was that she got up on stage and sang with them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Finding Inspiration

Edward finally asked her out and that card was a great way to do that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Indescribable

They are so good together I really hope that they get a llifetime of happiness.



Author's Response:

That's the plan, lovie...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Positively Negative

The dresses for Alice and Jasper's wedding are beautiful! It is nice to see that Edward and Bella are trying to take things slower than they were.



Author's Response:

I wanted that to be a slower burn this time...and planning these weddings were my first two and i had them planned very early on, knowing that it wouldn't be happening for E&B until the sequel.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: When a Stranger Calls

Is is Charlie trying to get into Bella's life now after he has caused so much dammage already?



Author's Response:

Maybe...hehehe, you seem to call me on a lot of my things.  You're good!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Spooning in Forks

That was really sad! it was really glad that Charlie and Bella got to see each other one more time and that she found out that Charlie didn't blame her for not staying with him after her mother died and that he got to say how sorry he was for treating her the way that he did.



Author's Response:

This for me was an important thing because i'm all about the family you choose vs the family you're born into and for her to move forward with the Cullen's she'd need to resolve her issues with her father and it was the only thing that force Charlie to reach out to her after all this time.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Some String and a Bag of Oats

I am sure that was a nightmare for Jasper! It was funny for all of us though.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Sixpence for the Richer

It is finally time!!!! YEA

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Wedding Bells!

That is an amazing gift that Leah is willing to give them by being a surragate for them. I was cracking up at some of the conversations while they were dancing and I think that Alice might make Edward and Bella an Aunt and Uncle in the not so distant future.



Author's Response:

OMG, you did it again! Do you have AgoodWITCH radar?  I need you when I have a writer's block?  Seriously, i flove you! I had fun with those dances and the surrogacy is something that will continue into the sequel as you saw.