Reviews by mrsrpatz
Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55122
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Great Real Estate Search

They got their condo!! I wonder how much they are going to have to rein in Alice and Esme??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Without You

It is amazing that Bella and Esme got the whole condo furnished in a matter of days!! I am jealous it took me years to pick out what I wanted in my house and I don't think that I am still happy I need a new living room set!



Author's Response:

When you have a future MiL like Esme and unlimited money, you can do a lot!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Little Things

How awesome is it that they are going to get married on the anniversary of the day that they met! That has to be the fates smiling down on them that they got that date and the place that Bella wanted to get married at.



Author's Response:

That was a fun little thing to work out and it works in with a few other plot points...thanks again for all the reviews!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108993
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Something tells me that this isn't the last time that they are going to meet if those ladies have anything to do with it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

All I have to say is That is really hot!! I just love a guy with tattoos! Those little kids are so sweet too and poor Edward his mom is only trying to help him out!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That is the worst feeling in the world to have to hear your child crying and not knowing what is wrong with them or not being able to fix it. I am glad that she is ok and that is sweet that Edward sat and talked to her while Carlisle was helping Lily.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That is the worst feeling in the world to have to hear your child crying and not knowing what is wrong with them or not being able to fix it. I am glad that she is ok and that is sweet that Edward sat and talked to her while Carlisle was helping Lily.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They are just too cute even though they have just met and they seen so intune with each other.

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

YEA!!! Edward and Bella are going to go out on a date. I am glad that she got to meet his kids too.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well that was a great first date for them. I wonder what Edward has up his sleeve for the next one.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That chapter was funny and sweet up until the stupidity of those men. I can't believe that in this day and age that there are still people out there like that. I mean maybe they should have a little compassion towards people.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am glad that Emmett came to talk to him because that just shows how much Bella means to him. Those little kids are sure perseptive little people aren't they.

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Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I wonder what idea Bella has for Wendy's gift. They are getting along so well I just hope that nothing comes inbetween the two of them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Um.... Yeah that haunted house would scare the shit out of me. I have seen some scary places too. My cousin helps out at a haunted house in Arlin Texas and that place is really scary it is huge too.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Those three from the tattoo shop are quite funny characters. I am kinna glad that Esme called when they were on the sofa because I think that it is kinna soon for them and that is something that they would both regret the next day.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I about cried when Car said that Bella was his mommy. And then Wendy asks Edward if Bella was going to be her mommy that about broke my heart because these kids want a mommy so badly and they love her so much and so does she.  All of these kids need each other and Edward and Bella to be a family. And Rose and Emmett are going to have a baby!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

They are gelling just like a family. It is so sweet!

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well now what are they going to do because Bella probally doesn't have a job now. I am glad that she stood up to her boss and told her that Edward's kids were hers too and now Carlisle knows how she feels too!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well at least he told her because Ireally thought that he might just keep it a secret for a while and the would have gone badly for him. Now I wonder what she is going to do.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah some people are going to say that they are moving too fast but I say whatever works for them is what is best. They know that they are going to be together so why delay that. Instead of paying 2 set of bills every month it only makes sense to pay one.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yeah some people are going to say that they are moving too fast but I say whatever works for them is what is best. They know that they are going to be together so why delay that. Instead of paying 2 set of bills every month it only makes sense to pay one.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I am so sorry for you. Break ups suck and they screw with your mind. I know all too well and I hope that things get better for you and hope that you start feeling better soon. I can't wait to see how this story plays out.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Etched in my Skin

I am so sorry for you. Break ups suck and they screw with your mind. I know all too well and I hope that things get better for you and hope that you start feeling better soon. I can't wait to see how this story plays out.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

I am glad that you are doing better. It takes time to get back to where you once were and that is the hardest thing. That is so cute that he changed his room for her. And that nursary sounds really beautiful.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

That was a sweet way to end this story!! I loved every moment of this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61052
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What an ass! I really hate guys that won't stick around after they find out that there is a baby in the mix. I know from experience because my son's father didn't want him and so he has never been a part of his almost 2year life.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You

HaHa that was funny!! I am glad that she got to say what she needed to say and I have to say that Edward is one sad individual right now.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity

I have to agree that he is being a real douche bag. I am really beginning to doubt that this is a Bella/Edward story but I want to see what happens and I have faith in your story so I am going to continue.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!

I am glad that Bella is going on with her life without Edward because who really needs him she can go find someone else that likes her and wants to be with her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection

He may be an asshole but at least he is turning his feelings around and actually acknowlege that yes Bella is pregnant and yes it is his.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart

I am very excited that he has come to this conclusion and now he needs to talk to Bella and handle this whole situation.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection

He may be an asshole but at least he is turning his feelings around and actually acknowlege that yes Bella is pregnant and yes it is his.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Arguements and Explanations

Um... Is Jessica really that stupid!! Does she really think that she will get Edward in the end??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - You've been Served

I really think that Bella is doing the right thing in letting Jasper go because she is using him and that if she decides that she wants something with him that she should wait and see if she really feels anything for him or if it is a rebound. I also wonder what is going to happen between her and Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps

To answer your question my BF and I had broken up over something stupid that neither one of us remembers now but he started dating again and so did I and I wound up with a loser that never broke up with me just stopped coming over and talking to me only to have his ex im me on his name one day to tell me that he was never going to talk to me again because she gave him everything that he needs. Well I was pissed and called my now BF and he listened to me cry and drove the 3hrs that it takes to get to my house and just let me cry on him and talk about anything and nothing. And we are together now and I love him more than ever. 

I am glad that Edward finally pulled his head out of his ass!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Friends

Oh I think that he just took a huge step in the whole I am going to get the family that I never should have left back!!

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Engagement Party

She is really a stupid whore isn't she. I mean picking a fight and threatening Bella in front of her family, Edward and his family was a really stupid move.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest

Oh she is one sick bitch and I hope that she does try something just so that she can get the help that she is in desprate need of.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Small Gestures

So they are together now?? well then it seems that Edward fucked up again otherwise the prologue wouldn't have happened.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Nightmares

So it was all a dream!! I really hope that it was and that Edward wouldn't hurt her again!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Moving Forward

Jessica stole that picture didn't she? I hope that I am wrong but I am thinking that I am not! It is so cute that he is getting pregnancy pictures done.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies

Oh man I was right and she is really sick in the head and thinks that Bella's baby will be hers!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Stalking Tendencies

Oh man I was right and she is really sick in the head and thinks that Bella's baby will be hers!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - A Mother's Nightmare

OMG!!!! Is Bella really dead? I hope that they find that sick bitch and put her away and throw the key away because she doesn't deserve to be around anyone for the rest of her life.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Carnage

She has to pull through this! Now I am thinking that this isn't going to end well for Jessica I am thinking because James,Jasper,Edward and Emmett are after blood and vengence for someone that can't do it for herself right now. And that little girl needs to be checked out at a hospital.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Dark Passenger

Well I can't really say that I am sorry that Jessica is dead. She thought that she would get away with all of this and that her and Edward would raise his baby like it was theirs and that is sick.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Stay with Me

Thank God she is going to be ok! I am glad that Edward won't have to deal with losing Bella after everything!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

That was a great way to end it. They overcame so much and now have three children too!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 World Champions

She is going to go into labor and then Edward is going to feel like an ass which he should. I think that she had every right to be pissed off at him for not doing what he said that he would.



Author's Response:

Yep she sure is, she got all of those  fun signs of early labor going on.  Edward was quite the lunkhead and will have some making up to do before he can get out of the doghouse.   Thanks so much for reading!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Thankful

I am sad to see this story go but I understand that Edward has told the story that he needed to in this story.



Author's Response:

It was really hard for me to come to the decision to end it here. But I knew that it was time and I didn't want to try to force thigns jsut tomake it longer and end up with crappy chapters.  I have started on the epilogue and I hope to have it up soon. I think that you will like their happy ever after.

 

Thanks so much for all the awesome reviews and for reading. I will have a new story, so put me on author watch.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Disabled List

That is sad that she lives in St. Louis and doesn't follow baseball!!! I live in Peoria IL and I follow the Cards and the cubs but I mostly follow the cubs to laugh at them because they seem to be hopeless sometimes.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it is sad considering most all of us here in St. Louis love the Cardinals. But thats just Bella. lol Sports were never really her thing.  Yes as a Cardinals fan I laugh at the Cubs quite frequently. I did however somewhat cheer for them when Jim Edmonds played for them. It really sucked to have my all time favortie player fo to play for the Cubs.

 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Foul Ball

Well that will teach Bella to not pay attenetion to what is going on around her!! LOL



Author's Response:

I know right!!  Who would play on their Blackberry when they could be watching Edward!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The Visiting Team

I would so take the risk of getting hit in the head again with a baseball if that meant that I got to be with Edward.



Author's Response:

Me too!!! It would so be worth it!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Passed Ball

Alice and Angela are doing so well with putting those two together.



Author's Response:

Yes they are a quite the dynamic duo. lol

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 First Base

I have a feeling that they will be seeing each other on Tuesday at Alice's!



Author's Response:

Hmm. you just might be right!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Overtime

Transformers is an awesome movie!!! I loved it and they were so sweet but that is good that things didn't go to far becasue I really don't think that they are ready yet but they will be probally soon.



Author's Response:

Yes they both were awesome and I loved them, thus why Bella has the car she does. Yes it was still just a bit too soon for them to be going all the way.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rounding The Bases

Oh no I hope he is going to be ok. And that song is a good one to express how she was feeling.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Down and Out

Poor Edward it is terrible that he is going to miss the rest of the season. Hopefully they are both in better moods when Bella gets back to her house.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Down and Out

Poor Edward it is terrible that he is going to miss the rest of the season. Hopefully they are both in better moods when Bella gets back to her house.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The Rules Of The Game

That little lilly is so cute calling Bella auntie! I can't wait until August when I get to have that title!



Author's Response:

LIlly is a little doll. Congrats on you upcoming jump into Aunthood. Just think, you get to spoil him or her rotten and then send them home. Best thing ever!!

 

EA

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Trick Or Treat

That was a good prank!! I hope that Emmett has learned his lesson.

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Singing In The Rain

All of them are so cute!!

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Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Parents and Babies

That is good news about Brook and Cam. I am glad that Edward and Bella really didn't fall off the deep end with that conversation because I know that I would have been mortified.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Parents and Babies

That is good news about Brook and Cam. I am glad that Edward and Bella really didn't fall off the deep end with that conversation because I know that I would have been mortified.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Parents and Babies

That is good news about Brook and Cam. I am glad that Edward and Bella really didn't fall off the deep end with that conversation because I know that I would have been mortified.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Options

Who knew that Emmett could give good adivce. I am glad that Edward asked for his opinion.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Christmas And The Unexpected

Is it Bella?? That would explain the reason that she wanted to cry.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 It's Me!

That whole thing with Edward being jealous of Jimmie was funny!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Come Sail Away

Aw poor Bella thinking about the fact that Edward is leaving again on the last day of their cruse.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me

Did they decide to let him go after telling him that the position was his or is he just walking away??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me

Did they decide to let him go after telling him that the position was his or is he just walking away??

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Let It Be Me

Did they decide to let him go after telling him that the position was his or is he just walking away??

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 What Hurts The Most

Oh so now we are where the story began and this is so sad that she thought that he left because of her and that wasn't entirely true and now he has lost her and baseball. 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Used To Have It All Figured Out

I really hope that they catch him before he leaves because that will just make the two of them even more crazy if they miss each other.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Taking You Home

Well I am glad that everything is going well for them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Moving On And Reconnecting

So they are going to get another house that is better for them. I can't believe that they thought that they would be able to hide the news from Esme! I hope that the meeting between Edward and Rose goes well and that they don't fight that much.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Spilling The Beans

I am glad that Rose and Edward made up because it would be terrible for everyone if they were still at each others throats all the time.

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Love and Happiness

What he did for that little boy was so sweet!! I am glad that Bella now realizes that he truly made the right decison to leave baseball!

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Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Brides, Babies and Baseball

That is good that he doesn't feel regret because that would mean that he made the wrong choice and I don't think that he feels like he did.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 It All Comes Down To This

What a sad bastard Jacob is! I can't believe that he would do that to Edward in front of his family! Did he not think that they would stand behind him. I hope that Bella is ok.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Black and Blue

They are having a boy!!! Boys are so fun but sometimes the things that they do are scary. I am glad that everything is fine. I can't wait to see what happens to jacob after this.

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Finding Balance In Life

Well at least Jacob is in trouble for what he did to Bella. I would love to see him hanging from a tree!!

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Running Towards The Finish Line

That was sweet that they would have everyone donate to a charity instead of buying them wedding gifts! Next is the wedding!!!

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Our Time Begins Now

I am glad that Emmett didn't embarrass Edward or Bella that much in his speech because you know he could have. Now off to the honeymoon.

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Greece Is The Word

I want to stoaway in their luggagae right now!! It sounds like fun.

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Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 The Island

I am really glad that they had a good time and are now home so that they can get ready for Zachary's arrival.

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Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 New Arrival

Yea Alice's baby is here!!! That means that Zac is next and we can't wait for him to get here.



Author's Response:

Yes little Zak will be making his appearance real soon.   Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 It's Time!

That is so scary that he had to deliver Zachary at home. I am glad that they are all ok though.



Author's Response:

Yes it was scary, but what a bond they will share!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 No More Broken Promises

That is just so sweet that he woke up and fed him without waking Bella up.



Author's Response:

Yes I can remember many times when I would have loved for my husband to do that, but unfortunately he slept like the dead and never heard a thing!!

 

Thanks for reading.

My Mia by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

 

Bella's tortured...body, mind, and soul. Can Edward save her from herself? Sensitive topic dealing with relationships and struggles. ALL B/E POV'S


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126768 Read Count: 15706
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 30 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 Skinny

That is sad that Bella has this and is living all alone with it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Creep

Poor Bella I really don't think that she is going to get her wish and him not being out there. I really hope that Edward just meant that he couldn't do that because she was really drunk.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 3 Secretly

Aww... Maybe that is just what she needs to help her. I really hope that she just doesn't stop talking to him.

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Morning Light

She is making prgress and she doesn't even know it. I am glad that she is willing to try to be a normal person even thought she is afraid and scared that sometimes is the worst feeling in the world.

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 The Pretender

I couldn't help it and had to go and get that phrase translated. That was so sweet. I really hope that Bella can let down her wall even if it is just a little.

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 6 True

Well I guess that she looked that up too! I am glad that she is trying to let him in.

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 8 Because of You

Oh man now she is ging to have to tell him. I really hope that he helps her.

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 9 Fall to Pieces

I am glad that Edward now knows about Bella's secret I wonder what Remee is doing by contacting her children after not talking to them in a while.

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 For You I Will (Confidence)

I am glad that she is going to at least try. I really hope that this Dr. can help her so that she can get better.

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Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Ch 11 Perfect

She is taking alot of steps here to try to get better. I am glad that she is starting to have some normal things in her life because I really think that is partly what she needs.