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My Mia by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

 

Bella's tortured...body, mind, and soul. Can Edward save her from herself? Sensitive topic dealing with relationships and struggles. ALL B/E POV'S


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126768 Read Count: 15706
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 30 Jul 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 12 Open Arms

She is doing so much better than even she knows. I just hope that this whole dinner thing goes better for her and that the rest of them don't gang up on her even though I don't think that Edward would let that happen to her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 Drive

I wonder who is the first person that she is going to take with her? My guess is that it is either Emmett or Charlie.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch 14 We Are Broken

So I was wrong! I should have thought that Bella would take him first because he is her rock and that would soften the blow of taking Emmett and Charlie with her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 15 Never Say Never

Well now they have gotten to Dr. Banner's homework assignment. I hope that she will just open up to him but I think that she needs more time.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Ch 16 Wonderwall

Well I really hope that is the other shoe dropping in Bella's life right now because I don't think that she needs anything else to happen. I really hope for his daughter's sake that Charlie starts to come around because Bella needs a suport system not someone that avoids things all the time.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Ch 17 Bother

Wow! What is she hiding that is so bad that she is pushing everyone away? I really hope that Edward fights to keep Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 18 Without You

Well I really hope that she is going to let Edward in now. I think that she needs to have someone to talk to and let in even when she doesn't want to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 Last Stand

Wow she really has been through alot hasn't she. I think that David is right because of her getting help in one area of her life that left a spot for something else to surface. I really hope that her and Edward can work through all of this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 20 No Air

I am glad that they worked out what was making Bella dream like that. Now Edward is going to move in with her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch 21 Daughters

I didn't think that Harry would do something like that but I think that Edward should just wing it and reopen the store because that is what Harry would have wanted.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 The Man in Love with You

Well here goes nothing!! I just know that she is going to say yes to him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 Just Say Yes

That was one of the sweetest proposials that I have heard of. I want someone to write on my shoes now..

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Love

Yea!!! So they are finally married..

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Loss

Well that was sad that Renee died but Emmett was right she was sick and it seemed that she didn't want help with it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Life

That was sweet that she got her happily ever after and she found out that she needed to be there for her daughter more than anything that sometimes is the cure for everything. I battle with depression everyday and I have to tell you that my son is the best medicine in the world everytime he grabs my hand to lead me somewhere or laughs it just makes me smile and anything that has been bothering me just goes away.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all your wonderful reviews!!! it means a lot to me that people take the time to tell me what they think!!!

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Awww.. We didn't get to see them get married?? I loved the first part of this story and can't wait to see what happens in this one!



Author's Response:

No, this is the prologue, I couldn't cut out their wedding! But this is the first big dramatic issue in this story and it is fast approaching now!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Plans, Parties and Portland

I totally am sorry that I thought that you would leave their wedding out of this story. I am so glad that I haven't had to plan a wedding because I think that I would go insane with all of that stuff!



Author's Response:

I've planned enough faux weddings for these stories, that I think my own wedding some day will be a cake walk!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Baby Bug

I keep going to the prologue of this story and I know I won't get an answer to this but either something is going to happen to their baby when Leah is pregnant or something is going to happen to Eli isn't it? I really hope that I am wrong but that is what my feeling is right now.



Author's Response:

No comment...but that's my answer to all the guesses.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Tying up the Loose Ends

 It iwas good that Bella got to go back and visit her mother's grave before the wedding! It was a good thing that they hadn't planned to keep Edward and Bella apart after the party because I am thinking that they may have put up a fight on that one.



Author's Response:

I'd had that planned for a long time also...there were some things that wouldn't work and keeping them apart was one of them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: One Hand, One Heart

Awww.... They are finally married!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Reality Lost, Paradise Found

Those pictures really make me want to go to an island right now. It is sad that Alice had complications when having Danica but it is great that they are all ok now.



Author's Response:

That island is another one of those things I had locked away for a long time. The Danica thing was a way to get the baby there early and add a little tension to what was by and large one big lemon.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella Notte

How cute is it that Edward got Bella a dog for christmas? It is nice that Bella is getting time off and not having to worry about the bars while she gets to live her life like she hasn't in the past.



Author's Response:

Bella stepping back from the bar is part of the turn for the future of this story...with the kids and Edward's career and everything else and this is the beginning of that.  That puppy was born out of my friend and I and how we have a bunch of animals that were named after our favorite characters, so I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Many Shades of Love

It is sad that Eli is now deployed and isn't going to be with Leah through the pregnancy. I really hope that Edward is right and Eli comes back to Leah because I don't know if she would make it if something happened to him.



Author's Response:

The Eli thing will tie her deeper into the family and still make his deployment and return more dramatic.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Better Together

That is wonderful news that they aren't having one baby but two!! How amazing is it that Edward gets to write the screenplay for the next movie too!!



Author's Response:

Edward is gaining more control and they're getting their chance in the baby department in one shot.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The City She Loves & the Place We Call Home

Awww.... They are having one of each! I am sure that by now Leah can't wait until these two are born so that she can get back to it. It is terrible that some people are just mean to glare at something like the gift that she is giving Edward and Bella. My moto is you shouldn't pass judgement on someones situation unless you have walked in their shoes.

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Better Than Expected

Ok I am cracking up!! Edward moving out so that he can get away from Alice and is living with Bella. I wonder how long it is going to be until the feelings come out to play!



Author's Response:

This is an intense story, but i'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: React now, think later

Well lets just say that Bella is the best roommate/friend ever. I have had roommates do that to me and lets just say it didn't turn out well and I didn't talk them for a while.



Author's Response:

i've had that too..but its in her nature so she's going to take care of him bc of the feelings she's hiding.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Baby Steps

Well that was interesting. I wonder how many games they are going to play with each other.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Happy Birthday Eeyore!

Bella needs to get away from Jacob and fast. I think that if Emmett or Edward find out what is going on Jake will be a dead man.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking Point

Wow! I am glad that Bella got help but she should have given them Jake's name because they would protect her from him.



Author's Response:

The whole Jake situ is tough, but it will work out eventually...thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Everything Falls Apart

So Jake ran and now they can't find him. I hope that Emmett finds him first. I can't believe that Emmett went off on Edward like that, Edward saved her life and was there for her. He didn't even answer the phone when she needed him so I think that he needs to seriously think about things before going off on Edward like that.



Author's Response:

Emmett's reaction is something that will make more sense when you read the latest chapter...he wanted to be informed and didn't like being the last to know.  It was his fault he didn't answer the phone.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Returning to the Scene of the Crime

It is good that Emmett came to apoligize to Edward because he deserved it. It is good that Bella is home now.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Understanding Nila's Reasons

That is nice that her dr. is trying everything and anything to get her to open up and that it is working. It  just goes to show that she is more determined than ever to get better.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Slip of the Tongue

That cat is really cute!! I am glad that Tanya let the cat out of the bag because that made Edward and Bella put their feelings out on the table for the both of them to see.



Author's Response:

That cat is actually mine...he's my boo!  And sorry I'm not responding to every review you left, i'm just trying to reply to the ones with questions or comments so i can get back to working on my next chapter.  I really appreciate the fact that you've reviewed as often as you have!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: A Shadow of a Ghost

It is really good that Bella seems to be getting along better that anyone thought that she would have.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Whispers, Fears and Baby Steps

Bella is doing so well for it being not that soon after everything. I really hope that she continues doing so well.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Strength in Numbers

That was really mean of her dad to do that to her just for not coming home for the holiday. that really makes me wonder how it is going to be when they find out about what happened.



Author's Response:

Its not a good time, but he's a very vengeful person and has some issues of his own that are causing these things to happen.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Center of Attention

How great is it that she was able to get through all of that with little incident in the class.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Confidence Found

Well I guess that we are now going to see how Bella's parents are going to take the news about what happened to Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Going "Home"

How sad is it that her own father said a bunch of hurtful things to her and forced her to not want to be with them for Christmas.



Author's Response:

Their first time was actually harder than writing the fight with her parents, it was just a really tough moment.  Charlie has his issues and Renee is not the one to jump into a fight like that, Emmett is getting better  and that will help.  Thanks for the review!

Was Every by jol27 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Was Every Banner


 

Was every smile I gave him a lie?

 

Was every look a lie?

 

My name is Bella Swan and I have a secret. For 25 years I have been in love with my best friend.

 

When Edward returns home he also has a secret that will change their lives, "guys, I'm getting married!"

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84116 Read Count: 24053
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 10 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh man are they two stupid people that could have had what their friends had a long time ago if they would have just opened their eyes!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aww... He broke Bella!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He is just not thinking clearly. I bet that the gang isn't going to get along with Tanya.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well  I guess that Bella has game after all and the kids at school just didn't know it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think that Emmett just hit everything on the head right there and I hope that Edward listens to him before going on with his marriage to Tanya because he deserves to try.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh things aren't looking well for them right now. I hope that they get better and start acting like the friends that they are.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh things aren't looking well for them right now. I hope that they get better and start acting like the friends that they are.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh things aren't looking well for them right now. I hope that they get better and start acting like the friends that they are.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

And there goes Bella! Edward is losing her along with the rest of the gang. She is trying to distance herself so that she won't have to end up being the third wheel when Tanya comes around.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

And there goes Bella! Edward is losing her along with the rest of the gang. She is trying to distance herself so that she won't have to end up being the third wheel when Tanya comes around.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He really should have told her that Tanya was coming to the game with them. Now she is going to try to run again.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He really should have told her that Tanya was coming to the game with them. Now she is going to try to run again.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

And that right there is where Edward lost Bella. She is bailing out on her friends and everthing.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh man they have both messed all of this up. I hope that they can lead each other back to the other again.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I thought that Edward would have said something when Tanya told him that she wanted to use Bella's song for the wedding and when he didn't I really thought that he would have said something about the tree house but nothing. Is he really going to go through this?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Man I really don't think that they can recover from all of this.  I am so sad for them because I thought that maybe they could get back and be Edward and Bella again.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh man this is going to be terrible because really what is holding her there. She is going to go with Jacob.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Holy Jesus!! I can't believe that he did that I don't know if I want him to catch Bella right now because he has hurt her so bad.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

So he didn't get to her. Man I know that they will work things out if it is meant for them to.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That is sad that he didn't get to her. But I have to wonder if she really got on the plane at all.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella came back!! Is she not marrying Jacob?? Maybe he found someone in Italy and Edward didn't stick around to hear it. I hope that is the case because this is breaking my heart.

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow I hope that Rose gets what she wants because that was just wrong what happened to her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am liking this story so far! I really thought that Bella was going to kill that dog the fiirst time and then when it knocked her down again!!! I thought this is it the poor dog isn't going to make it she is going to kill it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well there are quite a few things that we don't know about Edward isn't there.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

And so the dog strikes again!!! I thought that Edward was going to kill him this time. And whoever was on the phone better have had a good reason for calling and intrupting them!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh boy Renee pregnant!! Wow. And I think that Bella should just give in to the relationship with Edward because we know that she wants to!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How sweet is it that he drove hours just to come and see her! I am cracking up about how he met Charlie though. That was quite amusing.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That was quite the thanksgiving for them. And that was a great use of the whole Dick in a Box skit! I cracked up at it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That is funny that she would program that as her song on his phone!! I am glad that they are together and hopefully the three weeks apart won't be that long for them. I wonder what Rose is going to say to her when she finds out what happenend in Forks over Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That is funny that she would program that as her song on his phone!! I am glad that they are together and hopefully the three weeks apart won't be that long for them. I wonder what Rose is going to say to her when she finds out what happenend in Forks over Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That is funny that she would program that as her song on his phone!! I am glad that they are together and hopefully the three weeks apart won't be that long for them. I wonder what Rose is going to say to her when she finds out what happenend in Forks over Thanksgiving.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Bella! The gate now hates her too. I was cracking up though when he told her to take the astion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Bella! The gate now hates her too. I was cracking up though when he told her to take the astion.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww. they are so sweet and Bella got a new car even if she didn't really want one. I am glad that she wants Edward to meet her mother.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

That is funny that he would buy a car just to get away from them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I didn't think that Bella would have gone off on Renee like that but I guess it is something that she needed to do. But it made her realize that she is ready to have everything with Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So now Emmett knows and I wonder what Rose is going to say when she finds out. I am glad that Edward got there first because hard telling what would have happened if he didn't.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aww what a way to meet Alice. I think that I would have been mortifyed and wouldn't left the bedroom for the rest of the visit.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

That isn't good that something is wrong and Edward is around the world really far away.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow that is alot to take in. I am shocked that it was just a freak accident but those things do happen. I just hope that everything is going to be ok.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

It is good thay she is awake!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

It is so sad that they have had the one thing that they wanted more than anything ripped away from them. I really hope that Bella can get through this because it is a terrible thing that happened but Alice was right in her talk with Bella in that they can help a child the same way that Carlisle and Esme helped Edward and Alice.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

It is great to see the old Bella coming back but only Bella could fall watching her husband get off in the shower.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

That was sad that she freaked out with her little brother there but she really has come a long way in that department from not wanting to be around him to watching him. How is it that Jacob helped Bella see that she can't just forget and leave Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

It is good that Bella has gotten better and is now thinking about the possibility of adopting a baby and not so focused on the fact that she can't have one of her own.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That is great that they were finally able to have the family that they always wanted.

A New Normal by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other? 

"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2010 Updated: 03 Jul 2011
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The News

That is terrible that Bella is having to deal with this because that is something that noone should have to deal with but it happens everyday.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort

That is terrible that Alice's own father doesn't know how old she is!! I really hope that Emmett doesn't get into trouble for skipping school becuase something tells me that he shouldn't be asking for things to get into trouble for.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Brown Eyes and the Crazy Man

Well I am thinking that it is just wonderful to live in Edward and Emmett's house (joking).

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Girl's NIght

That was really nice of Edward to be on the look out for his brother.

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 120030
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That is kinna scary that they are all twins and were born 2 min. apart. Freaky right.



Author's Response:

Yep:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow I guess someone is in trouble for the nomimation for homecoming queen.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well That sucks like no other to get into your car and find out that it doesn't start!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That is sad. Bella is sick and I am going to guess that it is cancer because of the pain, sleeping all the time and brusing very easily.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I really understand why they did that. Bella is afraid that she is going to die and leave all of her family and friends alone. Life is too short for her to not say what she means right now.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww.... That was sweet and it was better because Charlie was there to support Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It is terrible that she is having to deal with all of this but hopefully she will beat it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am sure that she is sick of all the sympothy right now. Hopefully the rest of the students won't treat her any differently because of the marriage.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Those girls are terrible. I hope that they don't piss off Alice because something tells me that they will regret it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What is Lauren doing there? I hope that her mother doesn't tell her anything because that could get her into trouble and could start a whole bunch of problems for Bella at school.