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3 Up...3 Down by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 738]
Summary: Past Featured Story

3up

A baseball pitcher, a catcher, and a fact checker/aspiring writer.  If love is so hard for two people, can three possibly make it work?  Edward Cullen has two problems…First, he’s in a secret relationship with his catcher that’s very contentious at times.  Second, his high school girlfriend, his first everything, is back in town.  Will the three strike out or will it be the ultimate homerun?

This story is a poly/slash story.  If that’s not your cup of tea, then I’d urge you to find something else because it begins with a bang, literally.  Edward and Jasper play semi-pro baseball, so there will be some baseball-related action, but it’s not a full-on sports story.  There will be a bit of violence and talk of domestic violence, but I’ve tried to be sensitive and will post a warning in those chapters.  At its heart, it’s a love story.  It’s just not a conventional one.

 

E/J/B and the rest of the cast.  Alice gets someone, too.  Very OOC/Sex/Some violence (nothing sexual)/Rated NC-17 for sex/language/ adult situations.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215194 Read Count: 222316
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
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Date: 15 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65 - Bottom of the Ninth

Loved this chapter!

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Date: 15 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

I started this not expecting to like it, but I really did.  Good job.  

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Date: 07 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 - Uncomfortable Conversations

Interesting conversation!

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Date: 07 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 - Ch...Ch...Changes Part 2

Glad they got their girl

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Date: 07 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 - Ch...Ch...Changes Pt. 3

Oh, what a great twist!

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Date: 30 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 - Life's Lessons

I’m so glad he reconciled with his father before he died!

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Date: 30 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 - Life's Lessons Pt. 2

I’m so glad for Jasper’s Mother’s reaction.  I’m hoping she relocates to Washington so she can be closer to her grandchildren..

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Date: 30 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 - Life's Lessons Pt. 3

Great chapter!

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Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3

That was very mature of them!

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Date: 12 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 - WotK Pt. 2

The scene with Edward and his parents was very touching!

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Date: 12 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not

Very mature thinking!  Highly emotional, but mature.  

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Date: 12 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not Pt. 2

Loved Esme’s. Talk with Jasperr!

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Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not Pt. 3

Great chapter!

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Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Who's Your Daddy?

Nice name.

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Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 - Who's Your Daddy Pt. 2

Hope Edward likes his new job!  

Summary:

Sometimes in life things happen that are beyond our control. Two couples, separated by different experiences, struggle to be happy while alone. Can the help of family and friends heal broken hearts? M for lemons. AH, B/E and J/A.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6428 Read Count: 23314
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Do we ever find out what caused the breakup?

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Date: 01 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I’m disappointed that we didn’t find out the cause of their break up.

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Date: 07 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad they are getting help to put their relationships back on track!

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Date: 13 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love that Emmett and Rose are trying to help them out!

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Date: 13 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So sad!

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Date: 13 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love how everyone wants to help them get back together! 

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Date: 24 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Glad their families are so supportive!

Summary:

storm3

Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806529
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue One

It’s nice to see them all getting along together!

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Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

Wonderful addition!

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Date: 28 May 2018 Title: Chapter 51: Wayward Son

I so love this entire series!

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Date: 11 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 37: OOC

Tough chapter!

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Date: 11 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Very intense scenes.  Great job writing them.

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Date: 11 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Chicken

I love Damion

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Date: 11 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 40: On the Road

It’s nice to see Bella and Kylie get some time together!

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Date: 03 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Eclipse at Midnight

I loved that u and included each other’s characters in ur stories!  

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Date: 08 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Blazing Guns

Skip sure know how to manage a situation!  

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Date: 08 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Comfortably Numb

Don’t think Damion and Amelia is going to make it.

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Date: 09 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Webs

I didn’t remember this. 

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Date: 06 May 2018 Title: Chapter 47: Empire

So glad Sonny and Dame made up!

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Date: 07 May 2018 Title: Chapter 48: Crawl to Montauk

So glad Jordan came!

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Date: 13 May 2018 Title: Chapter 49: By the Book

Great chapter

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Date: 13 May 2018 Title: Chapter 50: Halfway

Hope Skip and Damion resolve their issues 

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Date: 20 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 41: Lost Time

Glad Sonny and Maggie reconnected.

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Date: 20 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 43: New Edition

I love hearing from Damion and Sonny!  Can’t be smut all the time, where’s the drama in that.

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Date: 27 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

Hmmm, I wonder what Amelia is up to.  

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Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

Damion and Sonny’s relationship is so confusing.  

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Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 46: Stay the Same

Great chapter!

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Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Crumbs

Glad they are getting to go awa!

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Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Dinner

Grandpa is a hoot!  

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Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Maybe

Glad Aro got things squared away with Lisa!  I just love this Aro!  He’s my favore Aro of all time!

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Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

I’m glad Dame got rid of Amelia!  

Summary:

 

Fourth Addition to the Storm Series. This is a compilation of future-takes that follow Riders on the Storm. We'll hear from Damion, Kylie, and Sonny. We'll get glimpses into their future, adult lives. And every Storm character will be present, including Edward and Bella. Romance, Humor, Drama, and slight angst will ensue, along with other genres. *Will Update Quickly*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Other Misc Char or Pairings
Genre: Drama, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95666 Read Count: 106136
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2013 Updated: 20 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Damion Chapter 1

I just love these characters and especially Damion!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Damion Chapter 1

I just love these characters and especially Damion!

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64410
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Making a Run for It

So excited to start another of your stories!  Wonderful beginning!

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Few write gore like you!

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

That was such an uplifting chapter after the previous one!

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?

Why do I think that this trip to San Francisco is going to be a mistake?

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions

So sweet!  

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Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise

I think this is going to get ugly really fast!  Poor Edward.  He is in for a rude awakening.

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Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes

So sad for all of them!

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Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Confessions

Maybe Bella can find the tape before it gets too bad!

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Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart

Can’t wait until Carlisle gets what is coming to him!

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Date: 23 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart

What a sad state of affairs!  I’m guessing she moved to Chicago.  

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

Can’t wait until they are reunited and can deal with Carlisle!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Revelations

So close!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream

Well, that wasn’t the reunion I was expecting!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid

Can’t wait until they take down the mighty Carlisle!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other

I was going to stop here, but I think I need to read more!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown

Glad he has a plan, but bet it won’t be easy!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle

Why doesn’t he just have Bella go get the disc?

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

Things are coming to a head quickly!  

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

Hope Charlie can help him!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

I don’t know how u are going to finish this with one more chapter!  

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose

So, maybe this isn’t over?

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

As always, u don’t disappoint!

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Date: 10 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Would love a sequel!

Summary:

Banner

 

Doctor Edward Cullen has never really enjoyed Christmas holidays.  His entire life is wrapped around his job and nothing else.  Walking out of hospital one snowy December night, he is drawn to the large decorated tree with tags with a number and gifts that are required.  What happens when he allows his heart to open back up and give this family a Christmas to remember?  Or will he get a surprise gift that will tear down all the walls around his heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9129 Read Count: 2824
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2017 Updated: 12 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

Wonderful Christmas tale!

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10154
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the concept of this!

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Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hope we get to find out how Edward’s family handle Victoria and James like we saw Bella handle the Jacob situation!  Love how u had Fate and Cupid work together.

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Date: 06 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great little story, but sure wish we could learn what Karma did to James and Victoria!  Maybe a sequel?