Reviews by Kavyanjali
Covet by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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What do you do when you meet the love of your existence a year after you marry the saviour of your soul?  Edward and Jasper thought they were doomed to a life of longing and regret until they meet someone who holds the key to unlock their future.

Vamp Slash

Jasper POV


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14714 Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Kavyanjali Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him.  But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.

Reviewer: Kavyanjali Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him.  But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.

Reviewer: Kavyanjali Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him.  But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.

Reviewer: Kavyanjali Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

Honestly I hate Alice here, she doesn't deserve the love of Jasper or the compassion of Edward for what she did to them for years. She basically emotionally abused and manipulated them... and it was stupid excuse of vision. I mean really if Jasper and Edward had been together from the beginning, without her putting them in so many years of heartache, she had her visions to make sure that Edward's path never crossed with Bella before the time was right for him.  But no being the selfish bitch Alice was here, she had flaunt Jasper as her husband on Edward for years and have Edward do the dirty work of changing Bella for her. Really I hate this Alice, I don't even understand why she did all that.. in fact it's beyond my understanding how Edward and Jasper could forgive her for all that she put them through... It was annoying and unrealistic.

Summary:

Major Jasper Whitlock is one of the most feared and respected vampires of his time. Only the truly foolish would challenge him, and those foolish enough have met with an untimely end.

Jasper sets out on a mission to protect the supernatural and human world after visions from his sister Alice. Under the pretense of exposing a secret alliance between his former Master and leaders of the Romanian coven he sets out to Volterra to inform Aro Volturi of their intentions. Does Jasper have ulterior motives for informing the leader of the vampire world, or does it do it out of respect for authority.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22539 Read Count: 3366
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Kavyanjali Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2023 Title: Chapter 6: Extended Epilogue

Oooooh this has been interesting story, set in completely different time period and I found it interesting how it all intersected with Carlisle's time with Volturi. I am curious as to how Edward was able to read minds despite being human.. did his mother know of it..? Any of his parents had at least minimal of the gift and passed on to him which was more powerful..? The multiple gifts was also interesting, Jasper said Edward's gifts weren't limited to shields and energy control.. so does that mean Edward too had shield abilities..? I was very interested in knowing more about the gifts, would have loved more of it too. I wonder who is Alice's mate and what more allies. Also the prophecy of children of Ares and Apollo were intriguing.. what was all that about..? And I really thought Caius would behave better with Jasper after he saved his mate from the werewolves but Caius is ungrateful jerk as always. And Jane is pain as always, I wonder what Alec thinks of his sister.. Alec and Dimitri being mates was nice and I am sure at some point in future both would leave Volturi and join the Cullen's though not for many centuries.

 

I wise there was squeal of the story.. I hope someday in future there is.



Author's Response:

I do have the sequel mostly written but I haven't had the time to complete it. This was meant to be a 3 to 5 part series of 5 chapter each.  I would need to find my notes in order to finish the whole series.  The whole children of Ares and Apollo is explained in the sequel.