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You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104539
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Nienna Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hi Kat!

I came across "You Came Too Early" and couldn't stop reading!

It's just written so realistically and deeply emotional without being over the top!

Usually I'm not a fan of matching a story or even a chapter to a certain song, but there were parts I couldn't stop thinking about a song from a German singer: Tommy Reeve's "I'm Sorry". At least in my opinion the lyrics fit to Bella's and Edward's situation so perfectly that I would like to recommend it to you. Maybe you can google it and give it a try.

Anyway, I'm so excited to read on!

P.S.: I'm sorry for any grammatical errors, but I'm German and don't speak English regularly.



Author's Response:

Hey, thank you for the amazing song rec!! I've been listening to it non stop all day long, haha. It's making my fiancé a little bit crazy, to be honest.

I'm glad you like the story! I wish I could write it faster!! Comment like yours helps!!

 

P.S. Don't worry for the english error, I'm no one to judge, I'm a native french speaker, so... ;)