Loving it, its gonna take a while to get used to reading it on here and in a different way but its great to see so many of the stories i loved and had in favourites over here too(i like a easy life ;p).  Im guessing they are doing something similar to Renee as they are Bella.

One word, HOT, hmmmmmmm a hot aggressive dominant Edward, loved the lemon

Oh hell dont change him, much better as a possessive, demanding agressive Edward, hmmmmmm

I didnt realise their was a bit gap inbetween the updating, i thought once a week was the norm for most writers, single parent(part time or full) is hard, i myself am a single parent/carer, thankfully now mine are all double figures but my godson is only 4 and at that age they like a lot of attention, i know cause Auntie Ali has to tell Jacob she will play with him as soon as she has her coat off :)  I actually like your caveward, its different.  The only Edwards i wont read is the self sacrificing type ones(much like he was in the book), i like you but i'll ignore you for your own benefit ones.

Back to the story, hmmm wonders if its guilt that stops Seth talking or maybe Emmett or someone else has told him to stay away.  Plus below the belt Emmett tit telling on yr sister and thinking of that punishment, ha it will serve you right if she goes and gets a job at Newtons to pee you off :D

Your family must always come first over a story, so i do hope your dad gets well soon.  Yeh i know the feeling being in the 30's and still a daddy's girl.  I lost my dad when i was 32(result of a my dad being 48 when i was born) and the pain was unbearable, i see cry when i look at his photo, i recently lost my mum so now both my parents are together as they always should be. 

Back to your story, i really want punch Renee myself, Charlies reaction makes me laugh, as does Edward wearing a jock.  Loved it though.

I loved this, the operation get bob back was funny from start to finish :D

We had a similar situation to the one like in yr story in UK's Strictly Ballroom, the dancer, Bryan, fell for his star Ali.  The press was on to them, but, they waited until after the show to admit, they were dating :)