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Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

you make my week!! :)



Author's Response:

Your so sweet! Glad I made your week, and reviews make mine, so thank you!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

great chapter!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter! 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

brilliant!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

I loved this chapter. I love the wonderful tender way that he loves her and cares for her.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

it is awesome!! loved this chapter



Author's Response:

So glad you like it! I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

I couldn't be hard on him, he ran from something too!!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

what a great chapter - my heart breaks for Edward, he is so alone - well he was until Bella :)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

I loved this chapter - your characters are so unique and wonderful - even if they are broken.  I hope that Edward will learn to trust again and that he won't leave her, when he thinks that she doesn't need him anymore.

Great chapter

Michele



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the sweet review, I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

HELP!!! CAN'T SEE THE CHAPTER!!



Author's Response:

Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/

If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

it is so sad that there is no one who cares about Edward's birthday - I hope that he is able to let the Cullens in.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

awesome chapter!! I'm so glad that Edward is slowly easing into the family.  He is finding out that it's not so bad to be a part of something bigger than yourself -  when trouble strikes...



Author's Response:

So glad you like the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Katie 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

I loved it - these characters are so enduring.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

this was a great chapter - their first date...hmmm sounds good!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

this is a great chapter - Edward is so proud of his work and Bella is getting better!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

okay - I will wait before I freak out, but YOU CAN'T LET HIM LEAVE HER!!!!! maybe Carlisle can take them or something but this is going to be impossible for them.  sorry, I just had to get that out there.

This was a great chapter, happy holidays.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

It was an awesome chapter! It's good to have you back!

Creep by All you need is Moz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Bella has no one, no family, no friends, she feels worthless and when the one person who had ever shown her kindness humiliates her it's the final straw. But what has Edward Cullen, another loner, got to offer her and will she be willing to accept?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3515 Read Count: 784
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 14 May 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 14 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

a fun read!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Chrissie x

Summary:

Bella prepares for the moment she has been waiting years for. An autograph signing of her favorite actor is just the setting to make her fantasies come true. *Lemontastic*

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2551 Read Count: 1181
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 15 May 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

what a great stroy!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.

Summary:

Edward and Jasper, business partners and part time lovers, are in Arizona for a conference. When Jasper gets the bright idea to take Edward to a well known strip club, they meet their match in a dark haired beauty named Bella. This is 99.5% smut and 0.5% plot. You have been warned.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5129 Read Count: 1655
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2010 Updated: 16 May 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Arizona

OMG! Hot



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

dwa

Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Outtake 3

it was good, real good!

Summary:

Little extras and outtakes that revolve around my Twilight fan fiction Legacy, but don't necessarily need to be in the story itself. You do need to read Legacy to understand what's going on.


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11464 Read Count: 500
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2010 Updated: 26 Aug 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 01: The Cullen's Ski Cabin Sex Talk

I so miss this story!!! Loved this ot

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 07: He Loves Her

wonderful! Go Charlie!

The Great Con by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Carlisle Cullen finds himself tempted by the devel herself, his naughty step-daugher, Bella. NC-17 for language and lemons. One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3833 Read Count: 4653
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

evil, sneaky - I enjoyed it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsou

 

Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?

 

This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too.  Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.

-

Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.

This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.

 

 By- SexyLexiCullen

fs

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420909
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 22 Jul 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Complications

what a great chapter!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Quagmire and the hag

I loved this chapter - I am so in love with this story!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Out of Character.

wow - this was a really great chapter - E notwithstanding!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Somethings never change.

Perfect - BUT I WANT MORE AND MORE AND MORE!!! PLEASE POST THE OUT TAKES.

I really loved this story. It was like reading a favorite book. All the characters are people that I  wish were real. I want to be part of their daily lives, I know it sounds strange, but you have brought these characters into my lounge and I just love them. Your story line was really good and I am going over to FF to see what I've missed out on.

Thanks for writing this really amazing story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that review. It seriously made my day, if not my week. You are so sweet. I'll let you in on a little secret, well it's not really a secret but..... Bon Secours Community Hospital, is the hospital where I work, as a surgical technologist. lmao. It's my dream to find Edward (sad) and all the family members are based on my own family, right down to the personalities. I write what I know, so this story was just like a little fantasy of mine, like what I wish for in the future..blablabla so pitiful right? Anyway, thank you so much for this review. I hope you found Bon Secours, the sequel, and my other story on ff.net. The Sequel was just posted here, the six chapters I have so far.

Happy Reading and thank you!

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!

Love, love, LOVED IT!!!!

Michele

Summary: Past Featured Story

gbb

Bella has always been the odd one out, never having many friends.
College life could turn that all around. But her friendship with Edward Cullen
might not be exactly what it seems. Does the shy, sweet Edward have a secret?
AH, OOC, DARK

 

My very dear friend (and beta) made this video for me! I LOVE IT! THANK YOU BB!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=InDa53qyRhY

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96619 Read Count: 12762
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2010 Updated: 13 Jul 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A New Leaf

great first chapter



Author's Response:

Wow thank you!  I'm glad you like it!

Thanks for reviewing!

Here's a teaser for ch 2:

 

I took a moment to gawk at Edward. Yes, I was thoroughly gawking. I wasn't about to deny that. The reason for this was that Edward was wearing a pair of gunmetal Burberry glasses and looked sexy as all get out. He was wearing another button-down, much like he had before, but this time in navy blue, which oddly enough made his green eyes even more alluring. And he topped off his outfit with black denim acid wash button-fly jeans. Had I mentioned how gorgeous this man was?

Edward looked over, noticing me staring – gaping actually – and half grinned at me. He took a deep breath and spoke softly, "Good morning, Bella. How are you today?" He was fidgeting again and wouldn't make eye contact.

 

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144836
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it! I just don't know how you do it!! one winner after the next!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great chapter - this is gonna be a good one, I can tell!!

Second Chance by Louise Clark Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Months after the Volturi have left, there's no denying Emmett and Rosalie's marriage is on the rocks. They have grown distant because of the time she spends with Nessie. Or has someone else drawn her away?

The Cullens, sans Nessie and Rosalie, help the Quileutes with a fundraiser held on their lands. Emmett meets someone. After all, he's a natural flirt.

A second chance at love presents itself, but will he take it? Will she take hers?

Is it possible Emmett and Rosalie never were each other's true mate? 

 

photo from Twilght Eclipse and quote

 

The entire story is written in Emmett's POV. It is AU/Vamp, post-Breaking Dawn, so the story begins in late summer 2007.


Rated NC-17 for cursing and lemons. (There is not a lemon in every chapter.)

Warning: This may be difficult to read if you're a Rosalie/Emmett canon purist!

Disclaimer: I am not affiliated with or related to Stephenie Meyer, she alone owns the Twilight saga. I am just a huge fan and this story is my personal dream influenced by her characters. I am also not affiliated with or related to anyone employed by Little, Brown, and Company OR Summit Entertainment.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Since I DO own this story, please do not copy, translate, plagiarize, duplicate, or misuse my work in any way.

Thank you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Emmett/Rose
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95104 Read Count: 6691
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 23 May 2013
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Glad you thought so, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for the review!

Kellan thirsty

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

it's great that Paul and Emmett are friends. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, it appears that way... ;)

Kellan pushup on rocks

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Second Chance

another good chapter - Emmett as a zombie is perfect



Author's Response:

Hee hee, yeah.  ;)  Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying the story.

Kellan as Batman

And I think Kellan looks hot as Batman, too.  :D

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow - good chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

GREAT CHAPTER!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

How will I stand the wait??

Road trip to love by dna2679 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary:

EMMETT AND BELLA ARE LIKE BROTHER AND SISTER, BEST FRIENDS. EMMETT IS WITH ROSALIE AND BELLA WITH EDWARD BUT THEIR RELATIONSHIPS AREN'T WHAT THEY SEEM. TRYING TO CHEER UP EMMETT SHE DECIDES TO TAKE HIM ON A ROAD TRIP. WHILE THEY ARE LOOKING FOR HIS HAPPINESS, WILL THEY FIND MORE THAN THEY BARGINED FOR?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135493 Read Count: 21427
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

good chapter



Author's Response:

WOW.. THANK YOU.. YOU'RE MY FIRST REVIEW SO THERE FOR MY FAVORITE LOL..

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

what's wrong? is he sick? great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O


She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I loved their date! Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

brilliant!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!

I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.

=)

Shel

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

 

Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.

She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.

Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.

"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.

Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I've just started reading your story, so I will give it a chance, I promise



Author's Response:

No way you're reading my story OMG I'm honored!!!! seriously I love yourss hehehehehe.... I ment it when I said the first several ch suck hehehehe, I would so love you to read it though and I promise it does get better.... sQuEaL~!!!!! you have made my day

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

still here :)



Author's Response:

hehehehehe Thanks god keep going I will love yoy forever!!!!

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I felt the panic rise :)



Author's Response:

sQuEaL!!!! but these ch still suck hard, I would delete them until I can go back and re write them but the information is important later on....

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

who????? confused.... reading on



Author's Response:

hehehehe, Thank you for reading on, I hope you get your answers so your not confused hehehehe I will answer any question you may have hehehehe Thanks  a bunch for reviewing and reading

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

brilliant chapter - now i'm in!



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! OMG OMG OMG and seriously these chaps are still no where near very good hehehehehe my jaw is starting to hury from the smile you have put on my face MWAH!!!!!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

:)



Author's Response:

lol, yeh this chap was very lame, don't give up yet hehehehehe I do still promise it gets a shit load better... Thanks for taking the time to push that little button...

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family?  Adult language/Violence/Lemons

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42788
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Darkness

I loved this chapter



Author's Response:

thanks so much!  i'm glad you liked it!  ;)

Summary:

Isabella Swan couldn't care less about Edward Cullen's perverted perception of her relationship with his teenage son, Seth. And yet she keeps finding herself on the defensive with the need to change his mind at every given opportunity.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116998 Read Count: 25021
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 26 Aug 2010
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I want to see where this goes - I really liked the first chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow - just wow

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

roller coaster ride!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

go Bella!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254911
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

it was a great first chapter!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really liked it - great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this was a great chapter - thank your husband for us too

:)

Michele



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, here’s your treat

     a little teaser

 

“Baby, I’m going to have to hear all your shit. I need to know. Because I need to be able to know what’s ok and what’s not. I need to know how far to push you, without causing damage either physically or emotionally and I don’t ever want to hurt you. You are going to have to trust me with everything you have in you. It’s a process, we start out slow, when I can trust you, and you can trust me, without any doubt” He smiled “Baby, that’s when we made it to the top. But it’s a long way up there. There’s going to be lots of tears and letting go.” He took a deep breath, glanced around the street then looked back into my eyes “My question for you is, do you want to climb up that ladder with me?”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

thank you for a great chapter - can't wait for the update :)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

this was a great chapter - James the pig!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, and leaving a review. ..lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

so Bella and I now need a very COLD shower!! Great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Me too. Thanks for reading and leaving a review ...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

hmmm - great chapter - I loved the switch to EPV it's interesting to see how he thinks - the out take?  I would like to see some play between Aro and Jane - i know that this is a B&E story, but their relationship is interesting.

 



Author's Response:

You are the 3rd person that wants to see Aro/Jane play..hmmm the problem with that is Aro's personality is based on my uncle. I don't know if I can write a scene knowing that.It would be like writing about your paerents ... ugh!!! I'll have to think about it, becasue they are into heavy BDSM, which also is not my thing...but maybe. Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

really great chapter - can't wait for the outtakes and of course the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”

 

He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”

 

“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.

 

“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”

 

 I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great chapter - till next one!!



Author's Response:

thanks, glad you like it...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love perfect Edward. what do the numbers mean? loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

I'll tell you what it means on Monday...

Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great chapter - really really hot - Ooooh Edward.....

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

HOT HOT HOT - hmmmm - delicious :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment…here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

            “Hello.”

 

             “Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.

 

            “Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.  

 

            “Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”

 

            “Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.

 

            “Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”

 

            “Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

that was a great first time in the play room!! You did a great job.  I can't believe what that bastard put this woman through! He is a pig and I hope that Emmett Jake and Edward get hold of him and then beat the living crap out of him so that he never is able to hurt anyone ever again - then they can put him in a box and throw him into the flipping ocean!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the chapter, and yes James is a bastard and as Bella told Edward it always gets worse...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love this story and as someone who is writing my own story, I know that people can be a little, um, critical sometimes - my best advise is - DON'T TAKE IT PERSONALLY - (if you are like me, you want to cry and say "what do you mean - you hate my story???).

This was a great chapter and you are doing an awesome job with this story!! I can't wait for your update.

Michele



Author's Response:

Thanks, i don't want to cry. I want to scream at them "I warned you not to read it!"

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

Here's a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

it was awesome.  Really touching and sweet.  Just mushy enough and YES please, more lemons :)



Author's Response:

nothing beats a good lemon...lol

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG!!! I think I am going to need 2 cold showers!!  Really, really good chapter - What did he make her write?????



Author's Response:

Patience and Control...the words for the weekend..you'll fine out later...

Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..  lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wow - what a fantastic chapter! I love your characters - they are different, memorable.

plu (Michele)



Author's Response:

Wow - what a great compliment ...Thank you..lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

this was a great chapter - question - How is edward going to work out the weekend thing?

This is such a great story, loving it!

 



Author's Response:

If you mean the up coming weekend, they will talk about that so you will see...BTW I would have chosen 'You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' for the men to sing...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think that this was a great chapter - not any easy one to write, because you had various locations and transitions in the story - but you did it very well indeed.

I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings - eager beaver that I am - please update soon, okay??



Author's Response:

Thanks, it worked out ...sometimes I have more problems with the easy transitions, like from the bed to the breakfast table...lol  Thanks for reading ...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

okay, so I kind of went back about 5 chapters and I'm not sure if I missed the Alex reference, but is he an investigator??

This was a great chapter and yes, I am a greedy bitch, but you have a great weekend and update soon (did I tell you that Thursdays are fast becoming my favorite days?) 

thanks again for writing!  Hope we get to the weekend  soon!!



Author's Response:

No he is not an investigator...I will tell you this, My Edward unlike SM's never lies and he always keeps his promises...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This was a really great chapter - I have a really, really bad feeling about James - he seems to be getting bolder with invading Bella's home.

Your story is fantastic.  Your attention to detail is amazing as well.  Edward is really serious about his training of Bella - that must be very reasuring to her. He is being consistant.  But I was wondering why he is letting the sleeping thing go. Or will he reign her in before it gets too bad?

I can't wait for the next chapter as always.

Michele (peoplelikeus)



Author's Response:

WOW!!! Thanks for the compliment.. and in answer to your question Edward is waiting until their next time in the playroom...then he will address the problems with her eating and sleeping habits....

Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8


I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?”

He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.”

“I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.”

Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.”

Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.”

I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.”

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?”

I nodded.

“And it’s working.”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

awesome, powerful, painful, sad, horrific, really, really well written.  And it was my pleasure to rec your story - it deserves to be widely read.

Michele



Author's Response:

Thanks again...it really meant alot ...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

hmmm, now is Edward just going to scold her for being irrisponsable or does he have something else in mind....

 

This was a great chapter and it does give an insight into how strong bella really is!



Author's Response:

hmmm,,,is he going to punish her? I have a teaser for you...lml

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow - he wasn't playing around!  I think he did the right thing, because he is being consistent and more than anything else, Bella needs to know that she can rely on him to be consistent.

This was a great chapter - very well written!  I can't wait for more - which is how it should be!

Michele



Author's Response:

Thanks, he had put a stop to the behavior, and...well you'll see next chapter, it wasn't easy for him...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I still think that he did the right thing - probably even more so now than ever. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

he had to do something or it would have got worse...thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

this was a fun chapter - in spite of the Caius situation.  I laughed till I cried with the banana!!!



Author's Response:

thanks...the girls needed a little female bonding and what better way to do it? ,,,,lol

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This was a great chapter - I thought that her conversation with Jane was really good advice. I think that the best advise that Jane gave her was to keep reminders and to keep checking in with herself regards to her diet. Also, the advise to confess first and not wait.

Well written and very well thought out!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment ...lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks ..lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I loved this chapter - what the hell is on her nipples????



Author's Response:

uh...you will have to wait to find out and I think I will put a picture up of it on the extra's since alot of people seem to want to know 'what the hell he put on her nipples' ...lol..Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you...lml

 

 

 

The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

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Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great chapter



Author's Response: Thank you ....lml

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

great chapter - interesting torture/pleasure device! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you...lml

When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.

 

“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.

 

“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her

 

“You do. Are you hungry?”

 

“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”

 

“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”

 

“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. 

 

“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear

 

“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”

 

“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

HEATHER IS JAMES NEW ..... - they are working together - hawks is her brother....  he suspects that James is hurting Heather and making her try and penetrate Bella's world....  or  it's that crazy BDSM gang ..... you've got me started now!!

 

HAPPY NEW YEAR AND GET BETTER SOON

I wish you everything of the best in the New Year - happy writing.

Michele (PLU)

 



Author's Response:

lol ... nothing like being on a roll...lol....Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I liked this chapter - I like the way Edward is able to keep her on the edge - Bella likes it too (obviously)> I'm not offended at certain so called insulting terms, even terms of affection can be insulting sometimes - it's all in the tone and the timing.

 



Author's Response:

It is the tone and the surrounding meaning of the word...personally..i think it's hot as hell...lol

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

really great chapter - off for a cold shower...



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does that help?...Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment ...I have a teaser for you....lml

After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

too naughty to write ...



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Is that possible? ....LOL...usual ...Here is a teaser for you...lml

We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

great chapter - love the Foo fighters!



Author's Response:

Me too... I like the song ,,,,

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Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

this was a great chapter!! intense.



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It was pivital...Thanks for reading here is your Thursday teaser...lml

 

 

 

Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I loved this chapter but what the hell is Leah's problem??? She had been a royal bitch almost from the time that bella and edward began getting serious. Is she jealous of bella's happiness?  What is it?

merry christmas and a happy new year to you and your family

Michele (plu)



Author's Response:

All I'm going to say is that Leah and Bella will be spending a whole weekend togther in a small two bedroom house ... I think the closeness will get to them ...lol ....Thanks for  reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..lml

Leaving out a long sigh I focused really hard on opening the twist tie that held the bread wrapper closed. Edward moved with me and as he passed by to get the wine out of the cooler his hand ran down the length of my arm. The extra sensation from his touch made my muscles clench tighter and I think I let out a whimper because Rose glanced at me with a smirked. 

 

Bastard!

 

I needed something else to occupy my mind and it didn’t matter what it was “Jasper” I looked up from the two loaves of bread “could you turn on some music?”

 

“Sure…anything in particular?” he asked moving to a panel in the wall. Before I could answer Emmett made an observation.

 

“You alright little Bella, you seem a kind of jumpy tonight” Edward’s voice came from behind me.

 

“Isabella’s been jumpy all weekend”

 

“I have not!” the words left my mouth without any thought of the repercussions they might cause. Emmett chuckled and a small giggle came from Rose who was standing next to me, but my eyes went to Edward. His face became stone cold hardness while his eyes widened as they turned dark. 

 

Oh Shit

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Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

great chapter and Merry Christmas to you and your family as well



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thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

great chapter



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Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml

Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183801
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

I loved this chapter!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

oh my word!!! You'd better go into hiding, Missy!!!  please update soon....

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

wow - I'm still here Darling and I have faith in you - This was a powerful and painful chapter.  You did a great job with this one.

 

 

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

loved it!!

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

loved it