Reviews by Keebler1025
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the beautiful, bi-racial, Director of her church's Afterschool Program, has been faithful to her commitment to remain a virgin until she is married. Tallahassee Police Officer, Edward Cullen's charm and sex appeal severely challenges her resolve. AU/AH Rated NC-17 Adult Content

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242523 Read Count: 16528
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: To Err Is Human To Forgive Divine

Another wonderful chapter, I can't wait to read more. Since more chapter are available on FF I will be leaving all my reviews there. 

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Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Things Happen For A Reason

Very steamy...loved the chapter

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Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Action In The Affirmative

Another great chapter

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: You and Me

I loved this chapter, can't wait to read more!

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Without You, Baby

WTG Bella! 

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Conquering The Demons

Edward to the rescue!!

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: In The Face of The Unexpected

I  like this Bella. She's so strong and independent. You go girl.

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: A Time For Everything

Loved this chapter

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Imagined Secrets and Things Left Unsaid

I loved the way Edward/James both intend to fight for Bella. It would be nice to keep James the way he is. If James turns out to be a douchebag (as in most stories) there is no choice but for Bella to pick Edward. However if she has two wonderful guys to choose from, whomever she picks (Edward of course!!) then the choice feels more like the RIGHT choice vs the obvious choice. 

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Ain't Understanding Mellow

WTG Edward!!

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: A Commitment Is A Promise

Great chemisty with your E/B. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I try to make their interactions as true to life as possible.

I just posted another chapter. New chapters will post more regularly now because I have finished writing ;)

Thanks for reading and reveiwing.

Bev

xoxo

Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Crazy On An Ordinary Day

I love your characters. I like the diversity this story offers.

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: In Keeping With Repentance

Copward to the rescue. I like this version of James. Everyone writes him as a bad character, I like this James!

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: My Cup Overflows

Hello sexual tention! I really liked this chapter. Keep em coming!

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The Music Never Ends

Can't wait to ready more!

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Hmmmm, sounds interesting

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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Love Yet Eludes Me

I've had this story listed in my favorites for a long time. I'm glad I started reading it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 184002
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.

Very interesting, I wasn't sure how I would like this story but I must say that I very much enjoyed it.

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389628
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Keebler1025 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

WOW, you certainly have my attention. I'm really loving that he's calling her pussycat!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review... I really appreciate it..


Krazi

xoxo