Reviews by debs2crazy
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love at first sight and possesive already. I like it.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seems interesting. Good chapter.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward sure cant wait to meet her. He does need to remember that she is human.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I guess he is frowning because he cant read her mind.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I wonder what the other problem is with Bella? Does it have to do with the wolves?

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Surely they are not leaving her there, Charlie would not like that.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I like this"bolder" Edward.

Author's Response:

Just wait...

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I guess Edward was getting a little upset in the woods.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think Edward may drive himself crazy waiting for Bella.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Charlie wasnt too happy about it  being Edward at the door.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The family is ust a little bit smothering huh?? I can see why Bella was getting freaked.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I thought they had a treaty with the wolves? Why would they be coming to the carnival?



Author's Response:

The wolves are coming to enjoy the carnival same as anyone else. They don't know the Cullens are there yet..

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Its seems that Jacob smelled Bella on Edward when the wind blew and moved his shirt.

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So Charlie knows all everything? What was Alice talking about when she mentions Bellas family tree? I really cant wait until the next chapter.

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

A very interesting turn of events. I guess since she smells like him that means she is meant for him.

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Poor Bella just getting thrown right in the fire with no warning so to speak. I guess we just have to wait and see what happens.

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I didnt see that happening I thought she was going to leave with him and then trick the wolves so she could leave.  I really like your Jasper, he has a sense of humor. lol



Author's Response:

I have to keep the light & fluffy angle since this story is for my 17 yr old daughter. I can't go dark like my other stories. So everyone has a sense of humor (when its appropriate and not stupid)

I wanted to try out something new with the mating call. I'm glad it's being well recieved. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

WOW, Bella can now read Edwards mind. I didnt see that coming.



Author's Response:

Looks like there might be a side effect after all from ingesting his venom. ;)

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I cant believe she did that. She could have just chosen Edward. She is crazy.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Her mother is more concerned with herself instead of her daughter.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seems interesting.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very possesive, guess thats going to be a problem.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOL, that funny, Edward is Emmetts friend.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, I sure hope Bella can handle Edward, he sure is possesive.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good tohear Edwards thoughts.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He is going to get them busted trying to get her to "make" things happen.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Of course Em is going to take Rose on and help her.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad to see Edward can take a little bossing around himself.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad to see Edward can take a little bossing around himself.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I would never have forgiven him that quickly for that stunt.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Now he wants to worry.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I expected Em to be more angry.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter. Take as long as you need to update, we all have a RL that needs to come first. I also agree with you, if you dont like Edward this way then read a different story.  Edward doesnt always have to be so straight laced, I like my Edward many different ways. LOL

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What happen with the crash and the going to different parties was all normal behavior. When you are young you do stupid things.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Good chapter.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Damon sounds like he could add some fun to the mix, yummy.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love the drama, good chapter.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeah, I think Tanya isup to no good.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Whoa, he wants them all sitting down??? Something is up.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapter.

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Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope Charlie doesnt shoot him.  Where are Edwards parents, surely he wants to tell them.

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Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That she is alot of drama.

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Shotgun wedding here they come. lol  What about Edwards parents? Good chapter.

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Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

He cant be telling the truth, but why would he lie?? I guess its about to hit the fan.

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Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Wow, Edward was pissed. Good chapter.

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am interested to see what trap they will set. Good chapter.

Saving Bella by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89650
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Nov 2010
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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yeah Jasper really does want to give him a whoppin. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Well imagine my surprise when I opened my email and had 41 new reviews! LOL Thank you so so much I loved them! I was just shocked and happy that someone read straight through which I know takes patience and then to review each on I'm honestly honored.

Thank you so much and since you were kind enough to review, I'll be kind enough to post the next chapter. :)

 

xoxoxoxoxo

M

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Jasper's nickname for Edward. 

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am curious what he is going to do with the morons. I thought they way he left them was funny. Why doesnt Alice come back and help also? She is not getting visions because she texted Jasper.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good chapter.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I thought it was Rose and Em, never thought it would be Sam and Jake.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow now Em sees just how bad she is.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I cant believe that Rose ran into her singer. Good chapter.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Loved that he has to shop for sporting goods.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved that they made himso scared.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

You know Charlie was happy that Jasper made Mike wet himself.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Jasper jealous is cute.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I knew she thought it was funny Mike pissed himself.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

He should be mad at Edward what he did was crap.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved then part at the end where he said then we'll shower.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I cant believe Em would take a swipe at her.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Maybe she should be there.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Did Alice break up with Jasper because she thought Bella was his true mate?

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I like that he got her a Iphone.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That would drive me crazy. The no talking thing.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I cant wait to hear what happens with Em there.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Good chapter. I am glad to see Rose want to honestly be her friend.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I guess she feels guilty for having feeling for Jasper that why Alices name upset her.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good chapter. The must beno threat if the puppy likes them.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

She needs to just tell people things.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am so ready for Bella to get her big girl pants on.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I really want to know what wenton in therapy.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am glad she is getting better and she kissed Jazz.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Progress! Glad to see that.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

What a perfect poem to use.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Wow that was a fast pace she set.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Guess the blood is not good.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Mood swings.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I guess that when they come back with Alice they will have it out and possibly make amends.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Should have known he was not going to get a warm reception from them.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Well he is her dad, that how dads are.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Why is Peter standing outside the door??

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

All I can say is WTF??? Victoria is on their side????

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I cant believe they did that with the house full of vampires.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

What a stupid thing for her to do.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I loved Em running from the house.

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I like that his power got stronger. She made him whole and not he can have more power. Good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so surprised you read that so quickly but thank you for the review!

xoxoxoxo
M & J

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I did think she was hard on Esme, but I can see it as lashing out.  Edward on the other hand  is really going to get it.



Author's Response:

Yeah he kinda gotta get out the hamster ball first *giggles* I'm glad you liked it darlin'

Thanks!

xoxoxoxoo
M & J

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I can only imagine the pain that Jasper will put Carlisle threw. At least Bella will no longer be human.

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I think Jasper is a little harsh since she doesnt know everything she needs to know. Good chapter.

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I think that fit with the story nicely.

My Happy Ending? by Bellavista Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Disclaimer: All previously recognized characters, place, and plot markers are property of their respective owners, which in the case of this story is, The Twilight Saga and Stephanie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.

Set during Eclipse when Edward and Bella are back together adn trying to work out their relationship. Jacob is not happy that Bella is back with Edward after everything that happened when he left her before.

Bella and Edward continue to grow in their relationship regardless of the trouble that a very angry and very jealous Jacob tries to cause. That is until Jacob finally snaps and does something that will change his, and the rest of the characters lives, forever.

The story contains lots of Cullen fun, romance, drama, violence, angst and a few lemons thrown in for good measure.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224791 Read Count: 38863
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 BPOV

Good chapter.

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Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - BPOV

At least she got to see Charlie one more time.

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

Good ending.



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

~Mel x x x

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Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

Good ending.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373209
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

I am so glad they are leaving as soon as possible.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

This story sounds very interesting, I too have always felt that the women then were treated like items to be traded.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

I guess Alicefigured out that her brother is "Tony" and Bella is his first love.