Reviews by debs2crazy
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Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373445
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

I cant imagine having to have witnesses, yuck.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

Good chapter, the King sure was mad. LOL

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

Poor Bella, she seems so sad.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

Good chapter.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

Good Chapter

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Looks like trouble is ahead for the happy couple.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

Good Chapter. I liked the that they are all 3 going.

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Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

What a change Bella must be excited to be inlcuded when Edward returns.

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Tanya needs to be sent away, her behavior should have sent her away earlier.

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Well thank goodness for Alice and Rose, Bella needs some help it seems.

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Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

I like Carlise as the King. Good chapter.

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Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

I hope she is pregnant.

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Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I knew she was pregnant.

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Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

I am so glad Tanya and Kate are gone.

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Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War

Fight gossip with gossip, thats the only way it works with those types.

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Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Wow, good chapter, I love a devious plan in the works.

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Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Awww, too sweet that he brought her mother and Jacob to visit.

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Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

Who could be behind this, I just dont know.

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Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

They all got what they deserved.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

Great chapter, so excited that Alices baby is on they way. Dont really have a name choice for you, that way to hard. lol

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice

Alice needed a girl, too perfect for her. Good chapter.

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Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

It was perfect that they had a boy and a girl, I also like the names. Good chapter.

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Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

Aww, that was a sweet chapter.  I liked how they reconnected with each other.

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Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

Perfect ending, even though it brought tears to me eyes. Wonderful story!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Sometimes even cold hearted people have soft spots.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Mothers, Fathers and Everything in Between

Not alot of  concern in that family.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Becoming Whole Again

Love at first sight for a hard *ss this should be interesting.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Introducing The Demon

I can see why Edwards dad wants Bella gone, cant have loose ends in that line of work.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Have You Seen My Innocence?

Jacob is going to wishing for death.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

This is pretty extreme,but he did deserve it, isnt Karma something?

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Pixies, Porsches and Promises

He has it bad.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Fathers and Sons

Well that was just a big mess, and Daddy C is pissed.

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Date: 10 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My List

Love at first sight.

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: What Is Normal Anyway?

I just have to know the mess they are all in with James.

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Somewhere in the Middle

I can see James having a problem with Bella.

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

What a mess.

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Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

Yeah he better just get his frustration out.

Diamond Man by SatansDarkAngel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 302]
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Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64202
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 29 Aug 2011
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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like this Bella.

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Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Looks like trouble is getting ready to start.

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Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter.  Loved how charlie wasnt afraid to shoot if he had to.

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Why did Em do that? He messed up big time. Rose doesnt need that. Trouble she finds Bella.

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Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella needs to pick herself up, I know her Dad died but she has some serious trouble going on around her.

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Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Rose, heads are going to roll.

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Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope Em gives them what they have coming.

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella sure is teasing Edward.

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Her mother?? I didnt see that coming. Michel is a little bit of a scrapper, that good.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I cant believe Edward doesnt want to take care of Johnny bcause of what he did to the girls and what he wants from Bella.

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved it when she told him he taste like candy then she sings that song.

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The war has started, I have a feeling it will be bloody.

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Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So I guess Bella has more money that she thinks because she doesnt know about the will.

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I guess its hitting the fan now. Poor Bella and Edward.

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am glad they found out it was a set-op. Renee really is a piece of work.

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I cant believe Rose is pregnant by one of those no good for nothings. i dont think Em is going to take it well.

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Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

About time Rose did something to get her man back. How sweet Edward is, I am glad he ask her to marry him.

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good chapter. I am glad Rose went back to her self. Em deserved what he got.

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seems interesting.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved that he told her about the whole fake taking women home thing.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can tell they are not going to be able to stay away from each other very long.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I loved the Mrs Roper comment, that was funny. I cant believe her mother is pregnant.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Just loved that Charlie was the one to find them on the side of the road.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

You know Charlie would "see" that they were good together.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I liked how she changed his ringtone.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I have a feeling Tanya is going to let the cat out of the bag.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You everyone is going to find out, it is just a matter of when.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Alice had to get her car, lol.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved the last line, it was just too funny. I cant wait for the Black and White Ball, it is going to be good.

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Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward the hero but I am sure Royce is not going to let this go.

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Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I really wonder how crazy James is and what he true reasonforstalking Bella is. Good chapter.

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Aww he is so sweet. Glad James isnt related to her, that would have been creepy.

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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I just loved this whole chapter. Edward really did seem happy to be back at home.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

They are both going to go crazy without each other.

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What happened???! Evil cliffy, lol.  I guess its going to hit the fan.

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

At least she is alive and no one is blaming Em. It was just a terrible accident. Poor Bella.

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Bella is really messed up. Is she still going to be able to have kids? Poor Edward.

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I sure hope things get better, Bella is really depressed. She needs tolook at the good side of things.

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I am glad to see Bella doing better. About time Edward went off on her and made her get help.

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I agree with Jake she needs to quit the pity party.

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So glad that Bella and edward are better now. I think its a good choice to adopt.

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Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

How sweet Edward is with the baby. I would have loved to see the familys reaction to her.

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I just loved that they got to have another child that they concieved.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
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Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

I bet Edward was thrown when he found out where she was. Good chapter.

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: The Perfect Girl

I love how it all worked out that Bella and Angela will be ablel to share and apartment. What is up with Renee ? Why doesnt she want Bella to go to Volterra?

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Date: 09 May 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

I like this Em, I love the way he is dealing with Rose. I knew Alice had to have figured out what was up with Edward and Bella.

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Woman

Good song choice. I loved that he flew her grandparents their.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Hello, I Love You

Good so far.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Desire

I liked her putting Rose in her place.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I Want You To Want Me

I am glad that they didnt have intercourse yet.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You

Put Tanya and Rose in the places, too funny.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Your Room

Of course he wants her, he is a man.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Talk Dirty To Me

Good chapter.

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Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Nothing Else Matters

Awww, how sweet.

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Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Black Magic Woman

I love that she speaks Italian. Cleary Edward likes it too.

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Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Leather and Lace

Temper, temper, never does anyone any good. I hope Edward comes to his senses soon. 

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Foxy Lady

I can see her spitting her sprite out at the cost of that ring.  He loves he so much. I am glad that he is off the hook as far as jail goes. I do think Edward in amger management is funny.

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Sorry

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Im so glad to hear you enjoyed it...let's just hope that tape stays in their hands lol. Cant wait to hear what you think of Bella meeting the parents...it will be interesting to say the least!

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Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Physical

I just loved this chapter, Daddy "C" is the best. I found him and Esme funny as can be. I loved Edwards whole family. I was happy as a peach that Bella and Edwards sister jumped on that wrench.

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Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Blackdog

I wonder if Rose or Tanya got onto his laptop to get that video. That could cause some problems. Loved the tats.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I know it was totally cliche and corny but c'mon, they have to have matching tattoos! lol! Thanks for taking the time as always to review, your support means so very much to me! Laila