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Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
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Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trouble With Money

I knew his parents would help him out. I thought he was going to propose, guess we will have to wait and see. Good chapter.

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

Aww, what a cute "pay it forward" story.  I wonder how Bella is going to catch up in the points ranking?

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: To Protect and Conceal

Good chapter, so sweet that he cant wait to propse to her. I wonder who is behind the stuff with her car?

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Home Stretch

I think Daniels and Cosmo are up to something. Good chapter.

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Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

Way to go Bella for beating the crap out of Daniels. Poor Edward.

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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

Wow, I would have loved to see there faces. Good chapter. I love the fact that his parents came and are staying to help.

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

I loved this chaper! I am so glad she is going to have a baby and they are married. What were the grandparents reactions to the baby? Good I imagine, lol. Cant wait for the epi. Wonderful story.

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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

Awww, I just loved the ending. It was too cute. Wonderful story!

Summary:

What happens when Edward allows a bit more before the wedding? Call it a practice run... Call it desire... I call it Lustful Temptations.

Originally written for the Fun With Your Clothes On Contest.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2929 Read Count: 1397
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2010 Updated: 02 May 2010
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Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I could see this happening.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Edward has really gone off the deep end. Jasper is more than likely going to kill him even if he said he wouldnt.



Author's Response:

We'll have to see if Jasper can keep his temper, lol!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter. They both sure do seem to have lost everything.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Life has been difficult for them, but things are bound to get better now that they've met up, right ;)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really like this story so far. So many questions, like what was the vision Alice had? Why wouldnt she tell Jasper? And many more, just have to keep reading.



Author's Response:

Lol, the question of Alice doesn't get answered for quite awhile!  Hope you can be patient :)

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What is that Jasper up to? Good chapter

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying the story development!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Glad Bella is at least welcoming Jasper while heis there.



Author's Response:

Well, she's willing to be polite at least!  He's gonna have to earn her faith back before she really lets him in.

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whats up with Andy? Is he jealous? Him having all that money is not good either.



Author's Response:

It's not jealousy, per se.  Much more on hiim coming up!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why does Andy feel despair? What does he know?



Author's Response:

Wait and see!  Thanks for reading and reviewing as you go!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I say good for them both, about time. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Lol, slow burn, right? :)

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Really dont like that Alex guy, he is up to no good. Andy at least helped her out with his warning.



Author's Response:

Just wait, Alex gets worse!  Andy's in deep shit.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Gotta love Em and his ability to get things settled with Bella. He is one of my favorite Cullens. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Yep, it's hard to be mad at Emmett, isn't it? 

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Good chapter. Loved the way Bella and Rose interact.



Author's Response:

It was incredibly fun to write the girls' dialog :)  Glad you liked!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

At last Jasper finally got some relief. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Lol, poor guy earned it, didn't he?  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

What a great time they had but of course they got a wake up call on the way home. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, all good things must come to an end, I guess!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter. I think the smut is placed in the right places for the story. I really like the way you desrcibe how Jasper is in the hospital.



Author's Response:

Thanks- it's hard to balance the smut- I love me some smut, but I don't want it to interfere with the story development either.  I'm slowly getting more confident about it though :) 

Glad you like the hospital stuff- that portion is still one of my favorites in the story.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think he should help Alice also. It sounds like she really needs it. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

I find that the hardest thing about being a BellaxJasper fan is finding a nice way to get rid of Alice.  I was a huge fan of hers in the books, and still love her in non Jasper fics.  Don't worry, she'll have resolution by the end of the story.

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great idea Peter had after Bellas suggestion of a vampire whisperer. Good chapter.

Author's Response:

I broke poor Alice, I had to find a way to fix her, lol!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good chapter. I like Peter and Bellas relationship.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I've enjoyed it myself.  Peter's the big brother I never got to love-to-hate!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think they got what was coming to them. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, the violence was more challenging than I had thought, but I was happy with it in the end.

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hope they find him to help Alice. The stuff fit perfect for New Orleans history.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked New Orleans.  I wasn't sure how people would react to it- if it would seem too much like filler or a tangent, but the story popped in my head and it wouldn't leave!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Time for a show down? Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Yep.  Poor kids can't get a break today :)  Thanks so much for reviewing as you go!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella really will do anything to help her friends and family.



Author's Response:

Yeah.  It was hard to put Peter through being hurt, and a lot of people didn't like it that I portrayed him as vulnerable, but Bella needed a way to feel like a fully vested member of the family. 

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am glad she told Rose off. I always hated how she said she would give up Em.



Author's Response:

I know, that drove me crazy too.  I think it's a crock of shit.  She's gonna give up immortality and the absolute devotion of Emmett to be barefoot, pregnant and bitch-slapped by someone like Royce?  I don't think so!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Loved the bear thing and drunk Bella with Em and Peter.



Author's Response:

Thanks- it was fun to write!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Finally Alice really needs Malcolm.Edward is just going to have to be dealt with later.



Author's Response:

I know, what a wait for the vamp whisperer, right?  Hope you like him now that he's here!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Edward is going to get it now. How can he judge her???



Author's Response:

He's pretty oblivious.  I'm playing up on his old-fashioned ideals and the vampire "resistance to change" as well as the fact that he is barely functioning without Bella while they're apart.   It's obsession as opposed to love.

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I guess its Victoria or the Volturi??



Author's Response:

Have to wait and see :(  Sorry about the evil cliffy.  Am trying to work fast to make up for it, but I'm really sick, so it's not going well.  Thanks again for all of your reviews as you read!  Makes me feel better than my stash of Cepacol lozenges :)

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

At least Jasper got there in time to change her. Thank goodness. What happened to Edward.



Author's Response:

Jasper's POV of stuff is up next and we'll find out about Edward then!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I agree with Jasper, what a way for Bella to wake up.



Author's Response:

I know, drama drama everywhere, right?  Don't worry, things will strat to calm down eventually!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I really want to know Bellas plan, lol. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hope you liked what I've got in mind!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved the time out Bella gave Edward. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it- I was worried that people would be disappointed in the lack of violence!  THanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Of course she would mayy him. Crazy Jasper. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

I know this, you know this, but he was too worried about pushing her, lol!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Good chapter. I am happy to see that Bella is the one to take care of Vic.



Author's Response:

Yes, I felt it was important for her to be the one to end Vic.  She's a badass vampire now, no reason for Jasper to do all the work!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Who knew Edward was going to fall for a guy? Wonderful ending. I have enjoyed this story alot.



Author's Response:

Lol, my theory is that anyone who stays a virgin for that long is denying what they're into!  So glad you enjoyed the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Til next time :)

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Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling

Thankfully they are letting the Cullens help them.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

Wow bad luck he has.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boogie Man

At least they each have someone to talk to. I also think Bella needs a little advice on how to liveon the streets.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand

She sure is one big mystery.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

They should work together to get off the streets.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Spies

Why wont she tell him the whole story?

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become

Sam is not like Jake at all. Wonder what his story is?

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me

Finally she thinks there are things she needs to tell him.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Secrets

Bella sure has had one messed up past.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I was Broken

Charlie could have been looking for her, she doesnt really know.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

I hope that means Alice and Em willbein the story.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

Must be Em.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The World at Large

Why did Edward leave?

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Even So

Finally answers. What messed up lives they have both had.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk

She needs to get Alec busted.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Shelter

Thank goodness Carlisle is tricky.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Ungodly Hour

Yippee, cant wait for Alice and Em.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Crossfire

I hope things start going better for them.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! I hope you like the rest of the story!

Katie 

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Church of What's Happening Now

Good chapter. I was wondering when Alice would ask Edward questions.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Sing it Out

I wonder what Carlisle means by there is more to hear?

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Drown Out

What caused the panic attack? It seems pretty severe. Good chapter.

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Runaway

I can see Bella getting worse before she gets better.

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through

What a sweet day they had together. I love that Dr C is willing to teach Edward to drive.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :) 

Katie 

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack

I cant believe they are going back. I bet there is another way to get the stuff he needs.

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Delicate

Good chapter. I am glad that Edward is letting Carlisle and Esme help them.

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 The Only Exception

O no when are they going to catch a break. Of course something bad in going to happen in the morning. I hope it has nothing to do with what they just did together.

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Chop Suey

Poor Mrs E., at least she is alive still. Jake really needs help but Edward cant mess up what he and Bella have in order to help Jake.

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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Best of You

I think even Edward can only take so much before he snaps.

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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

It was nice to hear about Lucy, that was a wonderful touch. Loved that he has his grandparents rings.

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Date: 29 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

I was so glad to read that Bella got over some of her demons. Thanks goodness Edward wants to leave his past behind and start new.

Toasty Warm by jmolly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by EternallyCullen

B and E wed.  There's some romancing going on behind the scenes, some teasing at the reception, and some trouble from Jacob.

Sequel to Prenuptual Posturing, in the Unforeseen Events Series. Rated M for later chapters. All belongs to Stephenie Meyer. Romance, humour, hurt and comfort. The Cullens and Hales, The Denalis, Charlie, The Dwyers, The Clearwaters, Jacob, Sam, Ang and Ben, the Forks High acquaintances.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65913 Read Count: 12645
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2009 Updated: 23 Dec 2009
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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Take Thee, Isabella

I love the playfulness between Bella and Edward with the kiss.



Author's Response:

I just found a pile of reviews for which I never received notifications. Please forgive me for not responding. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed my story.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

They better go faster if they want to get to Bella in time. James sure needs to get what is coming to him.

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

You wrote their wedding night perfectly. A wonderful and addictive story. I cant wait for the epi and the sequel. Hope you are feeling better.

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Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90: Epilogue

Well I loved that they all had kids. It was also funny that Bella and Edward were caught in the act by their son. Even funnier that their son told Em and Jasper. LOL

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Poor Tyler. I think Rose is doing a great job.

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Good chapter. 

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Aww, giving her the kitten was a sweet thing for Edward to do.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Its good that they are getting to talk a bit.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

LOL, at least Alice is trying to save Bella from them.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Alice does have her way.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I guess they are going to go after Bella to teach him to do waht they want about the railroad.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I just dont see why Rose wouldnt take Em up on his offer.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I wish Rose would have warned him, I just know something bad is going to happen.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I wish Em would just say he wants to marry Rose. They are to perfect together.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I wish Alice would just tell Em it is not going to work out.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Em got caught, maybe now he will admit he doesn love Alice.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I cant believe that caused a fight. AI guess that is how it was in the wild west.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Rose is so stubborn. If it doesnt bother him then it shouldnt bother her.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OO no, I hope no one is hurt to badly.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Poor Alice, but I have a feeling it willbe good for her to be in town near Jasper. Also wasnt itgreat how Bella stopped the horse, too bad she got hurt.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Go Bella, I am glad she told Em.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Good chapter, my heart was breaking for Em.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Poor Bella, you can tell she misses their parents and is worried for Em. She just needs to give it time.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Jasper is going to be so happy when he finds out that Alice isnt going to marry Em.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Edward just seems so shy too, lol.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Why isnt Alice happy? She is free now.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Who was that at the end of the chapter? Hmmm..  Why cant Alice be with Jasper and does it have anything to do with that paper she stolefrom the Sherriff desk?

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

That was too cute. I really like their time on the horse before the ranch.