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Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
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lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282984
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Jasper shot him??!!! I sure hope not.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Thank goodness I thought Jasper went crazy and shot Em. But who did shoot him?

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I am so happy for Jasper. Now he has to find out about Alices past. And who shot Em.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

It cant be that bad. I guess that Alice broke the law somehow.

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

That was funny that Jasper drank hair tonic. LOL

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Well the authors note answers alot of my questions, lol. I wonder if it is James that was watching them or maybe it was a female?

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Good present. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

How did his family lose their land? If they died then why didnt the land go to Edward? Interesting.

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

What a sad story, poor Edward.

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I am sure her blush is going to stay for awhile and come back when she sees Edward again, lol. 

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Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I got a good laugh from Em in this chapter. Carman helped too, she is direct.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Alice killed someone???  There has to be more to the story.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I hope sometime in the future Edward can possibly get some of his land back from the other ranger.

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Poor Jasper, I think if Alice toldhim he would find some way to help her.

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Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I wonder who is watching them threw the windows??? I wish she would just tell Jasper the story.

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Way to save the day Jasper.

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Thank goodness, I knew he would still marry her. I still want to know about Bella and Edward. Also is Rose going to quit being stubborn and marry Em?

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

So glad he is going to ask her.

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

That is really terrible, they will lose all the cattle.

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

That was a nice visit. I knew Bella would see that there was more to the nun story.

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

I didnt see Em letting the cat out of the bag, but that was priceless. Good chapter.

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

This will be a big hurt to the ranch.

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

The barn is on fire??!! Then that means that whoever did it is most likely still there. This doesnt seem to be looking good for the girls.

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Wow,  I cant believe they killed Carmens husband!! Poor Carmen.  I sure hope Bella doesnt meet a terrible fate, James sure is a crazy sob.

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

I knew that the men would see the fire, but there was no way they could get there in time to help with anything other than the aftermath.  I was not expecting the fire at all. It def left me wanting to read more.

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Such a sad chapter, poor Alice had to tell them that Bella was gone and what happened. Then after that they cant even leave because the horses are tired and they cant find the other horses.

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Thank goodness Em thought to get Rose to come back to the Ranch. I hope they get to Bella quickly.

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Bella sure is in a world of trouble.  It is not looking good for her.

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

Carmen sure doesnt have any love for Rosie. lol   Good chapter.

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

My heart was breaking for Em and Edward. I can see why Edward cant sleep, how could he other than sheer exhaustion.

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I am glad Rose got everything sorted. I cant believe how much Carmen hates her.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Yeah James is a sick SOB. I hope he gets whats coming to him.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I was thinking it had been days since she was gone . Good chapter.

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

At least he is going to try and help Bella. Thank goodness! Good chapter. hope you met your deadline.

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

I hope Rosie shot him good. Thank goodness Jenks found them.

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

I think Rosie did a good job. I am glad they are there to get Bella, lets hope she gets out without getting shot.

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82

Finally they are going to get Bella out of there. Good chapter.

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

O my, she just gets saved to be shot???!! I hope she  lives. Cant wait for an update now, lol.

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

LoL, I think I can see why you got evil comments. This is a great story and the cliffhanger had me screaming at my laptop. So glad it was a bad dream.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

One word for this chater.......FUNNY!  Just too funny they mess they got into. I knew Rose would know Bella was in the room, I guess Em just didnt even imagine her in there. LOL

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Awww how perfect that he is getting the Ranch and Em gave them the part with the tree.

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

The baby is coming for Esme and Bella and Edward are married. Good chapter.

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Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

A son for Carlisle and Esme is wonderful.  Congrats on your success!

Mafia Princess by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 527]
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Banner by MsRason

 

All Humans. OOC. He is the mob boss that wants to rekindle what they had. She is the daughter of the rival mob, who just recently accepted her fate. Will uniting together solve all their problems? ExB


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116080 Read Count: 87538
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2012
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Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Yeah I think she needs to be worried. Edward is not a happy camper.



Author's Response:

Let's see what E does next chapter. He might really surprise you. 

Anyway, thanks. ;)

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a way to wake up, go Bella!



Author's Response:

Thanks sweets! =)

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That was hot and steamy.



Author's Response:

Thanks bb! ;)

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

She is not over what happened between them. I guess he went by another name and that why she didnt know it was him.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She told him, lol. He was to wait and he is not happy.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think Jake is up to something. I dont trust him. Love possesive Edward!

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope she punches the girl a good one. lol

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

They clearly have a love/hate relationship. I just love those.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Who is making a threat against him???  Is it about Bella or something else?

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

She sure got her way, lol. She plan the whole thing and he still gave in.

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Omg! I think Jake has something to do with it. Who opened the door??



Author's Response:

damn girl, I think I luv yah right now! =) lmao! You just made me grin stupidly by making a review for each chapter that you read, considering you read it in one go. =)

Really appreciate it! Kisses! ;D

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Jacob must have made a threat to her or something. If she had to be sedated after his visit it had to be because of what he said. I am really getting addicted to this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much sweets! ;) see yah next update!

 

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

The secret was bound to come out sooner or later.

Author's Response:

Yeah, secrets usually aren't kept hidden for long. At least, it's out and they will be talking about it soon.

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I cant believe he didnt go back to Bella either. I can see why she thought he left. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Lol! =) yes, he was kinda an ass. But at least he was sorry. 

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good chapter. Who is it??



Author's Response:

Don't worry, next chapter you will know who's responsible. 

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Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I agree that Leah is crazy. Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she is/was. Anyway, thanks! Happy New Year! =)

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I think Edward liked the game more than he said. lol



Author's Response:

Lol! Maybe he did...I'll go and ask him. =)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Too funny about Jasper just busting in. I cant believe they didnt kick his butt. I am a little worried about him telling Bella a lie about wanting kids.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Don't worry, Bella won't be getting pregnant anytime soon. ;) thanks!

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeah, I dont think that Em is going to take it lightly that Edward put a hit on him. But who really shot Em?? Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks sweets. ;)

The shooter will be revealed in later chapters. They have to first see hoe Emmett reacts when he finds out.

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Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well I didnt expect that. I thought he would have tore threw there like a madman.



Author's Response:

E can contain himself...sometime. lol

Anyway, thanks. =)

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129798
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Good chapter.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Bella sure does have bad luck or people out to get her.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I knew it.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

They should work on their routine harder.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Someone shot her, was not expecting that. Tanya??

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow, there is always some kind of petty drama going on. You would think the other girls would learn.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Good chapter.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

That seems like a crazy idea for them to have. I would think that the fall might pull muscles or something. I guess that itsjust to scary for me, lol.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Good chapter.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Good chapter.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

That was sad.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Glad she is gone.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I guess Charlie has died but what about Renee. This seems like an interesting story.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I explain about Renee too:)

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Bella, now she is all alone.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review:)

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wonder why they all keep staring at her?

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good chapter.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I guess Edward is going to act like an ass to Bella because he is attracted to her?

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOL, that was funny at the end.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

She is soo sad all the time. Maybe she just hasnt dealt with her father being gone.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Finally she told them, maybe they can help her.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

That must have been one heck of a song.

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'll say they worked out their issues.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She needs to tell everyone about Charlie, they can help her.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I see trouble still finds Bella wherever she goes.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Now they have to worry about practicing.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Madame has come to check on Bella and put her in line, lol.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Tanya doesnt seem pleased with Madame help.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good chapter.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Thats good they are getting the routine down on paper at least.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

They didnt get to practice so I hope they do ok.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

They did that well and didnt get as much practice, they should be a shoe in for some company.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Busted again. lol

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I really thought he parents would wake up.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

SO sad, bring on the kleenex.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Good chapter.

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Good chapter.