Reviews by HeartOfDarkness
PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995726
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

nice chapter! so much happening in this story...looking forward to the next one!xx



Author's Response:

thank you - next week as always :)

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

what a powerful chapter!  Bella's despair crept up on her...and as much as she knew it was something she was trying to avoid, she gave Carlisle the green light to change him.  i can't wait for the next chapter!!! Brilliant story!!! xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion

love this story!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces

aww alice!  nicely done hun!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

wow just loved this.  i was so saddened that Edward's dad was lost, but I figured he wouldn't survive.  thanks for a wonderful story.  xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Of Letters and Lauper

this chapter was wonderful! I love the cyndi lauper bit...too funny!  you weave a great story - keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it - thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

loving this story....i can just see bella and alice setting up their own cafe LOL. I find the introduction of James intriguing as well...can't wait to see what he's like and how he's involved in this whole thing.  keep going!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much - so glad you liked it! :-)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

I am sooo loving this story!  It's one of the most unique I've read, and I'm so pleased I found it!  Well done chapter and I like the slow burn between Edward and Bella in this!  I'm glad they've finally admitted their feelings towards each other...and I can't wait to see what happens re James!  I'm also fascinated about Alice and what will happen to her future!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far! :-)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Of Rings and Revelations

OH WOW! You certainly did cram a lot into this chapter!  I can't wait till you're all settled and writing again....will be looking forward to it!  (See no pain here LOL) Well written chapter, the heat and passion between the two of them was wonderful!  And it was great how Edward accepted what Bella told him about the infuenza without running for the hills!  Loved it!  xxLisa. (morefunthan)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

aww love it!  Finally Bella agrees to marry him!  Now things will get interesting...

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Of Wishes and Watches

oh that was such an exciting chapter!  i loved the gift bella gave edward, and thought it sweet that they wanted to wait till after the wedding to do the deed. and the ending has me intrigued...update soon!  xx Lisa.



Author's Response:

Yes, they'll wait... glad you didn't find that too frustrating! Lol!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: Of Announcements and Assumptions

oh i just loved that chapter!  i can imagine all the gossip about bella's so called pregnancy...and am glad i didn't live in that time LOL.  so looking forward to what happens next....this story is truly unique!  xxLisa.



Author's Response:

Honestly, I don't think it would really be too different these days. People will always gossip! Lol! Although I supposed nowadays they might not even try to hide the pregnancy.

Glad you liked the chap - thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Of Tombs and Tea Parties

Im so looking forward to the wedding!  I think it's going to be tres interesting to see how it all pans out...and can't wait for an update!  I will be checking out some of your recs hun...and hope that you can swing by some of my stories sometime.  Keep on this hun...its the best and most original story I've come across in a long while! xxLisa.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27: Of Promises and Pleasures

wow that was some chapter! finally married and together...aww! so looking forward to beyond the wedding and what happens next! :)



Author's Response:

It took a while, but they finally made it! Lol! Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Of Baths and Beds

this is so wonderful! i hope that maggie gets the letter and survives...and that Bella and Edward survive and get back to their friends.  xx



Author's Response:

That's Bella's hope too... we'll see how it goes.

Thanks for R&R! :-)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29: Of First Days and Falling-Outs

aww that was great!  I loved the making up at the end...and the kitchen sex! great chapter...and as much as I can't wait to see how this ends...I will be sad when it's finally over!  xxx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

oh!!!! i absolutely loved this chapter!! your story has taken me on the most wonderful journey...and now Edward's back with the locket!! lovel it!!!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

oh! lovely chapter to tie all the loose ends.  i loved edwards pov in this...his pain...his anguish.  simply brilliant tale...it deserves to win the award! xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

loved this story.  thank you so much for sharing it with us..  xxlisa.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

oooh what a wonderful outtake.  i just loved carlisle in this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

intriguing hun, very intruiging!  loved the first chapter and I'm normally pretty picky as to who I review for! 



Author's Response:

Well thank-you very much for both reading and reviewing!  High praise indeed!!  :D

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

I loved your description of the hotel...i'd love to stay there!  Your Edward is so...ahhhh...wonderful!  Funny thing is, there's been a bit in the news about a documentary on this very subject which is why I decided to give it a looksee.  You weave a wonderful story, and your descriptive language is second to none.  Can't wait to read more!  Now, on to the next chapter!  I'd love it if you gave my stories a little read too! xxLisa. 

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets

hehe...you guys are so funny!  loved the chapter and I hope they get to meet soon!  On to next chappie...:)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...

pmsl!  you two remind me of my co-writer totteacher and myself!  loved this chapter, and of course Bella wouldn't just fall into Edward's arms...though I would! hehe.  nicely written but can't stop to chat...onto next one.  (don't forget I'd like you guys to appraise my stories too...please????)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 13 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth

Nooooooo! you HAVE to add to this naughty girls!  well done you two...heart all a flutter here!  update soon! xxxlisa.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Fairytales Really Can Come True

Of course you must continue!  Nice story ladies :)



Author's Response:

Oh, thank-you so much.  Fills us with warm fuzzies (and motivation) to hear it!!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Morning After

nicely done ladies! I really don't know what I'd like to see...as long as they're happy!  I think I'd like to see something happen with the money that was going to change hands...

Isle Esme by Totteacher Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 99]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/23136/images/banner.jpgThis story tella the tale of Edward and Bella's honeymoon on Isle Esme and the ensuing events of the pregnancy, and Bella's transformation into her new life.

Contains various pov's through the stories and sexual content.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110415 Read Count: 10324
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2010 Updated: 27 Feb 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi my dear...I thought I'd drop you your a review to get you started.  As you know, I'm such a fan of this story and I know that you will get a huge response to Isle Esme...well written!  Btw lilquackers is one of my faithful reviewers on Meadow, so she must like our style! hehe....

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I give this story 10 out of 10!  xxxLisa.



Author's Response:

I am glad you like it so much!

I have mad esome amazing friends through this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullens thought Edward would never grow up, but marriage to a determined human girl, and a trip to Brazil, alter him forever.  On his honeymoon, Edward finds more than love, friendship, self-acceptance, and an ability to lead.  He embraces a future.  Summer 2011 Shimmer Awards Best Storyteller nominee.

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I Hunger Rainforest Banner, Kitchen Banner and Corkboard Banner by mimozka.  I Hunger Dolphin Banner by lilianas.

Kitchen

 

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No slash.  Increasingly AU settings and storyline.

This is the 6th book in my 'Unforeseen Events' series.  You can easily begin reading here, with the understanding that my Edward and Bella are not quite as shy as the originals.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: THE UNFORESEEN EVENTS SERIES
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 571771 Read Count: 30833
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 May 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Cove

nice story so far :) love the cliffhanger!  keep going!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)  I'll keep posting, you keep reading:D

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Salix Caprea

Thank you Salix Caprea for the lovely banner:

It has been four years since Edward left Bella in New Moon.  There were no werewolves and Jacob was never more than Bella's friend.  Bella has just graduated from college when Edward accidently crosses her path and finds himself being drawn back into Bella's life.  But Bella is not the same teenager he knew. She is a grown woman with a very grown up lifestyle.  This tells the story of how Edward, realizing he can't live without the love of his existence, and with the help of all of the Cullens, endeavors to win her back.  There are some laughs along the way.  The story is EPOV and rated NC-17 for sexual language and content. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117349 Read Count: 64699
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2010 Updated: 06 Aug 2010
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43-Don't Talk About My Mom's Pie

well i've just spent the last 24 hours reading this...and i have to say i've never laughed so much!  what a great story!  i love the more confident bella and also how edward loosened up over the course of the tale.  i also think that emmett is great...and love how he torments the poor edward.  well written story...i've rec'd it to a friend who reviews stories on twi-fic promotions!  xxxLisa.



Author's Response:

Lisa:  Wow, thank you so much for giving this story a chance and saying such kind things.  And I'm blown away by you taking the time to rec'ing it to your friend.  FYI--The next outtake will be posted, likely on Fri.  The teaser was just posted on the twilighted forum.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45-Aftermath

nice chapter...and looking forward to a great ending :)



Author's Response:

Thank you Heart...I think its good times ahead.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254885
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

now THAT was some declaration!  What an absolute bastard James was to her! well done xx



Author's Response:

Thank you, James is a Bastard, but we already knew that. We just found out how much of a bastard he really is....Thanks for the comment,,,lml

Control Freak by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

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Banner made by Ima Twi Hard

My enrty for Fans Vs DV.

 

Edward has been looking for the perfect partner. A story of relinquishing control.

 

BDSM Themes ahead.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6706 Read Count: 3725
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2011 Updated: 18 Mar 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oooh wonderful! great job on this sweets! I know I'd be struggling to write a BDSM story, so congats on doing such a great job on this xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much

Masquerade by mouse555 Rated: M [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

What lies behind a company mask? AH My entry for FAGE 2 written for HeartOfDarkess Lisa .


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2577 Read Count: 301
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2011 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this story so much, and the fact that it was a gift for me made it all the more special.  I love the way you write your oneshots and multichapters, always taking me on such a wonderful journey that I lose myself in the story.  You have a way of conveying such a lot in such few words, and I'd like to say...thank you so much for:

1. Being my friend

2. Being an awesome writer

3. Being you.

Love you sis!



Author's Response:

Thank you for what is quite possibly the best review I have ever had!!! I love you too!

xxx

Loving on the Bayou by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 50]
Summary:

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Banner by Meliisa Condor! My many thanks XOXOX Love ya!

Loving the boss’ daughter will only bring you heartache. Or will it?

Yvonne is a beautiful, rich, well educated woman. When she returns home to the family cane farm after attending all the best schools in New York, her former life will haunt her. Can she truly forget the only man she’s ever loved? Will a mystery man be her salvation or curse?

Thibodaux is a 6th generation, rugged, cane worker. He’s waited for her arrival back home for years. He knows he can’t have her even though she’s always been the woman who owned his heart.

Together they are a taboo. Even though they know they can never be together, they cannot deny their heart’s desires. Or, can they?

Two masks, one masquerade ball, one enchanted evening leaves their hearts hanging in the balance.


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2308 Read Count: 657
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2011 Updated: 08 Aug 2011
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yvonne comes home

hey hun I've finally found a moment to hop on over and read your fic...great start!  Look forward to reading this xx Lisa.



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweetie! Glad you could check it out :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

Oh wow! *fans face* that was some intense chapter.  In trying to make the man of her fantasies jealous, she's now attracted another mystery man.  Great chapter hun.  xx



Author's Response:

hehehe Thanks. It was intence to write ;) xoxox

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

oooh I like this man! I can't wait till when he's unmasked.  Great chapter hun.  xx



Author's Response:

IKR? I love him to pieces! thanks for reading love xoxo

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

Great chapter hun.  I love the scene you're setting here...and he's visited her again? Oh such a wonderful mystery man!



Author's Response:

Thank you, love! yes he is a wonderful mystery man ;p

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

oooh the plot thickens, and how I do love Thib!   great chapter hun :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! and yes it does! I love Thib too! he's a dream of mine lol

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

oooh but does he think it's Paulette? Great chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL i'm not telling! thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

oooh boy now this is getting interesting.  So thib has her father's blessing now? wonderful chapter!



Author's Response:

the plot thickens yet again. Poor Yvonne doesn't know whats going on. thanks again!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

oooh great chapter.  And boy Thib doesn't waste time...telling her parents he wants to marry her. 



Author's Response:

He has a plan who knows where it will lead him, but he's going for the gusto! thanks babe!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

oooh boy! well I can't wait to read the rest of this. From the first word I was intrigued and love this story! Great work hun, and best of luck in the comp! xx Lisa.



Author's Response:

Thanks sweetie same to you! I cant win a contract but i so like to write a challenge :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Loving on the Bayou

ooh wow! I wonder what Thib will do now?  And will Yvonne let him back in now that this has happened? Great chapter...though I wanted to kick Alberto! 

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923137
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

wow....well i'm glad edward's finally learned the truth about his sister. and poor bree....at least Jasper's looking out for her as much as he can. 

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

wow! well now bella's pregnant....what will happen? it's sure looking as though aro's getting what he wants so something has to upset the applecart. loved the update hun xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

poor Bella! i hope Edward can help bring her back. xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

ooh great chapter! and gotta say i love jasper :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

oh good lord! well uhm... *runs to get fresh panties*

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

aww that was a lovely break from transmission.  fab chapter hun xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

awww well i'm glad they ended their wedding night in that way. great update. i just know katalina would love it xxx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

oooho lord! well hope its not james, as all jasper's deception will be brought undone.  hope its edward! hehe



Author's Response:

Jasper would be fucked...

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

well at least they're having time away from james.  and jasper's become quite the schemer! love it :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

ewww on aro and his attempt. so glad he's incapable of consummating anything. and jasper's still trying to think of anything he can to make things a little easier for bella...yay for jasper. great teaser too :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

fab chapter! loved the cookie eating ;) and how jasper feels about alice is adorable, as is edward and how he feels about bella (and yes you idjit you love her, just as she loves you.) Loved! xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

loved it! and oooh a plan to lose the virginity before the ceremony...i sense things are about to come to a climax *winks*

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

oh tanya made edward see what bella had been enduring, didn't she?  great update.  the vows and cake idea were sweet. good that jasper will be there for bella and alice. :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

aww great update :) the conversation they overhead was very illuminating :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

aww that was lovely! can't wait for the update hun. xxx 

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

well that turned out to be less painful than bella anticipated.  I can't help but wonder if she'll get pregnant with no condom.  great update bb xx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Second Elizabeth Chapter 3

aww charles was so kind to her.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

:( oh poor dear bree. *sniffles*

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

OMG! wow a lot of action in this chapter! so happy they're all safe. wow...emmett has a lot to digest with what's happened, and the rest of them have to learn how to live a normal life again. Great update :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 63: The Second Elizabeth Part 1

aww poor girl :( what a nightmare of an existence.

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

award


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158449
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

Gotta say I think that Jasper would make a great papa.  and OMG!  Jane and Makenna!!  And Alec!  oooh noes!  What will happen now??? *bites nails*  



Author's Response:

Hehe... yeah, I think he would too... the author just needs to decide if B actually got knocked up or not... lol.

 

xoxox

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

oh edward... and oh bella and jasper...

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

well it appears that Angela has outed Edward...but I wonder if that's all she wrote regarding him? great chapter hun xxx

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

ooh! So glad Jasper was there to rescue Bella, and boy Edward has had a major wake up call.  Let's hope he can clean up the mess.  Great chapter darlin'! xxx



Author's Response:

Always there to cheer me on!  Thank you so much Lisa!!  Glad you liked it.  I can see the end in sight now... in fact, I'm pretty sure I've mapped out the rest of it... now I just need to write it!

love ya!

rach

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

OOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! well wow I wonder what will happen next? great chapter my lovely.  I just love Jasper in this :)



Author's Response:

thank you!!  I think peeps are finally warming to the idea of him getting the girl this time!

 

xoxo

rach

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: In Clear Sight

well hello Alice! and that slap...boy Edward's having a bad time of it.  great chapter :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great start hun!!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

aww well bella...you have one unique dad!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

lol...ah the overprotective father.  great chapter :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh bella...i can see that the boys would have been a tad wary of approaching you, what with your dad being a cop

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

well he's managed to convince you bella.  can't wait!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh dear! well charlie's a tad overbearing and overprotective, no?

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hahahahha! oh this chapter made me giggle!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

lol.  camel toe!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ooh i wonder who she's gonna beat? lol

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

cue emmett...and yeah what a way to get wet.

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

well at least the digs sounds plush!  gotta say i love bella's inner monologue :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh now i'm jealous of Bella's...err...situation!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

something tells me she won't be running anywhere..

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ooh i love the rooms!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh well these two have already worked up a sweat :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

aww damn the phone rang!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ooh bella knows jasper! wonder how?

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

oh good lord! well...uhm...this will be interesting!! ;)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ooh its throwdown time! :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

well it seems bella will be teaching edward something too :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

jebus! well seems she's got them both by the short n curlies ;)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

somehow i think edward's already more than 'risen' to the bait.  hehe

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

well now they're alone eh?

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

oh edward...u be in so much trouble :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

ooh he's telling her he's gonna do the deed...:)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 271: Chapter 271

that phone sex line was great!

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 270: Chapter 270

hehe - rosalie's pushing edward. love it :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

hello Sir :)

Reviewer: HeartOfDarkness Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

and thus begins the makeover :)