Reviews by aquaserenity2002
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625069
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

OMG i was scared for a moment. i thought edward was going to revert back into the old edward. awesome chapter can not wait for the next one.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189015
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Two Point Conversion

lol lmfao, rotf.



Author's Response:

That's a lot of laughing!  Love it!

The Sex Talk by Jennmc75 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Get inside Charlie's head and see what he was thinking during the "sex talk" that takes place in chapter 2 of Eclipse.  My entry for the Twilight Novel Novice Eclipse Fan Fiction Challenge.  Rated T.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2170 Read Count: 873
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2010
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Sex Talk - One Shot

Great story u got here. lol charlie seems determined to have bella and jacob together! I would love read about charlie's reaction to seeing renesmee, that would be funny. I would also love to read about charlie's reaction to edward and bella telling him they are getting married. lol that would be funny.



Author's Response:

I absolutely love writing canon Charlie.  I've got a few things planned for future one shots.  Make sure you've got me on alert if you like reading Charlie's thoughts and reactions.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 159067
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG! I never would have guessed ben was a cheater. man ur good. don't keep us hanging so long. cant wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

The sequel should be named Beautiful Awakenings



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297712
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

Awesome chapter. i think edward and bella are gonna have a baby cullen and the qoute is from Katy Perry's Hot and Cold.

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

Yes they should have a baby cullen.



Author's Response:

Okay, thank you for letting me know what you think! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

awesome chapter. The qoute is from Bridget Jones' Diary. Bella is so preggo right?

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

Love the chapter. Yay Baby Cullen will soon arrive. The qoute is from sorority boys right?

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

Loved the chapter. The qoute is from The Notebook.

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

OMG great Chapter. the qoute is from Remember Me.

"Gandhi said that whatever you do in life will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it. Because nobody else will.

This was one of those moments that I tended to agree with him."

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

The quote from this chapter is from Pretty Woman: "Did you know that your foot's as big as your arm from your elbow to your wrist?" Although they should wait on telling Renee, because i mean she freaked about Bella's weight before, she is probably gonna freak when she hears about the baby.

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

OMG Lily is here. The qoute is from twilight. "It's okay "Bella" (Jasper) you won't hurt her."

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Boy or Girl?

OMG could not stop laughing. LOL the qoute is from the proposal.

Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

Loved the chapter. can't wait for the next one.

The quote is from Bridget Jones The Edge of Reason: "Why are you dancing around in that tent business?" "Because I don't want you to see any of my wobbly bits."

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love the chapter but can you please make Renee trip and fall in a barrel of acid so she could die. Lol just saying.



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99372
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: 3-21-13

Love this! And march 21 is world Down syndrome day.