Reviews by JD Switz
Summary: Past Featured Story


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My entry for the "For My Valentine" contest. Bella is the invisible girl at Forks High. What happens when she learns that she has a secret admirer? Fluffy one-shot.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3189 Read Count: 1210
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Secret Admirer One Shot

Aw, that was cute.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Summary:

What could Bella walk in on that would scar her for life?Christmas will never be the same for Bella, especially when one song keeps playing every time she turns on the radio.  My entry for the Broken Record Holiday Contest.

Flashy Avi


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crackfic
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3798 Read Count: 684
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Panty-Wearing Freak One Shot

LMAO!

Now that was funny!

 

The lyrics to that song, CLASSIC!!



Author's Response:

I loved writing this and it makes me smile knowing other people laugh at it too.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Damn, my heart is beating kind of fast. I'm sort of scared to find out what's about to happen. Seriously, I feel like I'm about to watch my favorite actor die in a movie I've seen 50 times and I know the outcome, yet still expect something different.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed half-star
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Oh. Phew.

I thought it was serious.

lol

I mean, it is serious.

But I don't want her to be anyone else's but Edward's. Nobody elses!

So if he has to do what he has to do, then go for it.

But what they really need to do is beat the shit out of Carlisle, Marcus, and Dmetri. Six guys just need to go at it and have it out. Really, what is stopping everyone from beating the shit out of Carlisle?

And I know I'm going to feel Bella's pain.

I mean, Edward really doesn't have to do what he is about to do.

It's truly sad. I might have to stop reading this. It may have just become too damned much for me.

Knowing abuse personally from a young age, I just want the suffering to end.

Damn you, Carlisle!!

You'll burn in hell!!

*Composing myself*

Back to the story...because that is what it is after all, a story.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed half-star
Date: 27 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Um....huh?

Ok, isn't Carlisle the type to inspect? I mean, the way he's acting, he's going to want to inspect for bruises. If Edward doesn't let him, how will Carlisle trust that Edward actually hurt Bella at all? I mean, that would make sense with all the hassle that Carlisle went through to bring Marcus and Demetri there.

I don't know about this....as I assume, you have a plan for this so, as always, I'm going to trust where you take it.

But the pitchforks my dear are still up....for now....definitely need some kickass action soon.

Take cars, rmcrm.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I knew it. I knew the garden had something to do with her survival.

I really enjoyed this chapter.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed half-star
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Well, I completely hated this.

Not you, just the characters.

I don't know what else to say or if I can continue reading.

 

 

 

 

Psyche!

 

I'll still be with you to the end....but this chapter......UGH! You know? Just ugh....some of these characters just disappoint me. But I expected it. When I saw Demetri, I just knew where the hell his head was. lol

What a bunch of sick fucks!

But you do keep your characters in tact, so that is itself is what makes the story good.

I just don't know about this....honestly.....I didn't even know if I should leave a review. But something must be said for their crazy asses.

 



Author's Response:

Well...I'm glad (I think) that you did leave a review and like (maybe) the story?  lol

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed star
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Finally.

He's dead.

I thought I'd be all happy about it. I don't know what the hell happened. But I can see you are almost done and we have to let poor Bella just have some reigns over her own life.

That's all I can say.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstar
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I knew the guy was Edward. I'm glad she went and got help for herself. It was really needed. All in all, this story, in full, gets and 8.5 or a scale of 10. You worked really fucking hard to finish this and I am quite happy to say that I stuck this out with you.

The times were good, bad, sometimes downright annoying, and sometimes just damned unbearable but you made it.

Pat yourself on the back and have a drink.

I was just thinking that you should turn this story into something real with original characters.

Fiction.

It's a great way to discover your imagination and your worth as a writer.

Can't wait for the epilogue!



Author's Response:

thanks for sticking with me thru everything to get to the end.  I do have plans to turn this into an original story (series) later this year with new material.  The epilogue is all that's left.  Hopefully I'll have it ready next week sometime.  (I've been bad...I just discovered JR Ward's Black Dagger Brotherhood series and OMG! Freaking Fantastic!)

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Stroke of genius of you to start this story off with Jasper. I could never really picture Jasper as a meany and it's kind of neat to see you play with his normally good natured character.

I think I'm ready to go on this trip....again. lol



Author's Response:

I hope you like the story.  I know I haven't gotten too far into it yet, but I will just as soon as I wrap up a project I'm working on

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

My goodness!

Girl, you just cease to amaze me!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my god, I just tickle inside at Jasper's frustration.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures

Goddamnit!

You've written my idea I thought of a year ago!

Shit!

I haven't even read this and now I can't because I have to write my own version. I'm pretty sure it will be different from yours, and a tad bit longer.

Still. The plot is the same. I just had to come here and let you know so when you see a story with the same plot in the future, just KNOW I didn't steal your idea.

Damnit!

But when I start my version, I will let you know. It will be told in two POVs and slightly immature, but it will be funny.

Damnit.

I can already tell that is good.



Author's Response:

I know, that sucks doesn't it! 

You should know that we got seriously attacked by another author on fanfic.net who said the same about us -- that we had plagarized her story.  Now, last time I checked, it is impossible to plagarize without having READ the work first!!  I tried to tell her I never read her story, let alone heard of it, but she was convinced and got a bit nasty! 

Here's my opinion, I say go for it, write your story -- the woman who gave us this premise (selling virginity) read about it an article in a magazine, so this is by no means an original idea.  As long as I'm not reading parts of my story verbatim in your story, it's all yours!  No one should have their creativity stiffled!  Have fun and I'd love to know when you post it.

Good Luck!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starhalf-star
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

What a fucking psycho!

this guy is sick in the head.

how the hell is this damsel in distrass going to escape him now?



Author's Response:

Emmett is an evil person. Give her time, she'll find out.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yep. She missed the mark when he said that he loved her ever since he saw her at the coffee shop. Too bad that her head was too messed up to pick up on that.

Maybe she'll realize later on.

Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yep. I had a feeling he killed that boy.

Wow.

I can't wait to read what this adventure holds!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

GupCL

Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3351
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: JD Switz Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. This was very nice. I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much...I enjoyed writing this one~