Reviews by mgg
Summary:

Banner by: TwiliteAddict

This is a two-shot from a parallel universe to my story "Forbidden Desire" I wrote for the Fics for Nashville fundraiser. Bella is an untried pleasure slave given to Edward on his 18th birthday by his insistent father.

Greek Togaward and Slave-girl Bella. AH, NC-17 for nudity, slavery (adult themes) and light citrusy feel.  My typical oddly In-Character OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4065 Read Count: 1668
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part I

WOW, that was incredibly sensual, I love your take on that time period, your attention to detail is quite good, and your writing impeccable, please make it a multichapter, I know you wrote that it would only be until there first time, but they could explore a lot of each other even after there first time, what ever you decide it great, but you know when you find something that just screams "OMG SO GOOD!!!", you can´t let it go, so that´s why I´m making the request.

 

Thanks for sharing this, hopping!!!

Melissa



Author's Response:

Thank-you!!  :D

Your enthusiasm is truely gratifying!  I can promise to try to write more, but it will be as the muse strikes and most likely after all the other projects roaming my head and filling my plate have more resolution.  These two are very near and dear to my heart, so it would be hard to leave them alone completely for always.  Just felt it was only fair to warn people this wasn't headed to a multichapter right out of the gate. 

You might like my multi-chapter Togaward fic, "Forbidden Desire".  It focuses a little more on Bella whereas this is more on E, but is from both their POV's.

Thanks for reading and for the fabulous support!!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923479
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

WOW!!! I never thought that the punishmet would come from Aro... is it weird that I thought it was hot!!!

**blushes**

I want them to do it again, mommy!!!!

claps hands and jumps up and down, bounding tits and all** ....................

OK, **coughs and rearanges the girls** so that was great and I can't wait to read the next one, Great job bb!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

WOW!! I had to cut this into half bc the my poor J got attacked by a crazy horny as hell woman! And now today I think the poor man is going to suffer again! **Giggles**

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yup, the all look yummy! Please more!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Love it! As always you leave me wanting more!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

O.O   I read it all!!! WOW!!!! Now I don't know if I'll be able sleep or not.....anyway, I'm stunned and scared and you totally trew me back to reality, I mean for me BDSM preactices are always a little scary but scary-exciting, Vladimir is a sadist, and that's a huge NO-NO or more like a HELL-NO! Anyway I'm sure he's not the only one with these particular tastes, so I'll be waiting for your next update with my hands over my eyes, well I'll be peaking through my fingers to read!



Author's Response:

Don't confuse what James and Vlad do with BDSM. BDSM is consensual and both parties can end it at any time. This is nothing like BDSM. I know you probably knew that, I just didn't want to misrepresent it. I am in a very loving consensual BDSM relationship but I feel safe and I know (and I have) called off a scene at any time.  Love your reivew and thanks soooo much. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028964
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So in this senerio Emmett is the Dom... I love it!!! but.. Is Rosalie human??



Author's Response:

nope... vamps all the way... 

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Sounds like fun, Noc! 

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 136: Chapter 136

I love to be the on blindfolding, I would love to do it to him! tease him until he was leaking and then I would drink him up!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OH, GOD!!! He's a vamp??? mmmm, this gets even better!!! More, Please?????



Author's Response:

two or three a day if I can :)

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So good!!



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

UNF!!! More Noc, More!!!



Author's Response:

lol!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Unf, baby!!! Need more... this is like foreplay, you little tease!!!! Love ya!



Author's Response:

i love beding called baby and tease all in one breath...lol

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

"That was beutiful Noc", well, you still are sort of a tease, but I loves ya still, hun!

Thanks, btw I'm in the rec room Melissa Glez, so you'll know how's asking for more and there you can spank me for being such a eager littel girl... LOL!



Author's Response:

Oh, I am rarely on the giving end of spankings, but maybe Sir can be talked into giving out a spanking or two in the Wreck Room... :P

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sure, we can play, but I need my Sir too, he'd probably be glad to help!



Author's Response:

I bet ur Sir can give u a great spanking!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella's getting curious! Love it, More?

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Great job at the intermingling of the story, still here, still needing more, bb!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love that he chuckles!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh, where's the line to get punished by Darkward/Domward/SexyMoFo-ward??

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

He's being very sweet, wanting to listen to her sleep!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

UHHH, delaying the pleasure, or the climax.... I love that!!! Edward is one kinky puppy!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Oh, you tricky little minks!!! I'm here it's just that I could only read and not review... I finally got my account under control... it took several days for me to understand how to do it... But I'm back in business and ready to review, OK here goes:   Damn that sexual tension... I'm totally aroused and J is not here, darn kids are awake and I can't do anything... I'll have to wait until later...But all in all... Great chapter!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124

Ah! Damn it!!! I thought it would!!!

Hey Noc, how are they hanging (bouncing) LOL!!

SO sorry for not reviewing before... laptop was in the shop and damn phone didn't let me... but Raven is back (yes, I'm lame my laptop has a name) as good as new and now I can tell you that I'm enjoying this story a little too much (If you know what I'm saying and I think you do)!!!

OK, Smooches to ya!

Melissa

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 126

Got to go violate the hubs, now!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 128: Chapter 128

Hmmmm!!!! eau du Sexe papillon , by Butterfly... speacially made for Sir!! **giggles**

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

YAY!!! Let's make it better, I want you at No.1 on that list!!! Can it happen?? 

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Hot!!! Defenetly Hot!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 151

LOL!!! So not "his cup", sounds funny! Anyway, like always I want more!!! Been having fun with this story and your other one too, and the two rooms!!! Love the new one btw, and thanks for adding me, although my kinks are not so out there I think they're par with the other members! So yeah, want more!!! So I can go hump J a little later!! **Smirks**

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 155: Chapter 155

Love ya Noc, this was great and a real treat!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 160: Chapter 160

Damn, can't wait to read next chapter...*sing-song voice* Bella's gonna get fucked!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 183: Chapter 183

Love it Noc!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 194: Chapter 194

More please! ;)

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 199: Chapter 199

Love the imagery! More please!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 205: Chapter 205

**winnie voice** I.WANT!!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 227: Chapter 227

F**************k!!! He said her name!!!!! And, What???????? Why the hell not??? Poison??? 

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 229: Chapter 229

LOve, LOve, LOve!!!!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 230: Chapter 230

So far I love it! More info... I would love visiting your mind for awhile Noc!

 



Author's Response:

ur kidding right????? I cut that chapter in half cause i was told it was too much info and too boring...

 

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 231: Chapter 231

WOW!! See that was awesome! And I surely wasn't kidin when I said I'd love to visit your mind, Noc!!!



Author's Response:

come on in... 

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

WHAT. HAPPEND???? 

ok, composing myself: 

1) WOW so fucking hot, best discription of a bj and cum, ever... love it, and I might want some!!

2) So vampcum makes her stronger and have some vamp abilities?? 

Way cool!!!

Want more!!! **wiggles in her seat, trying to be patience for more**

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 250: Chapter 250

Love Love Love it!

Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 311: Chapter 311

*sniffs a little trying to get the tears undercontrol* So yeah, that was def beautiful butterfly! I love it, it's incredible and the ride was amazing! And just... WOW!

I've been here for the whole ride and I'm so glad I was.... Can't wait for the next one, and since I'm already reading your other story, I guess I'll go check Bec's, I remember I'd already had started that one, but you know ff sucks so yeah.... OK I guess that's it... See ya in the rooms! **smooches** OH, and Congratulations **trows confetti** for a job very very well done!!!!

Summary:

Rosalie Hale is a single mother trying to escape her past. After moving away and getting a fresh start she thinks she's done just that until she gets a mysterious envelope. Someone knows her secrets and is threatening to reveal them unless she does everything he says. (This story contains adult themes, and may contain rape or other forced sexual situations)


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2530 Read Count: 13393
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2015 Updated: 13 Jun 2015
Reviewer: mgg Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh off to a great start! Can't wait to see what she has to do blindfolded!