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From the moment they met, their eyes, their shared smile, it had always been enough. She’d offered her hand, he’d taken it and they left together, their future was set. They would always be together.
Entry for the Not What It Seems contest.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2681 Read Count: 104
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot
Fanfiction is so fail, but don't worry, before I read this, I buried the website in bricks.
Where do I start? I don't like reviewing here..it's a silly website (sorry TWCS) and barely anyone goes here, but I will review because FFnet is George and it won't be on Twilighted for a while..so I will have to review there another time :P
Anyway.. I loved it, I know it is a stuck record from me..but I did. So much Jalice, and it is very true to their love. His eyes were hers..now that totally makes sense when I read it in the OS. See, I knew that was all it would take for me to understand :)
The silent conversations they had..*jumps and claps*
I was waiting for the illusion to end though. Those nuns..bitches and the doctors need to be beaten themselves. They spread the word of God around as if they believe God would approve of what they were doing. Disgusting people. It's a bit much for them to be slapping, beating and spitting etc, but that's what they were like back then. Like I said, disgusting people.
The ending.. *sigh* It was perfect, and I like that it was an escape for her, even though when she goes back to her reality, things will be worse again :( Jasper will be there, one day, and when she wakes up after her transformation, she won't remember anything of her past. That is a blessing for her after reading this.
Sorry this review is so short :(
Just so you know, the contest has been pushed back another week because of all the problems with fanfiction.net :)
Author's Response:
THIS you call a short review? Are you crazy?
I know, I don't really like the site but...what were my options? *sad face* ...Sorry TWCS.
Now you understand why the title! I loved it when koko told me and immediately thought of that quote in the summary. Jalice and their silent conversations...<3
I don't know why I always imagined it as some religious based mental institution. But I did and it's obvious it had violence everywhere, that's why she lost her mind...I think SM said it?
The diner, I don't know where that came from! One minute I was just writing it and liked it. I am scared about it, though. Everyone knows that scene is like a Tanya now, a lot of people use it. :P
Thanks for the review :)