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Bio:
Jasper is sent as a gift from Mistress Alice. Bella is expecting Jasper but not everything he has planned for her. One giant Lemon! Under 18 not permitted! Vampire Jasper/Human Bella. O/S. AU. Just for fun.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3705 Read Count: 1533
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMFG, I want to receive a house-call from Jasper! Bella is one lucky lady. WOW
;~D
Please pardon the upcoming bad pun, but you must admit that this story is deliciously and sinfully detailed, making it a true pleasure to read.
VERY well written - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
*giggles and send Jasper right over* I'm glad you liked it!
It's so not a pun when it's true ;-) LOL
Thank you very much for the wonderful review!
xoxoxoxoxoxox
M
When Jasper has to babysit Bella while Edward is out of state, he gets a little more than he bargained for.
Twilight and it's affiliates are the sole property of Stephenie Meyer. I'm only having a little fun with them.
Contains mild "lemons" (Sex scenes)
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6734 Read Count: 4972
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Saturday: Part 1
Mmm, YUMMY! Bella is one lucky gal, you know?
;~D
Well done.
=)
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Saturday: Part 2
Umm, the sex scene ended WAY too early it was almost like a "wham bam thank you ma'am" type of thing...disappointing. Don't get me wrong...the situation of her being with both Jasper and Edward together at the same time is hotter than He££, however the way that it ended so abruptly was a total buzz-kill.
=(
Author's Response:
I do agree with you, but a few things to remember: Jasper didn't stop broadcasting the emotions in the room before Bella's orgasm hit, and therefore she got another dose, and Edward's was triggered. Also, vampire or not, Edward was still a virgin who had never jacked off or orgasmed before. I didn't change that part, and I suppose I should have mentioned that. It was only Jasper's influence that caused him to go as far as he did. Because of his past experiences, Jasper could have gone many more times, but when I post the final chapter, that will be explained. My laptop is currently out of commision and I'm using my mom's so it might be longer than anticipated.
Five years have passed since Edward left Bella in the woods. Both Bella and the Cullens' have experienced great tragedy since they last saw each other, but what happens when they meet again, and what is the meaning of the prophecy? Bella OOC. BxJas
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118495 Read Count: 21165
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Numb
Bella sounds like she has a major case of "I just don't give a §hit"s--Bummer.
:C
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Reunion (BPOV)
What a bummer that both Charlie and Renee are dead. Talk about having a run of tragic events plaguing ones life. I'd be depressed too.
Wow, I love how Bella got out of being fired by blackmailing Jimmy with the threat of telling the cops Jimmy's desk drawer contents--WTG Bella.
;-D
Wow, that was intense when Bella tased the creep in the nards. LOL
Curse, huh? I'm curious about the prophecy given to Bella by the carnival psychic.
Good chapter.
:D
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Reunion (JPOV)
From chapter two:
'"Not for lack of trying and I wouldn't call it a miracle. I would call it a curse. That's what the carnival psychic said anyway when she was talking about that god damned prophecy. I don't know if she was for real or not but she at least knew of the supernatural world since she knew what Jake was, but that's neither here nor there," ...'
Regarding the above quote, this chapter repeats it all except for the bit underlined that mentions a prophecy.
.-.-.-.
I love all the additional information given to us in this chapter. It is neat to read of all the comments shared by the others that Bella was not privy to.
OoOoo, so Jasper thinks that Bella is gorgeous--excellent.
What a bummer that Alice lost her life when she attempted to save Edward.
Hmm, the various scars to be seen on Bella are kind of scary to think about the harmful things she had, or may have, done to herself to receive them.
I like how all four vampires actually care about Bella and her well-being.
Well done.
:D
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - I want to be sedated
It was sweet of Jasper to have shown up at Bella's to check up on her.
.-.-.-.
'"Jasper, you are my savior," I said. I took a big bite and moaned. Jasper looked uncomfortable suddenly. "Sorry," I mumbled.'
Hmm, I'm wondering if Bella's moan had turned Jasper on.
;~D
.-.-.-.
What the heck?! It sounds like Bella's scars on her back were due to werewolf claws. If so, why the heck did it happen?
Good chapter--keep up the good work!
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Catching up with more tragedy
Wow, Bella really has had a §hit time overall what with her dating, becoming engaged and then losing Jake due to his imprinting onto someone else; losing both of her parents on Christmas; her abusive boyfriend; depression and drug use to help cope with it all--UGH!
Good chapter.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Movie Night
This was a very tense and emotional chapter; bummer about Bella's belief that she needs to do the various drugs to cope.
Keep up the good work!
:D
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - My life has gone to the wolves
Interesting prophecy there; Bella now has been marked by three creatures of the night, now we need to see if it is true that she will never die. I wonder what this next part from the prophecy means, that Bella 'would bring healing to thousands of souls'.
I got a chuckle out of everyone's reaction to Bella's comments in this chapter about the various creatures that she is acquainted.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Scared to trust you again
Bella's ex, Dave, sounds like a real piece of work, hey?
.-.-.-.
Bummer about how Bella's immortality works, ...
'As much as I want to, I can't die. I get to be immortal but I'm still breakable. I still hurt and I still suffer. I still age. I don't get to be extra beautiful like a vampire. I don't get extra strength or speed or ability. Basically, I get to be immortal but without all the good parts.'
.-.-.-.
I got a kick how of how Bella used the Cullens as an excuse to avoid the men hitting on her--very funny.
=D
Garrett is a good apple, and a good friend to Bella too.
Hmm, I wonder if the heavy footsteps belong to Dave the dumba§§.
Good chapter.
:D
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The friendly neighborhood vampires
Yikes, Bella can sure take a lick'n and keep on tick'n, hey? LOL
Wow, to think that she bleed out, and still came back to life.
This was an intense chapter--well done.
:D
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Hope lost
*::tears in eyes::*
Oh man, poor little baby girl, and poor Bella too... I feel so sad for her at the end of the chapter because of her words that she spoke to Jasper as she was drifting off to sleep.
I can see where the healing part of the prophecy is coming in play with Bella's talk with Jasper.
Good chapter.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Hot lips
*SQUEE*
Yummy, Yummy, Yummy--I loved it when Jasper and Bella were making out--very sexy.
;~D
Great chapter and story--keep up the good work!
:D
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Prophecy
Wow, this was a very informative chapter; it explains so much.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Nightmares and Sleepwalking
I think that it is cool that the bakery shop lady is distantly related to Alice.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - The truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth
Dang, Bella's life has most definitely been crappily tragic, and in general suck big time--poor girl.
:C
Well done.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Reactions
It is great how everyone is becoming closer and expressing their need to have Bella as a part of the family.
=)
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Sitting 'round the campfire
Jasper and Bella had a good talk. I'm sure that it will help them to both heal and lead to their moving onto a new relationship.
Well done.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - The end or the beginning
Mmmm, that sure is a yummy way to start the day by participating in some hot and heavy frottage with Jasper--freaking lucky girl!
;~D
I found it to be highly sexy when Bella asked Jasper to be the one to bite/change her.
Holy §hit! Bella died instantaneously right before Jasper's eyes. It's no wonder that he freaked out; especially as it made him realize that he is in love with her.
Hmm, what is the deal with the wolf coming to Bella's side to mourn her death--cool, but creepy and strange at the same time, you know?
Wow, it is cool that somehow or other Jasper was able to produce tears whether it was due to his having felt grief or happiness when Bella came back from having died momentarily.
o.O
*SQUEE*
YaHoo--They love each other!
.-.-.-.
'As Carlisle started the truck up, I heard Rose say smugly to Emmett, "I win. No video games for a week."'
*::chuckling::*
Sheesh, they had a bet going as to whether or not Jasper and Bella would realize that they were in love--too funny.
.-.-.-.
Great chapter; I loved the limes at the beginning, and the discovery of love between Jasper and Bella.
Well done.
:D
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Mates
*::fanning face while breathing rapidly::*
Mmm-Mmm-Good!
I'm so stoked that they have finally consummated their love for each other, and in such delicious detail--freaking lucky girl!
;~D
VERY well done--keep up the good work!
:D
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - The Denali Clan
This was a fun chapter. I liked the teasing with Emmett, and later Tanya.
The shower sex was good, not very detailed, but it wasn't necessary because it would have slowed down the pace of the chapter.
Well done.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Remembering
Aww, poor Twinkles.
I love how passionate they are together.
;~D
Silly Jasper, Bella is crying happy tears--sheesh, guys just don't get it, hey? LOL
VERY well done.
:D
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Saying goodbye to Forks
Yikes! I got the willies when I read the bit about Mike Newton.
Wow, Alice always knew that Jasper and Bella were meant to be together--neat.
Bella was a sweetheart to have had the wolf sculpture made for the gravesite of the boys (wolves) that died trying to keep Bella safe from Victoria.
Jacob is a marjor jerk. I understand his being upset about the death of his pack members, but the crap that he said to Bella about her relationship with Jasper, and learning of her being not quite human was terrible, you know?
Good chapter.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Leaving on a jet plane
I loved the following bit:
'"I would offer to join the mile high club with you, which I would really, really, really like to do, but I think that Carlisle might dismember me if we had sex in his brand new airplane before he's even had a chance to fly it himself," he said smiling. I burst out laughing.
...
"Emmett and Rose made that mistake once in the front seat of Carlisle's Mercedes. He separated them for a month and they were not allowed to touch each other. I was so miserable being bombarded by their emotions so Alice and I ended up leaving for a trip to Europe just to escape. When we got back I paid them back by making them sad or fatigued every time they were in the mood." We were both laughing pretty hard picturing that.
"Poor Emmett," I said.
"Poor Emmett? Try poor Rosalie. She was miserable, like a cat in heat. If she doesn't get her daily dose of Emmett, she is a cranky b!tch ...'
.-.-.-.
HA! The need for more soundproofing to be installed in their renovated bedroom--I love it!
;~D
Ugh! Tall, dark and creepy Aro has arrived to... check up on the Cullens? Investigate the probabilities of Bella's potential to maybe become a member of his guard or a threat to the Voltari (spelling?)?
How is it that he knew where to find the Cullens?
Good chapter.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Don't play with your food
I cackled when Bella was insulting Aro and made referrences to the likelyhood of his penis being small--too funny.
:P
Bummer that Jasper was forced to change Bella right then and there due to Aro demanding it.
Wow, I like the description of Bella's new bod due to the change.
Good chapter.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - A rude awakening
Hmm, it is like Bella was experiencing a night-terror when she woke from the change.
I wonder if Bella is some sort of psychic/emotional vampire that feeds off of negative memories/emotions that taint one's soul/aura thus cleansing the person/vampire that she got them from. Now all she has to do is figure out how to expell the pain associated from what she siphons off of the person/vampire.
Well done.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - The trials and tribulations of a newborn vampire
F.Y.I.--I found an error (at least I think that it is one) that needs to be corrected:
'It was like my gift allowed Jasper more control of us [I believe that "us" ought to be "his".], and his gift gave me more range of mine.'
.-.-.-.
I love how passionate they are especially after hunting.
;~D
OoOoo, they sometimes project the lust they feel for each other while in the throes of passion causing the others to also jump their mates bones... where can I sign up? LOL
;~D
Well, Jasper's cleansing/healing went a lot smoother than Rose's--thank the gods.
:D
It was so sweet of Rose and Emmett to have gotten an animal for Bella to feed upon due to her weakness from healing Jasper.
Well done.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Warnings
Bummer about Aro being a paranoid moron and deciding to come after the Cullen family.
Good chapter.
=)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Training
I love how Bella and Jasper get turned on and jump each others bones after, and occasionally during combat training.
;~D
Hmm, Bella can use her ability as a weapon--interesting.
Well done.
=)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - It's Time
OoOoo, this is a very exciting chapter with the news that the wolves will be playing a part in the upcoming battle--I'm stoked.
=D
Aww, those poor guys in New York with their furry little problem (can you tell that I read Harry Potter fanfiction? LOL) don't deserve to have the Italian Vampire Mafia, aka the Volturi (LOL), coming to slaughter them. You know?
I'm looking forward to the drama that will occur when they inform the Washington wolves of the §hit storm that is headed their way.
Great story.
=)
.-.-.-.
F.Y.I.--error found:
'"... Aro's precious guard has come here to say he has deflected ["deflected" should be "defected"]. I mean no disrespect," ...'
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Cinnamon and Caramel Rolls
Beth is a trip. LOL I love the advice/words of wisdom that she gives to Jasper and Bella about the wolves and their coming confrontation with "the evil ones".
Bella's true werewolf "friend" took the news of her being a vampire well; the meeting/news update of the Volturi threat didn't go so badly either.
;-)
Aww man, just as one's heartrate picks up due to Jasper and Bella starting to get it on to join the Mile High Club, they (of course) get interrupted. Phooey!
;p
YA-HOO! The true werewolves are going help out in the fight against the Volturi, AND they brought friends! Holy Cow--32 true werewolves... how cool is that?!
=D
Great chapter; the ending, with the 32 werewolves showing up made for an exciting close. Keep up the good work!
:D
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Hungry Like the Wolf
I think that it is so cool how the tribal medicine woman told Jacob almost exactly the same thing that Beth told Bella and Jasper.
I loved how confused Jacob was when he and his back-up were presented with breakfast from Bella and company--too funny.
It was great of Henry to inform the Washington wolves of the coming battle, to stand up for Bella and warn them to keep their nasty comments about her to themselves.
Woo-Hoo! WTG Bella for getting Jacob to see reason and drop his defensiveness and ask her to tell him more of the crap coming their way.
Great chapter and story--keep up the good work!
=)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Brothers in Arms
It was good of Demetri to have given everybody a run down and very detailed description of the appearance and abilities of the various, most dangerous Volturi guards.
.-.-.-.
I'm glad that Bella told Jacob of the he££ that she went through (with her "normal" human boyfriend and child-bearing/motherhood experience) after her time with Jacob (to give him a better understanding of how she is more comfortable and accepting of being vampire, and associating with them).
Aww, Bella is a true friend/sister to have healed both Jacob and Paul. It was both freaky and cool how she was able to not just feel, but also view, some of the anguish that Paul lived through during his childhood; at least now the hugh chip on his shoulder has been knocked off, hey? LOL
I wonder how much of Bella's being affected by Paul's drained darkness had to do with the depth of his/quantity of his sorrowful/painful past, and how much from being thrown and possibly too distracted to have disposed of it (the darkness) like she did when healing Jacob.
.-.-.-.
I find the following to be brilliant and cool. :D
'... I could see who was worth saving and who was lost to the darkness. I could feel who could be healed and who lived for the darkness inside of them. I could sense many things, and the most surprising to me was Marcus. I yearned to help him, but I wasn't sure how to go about that.'
[Sorry about my having used BOLD in the above and previous reviews. I have done so because for some odd reason the UNDERLINEing (I know, I'm suppose to drop the "e" when adding "ing". UGH! LOL) option won't work for me... go figure.]
.-.-.-.
Great chapter, very exciting and emotional too--well done.
=)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - It all comes tumbling down
This was an exciting and beautifully emotional chapter.
I thought that it was fantastic when Bella healed both Marcus and herself, then turned around to use their darkness to punish Aro and Caius for the atrocities that they have commited against their brother, and a multitude of various other species, vampires included. She was awesome; like a vengeful goddess of righteousness and mother/protector/guardian of all living things (an earth goddess?).
Bella's impassioned speech at the end was beautifully worded.
Well done--keep up the good work!
:D
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Aftermath
Great idea for the new government having all the species involved.
I got a kick out of Jacob being the one to call the five vampires to drain the creepizoids (abusive husband and friends).
Aww, I'm glad that Jasper and Bella got married with all their new and old supernatural friends of all species in attendance.
This was a beautifully written story with its drama, angst, exciting action, reunion of friends and family, the making of new friends, discovery of love, and pulse racing passion.
Well done!
:D
Bella lusts after the hunky man who takes care of her pool. Perhaps if she's lucky, she can persuade him to perform a bit more than just pool maintenance; AH JazzyBells.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4288 Read Count: 523
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy §hite Lady! If this is your FIRST lemon, then you are on the roll to gaining fans for writing fantastically and deliciously detailed lemons guaranteed to cause major squirminess in one's seat, and racing pulserates for sure.
;~D
Brilliantly written--I love it--keep up the good work!
:D
Every year Jasper always gives Bella one amazing, over-the-top gift. This year it's Bella's turn to top Jasper. What could be better than a boxer clad Edward? E/J slashy goodness.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5546 Read Count: 1148
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sexy and hot as He££ dominant Jasper being given submissive Edward as a Christmas gift was quite thoughtful of his loving wife, Bella.
I love how deliciously detailed and well thought out the choreography of their being together was presented making for one freaking hot sex-fest.
VERY well done--keep up the good work.
;~D
Author's Response:
Thank you so, so much for your lovely review. :-D It made me grin all day. I can be quite the detail h00r at times. It's one of my obsessions in writing. o.O Which can be both a good and a bad thing. That was my first slash (and only so far) but who knows what'll come up next hehehe. I just posted Baking Brownies over here today. I figure if you like my other two one shots, you'll most likely like this too! Thank you again!
-LBK
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master
Woah! Very intense emotionally and sexually too, with great details and well thought out back history.
Well done. =)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: The First Six Months
Sheesh, even feral domestic cats have better parenting instincts than Tanya - those poor kids.
I'm glad that they (the kids) have Edward and Bella available to them for love, support, advice, and such - lucky kids.
Great story, plot, character development, dialog, interactions, and descriptions of steamy/sexy playtime between Bella and Edward. ;~D
VERY well done. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading!! Beth
Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.
***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38993
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow, talk about your streak of awful happenings (I really didn't want to use the term "series of unfortunate events", but still), sheesh.
Jasper is a great guy to have kept an eye out on her that first night.
Well done--keep up the good work!
=)
Author's Response:
Yeah, but don't worry, life will probably get better with Jasper around, lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I love the reaction that Jasper and Bella have to the other when they touch; it is so cool.
:D
Author's Response:
Thanks! I played off of the electric feeling B and Edward had in the books but made it suited to Bella and Jasper. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I like the peace that comes upon Jasper and Bella when they are in physical contact.
I'm glad that Bella chose Jasper as worthy enough to have shared the story of her tragic history since her 18th birthday.
Jasper is a sweetheart to have emphasized to Bella that the actions that she had to take to survive doesn't make her a bad person or a slut.
I'm really enjoying this story so far.
Well done--keep up the good work!
=)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely reviews, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
The newest Malfoy may not be in Slytherin but he still hates Ron Weasley. Scorpius is nothing like his father, however. When he finds something he wants, he takes it. He's got his sights set on Hermione Weasley and she won't escape!
Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Scorpius Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46467 Read Count: 18224
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Lucky lady.
;-D
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Great srory. I'm enjoying how it is developing. Love the sensual yumminess between Hermione and her two stud-muffins.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Regarding the ungrateful sods that read your story and left awful comments... ignore them. Write what works for you and to He££ with those that, if they can't or won't say anything nice, have yet to learn to keep their comments to themselves.
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Very lucky lady.
;-D
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Lovely story.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?
The Prophecy
The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.
OOC for some characters
Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.
Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One
Up Now: Part Two; True North
Character List for Part One & Two
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: C1 Prologue
Cool first chapter. =)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: C2 Fates Collided
Very exciting chapter - well done.
=)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: C3 10 Years Later
Oooo, very exciting and reminiscent of Xena: Warrior Princess television series (which I love, LOL).
I hope that Jasper will be Bella's love interest/soul-mate. ;~D
Well done - keep up the good work!
=)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: C4 Victoria's Rath
Woah, Victoria is a vicious cow (mad cow?) that needs to be culled from the herd. LOL :p
I wonder who it is that was shown in the crystal ball, chained within the cave.
Well done.
=)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: C5 Finding Jasper
Hmm, I'm a bit confused... in chapter one we are told that Isabella has blue-green eyes, but in this chapter (five) she is said to have eyes that are a soft brown, flecked with gold... which is it? blue or brown? I'm just curious because all the photos show her with the scarily vivid blue type eyes, you know?
Interesting chapter, where has her talking cat been hiding out during her getting his (Jasper) pants off, and then later watching a movie together?
Fun to read story - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Hi, thanks for your review, as to your question about Bella's eye colour, it is explained in late chapters but i will clarify for you, Bella is wearing a glamour to hide her true identy from Victoria and her spies. I made her look more like Twilight's Bella while under the glamour spell and she is more my own while in Forks (the blue eyes, black hair ect..)
Mason has been hiding in the room that the family has given to Bella (or Ness as they think she is called) because although they are okay with having a mountain lion in there home, he is still a mountain lion lol :)
Hope you keep on reading and sending thru the reviews and that this has clarified any questions you might have, if you have any more please ask away :)
Next update next week :) x Isobel
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: C6 The Family Returns
Aw, it was so sweet when Jasper hugged Bella to him when he was still partially asleep upon his working on waking up.
=)
People can't eat people alive, and frozen men don't exist. Bella's secret knowledge of vampires is inadvertently brought to surface when she & her friends are all thrown in the path of fate.
Banner by the awesome LunarEclipse1
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90817 Read Count: 20308
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
OMG, this chapter was a blast to read. It was funny, dramatic, and heartwarming too - I love it!
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Welcome and I'm glad you enjoyed it. XOXO
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Great pairings, humor, dialog, and storyline.
Well written - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
So, you got to hear from Angela, Carlisle, Jessica, and Peter, and in the process got some important background information. You were also able to see what a tight knit group the four girls were. They are very protective of each other and they're there for each other no matter what. Alice, Edward, Esme, and Rose also made an appearance. I can tell you now that Edward is definitely not who he presents himself as, and neither is Alice. You'll hear from them again soon as we start delving into the plot.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow, a horned-dog bump and grind love fest courtesy of the sexy vamps and their newly found liquored-up human mates... it is no wonder that Bella, the virgin, hightailed it out of there. LOL
;~D
Great story, I love everything about it!
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
You have officially heard from both Jasper and Bella. Unfortunately for Jasper, he's going to have a harder time than everyone else convincing Bella to give him a chance. First of all, she's not drunk like her three friends. She was instantly on alert as soon as she ran into the Cullens. Second, her questions and fears are all valid. She cares about her friends and these are full blown red-eyed vampires. Remember that during her previous encounter with vampires in Forks, she was taught that red eyes are bad and golden eyes are good. She also doesn't know much about mating either. At this point, I'm also going to tell you that she has no idea that wolves exist in La Push.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bella and the girls are a blast in their nasty sense of humor in their backhanded complimentary pitcher of beer for the ex-boyfriends from Forks.
I'm looking forward to learning more about the past enperiences of Bella in a Steak House.
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
In chapter 4, you were able to see that Bella had true reasons for not jumping in to trust Jasper. After two boyfriends that were ingrates, it's no surprise that she had her guard up. Jasper, for his part was wrong to sneak into Bella's hotel room uninvited and thrust his attentions on her. We'll give him a bit of a break for realizing, admitting to, and apologizing to Bella for the way he acted though. That paved the way for Bella to open up to him about her own demons and vice versa.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
LMAO, poor Emmett in his brain numbing job due to the lowered IQ of the clientele that frequent his work place.
Jasper is a lucky sod to have so much in common with Bella that he is a happy camper with both their work place and the college courses that they are able to attend together.
I truly am enjoying reading this story. It is very well written. Keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
OMG, I was laughing my a§§ off about Peter's costume - too f'ing funny.
Edward is a sick, twisted and self-centered piece of crap in his renewed interest in Bella.
Bummer about Jasper and Bella's, not to mention Peter and Lauren, and Emmett and Jessica's, playtime was interrupted by the arrival of the harbingers of bad news, both old and new.
;~D
I enjoy your take on the characters of Victoria and Laurent.
Great story - well written - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
You witnessed Jasper wielding his power at both the Halloween party, and then at home. If he puts his mind to it and uses it properly, Jasper is capable of emotionally enslaving people, as Peter noted. You might have noticed that Bella was seemingly unaffected by Jasper's gift, she wasn't unaffected, she was able to keep her head together because she knew that Jasper was using his gift.
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I was cackling up a storm about the stuff Charlie was saying and doing when he was drunk in Vegas; especially when he was in possession of the LVPD police car that he stole. I thought that it was great that he took it back to the police station, and the note that he left in it. I'm still wondering about their having placed the vehicle upon the roof of the building.
I love this story!
Well written - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Charlie went out with a bang, fulfilling everything he could on his bucket list. I wrote a more playful Charlie because he's a newlywed and he's still a relatively young forty-two. He and Laurent will become good friends. Laurent is delighted to have someone his age around.
Author's Response:
Charlie went out with a bang, fulfilling everything he could on his bucket list. I wrote a more playful Charlie because he's a newlywed and he's still a relatively young forty-two. He and Laurent will become good friends. Laurent is delighted to have someone his age around. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OMFG, I was LMAO when I read how Peter proposed to Lauren.
;~D
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'... Hello Kitty wedding gown with the matching pink bridesmaid dresses...' Ewww! Between Emmett's choice of tuxes and Jessica's choice for the dresses... I was both cringing and laughing.
.-.-.
Mmmm, Bella is one lucky gal to have Jasper be her first lover, and the fact that he marked her as his mate is hotter than He££, you know?
;~D
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Good God Gertie! The interaction between Edward and Alice was so... twisted and disturbing that it gave me the willies.
.-.-.
Well done - great story - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I was both horrified and yet twistedly amused about Edward's OCD impaired rape attempt of Bella. Thank the gods that all of the friendly vamps guys showed up in time to prevent Doucheward from completing his intentions for Bella.
.-.-.
I got a kick out of Lauren freaking out at the idea that she had unknowningly had sex with two of the wolves.
I enjoyed how things went down between the Charlie, the other vamps, Billy, Harry, and the wolves, in their negotiations for reworking the treaty.
It was heartwarming that Billy wanted to include some fishing areas into the treaty so that he could get together with Charlie sometime to drown some worms.
It was fantastic that they even offered to provide protection for Jessica and Emmett's wedding.
.-.-.
'"You look like a southern belle, Jess," my father said. "Though I'm not sure where the cat comes in."
"Oh, stop, honey," my mother chastised. "Jess has always been a Hello Kitty fan. I didn't realize that she was quite so obsessed, but this is her wedding."'
The bit above was just to funny.
.-.-.
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I got a kick out of the last name of the sales manager, Cheatum (cheat them), and the first and last name of the fleet sales manager, Richard Stroker, aka Dick Stroker - too funny.
Geez, the boys are completely clueless when it comes to protecting themselves from being shafted by salespeople. Strange when you think of how they were able to prevent it during the divorce process, but put a pretty and new truck in front of them and they go all stupid (similar reaction that menfolk have when viewing breasts). LOL
Oh man, talk about your over enthusiastic welcomes - poor Lauren and Jessica, and poor Bella for having suffered such a panic attack due to witnessing the events.
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
*::sporting a huge grin::*
This chapter was great with Bella's last moments; especially Jasper's choice of timing for turning her.
;~D
I thought that it was brilliant how Bella was so very calm, cool, and collected upon her awakening.
Jasper is indeed a lucky sod in that he is able to have sex with his mate from the get go of her awakening, whereas Peter and Emmett have to wait a few months for their significant others to get control of themselves - too funny that. LOL
:P
Great chapter and story - well written - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I was not expecting Bella to be so persnickity about her feeding from criminals, but when you think about it, yeah it would be disgusting to suck on a stinking and dirty neck.
Wow, Bella was quite the Super Vamp Tranq Gal there, huh? LOL
Holy cow, talk about your uber fancy ancestoral homes, hey? LOL
Mmm, I loved Jasper teaching technique for helping Bella to learn how to control her empathic ability - very sexy.
;~D
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'"... And I'm telling you this much now, I'm not living in the same house as your father. Just his mere presence is a cockblocker."'
Tell me about it, try living next door to your mother-in-law for nine years... it puts a damper on your love life and a HUGH strain on your marriage. I shouldn't have let my hubby talk me into it all those years ago. Oh well, a learning experience, hey? UGH! LOL
.-.-.
Hmm, it almost sounds like Charlie has the power of persuasion to compel others to give into his desires. Now that would be a handy power to have, wouldn't you think? LOL
;~D
Great story, I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
OMG, they are going to start a revolution and bring down the Volturi government? Wow.
Poor Tanya for not understanding the principle of how to eat something as simple as a hotdog. I thought that they would have had a TV, DVD player, satellite system for entertainment, and that she would have seen a movie at some point within the last 20 years or so in which somebody ate a hotdog. I'm a bit disappointed that she has not been keeping up with modern technology as to have witnessed such an everyday activity on the boob tube. J/K It was funnier than §hit when she was all ready to masturbate with the hot dog, after having eaten the bun. Sheesh, stunted vocabulary to not know the difference between masticate and masturbate. It must be that her blond roots are showing. LOL J/K
:p
I was rather impressed with how Charlie handled the whole situation with Alistair. He was very mature, logical, intelligent, authoritative, commanding, leader-like, etc.
This is a great story; I love everything about it... the humor, drama, sense of suspense, passion, the characters involved, the characters and how they have developed in personality, their interactions in action and dialog, and the plot thus far. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next and also to reading additional chapters.
Well done - keep up the good work.
=)
Author's Response:
Tanya is...hmm...well, she's a horny lady and she has a one track mind. You'll see what I mean when I post the next chapter.
As for Charlie, I doubt that he became a police chief by sheer luck, there had to be something p in the noggin.
Glad you're enjoying the chapter. XOXO
Being a double agent is a stressful job and Hermione's worried about Professor Snape. But what is he doing all alone in an empty room with the Mirror of Erised?
Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8430 Read Count: 3758
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
*::fans face::*
Oh my!
;-D
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Okay... Snape saying the name 'McClaggen' was not something that was to be expected in such a situation. LOL
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I volunteer to be Hermione's stunt double for her sex scenes with Professor Snape.
;-D
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Loved the details of Hermione and Prof. Snape's exploration of each other's body.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Only the rarest of loves are eternal. A human, Eric/Sookie, M rated, one-shot.
Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, All Human
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2954 Read Count: 164
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Beautifully written and sad - well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
A story of our favorite couple that takes off from the night on
Sookie's porch when Eric forces Bill to reveal his duplicity to Sookie.
Begins cannon and then becomes AU, with characters being slightly OOC. Rated
NC-17 for language and lemons.
Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72026 Read Count: 12414
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hmm, I'm sensing some hostility from Sookie (LOL)... poor Eric for being the messenger of such mechanizations against her.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Godric is sidetracked from his errand to Seattle, which not only changes his destiny, but the destiny of a lost girl, which will set them both free.
Disclosure: Twilight is owned by Stephanie Myers and True Blood is owned by HBO, Allan Ball and Charlaine Harris. I own nothing. Well nothing more than the dream which spawned this.
Banner is Courtesy of MissRon80. Thanks so much for the awesome Banner!
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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Godric/Bella
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Set You Free Trilogy
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 146451 Read Count: 58501
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Set You Free
Cool first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Gentle Implosions
I'm stoked by the depth of feeling displayed by BOTH Eric and Godric for Bella; especially their outrage over the details of her childhood, or the lack thethereof.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Hush Now, Don’t You Cry
All the things thrown his way, I'd say that Charlie is handling it rather well.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Be My Baby
Freaking awesome and exciting too - I love it.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
.-.-. error found needing correction:
'"... a markedly compassionate nature to latent physic powers is enhanced ...."' ["physic" ought to be "psychic"]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: I Wanna Call You Mine
Very exciting - love the drama and sense of anticipation.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
.-.-. errors found needing correction:
1) 'Grimacing as he takes in the dismissal ... Charlie haltingly beings, ...' ["beings" ought to be "begins"];
2) '"... but she is your live in maid. ...."' ["live in" ought to be "live-in"];
3) '"Instead she has had to learn from a young age to bear the weight of an adults worries."' ["an adults worries" ought to be "an adult's worries"]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Strength To Go
I'm wondering about the identity of the person or persons responsible for having gathered and posted the various info on Bella and the La Push pack.
.-.-.
'Then her face hardens and she goes back down to Chief Sawn, “Your turn. ... Be afraid.” And she snaps the gloves on her hands.'
*::snickers::*
Be afraid, Charlie, Dr. Ludwig is geared up to give you a THOROUGH examination... so turn your head, cough, and cry for your mommy. I know, I took the above abbreviated quote somewhat out of context, but it seemed too funny to pass up, you know? LOL
;~D
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With the intensity of Eric's reaction to all things Bella, I'm wondering if he is also her mate. If so, then Bella is one lucky girl!
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 10 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: But I’m Yours
Wow, that was an intense and passionate recital of Godric's personal history, not to mention his plea for Bella to accept him and his devotion for her.
OMFG, I didn't catch it the first time around, but it appears that Godric's maker is none other than the Ancient Pythoness; if I'm correct, then that is too fricken cool!
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
It's wonderful that Seth Clearwater has finally found his imprint. Now, he just has to convince her to stay put in La Push long enough so he can tell her. Fortunately, he has help from a most unlikely source.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Seth
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27436 Read Count: 3442
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Great story. I loved it that Bella and Seth had twin boys, and that Peter has been teaching them various things... LOL.
;-)
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I loved that they played doctor.
;-D
I got a kick out of Seth's reaction to Bella and her older lady friends' book exchange transactions.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow, that was quite the benefit package that Seth was offered.
LOL, I enjoyed Seth's way of becoming engaged to be married to Bella, and her acceptance.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I was chuckling when I read Bella acting as excited as a kid when she asked Seth if she could see his puppy (wolf form). I loved how things progressed from there.
;-D
What is a "booper" car?
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I was chuckling when I read Bella acting as excited as a kid when she asked Seth if she could see his puppy (wolf form). I loved how things progressed from there.
;-D
What is a "booper" car?
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I would be freaked out by touchy-feely strangers invading my personal space too - poor Bella. ;-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
*cackling* OMG, "Big and Bouncy" - too funny. I love it!
Great first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
*cackling* OMG, "Big and Bouncy" - too funny. I love it!
Great first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Love can be found in the most unusual places—a zombie apocalypse certainly counts as one. Join Caius Volturi as he conquers zombies and falls in love with the gun-wielding girl of his dreams.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15609 Read Count: 6031
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
*great big grin and chuckling up a storm*
I love your writing!
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Aww, Caius is so sweet to Bella.
Charlie is too effing cool!
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Edtard and his scrawny mate being zombies is too funny.
I loved it that Bella was the one to give the order for Carlisle to be executed.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
*cackling* OMG, I love this story - too effing funny!
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I love this story; it's a blast!
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
'"... Frequent hand washing is..." Thud.
Esme and Bella stared at the screen in horror as the newscaster apparently collapsed from the flu. In the background, they could hear voices in the TV studio stating, "Shit, we lost another one. ...."'
- 'Looks like we're gonna need another Timmy.'
LOL
;-p
Love the humor!
Well done - keep up thew gooid work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Yay! Peter is there... I love how he is such a smarta$$.
;-p
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Wow, intense first chapter.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Charlie is great - love him.
;-)
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
I love that they are going to become a vampire/wolf version of the Brady Bunch.
LOL
;-)
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Baseball bat wielding vampires... cool.
;-D
Great story.
Well done - keep up the good work.
:-)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue
Great story, a true pleasure to read.
Thank you for taking the time to write and share your story/ies with us.
:-)