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Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105150
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I missed you!

NICE!!! I love it! I wonder if it was Leah and Jake that trained her! I can't wait to read about her dream and to see if I am right :)



Author's Response:

You definately want to pay attention to her dreams, they are a big part of unfolding the story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story!

Summary:

 

Bella, Rose and Alice are all off at Northwestern going to med school.  They are venturing out of the dorm life into a newly build buidling of condos.  Bella is stalked by someone. Who is doing it and how much will they get away with before they are caught? Can a new friend help her overcome the violent things happening to her? Can she ever trust a man?  Can she survive this or will it break her? Story contains violent actions, stalking, abuse, rape, agnst, and is not geared for everyone.  If these things bother you please pass over those items. *warning will be given* AH/

 

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Thank you so much for reading my story, I look forward to your reviews.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113884 Read Count: 55095
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Weekend Away

love it!! Stalker is sooooooo creepy!! I can't wait to see who he really is!!



Author's Response:

Hey Sarahlynn~

Thanks for the story love and the review!  The stalker gets much creepier!!  Got any guesses as to who the stalker is????

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Northwestern Memorial

wow this is kinda creepy!! I like it! can't wait to read more!! and see some more B/E interaction!



Author's Response:

Another chapter will post soon so keep an eye out for it!  Thanks for the story love I am greatful to hear from you all.  As for B&E well when they start they go FAST FAST FAST kinda liek the book where they know almost right away they belong together.  Well so be it!  Who can really mess with that?  Not me in this story.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Back on Campus

Wow crazy! great story! I can't wait to read more and hear more from the stalker so I can figure out who he is! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading my story and thanks for the story love.   Another update will come out soon.  The stalker is really creepy....

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Fight and Make Up

so sweet I love it!!! I can't wait to read what the stalker is thinking!! man what is going to happen when he finds out B&E made love!!! ooooo I can't wait!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the story love and yes when the stalker see's B&E together things will heat right up that is a garuntee.  Right now he is already madder then a wet hen because he does not know where she is and he can not find her.  Things escalate fast from here.  That was my first lemon and so far no one has complained about it being lame or anything so hopefully that means it was good.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: A Close Encounter

love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Errr... I wish I could figure this stalker out!! Love it that B&E are kindaish turning into sex addicts! lol



Author's Response:

Yeah I had fun writing those lemons I am so new to that part I never write anything like that before, if you can't tell anyway!  Thanks for the story love and for reading my story!  see ya soon it gets hairy quick from here!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Cornered and Grabbed

AHHHHH!!! You are leaving us there?!?! curse it!! lol!! I can't wait to read the next one and hopefully we will learn who the stalker is!! I hope they get to bella in time!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review and yes I had to do the cliff thingy I have been updating so often I just HAD to do it! 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing and thank so much for the story love!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Waking Up

holy shit!! who is it!?!? I think it is James... he repulsed her that is the only one I can think of... stay strong Bella!! I can't wait for the next chap! I am hooked to this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the totally awesom review.  It is NOT james for sure 100% as well it is not mike.  Thank you so much for the story love and review.  The next chapter will post sometime soon next few days or so!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Find Me Please

Poor Bella that is horrible!! I hope they find her soon!! what a fucking asshat!! ugh!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the story love and thank you for reading and reviewing.  I love that you call him an asshat that is funny.  The next chapter is much lighter and happier, and will be out by Wed.

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Saving a Swan

I am so glad that they got to her in time! She has a lot of healing to do! They all do! But E&B will do it together! I feel so bad for them! I can't wait to see who the stalker is!! it is killing me!! lol Can't wait for the next chap!!



Author's Response:

you will find out who he is in chapter 19 so no worries it will come soon!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: A Maelstrom of Crazy

wow what a crazy fuck! holy shit! Good for Bella! I am glad she said all of that and of course waited till it was all out! I can't wait for the next chap!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing and I am glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Emotional Vortex

great chap!!! I am thinking she is prego!! :) I am just hoping that it is not Alec's! that would be horrible!

Loved that Ben and Tia were from Cedar Rapids :) I am in Iowa City! Go Hawks!! :)



Author's Response:

Sarah~

I live in Independence, Ia.  :)

GO HAWKS!

Yeah had to bring in a little close to home flare!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

 

Kasi~

 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Appointments and Plans

dun dun dun!! Alec is one crazy fucker!!! I knew he would not be gone for long!!



Author's Response: Thank you reading and reviewing as always! I am greatful for your liking my story enough to follow it and continue to read it! I am sending you the chapter 28 teaser via the contact button on your profile. I sent it out now so check your spam. Thank you so much for reviewing they make me so happy! Kasi~

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Friday’s Festivities

ooooo who is at the door!?!?! I hope it is Rene... I wonder if it is Alec... I can't help but think that he is going to get her and then think the baby is his...



Author's Response:

Sarahlynn~

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  I have sent the teaser to you via the contact me button on your profile here.  The door is not a bad thing this time, who is to say next will not be bad though!

Kasi~

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Orientation Week

I am guessing baby stuff is in the box along with a note... OHHHHH I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Sarahlynn81~

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I will not tell you but since I am posting the chapter either LATE LATE tonight or tomorrow I will post your teaser here instead of mailing it.  I will hope to hear from you SOON on what you think of chapter 37!!!

Kasi~

Chapter 37 snippet

 

EPOV

 

“Bella, do you remember the box that came for you a week ago?” I asked.

“Oh, shoot.  Yeah, I forgot all about it.  Go get it sweetie and we can open it,” she said.

“Bella, I noticed the box the other night and I got an uneasy feeling about it.  I called Emmett and Jake, they agreed with me.  We actually had the bomb squad come and they took the box to check it to be sure it was not some sort of explosive.”

“Edward, was it a bomb?” Bella asked, clearly frightened.

“No it was not a bomb, my love.  It was from Alec.”

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: About That Box

I figured it was something for the baby... Alec is beyond fucked up!! God I hope he doesn't get anywhere near Bella! But I have a feeling he will some how!!! I can't wait to find out more about Randall... who is he??? Why is he helping Alec??? I am wondering if he has a grudge against Edward.....hmmmm.... can't wait to find out!!! :)



Author's Response:

He is a nut case I agree!  He is a few eggs short of a dozen, for sure!  I am sending you the preview of the next chapter to you via contact button on your profile!  Thank you for always reading and reviewing!  I really am greatful for the story love I get from the few really loyal readers I have.  Thank you very much!  Randall's identity comes out in chapter 42 or 43 as to how he knows Alec.  Randall is just a bad cop, period.

Kasi~

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: Birthday Text

TWINS! Wowsa! I am wondering if one is Edward's and one is Alec's? I kinda hope not but that would be an interesting twist!



Author's Response:

Sarah~ that is too much of a days of our lives scene for me...lol  but a funny thought.  I really battled in my desision for alec vs edward mainly because pieces of this story reflect real life for me.  All thought thigns are different somethings were dead on.  I am excited that I almost have th book finished now.  I am really excited to get working  my next project and to see the reviews for this crazy story's final chapters.  Next chapter or 2 will post fast.  sending you the preview of 39 same as I normally do.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Kasi

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Life and Death

Bad ass Bella!!! Way to go!!  I am glad that bastard is dead!!! and that they cought the dirty cop!! I hope Sam is ok!!! and I hope both of the babies are Edward's!!! Great chap! can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Sarahlynn81~

thank you so much for reading and reviewing....all your questions will be answered soon I pormise...one more reg chapt then the epi!

Kasi

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61968
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love it!! Just found this story today!! can't wait to read the next chap!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it :-)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Damn Em and his big mouth! I really don't think Edward will care that she hasn't told him yet... I mean come on they have only been together for a week! He souldn't over react. I am really hoping he doesn't just let her tell her story and be there for her! I am also thinking that B&E may adopt that little boy they were talking about earlier later in the story :)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh that is such a horrible story! I know that Edward will not over react he loves her too much! James is a piece of shit!

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

what a great man to stand by her and love her :) I knew he would take it well :) Can't wait for next update!

The Cut by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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Re-write Of Not So Average.

Isabella Swans' Life at home is no fairytale. She struggles with her weight, depression and family. Eager to get away from her verbally abusive mother and start afresh, Isabella journeys to her first year of college, where she experiences hardships, friendships and Greeks. After seeing her first  Greek step-show and eyeing the most popular guy on campus Edward Cullen for the first time, the burn inside her to belong boils to the surface, but there is one obsticle in her way. Rosalie Hale...

Warning: This fic contains: Hazing, Bulimia, Sex,teasing, child abuse, Negligance, suicidal thoughts,OOC, and angst.

All actions that occur in this story are purely fictional.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13368 Read Count: 3341
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Nov 2011
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Somewhere I can Be Myself.

wow this is very diff from the other story! I can't wait to see where this leds Bella! Both of these Chaps have made me cry! Poor Bella :( I hope when she meets Edward he is an amazing man in her life not a asshole!