Reviews by dreamstar1995
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

please update soon!!!!!  and please update To The Extreme soon please.

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161855
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I loved that story.  You showed Bella's road to recovery perfectly.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29922
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter.  Please update soon!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Please update soon.

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Please update soon.  You're killing me with these long waits.  But I loved the chapter.  I can't wait to see what Esme has to say.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review :0) Sorry about the waits, it's just real life drama and writer's block that cause them. I wish I was able to update everyday like some writers sadly I can't. To tide you over here is your chapter 11 teaser!!

 

 

"Who's babysitting me?" I'm so proud of Seth, so many boys his age would complain that they were too old for a babysitter.

"That would be us." I looked behind Esme to see Big Daddy C and Jasper, who I've yet to come up with another nick name for. Not really a serial killer dude just doesn't have the same ring to it. "If it is alright with your sister, Jasper is filming a bike stunt today for a movie and we'd thought you might like to go to the set?"

"Can I Bella?" The excitement in Seth's eyes made it impossible for me to say no.

"Stay close to Carlisle. Avoid the Hollywood crowd. I swear if you come home with SluttyCyrus's  phone number I'm disowning you." I joke and he rolls his eyes.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Please update quickly.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27


AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!  Update soon please.  This story is so good and well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Update soon please!  This story so deserves those awards.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Your story was AMAZING or as my friends says AMAZEBALLS!!!!  Love it and I love the way you ended it.  Your are an amazing writer.



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2022
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Update soon please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Already working on ch. 10. =)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Hey dreamstar1995!

I'm working on the chapter still. I really wanted to post it tomorrow, but I don't think I will have it ready by then. Holidays have kept me crazy busy, but I will do my best to update this week.

Thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268895
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Update soon.  Please!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!  This story is amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please update soon.  I can't wait to see how Bella handles this.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Rain by Patch0341 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

For former Marine Eric Martin, life was a series of was just a lonely repetition of mundane moments. One rainy day at the bus stop is all it will take to change his life irrevocably.

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Beauty in Rain

By Kittyisme0341

Picture a priceless relic,

All covered in muck and decay.

It's beautiful splendor is hidden

All covered in drab shades of gray.

 

The Rain comes along and caresses it.

And slowly removes a lot of

The dirt that completely covered it.

And brings back the colors of love.

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Kissing in the rain


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14215 Read Count: 187
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2010
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I feel so bad about their pasts.  Hopefully Rain gets to redeem herself with Eric and Eric with Rain.

Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187879
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Didyme & Marcus' Announcements and Ben & Angela's Wedding

I would like to see some more Edward and Bella loving and some Edward, Bella, and Addy interaction.



Author's Response:

Well, I will always sprinkle a little lovin' here and there and I will try to give Addy some more chapter time.  Thanks for the review!

The Pull by Janiedoe12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 313]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella left Edward and everything she knew in Forks ten years ago. She knew he would never leave the MC, but circumstances drew her far away to accomplish her dreams. When Bella returns under somewhat mysterious circumstances, Forks will never be the same. AH. Tattward/Bikerward. Think Twilight meets Sons of Anarchy.

 

**Rec'd on The Lemonade Stand- go check out more recs from the TLS ladies!!**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91763 Read Count: 60928
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Dec 2015
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I feel like Bella would have been celibate for the whole 10 years.  She doesn't trust people easily and the premed and med student coursework takes 99% of a students time so she probably didn't ever have another boyfriend.  I want to see Edward find that out : D

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Please update soon!!  I love this story and want to read more.

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23

Please update...*gets down on hands and knees and begs with tears*. I am a pre med student and wonderful stories like this are how I relax....and pre med students NEED to relax!  Please don't let a month go by!

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21

Please update soon...at least to let us see Edward take care of Kohn or Witherdale...whatever you're calling him.

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 15 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Please update soon!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!! (Imagine crazy opera singing)

SoCal by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 159]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SoCal

Being with them wasn't the problem, but losing me was. A life filled with sandy beaches and sunshine, I felt safe here. Nothing bad ever happens in SoCal, except maybe bad Mexican food. Or so I thought. This isn't your everyday love story. Based on the movie Savages.

 

For Annie, an Edward, Bella, Jasper- polyfic    

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218114 Read Count: 43822
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2015 Updated: 11 Feb 2022
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Blood has been spilled on both sides and the only way to ensure loyalty is also through blood.

Edward/Bella; Mafia; HEA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131996 Read Count: 177659
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2016 Updated: 07 Apr 2019
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Sword of Justice

Please update soon!  I waited forever and this isn't enough!!!  I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 17 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Blood for Blood

Please update soon!!  

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 23 May 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - fathers and daughters

Please update soon!  I waited two weeks hopefully more story comes quickly!! Also Edward should probably say something to Charlie or I see his (Charlie) relationship with Bella going very badly, very fast.

Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - secrets

First, didn't Edward just recently give Bella some lecture about how whatever she did proved that she didn't trust him?  Well, pot meet kettle.

Second, as a future healthcare provider, I find it absolutely appalling that any health professional would treat their patient like that.  I understand that dealing with a mob boss changes the game of this fiction, but a doctor's first duty is not to the person paying them, but to the patient in their care and it should be a huge red flag to Edward that he is employing a healthcare professional with such a skewed moral compass as to suggest keeping secrets from their patient.  (Also that feels a little bit like the doctor is trying to move a person of their interest into Edward's bed like a Henry the VIII drama)

I was really happy to see an update, and I hope to see another one soon.

Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53532
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: dreamstar1995 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

She is trusting Edward and this situation WAY too easily.  This man is responsible for supplying her father with the drug that destroyed him as well as ending his life.  A Bella who isn't worldly probably would have kept the bare essentials and left the extra things in the hallway.