Reviews by KaiaRose
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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76230
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: KaiaRose Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Day at the Cullen's

I am really enjoying this story.  It is so touching and I love how both Bella and Edward are so tentative about their relationship.  It is fun to watch them slowly grow together.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are liking it!   They are tentative but I promise They'll get it going eventually!

Reviewer: KaiaRose Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Homecoming

That was a beautiful kiss.  It made me feel good too. ;)



Author's Response:

YEY!!!!  I'm glad you liked the kiss!  I had fun writing it!

Reviewer: KaiaRose Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 continued

I really enjoyed this chapter.  It seemed like your beta readers caught a lot of errors.  I love the story and the lack of errors make it all the more pleasurable to read!



Author's Response:

thank you.  I'm glad it was more error free.  I will tell Ronnie she di da good job!