Reviews by Ngai0
Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yay, I really love your story

Makes me sad that I don't have a brother 

Thank you 

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

poor rose : (

I like your story lots

I love Esme, she is my fave in all the stories I read and you have done her justice : )

thanks

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Woah, this is going to get intense with the whole Renee thing.

Best line ever - "I'm absorbing info so when Jasper realizes that I'm it for him, I can woo him with my knowledge." that was so so funny, I laughed for ages.

I am jealous of peanut butter ice cream, in NZ we have nothing like that : (

Thanks for your story, I am really enjoying it : )

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ohhh, a puppy, that is so cute!!

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

:O 

 

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

aww, that was so cute! 

thanks for the story

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Thanks so much for your story so far! I can't wait for you to write more : )

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

:D

I really do love this story. Thank you so so much for writing it 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752865
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

Hi, I read the first part of your story on another website (reading rest here) and I think it amazing!

To be totally honest if you took the twilight out of it and got a little help editing and stuff this would be an awesome real story! (as in it is way to good to be fan fic!)

I just love the bond between Em and Bella,

I have always wanted a older brother just like Emmitt (or Jazz or Edward) in stead of being the oldest :P

Thank you so much for your story 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I really appreciate your compliments.  The hardest thing for me if I ever did change it to publish, would be removing all that music.  With copyright laws, etc, there's no way I could publish with the lyrics and all of the songs, and I feel like that's a major part of the heart and soul of this story.  You may not have gotten that far yet, but music plays a very key role in this story.  I used it to convey a lot of feelings that the characters had difficulty relaying in their own words.  What you said truly was the mother of all compliments though and I'm truly grateful.  Later this month TWCS is doing an original story contest and I'm going to enter the story I've been working on.  Winner gets offered a publishing contract with the group's new publishing house.  

 

I really enjoyed writing the bond between Em and Bella, probably mostly because I'm an only child.  I had a few cousins who lived with us a while who felt like siblings, and one I was very, very close to, but that's about it.  So I was sort of living vicariously in that respect.  I really do hope you enjoy the rest of the story!  Thanks for coming over to finish it and for the review.

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Outside The Bubble

I liked that chapter a lot, thanks for the story : )

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 58: I'll Always Be Right There

Amazing story, the wedding (in my head) was beautiful!

Congratulations on the success of the story and completing the whole thing, you have quite the imagination!

I think you should change the names and twilight refrences and publish it as a novel because it is just so good.

Well done, thank you 

Ngaio

ps, thank you so much for explaining all the things that people out side the US wouldn't understand, it made the story much better for me (all the way from New Zealand) oh and your daughter is adorable! 

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: React now, think later

Yay, I am liking it so far!

thanks 

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking Point

Thanks for the story so far : )

Reviewer: Ngai0 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Returning to the Scene of the Crime

you should be proud of this chapter, Edward is such a sweety

thanks for the story : )