Reviews by urpersonalheroin
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

"2. You girls are demented and crazy to think up all this shit?

Yeah.. go figure.  Isn't it crazy that we found each other... hahaha."

 

I found this to be extremely funny. Whoever wrote that statement, didnt stop to think about the fact that they are like the rest of us, b/c if you are crazy and demented for writting this story then, that must put us readers in the same boat for reading this story.lol.

 i really enjoy reading this story. cant wait for the next update.

Only hope by militato123 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2010 Updated: 14 Oct 2011
Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

this is a really good story so far. i cant wait to read more. and ihope that edward has to beg for forgiveness for a really long time



Author's Response:

trust me he will. i always hated how Bella forgave him so easly.  read my other story too!- mili

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144851
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i have to say, i have gotten to where i enjoy jasper/bells stories more than the orginal couples stories. but... you are doing a great job with this story. i completely enjoy reading this story. cant wait for the next update



Author's Response:

thank you. I am actually working on a Jasper/Bella sotry right now. Once I have a few chapters written, I'll post it.

Summary:

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Thank You moonlit_wishes for making this banner for me...I Love it !!!

 

 

 

An evil scientific Bella sets out to make Carlisle pay for her painful past. She will inflict her pain on him both as a vampire and a human. If things don’t go as planned will Bella return Carlisle to his family before it’s too late?

 

This story is of a very mature nature. Please Do Not read this if your under the legal age.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62819 Read Count: 6931
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 Sep 2011
Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Learning Lessons

this was an interesting begining to this story. i cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I can't wait to get more of it out there either. Thanks for the Coffee....Diane

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Room

wow, a mean bella. its good to see that someone has written her this way. it gets tiring reading about her when she is written the same in almost every story. i also find it funny that the upstanding carlisle is finding it hard to believe that underneath it all that he really is to blame. cant wait to read more.



Author's Response:

lol....yep, no more boohoo Bella.....I think given the situation in a lot of ways Carlisle is at fault. Don't get me wrong, I love my Carlisle. However, you have made a very good point here. Thanks for the Coffee, I love it....hope to hear from you next chapter as well....Diane. :)

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 After the Transformation

um, i think that i would like to hear jaspers pov for after the talk that bella had with him. id like to see how the wheels in his head are turning and what his now thinks of alice. im luving this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you....I didn't find your two reviews until today. I always answer within a couple of days. But yeah the next chapter does answer your questions. I am so glad that you love this story I am having a good time coming up with plots for Evil Isabella. But every once in awhile I have to let the vampire's get one over on her...lol.

Thanks for the review and the coffee is soooooooo good. :)

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Can I Show You My Office?

um, ok. so jasper isnt exactly buying into bella right now. i kinda hope he does though. i would also love to know what he thought of his lil show. lol cant wait for the next update



Author's Response:

I will post tomorrow and Jasper is going to do a total turn around on Bella. Pooooor Bella. :)

Thanks for the coffee, I love it and your review. Diane

Carlisle Pays While Bella Preys is up for best darkfic if you want to vote for it. Here's the link-Voting ends Monday night I think.

 

http:/gemawards.blogspot.com/

Road trip to love by dna2679 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Summary:

EMMETT AND BELLA ARE LIKE BROTHER AND SISTER, BEST FRIENDS. EMMETT IS WITH ROSALIE AND BELLA WITH EDWARD BUT THEIR RELATIONSHIPS AREN'T WHAT THEY SEEM. TRYING TO CHEER UP EMMETT SHE DECIDES TO TAKE HIM ON A ROAD TRIP. WHILE THEY ARE LOOKING FOR HIS HAPPINESS, WILL THEY FIND MORE THAN THEY BARGINED FOR?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 135493 Read Count: 21427
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

ok, i have to say i am completely hooked on this story. i feel as if im sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. i get excited everytime you update because it takes us readers futher into the story. every part of this story has been amazing. i cant wait on the next chapter. when emmett meets up bella, will thisbe when they tell jasper about the gummy bear? i hope so, i cant wait to hear/read jaspers response to the news of him being an uncle. have a great day



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!!!!  i so can't wait to write the next chapter. i think everyone will love it.. at least i hope they will lol

thanks again home skillet

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

yay!! i finally got to read the update.lol. i have been in bed just about all day and didnt want to get up b/c i have a pulled muscle in my back, but i couldnt open this chapter on my cell phone. so, i got up, and im glad i did. this chapter was amazingly big to the story. i mean first with hearing two heart beats realizing its twins. and now with leah imprinting on jasper. the was an awsome chapter. i cant wait for the next, b/c i already know its gunna be amazinly awsome as well. keep up the great work and have a good day!! tara.

Author's Response:

aww i'm sorry to hear about your back. i hope you feel better soon. i've done that myself and i feel your pain.

 

i'm so glad you liked it.. the next chapter is about to go up right after i'm done replying to you.. thank you for your reply

 

amanda

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

loved it! it was graet as i said it would be. not wanting to rush ya, but i so cant wait for updates anymore. its like i wanna kno what happens now. lol. but i will sit and wait for each and every update. have a great day!!



Author's Response:

lol thanks girl!! i already have the next chapter up and going. so hopefully by dinner time i will have it done.. hopefully a lot sooner...

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

this chapter was great. i was thinking with emmett and bella being unsure and not completely trusting of carlisle and esme, could it be possible for jasper to go in and have the next sit down conversation with them. so maybe he can get a feel of what they are feeling towards them for not wanting to be in the family. then maybe jasper could find a way of letting bella know. and i so cant wait for the family game night. i think its gunnabe extremely funny once the wolves find out about the g.i.d paint. have a great day.



Author's Response:

thank you... i can't wait to write the game night.. i'm laughing just thinking about it. they are going to figure things out shortly. i swear today is dragging so i hope to get the next chapter out in a few hours give or take... thanks for the review!!

 

amanda

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

i really luved this chapter. i cant wait til everyone comes home and sets down to talk about why they are glowing. i just hope that emmett doesntget the wrong idea about the way bella and jacob are setting. because honestly is sounds as if they are setting in a position that bella nad emmett would set. and the prank against paul. wow, that will be epic!!! lol waiting for the next update. the only thing i have to ask is, are these pranks u have done urself? lol. if so, i would never want to fall victim to ur evil (but funny) pranking mind. lmao!!! have a great night



Author's Response:

thank you!!! oh i know, that will be classic for sure. Emmett and Bella had sat like that before. i would explain more but i don't want to give anything way for the next chapter that i'm working on right now

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

amazing!!! as always. im on the edge of my seat waiting to see what jasper has figured out about the babies. im thinking one of them may be an empath like him, or at least be ableto absorb others powers. great work!! have a good day, until next review. tara



Author's Response:

thank you tara!!! it means a lot to me!!!

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Luved it. it was great. And yay for bella for buying all the stuff for paul.

Author's Response:

thank you!!!

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

this chapter was really great. im thinking that the twins should be girls and one an imprint of paul and the other an imprint of jacob. that way both paul and jacob could understand their feelings of wanting to protect bella even more than normal. its just a thought though. have a great night, til next review, tara



Author's Response:

i already know what sex the twins will be i have that much written already... i woke up a few nights ago and had to write it. now all i have to do is fill in what happens until that happens.......l.  thank you so much for your review

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

yay the babies r here!! luv the names and cant wait til next chapter to see who imprinted on emmalyn. i hope it was paul. this was a great chapter. so hurry with the next!! lol. just kidding. have a great day



Author's Response:

you guessed right.... i had him in mind all along. i like him, he's moody but i think, a big softy... thanks for the review

Reviewer: urpersonalheroin Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

im thinking that the babies wanna come early to help with the fight or just dont wanna be taken by rose and alice. but im also thinking that it would be epic if it was the babies that destroyed rose. b/c everyone knows that shes always wanted a baby, and in the end to have the one thing that u have most wanted, to be what destroys u, well to me thats just awesome. it would be what she gets for being such abitch. lol. great chapter. as always



Author's Response:

the way the fight goes down, no one will see coming .... i am all excited