Reviews by twihardfan722
Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143214
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

OMG! I just about had a heart attack! I decided to reread the last chapter of Fold Your Wings on FF and noticed it was missing. I assumed that some biotch complained and had your story pulled. I'm so sick of those narrow minded twats! Sorry, but it seems  this is happening more and more.  If someone doesn't like something, don't read it!!!!! End of story!!!! Any who... I'm glad your still on TWCS. Your story is amazing. I kind of believe that maybe Charlie was driving drunk and was somehow involved in the death of Edward's daughter and wife. I don't know if there was a wife. I'm just guessing. I'm guessing that Edward approached Bella and is using her as some kind of sick revenge. Just a hunch. I can't wait for the next update.  I'm dying! Keep up the good work and update soon!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Another awesome chapter! How many years have gone by? 3? Bella definitely made it. She seems like she's just existing though. Not living.  I was a little dissappointed because there was not Edward/Bella interation this chapter. What has Edward been doing all this time? Maybe he had a little falll from grace. He is wearing jeans and chucks. So doesn't sound like him! I'm with Bella on this one. WTF!?!? I've been on pins and needles waiting for this update. Can't wait to read more of this story. I'm loving it! Keep up the good work and update soon!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Holy shiz! I hope Edward's all right! I'm starting to really feel sorry for the poor bastard. Another steller chapter as always! I'm so glad I happened to log on tonight. "Isabella" and Edward/Asswared have a bizzaro relationship. I love this story and I can't wait for anothe update. I'll be waiting impatiently for an update.....;)

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Wow! That was an intense chapter! So Edward was trying to make amends and Bella didn't want to hear it. Good for her! I'm still dying to know what Edward's been doing with himself for the last 5 years. I thought he was going to loose it there for a minute in the kitchen and revert back to assward. Lol! I'm loving this story. Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Another awesome chapter! I was worried that you forgot about us there for a minute! Lol! So...Edward's been thinking of Bella over the years. Interesting. There's obviously some sexual tension or at least some attraction between Edward and Bella. Still wondering what happened in Edward's past to make him such a douche. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work and update soon! Please, please update soon!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Just found your updates...and I've been checking....everyday. I'm still dying to know what happened to Edward and his daughter. When Bella mentioned her he went into a rage. Was he having a panic attack? I was surprised that Bella decided to go to Edward's apartment again after all these years. I think it freaked her out when the doorman remembered her. As always another great chapter! I'm going to read the next chapter now...

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Another great chapter! I know Bella and Edward are screwed up....why does Edward keep seeking Bella out? Is he still looking for forgiveness? I know Bella's still sexually attracted to Edward and I'm guessing he is to her also. If Edward's daughter is still alive, where is she? Why did he have a panic attack when Bella mentioned her? The suspense is killing me!!!! I can't wait to read more. Please, please update soon!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Another awesome chapter as usual! Still wondering what happened to Josie. The panic attack scene was intense.... Can't wait to read more of your wonderful story. Keep up the good work and please, please update soon!;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112169
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very intrigued. Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Summary:

Four year old Isabella Swan has recently moved to America from Australia for her father's job. It is here where she encounters the one boy who will never let her get away.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 471 Read Count: 1438
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2011 Updated: 04 Aug 2011
Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Love it so far.... very interested to read more. Keep up the good work and update soon!



Author's Response:

 

:) Thanks for your review, but at the moment the story is complete. :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I'm loving this story! Can't wait to read more.:)

 



Author's Response:

So happy you are enjoying it :o)

Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

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AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Never Say Goodbye

Such a sweet goodbye between Edward and Bella. I'm glad he's beginning to see her as more than a little girl. A friend is a great place to start. My husband is my best friend and has been for 19 years now. I'm dying to know what tattoo Edward is getting! Can't wait until next week.



Author's Response:

There will be many more sweet moments like that, so get ready.  And that's a beautiful thing with you and your husband.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: twihardfan722 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Tattoo on My Heart

Love the tattoo...not so sure about Siabhon. Sad there was no Bella/Edward interaction, but a beautifully written chapter. Can't wait for more.:)



Author's Response:

Blame Garrett for her presence, but that's all I'll say, since Edward will tell you more soon.

Thanks for reading!  More interaction in the chapter after next.