Reviews by Kerry Hale
Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - The Truth

I found your stories yesterday and I am in love with them. This is something really great you have here. Keep up the fantastic work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much!!  I'm really glad you found them and like them!!! :D :D  Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - Forgiveness

Great chapter loved it.



Author's Response:

Awesome, glad you liked it!!!  Thank you for the review!!!!!

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

Loved it. Way to go Bella. Ang deserved it. I Loved the Tattoo

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

Great update! Loved it

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

That was fuck awesome. So happy to have you back. Loved it.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625120
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Great chapter. So happy that you found a new home for this great story of yours

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Loved it. Great chapter. I am so happy you found a home for your wonderful story

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

OMG I really want to cry right now. Really great writing. I think this just might break Bella

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Really awesome update. I love the meaning behind her garden. So very sweet

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Really great chapter. So glad he told her what was going on. So gald she told him what Carlisle plans for her. Great job. It gave me chills

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

So good but so sad. I guess if you let love go and it is meant to be it will come back to you. Great job. Crying my eyes out now

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Good for Bella. She got her life back. So happy that the family seems to be doing to well. Loved it. So very sad to see it come to an end.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Awesome ending.

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47778
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Exacerbation

I found your story yesterday and have been doing a power read today. I am in love with. You have something really awesome here. Loving it and excited to read more.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Realization

Awesome update. Loved it. so glad she didn't OD. I love that they are going to go to get some help.

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171482
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just found your story today and I am in love with it

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just found your story today and I am in love with it

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such an awesome chapter. I love that Bella got a puppie

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow Renee is really evil So glad she is going to jail for now. Awesome job with this chapter.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow I really hope Em and the rest of them can get there soon. I really Phil doesn't get the chance to do anything to her. Great update.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter. So glad the boys got there in time. WOW Phil is as crazy as Renee. Loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

so glad Phil is out of the picture. Great update.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So sweet of Bell ato take care of Em. great first day. Loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awe now that was a awesome and sweet chapter. I loved the time that she spent with Em. Oh Rose is just doing her self in when she acts like that. What a great birthday for her. I hope Edward does kiss her. Loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved it. She so deserved a great sweet sixteen birthday. Glad Edward was her 1st kiss. Loved it. 

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Really awesome update. I would love to have known what Charile and Carlisle had planned for Renee had she walked. Loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG that was so cute. Loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Such a sweets chapter.

 

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

So good so freaking cute. 

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh poor Bella I just want to give her a hug. Great update.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

WOW so good. Great update.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Very sweet update. Loved it

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Amazing update. loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Loved it

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Amazing update.



Author's Response:

Thank you :0)

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh crap.

Great update

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153113
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Money Problems

Wow awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Explaining The Pain

Loved the update. Fantastic.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Woman's Perception

Oh wow what a horrid childhood Rosalie had. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah Rose had a tuff life. But she is good now so that's what really matters.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Getting Personal

Awesome update. I love this Edward.



Author's Response:

I love Edward's character, so making him older really appeals to me...

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Emotions Involved

That an awesome update. I loved it. WOW so good.

I wou.d love to hear from Rose and what was going through her mnd as shw was telling Bella all of this. Does she realize that Bella is meant to be with them. I would love to learn more about her "sessions"



Author's Response:

Well we all know what Rose can be like...

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

Oh that was so good. Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Some people had mixed feeling about it so it's nice to hear that some actually liked it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

So good loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

I say longer chapters

really great update



Author's Response:

Thanks and i agree with you I'm keeping them the same.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Revelations Before The Fire

Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

Loved it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad....

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

Loved it. So good.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Awesome update. Great lemon



Author's Response:

Thanks. I was a little worried there for a minute.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 61051
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You

Loving what you has so far

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Bella Notte

Really great update. I love Lady so very cute



Author's Response:

Lady was in the works for a while...I planted a little hint early in the sequel when she said it was a favorite movie.  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the heads up yesterday ;}

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36671
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: React now, think later

Liking what you have so far and excited to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much this story is one of my faves...which doesn't mean I don't love all my stories, but this one is my most issue-driven one and therefore is very near and dear!

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Baby Steps

Loved the update. Very good!



Author's Response:

Thanks...hopefully I'll have another chapter up tonight!

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Strength in Numbers

Great update. Wow I wonder what Bella's parents are going to do when they find out. 



Author's Response:

Let's just say Christmas will be eventful!