Reviews by Aldi74
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514758
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

OMG!!! I'm curious what Aro and Carlisle will do to find James and I'm so afraid about the girls they can't hide anywhere because of that damn Victoria's GPS!

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Poor James... just kidding!!!!!!!!!!!!

He really gets what he deserves!

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I'm so happy for all of them. Thank you for this amazing story.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625045
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I suck at reviewing and I apologize for it but this time I have to write this. This story is brilliant and particularly Bella's last sentence - “Let me go.”

It's so meaningfull. She needs some time alone, go to collage, think about life, have some friends, she's only 18, she's now too young for any kind of serious relationship especially for mariage. She needs to "experience life" and if she's ment for Edward he'll have to wait for her.

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Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Oh that was sweet! It's sooo good that they all take their time it was much needed.

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Oh God I'm crying now because you end it so perfectly and because it's the end.

I'm so happy for them all specially for Esme.

Your story is fantastic! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy fuck!!! It was a pleasure reading this!

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh God, Chief Swan and his six tickets!!! It's good to have such an understanding mother. Pls. update this time sooner ;-)

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"the devil’s lair" hahaha

What is wrong with Edward? Is he delusional?

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

As I said one delusional bastard. He's total control freak with major issues.

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Why can't she even choose her clothes?! Why he's such controlling asshat?!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh God I'm a little scared of your Edward! Very Creepy!

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG!!! Ok I like a little possessive and dominate Edward but like i said a little and here he is a way tooo much. Bella is only 17 and he's her first and I don't think that this is a good idea she does't know what she's dealing with. He's too creepy! I hope it will end good for everyone.

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok if you're saying that she likes him that way who am I to argue but I don't. And he's calling her in his mind bitch!

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well still don't like him. I like all Dom/sub stuff but he's not a Dom he's creepy. All the BDSM stuff has rules and I don't think that Bella knows anything about it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions

I must tell you that I always what Bella to be with Edward and no one else, I just wasn't comfortable with other options something was off about that, till now, this story is soooo different!!! I WANT her to end up with DR-SEXY-C, they're perfect together. Great job, pls. continue and update soon, can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It means a lot when die hard Bella and Edward fans tell me that I've changed their views on them being with other people! I take that as a HUGE compliment. The next chapter is up. I hope you like it!

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle

Dear Jen, you were right, this is absolutely my favorite chapter! One more thing we have in common - older guys are by all means better in everything!!! add to this being a Dr and I'm all yours rrrrrrrrr!



Author's Response:

Bring on the older men! Who needs boy toys, right?

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed

Ok you really bad, bad, cliffy woman ;-) leave it like that for us to wait for an update?!!!! I don't know how I'll handle that!

Don't worry you're not the only one to do things you shouldn't I assure you! Been there, done that... But I'm happy she eventually didn't screw him, it wouldn't be good and only add more scruples for Carlisle to not continue this "relationship" with Bella.

Great chapter, waiting impatiently for the next ones, kisses.



Author's Response:

By the time I reached the end of this chapter it was 31 pages, I had to leave that cliffhanger. Plus, I will admit I like keep everyone is suspense ;) I hope to have the next chapter up sooner than I usually do

Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Broken Promises

Oh God! What a mess!!!!!! Poor poor Bella she still think about everyone else first, that's why she didn't defend herself saying aboud Edward's advances and attempts to seduce her only to make Carlisle hurt. But I believe in Dr-sexy-as-hell-C, he will figure it out eventually.

Edward is so messed up kid, God, I hope he will come around but now he's such an ass!

Pls. update soon ;-)

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672593
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Aldi74 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 19: When Shit Rolls Downhill

Oh shit, Edward killed Charlie.

Now I'm affraid what he will do to Jane.