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Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: The Training School Saga
Oh, can't wait to get the next update! I hope they find the girls soon.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James
Yes! So we don't know who got James, but someone did. Hopefully that means Bella, Victoria, and Heidi are safe now.
Bella's perfect world is crumbling around her. She feels as though she's drowning when she meets an angry, broken Edward. Can he save her while living in an abusive nightmare of his own? Can they save each other?
"Growing up is hard. It's hard for everyone,however, some are luckier than others. I always thought I was one of those lucky ones, but as I sat there, I realized how wrong I was."
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138890 Read Count: 29516
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The News
Great story so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Seeking Comfort
Good chapter. It's a good thing Bella has such great friends to help her get through this. I'm very curious about what the deal is with Emmett and Edward and their parents. I'll be interested to see how that plays out. Of course I hope Charlie beats his leukemia.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! You won't have to wait too long to see what the deal with the parents is ;)
Katie
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Brown Eyes and the Crazy Man
Well after seeing Edward's POV, it sounds like things at home aren't good for anyone. I'm looking forward to seeing what happened to make their family the way it is.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! You will get more EPOV in the future chapters and learn more about his situation. Hope you like the upcoming chapters! :)
Katie
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Girl's NIght
It's nice that Bella was able to have some fun and not think about reality for a little while.
From Emmett's reaction, it looks like he just noticed that Bella's a girl. I wonder what will happen with that.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I like your description of Emmett's reaction, lol. Thank you so much for taking the time to review!! :)
Katie
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Becoming Numb
I'm glad we got to see Edward's POV this chapter. It's nice to know he's not the jerk he appeared to be.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you seem to like Edward now that you have read his POV, I hope you like the next chapter! Thank you for taking the time to review :)
Katie
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Do you Want to Go?
Great chapter. I can't wait to see how their date goes, although I'm sure Emmett will be pissed when he finds out. It's nice that Edward isn't the jerk Emmett says he is. It makes me very curious about why things are so strained in that family. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review! In a couple of chapters you will see Emmett's reaction. I am glad that you like Edward:)
I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Details
Good chapter. It's a shame Edward's parents don't trust him since it doesn't sound like he's ever done anything to not be trusted. I'm glad Charlie agreed without much trouble. I'm sure Emmett will find out at some point. I hope it doesn't ruin their friendship. Looking forward to seeing how the dance goes!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review, it means a lot! I hope you like the next chapter, I plan to have it out Sunday :)
Katie
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 First Impressions and Second Chances
I'm glad Bella was able to have a nice time at the dance. Edward seems so sweet. It's nice that she was able to have a good time and not think about Charlie's illness for a little bit. I really hope Charlie will be okay.
I'm looking forward to Emmett's reaction to Bella and Edward being together, althought it doesn't sound like he's going to be too happy about it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing! You will see Emmett's reaction next chapter, I hope you like it :)
Katie
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Friends No More
Poor Bella! I understand that Emmett's upset, but that's no excuse for treating Bella so terribly. Especially considering what a rough day it's been with her dad's illness. Edward and Emmett's mom is definitely a bitch in my opinion.
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, Emmett is not very nice in this story :(
I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 All Falls Down
Well, Edward's family is certainly a piece of work. I want to feel bad for Emmett's hurt feelings, but with the way he's treating Bella and being so childish and vindictive with Edward, I just can't. It's amazing that Edward is as caring as he is given what he's come from. I'm so glad Bella has his support through this. It's looking like she's going to be leaning on him even more soon. I'm really hoping Charlie will eventually be okay. He's just such a great guy and an awesome dad.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 06 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Playing Nice
What a blow for Bella's family with the news about Charlie. I hope a donor comes through in time. I wonder what's going in with Emmett. I'm very curious to find out. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! You will find the answers to your questions in the next chapter, hope you like it :)
Katie
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Seeing Red
First, I'm so glad they found a donor for Charlie! That's fantastic news.
Second, what Bella had to go through at school was awful. I don't blame Edward for beating the crap out of Emmett. I would say Emmett has pretty much killed his friendship with Alice and Bella now. How petty and immature of him.
Jasper cracked me up in this chapter.
Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Big Day
I love the girly products for Charlie. That was hilarious. I thought it was so sweet that Edward and Jasper shaved their heads too. Hopefully the transplant will be successful.
Also, I just love all the Bella/Edward stuff. They're so sweet.
Author's Response:
Hey!
So glad that you liked the chapter!! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Katie
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Summer Blues
Poor Edward, his parents are crazy. I'm glad he was able to figure out a way to spend Bella's birthday with her though!
Author's Response:
Yes, his parents are super crazy! lol
Hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Killers, Frogs and Turkeys, Oh My
I thought the birthday surprise was great. I'm glad that Edward's mother seems to have let up a little bit, not on Thanksgiving apparently though. Hopefully everything's okay with him.
The end is just breaking my heart. I hope we don't have to say goodbye to Charlie. He's such a great dad.
Author's Response:
Hey
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! So glad that you like Charlie, you will find out next chapter what happened :)
Katie
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Breaking Point
Poor Charlie (and Bella and Renee). I hope he'll be able to fight this off now that he's in the hospital. Thank goodness Edward found Bella and got her to the hospital.
Wow, Edward's parents have sunk even lower now. Reporting him, for what? I'm assumin they said he assaulted his father. Maybe this will turn out to be a good thing. Maybe his parents will have to take responsibility for the abuse they've thrown out at him.
Looking forward to the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Panic
I'm glad Officer Dan believed Edward and tried to help him. Hopefully he'll be able to keep the phone Renee gave him away from his parents. Eighteen can't come soon enough for poor Edward.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Arms of Your Love
I feel so bad for Bella and Renee right now. That's so sad that Charlie is so sick. It would be devestating to think that this bone marrow transplant was the answer you were looking and praying for only to then have to deal with this horrible infection.
Edward's parents are just beyond words at this point. They're just cruel. I'm so glad they're both gone so he and Bella can have some time together.
I thought their first time together was very sweet.
Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the sweet review, I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Christmas in the ICU
Beautifully written chapter. It was so bittersweet. Christmas in the waiting room was such a nice thing for Alice to do. I'm glad Bella has Edward to lean on. I was so choked up reading this one. It's sounding more and more like Charlie isn't going to make it, and it's just breaking my heart.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Goodnight, Travel Well
So this chapter had me in tears. I'll admit that this isn't what I hoped would happen, but you did a beautiful job writing this. Thank goodness Renee and Bella have such a great support system.
Author's Response:
Sorry that it didn't go the way you had hoped, and that you cried, but thank you so much for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Pain
So sad. As shitty as Edward's parents are, at least they didn't give him too much of a problem about helping out Bella and her mom.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Aftermath
The photo montage and Renee's eulogy at the funeral were so bittersweet. I think Edward's doing a great job of being supportive of Bella.
I'm quite curious about Rose's new boyfriend. Emmett maybe? If that's the case I wonder how things will pan out with that.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review! I'm so glad you think Edward is doing a good job! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 When it Hits the Fan
Oh many, what a cliff hanger! I hope Edward's dad doesn't catch up with him. Those people are just evil. Who tells someone who just lost their father that they're being fragile? What a nasty, evil woman. I'm glad Edward and Bella haven't let all the adversities come between them. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the cliffie! I know Edwards parents are awful. Believe it or not that's exactly what my hubbys mother said to me two months after my dad died when I was 16, people suck sometimes. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Confronting
Go Bella and Jasper for calling Elizabeth out on her lies. I'm really glad Jasper was there. I think his reaction to Edward's mother helped snap Bella back to reality and realize that he wouldn't leave her like that.
I hope they find him soon!
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Searching for the Truth
I thouroughly enjoyed Edward Sr. getting arrested. Best part of the chapter I think ;-)
I can't wait to find out where Edward is and for he and Bella to be reunited.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 You Have to Believe Me
I'm glad Carlisle at least seems to be giving the other side of the story a chance. I just hope he doesn't get sucked in by Edward's psycho parents. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Uprising
Thank goodness Edward's getting out of there. I hope his mom is being sincere in her promises. Thank goodness Carlisle's going to be keeping tabs on the situation.
I can't wait for Edward and Bella to be together again!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Pain and Promises
Wow, this chapter was a tear jerker. I'm so glad Edward is back!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter
Katie
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Moving Forward
Yay, I missed this story! I'm glad things are better with Edward's mom, but I definitely understand why he's not all sunshine and roses about her. I'm so happy for Bella that Edward's back. It's such a hard time in her life right now, but I'm really glad she's got some happiness back now.
I don't know who's pov I'd like to hear more in the last chapter. I like both perspectives!
France 1830
After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47190
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Uh oh, I have a feeling Maria's going to cause even more trouble now. That girl seriously needs to just go away.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Oh dear, the bit of omission is probably going to come back to bite Edward.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I love that Charles saw right through Edward's "reason" for coming by and called him on it. It's nice that they apparently approve of Edward. I love the chemistry between Edward and Bella. Can't wait to see where things go from here!
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
I loved this chapter! Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I love how feisty this Bella is.
I can't wait to see where things go from here!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
I love how Maria and Alistair are so obviously tolerated at best by all of the family. Good for Bella for letting them have it.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Wow, so Maria and Alistair are complete jerks. I'm glad the rest of the family seems to have at least an idea of how they are. It's a shame that their selfish choices have had such an impact on everyone.
I'm glad Edward was able to make Bella feel better about everything. Hopefully Maria and Alistair will leave soon.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Good chapter! I'm glad Bella was able to get her digs in to Maria. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
You are definitely NOT wasting your time and energy. I love this story!
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Maria is a bitch, but I suppose everyone is redeemable. Except for Alistair maybe! It's too bad they didn't kill him.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Loved the chapter! That's so sad about Alice and Jasper. Hopefully they'll be able to fix things between them.
Can't wait to read more! Especially about Edward and Isabella.
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
I loved the moment between Bella and her dad. It was so sweet.
It sounds like Isabella is in some major denial about being pregnant! I wonder what Edward will think of this news?
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
Well, it's good that the truth is all out in the open now. I don't think Edward will make that mistake again.
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
I love Bella's reactions to the other women. Putting Mrs. Newton in her place was fabulous!
I think it's sweet that Bella was sneaking into the spare room while she was punishing Edward.
Can't wait to read more!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Wow, I think I understand Alice even less now. She seems to have a very strange and sad way of looking at things.
Gotta love embarassing the servants. I think that's funny.
Can't wait to see how things go when Kate arrives.
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
Good job to Bella for making the first move. I feel bad for poor Kate. How terrifying to have to go live with strangers.
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Very sweet chapter. I'm glad Kate has fit right into their family. I can't wait to see how they will be with their own child!
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Vineyard
It was good to see some of Carlisle and Esme's past. It's sad they had to go through that, but most couples probably did at the time.
How exciting that they had a boy!
I can't wait to read more.
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
Wow! So the truth comes out. I didn't see it coming that James was the father. I guess I didn't think about him since he wasn't mentioned much. I did kind of wonder about Jasper, but I hoped it wasn't him. I thought it must be someone Edward knew. I wonder if James knows that Kate is his daughter.
I can't wait to read more! This is one of my favorite stories!!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Oh wow, it sounds like life is pretty scary for them right now! It's really creepy that someone's been in Kate's room. And what is Alistair doing in England? What a cliffhanger! I can't wait to read more!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
Wow! So Tanya wasn't a cheating bitch. I feel bad for thinking she was so awful.
I'm dying to see the epilogue now! I hope it's James that was killed. Edward can't be dead after all they've gone through!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
On the up side, it sounds like Alice and Jasper both want to have a happy marriage again. It sounds like they just need to communicate that with each other.
What a cliffhanger of an ending! I hope they'll get Kate back soon!
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
Go Jasper! Thank goodness he got there in time. I'll be interested to see if Alistair lives or dies. I hope they let him live long enough to see what he knows about Tanya and James.