Reviews by Momma Laura
Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 37494
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The ER

I kind of wonder if Dr Hutton has anything to do with Edward's "wierd" behavior...you know?  And it sure sounds as if a man is involved.  You won't believe this, but I read the last chapter last night before bedtime, and I dreamed about where the story was going...now I'm stoked to see if we think alike about the plot!  Very well-written!



Author's Response:

Ya know, that's funny because I often dream about fics that I read just  before bed. It's crazy how that works! Thank you so much for the kind words and for reading and reviewing.  The next chapter isn't far away, promise!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183792
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Wow - I saw someone recommend this on one of my FB pages I'm on, and I took all darn day to read it. Nothing got done at the house today because of you, but...that's okay. It was a great story. Hard to see Esme die, and Edward really was a shit for parts of the story, but - hey. That's life.

 

Great job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere

bannerday!  So nice to see you again - I'm taking a short break from the "other" site to read here and found your latest story - any chance that "Scooby" will appear in this tale?  (or tail??)  Just askin'!  Anyway - love it so far...but why doesn't my neighborhood ever have an EC across the street?  Hope that THIS BS and EC make it together like the Transfer's did - and I'm liking this Bella sooo much.  Hyperbole!  I had to laugh...I taught Bible fellowship this morning and explained polyptoton, antanaclasis, and benedictio as part of the teaching!  Figures of speech, you gotta love them! 

From your ever faithful reader, Momma Laura

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 64987
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This was a hilarious chapter! Sue...what goes around, comes around. Now maybe she'll stop asking for babies to be born - haha!

Simply Promised by mmsinful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

award

Edward and Bella, best friends since kids, have promised to have each other's baby someday. Now, Edward is married and Bella has a Fiance. Edward reminds Bella of their simple promise, when he learns that his wife is unable to conceive. HEA E/B Lemons. Drabble

Banner created by: Mina Rivera

Beta: HollBeth

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28014 Read Count: 105611
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Wow - was looking away from fanfic to find something angsty to read and came across this story.  Read it this afternoon instead of doing my laundry (bad girl, Laura!).  I've really enjoyed this.  You have a great way of presenting your characters and the plot...will start reading your other stories, I hope??  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella met in High School. After graduation they lost contact and went on with their life. Years later they meet again. Both have a lot of secrets.

They’re both unhappy and when they bump in to each other, they start to realize that there is more than just friendship. A/H OC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75604 Read Count: 30198
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

A great start to the story - You cannot tell your first language is not English!  That's good.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Normally I'll update next week. So I hope you're still here ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63283
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - The Wedding Photographer

I love this - I must have played for 30 or so weddings over the years, and I NEVER got propositioned by the best man...darn.  Oh yeah, I was already married!  Great start to a good plot.



Author's Response:

This was actually loosely based on real life.  I have photographed a number of wedding, although I'm not doing it as a career, like Bella is.  It's just a hobby. 

Sadly, I never got propositioned by the best man either.  I did photograph an outdoor wedding at a lovely old farmhouse, for a wedding with a Russian bride, and the groomsman really was a model.  *drools*  His mom really did tell me to take lots of pics of him, too.  Unfortunately, she didn't try to set us up on a date, and he was nice,  but didn't look twice at me.  (DAMN IT)

It was a fun wedding to shoot though.  :)

Just curious, what do you play?

And I'm glad you're enjoying this!  Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it.

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717377
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Now they can get their shit together and figure out the next steps in their lives... that include having a baby together. :)

Desire by Mamasutra Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 2]
Summary: I held his future in my hands. I had the power to make his dreams come true, but all I wanted was him.
Categories: Romance, Original Fiction, Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1152 Read Count: 602
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2013 Updated: 17 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love it so far...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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For ten years, Edward Cullen has had a secret desire. Isabella Swan is in the business of making fantasies come true. Together, they'll discover more than they ever expected. 1st place winner for Public Vote and Judge's Choice in the LDA anonymous contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26240 Read Count: 13810
[Report This] Published: 09 May 2013 Updated: 09 May 2013
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot, just hot!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the nice review!

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You know - there's a way around just about every obstacle in life; you just have to think outside the box sometimes...



Author's Response:

Absolutely.  The obstacles they have aren't insurmountable, they just have to get to a point where they realize they want it bad enough to make it happen.  It won't be easy, but it's doable.  Thanks for the review, we appreciate it so much.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 19 Part 10

Jasper is a hoot!

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 41: Changes Ahead

We are so glued to our technology...we don't care about the shift key. Now if you start talking to everyone in capital letters, we'll wonder what's wrong! Liked that he wants Jay and Vic with him...family IS everything.

Summary:

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The Chicago Fire of 1871, also called the Great Chicago Fire, burned from October 8 to October 10, 1871, and destroyed thousands of buildings, killed an estimated 300 people and caused an estimated 200 million in damages. Can the love of one couple survive the fire or will it be destroyed along with everything else?

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18171 Read Count: 7834
[Report This] Published: 09 Jan 2016 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Good twist to the old story - James did it!

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 27 May 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Unleashing the Lioness

Go, Esme!



Author's Response:

Hooray - glad you enjoyed it!

Much love,

~Lisa

Perfect For Me by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Perfect For Me Banner

 

Summary: After his socialite fiancée dumps him, Jasper Whitlock realizes just how superficial his love life has been. When he meets the intelligent and quirky Bella Swan, his parents instantly disapprove of her, but she just might be the making of him. Is she the one who is perfect for him? NC/AU/OOC/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33004 Read Count: 13156
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 06 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Started my day out with this story - what a lovely way to begin a beautiful day - with a happy ever after for Bella and Jasper! Had to get Eddie boy in there at the end, eh??

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2022 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Started my day out with this story - what a lovely way to begin a beautiful day - with a happy ever after for Bella and Jasper! Had to get Eddie boy in there at the end, eh??

Shape the Narrative by LaMomo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 156]
Summary:

ShapeBanner

Sequel to “Correct the Narrative.” OlderWard, LawyerWard
After years of pining for Bella from afar, Edward finally confessed his feelings to her.
But between their age difference and busy careers—Bella’s impending MBA graduation, Edward’s academia at Cornell—will they be able to navigate all the challenges they face in their new relationship?

Follow their fast-paced romance as they shape their narrative.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Narrative Series
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67629 Read Count: 14389
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2022 Updated: 29 Aug 2023
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I love it. Ding dong - the witch is dead! Well, dead to them! And lava cake sounds yummy...

Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

That little minx, Bella...she knows what she's doing to him - lol! Thanks for the update. I'm glad you post at different sites, or we'd never have been able to read this one today the way fanfic. net is acting! 

Summary:

From the moment Bella discovered boys, there was only one kind that made her heart go crazy. He had to be tall, and the added bonus is to wear a backwards baseball hat. As for Edward, he wasn't picky about what his girl looked like as long as she has a personality. She needs to be able to dish it and take it if she wanted to be with him. E&B Very little drama. Rated NC-17


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88485 Read Count: 3571
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2023 Updated: 18 Jul 2023
Reviewer: Momma Laura Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2023 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow - I really loved this! A real Doogie Howser family - that's make your hair go gray early!  Just a little advice - if you ever go back and edit this for any reason, please change the spelling to HIPAA. One P and two A's! I was the HIPAA expert at my office years ago when it first came out. It's the Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act.