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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297714
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower
A hidden twilight quote in a twilight fanfiction... I love it. The quote was "It's okay, Bella, you won't hurt her." Like you said you changed the name from Jasper to Bella.
I enjoyed the chapter. I think you a putting in the right kind of stresses when a couple is preparing for a baby. All the hormone induced fights and such. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body
I loved this chapter. The lemon towards the end was very interesting. I wish I knew what the surprise was.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
You will know after Sunday!
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up
Oh boy, intrigue! I'm sure they'll be good about it.... at least I hope they will.
Loving the story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home
Loved the quote from Knocked Up, but honestly I think when guys do that its taking it a step too far. Anyways great chapter. Can't wait to find out whats up with Alice.
Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?
Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.
All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse.
I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Bella and Alice
This chapter for some reason is not visible.
Author's Response:
That's strange, It has shown up for others, and I checked it just now. Have you tried recently?
Carlisle and Bella have been best friends from diapers up. But Carlisle's parents have strong beliefs and Bella doesn't fit into their plans. They step in and seperate the two just after they have started to figure out their true feelings for each other. Lots of hurt.
Special Thanks to Moonlit Wishes for the awesome banner she made for this story.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33882 Read Count: 11585
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Mother
Good for Carlisle. His parents suck. Please update again soon.
Author's Response:
Hey there,
I think Mother Cullen has started acting a lot more like the father now that he's gone. However, true love conquers all. Even possessive, un-sharing mothers. Take Care, Sweetie. :)
-Diane
Bella and Jasper lived in the same foster home until his father found him. Bella is sent into Witness Protection and meets back up with Jasper after seven years. Will she fall for him again? Future Lemons. Adult content.
Categories: All Human, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54795 Read Count: 6105
Date: 17 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Just read all 13 chapters and am enjoying this story immensly... Cannot wait until your next chapter!
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I enjoyed this story, but personally I felt the ending was a little rushed.
Summary - All Human. Edward turns sixteen. Emmett forces him to go to a strip club for his birthday. Bella is dared to be a strip dancer for the night. What will happen to two virgins when they meet? De-virginizing Edward, never entered contest but now is longer than one shot.
This banner is made by my very close friend in this fandom - Chynnadoll36
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2117759/chynnadoll36
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15046 Read Count: 5835
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like it so far and am interested to see where it could lead. Update soon please.
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
Such a good chapter. I loved the date...it was perfect. And Jack cracks me up - telling his own father to man up and ask his mom out.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Thanks for all of the love and support!
=)
Shel
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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.
"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."
Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."
Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."
"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."
Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.
"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
ok so we're up to where you started....what happens next?!?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
XoXo
Shel
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Oh boy! Sparks are going to be a-flying. Amazing chapter. Loved the reunion and Esme's defense over Bella... Can't wait to see what happens with Edward there...
Friday never comes fast enough.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak. I know everyone's excited about Edward finally showing up! I am too, lol! I love reading your reactions to the chapter and answering your questions!
<3 Shel
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"I could have left him at that police station and let the damn state take care of it, but I didn't. I stood up and chose to do it. I had to make difficult decisions on a daily basis. Things that I shouldn't have had to worry about, but I did. Because I loved him. For the past five goddamned years, I've loved him and I've made sure that he was fed and clothed and taken care of. I made sure that he had to best education that I could afford and that he knew that he was loved. I've bled, sweat and cried over this child. So screw you, Mr. Cullen, and the horse you rode in on," she seethed in fury.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Wow is Edward a bit of an ass or what. I understand being upset and confused but to continue to blatantly attack the woman who has taken care of his son and brought him back to him? I would have said plenty more than Bella did. She could have pretended she never found out who he was, but she did the right thing and went to the family.
I really enjoy this story and am anxious to see where it will go. Can't wait til Monday for the teaser and friday for the new chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! For those of you who are new to the story, I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com/) as we speak, along with some new pictures from this upcoming chapter! We're up to 428 reviews here, so I wanted to remind everyone that the 500th reviewer here will get to pick the subject of one of the Outtakes, just like the 1000th on FFnet and the 500th on Twilighted did. Thank you again for all of your love and support!
XoXo
Shel
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"Wait, you're staying in his house instead of the hotel? Bella, is that really safe? I mean, I know you want to make everyone happy, but you've gotta think about your own safely, seriously!" Alice chastised.
"Calm down, woman. It's his parents house, which is enormous and beautiful. I figured it would be fine, since I was calling you and Dad to let you know where I would be. Just in case you needed somewhere to start looking for the body."
"Bella, do not joke about this! I am going on record as saying that I completely disagree with this decision."
"Duly noted, Alice."
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I liked the chapter a lot. I think it was good for Edward to see how good Bella has been to his son over the years even though it should be obvious by just looking at him. I do feel bad for Edward knowing his story and commend him on trying to fix it by apologizing.
I think my favorite scene of this chapter was when Bella sang Jack to sleep. It was such a tender moment. I can't wait to see how everything plays out. Friday just never seems to come fast enough.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts!
I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!
<3 Shel
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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.
"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
It was so sweet. I like how Jasper showing up brought out all the concerns that Bella had because it hasn't been a focus yet, and one could assume that she hadn't considered everything that could result from her decisions.
In regards to Edward and Bella, I see little sparkles starting to fly. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.
Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!
XoXo
Shel
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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks."
Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.
"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.
"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.
"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Awww how cute! I liked this chapter a lot. Can't wait til Edward and Bella get together!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco, is looking to be up Wednesday at this point. I though it'd be up sooner, but I got sidetracked, lol.
Listen, I love you guys, which is why I take the time to reply to everyone who reviews and post the teasers and pics to the Blog. It's why I do silly little things, like posting polls and questions via Facebook and Twitter. I want you guys to feel like you are a part of the story. I hope I'm succeeding!
<3 Shel
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Bella laughed brightly during their back and forth banter, but noticed Emmett's stiff posture out of the corner of her eye. She bit her lip and decided that there was no time like the present to find out just what his problem was. She looked up into Edward's face and smiled.
"Do you think you could go check on Jack, to make sure he remembers his helmet and pads? He has a tendency to forget things when he gets excited."
Edward nodded and grinned before turning and heading up the stairs. When he was out of sight, she whirled to face Emmett and put her hands on her hips.
"What is your problem?"
"I don't know what you're talking about," he replied in a voice as blank as his face. She narrowed her eyes and took a step forward, so she wouldn't have to raise her voice.
"Yes, yes you do. I want to know what problem you have with me, that makes you feel the need to glower at the back of my head whenever you don't think I'm looking. Pretty soon Edward or Jack are going to notice, too, and I'll be damned if I let that happen. Both of them have already been hurt too much without adding you to the pile."
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Uh-oh that sounds all kinds of not good. Fridays should come a lot faster...I love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!
<3 Shel
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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack.
'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'
His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.
The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Aw such a sweet ending. Why do I have a feeling the date with Demitri was Esme setting Edward up?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel.blogspot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! I have it on good authority that it's a *squeal*-worthy one!
I play TwiFicTrivia on Twitter every Tuesday at 9 pm EST. It is so much freaking fun. Check it out if you get the chance! We had a bunch of new players this past week, so I figured I'd mention it one more time. I won't bring it up again for awhile.
=)
Shel
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Bella sighed and smiled, her eyes closed and facing the sky, as the classical notes of Tchaicovsky's 1812 Overture swirled around the air. She felt Edward's hand gently begin to play with her hair and she bit her lip to stifle a sigh. He had been nothing short of amazing today and she didn't want their date to come to a close any time soon.
She opened her eyes and turned her face slightly to the left.
Edward's fingers still held onto a strand of hair as he smiled down at her.
"Enjoying the concert?" he asked, in a low husky voice. She smiled widely and nodded happily.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
Uh-oh!!! Not good....at all.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well!
The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude!
♥ Shel ♥
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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."
Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.
"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
Love protective mama Bella... She needs to talk to Edward about James though.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!
I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!
Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.
♥ Shel ♥
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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?"
Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."
"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself.
"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."
Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
It's good that Bella is standing her ground with this James thing because James is always bad news.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Don't shoot me, okay?
I've been working on an Emmett Outtake for Parachute to be used in the 30 Days of Emmett, a series of One Shots, Outtakes and Drabbles featuring Emmett, which is hosted by AccioBourbon, Hmonster4 and Theheartoflife. It's already started off with a bang! Our Outtake will appear there on 12/3 and post to Parachute's Outtakes a few days later. Enormous kudos to these ladies for showing Em some love! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Charlie squeezed Bella and she melted against her father's side in comfort. When his flight to Seattle was called, Charlie leaned down and kissed her on the cheek.
"I'll see you in a few weeks, baby girl. Everything will work out fine, you'll see," he told her quietly.
"Thanks, Daddy," she whispered in his ear. Charlie grinned and reached out to shake Edward's hand.
"Edward, it was good to meet you, son. Take care of my family, you hear?"
Edward smiled sincerely. "With my life, Chief."
The two men exchanged a look and Charlie nodded, before looking at Jack and holding open his arms. The boy hugged his grandfather tightly.
"I'll see you soon, Pops! Tell Seth and Nana and Leah that I miss them!"
"I will, kiddo. I promise," Charlie responded, blinking away tears.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Oooooh, intrigue!!!! Edward better wake up and smell some roses cause James is usually bad news. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!
Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me!
♥ Shel ♥
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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.
Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.
"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
I hope there are more lemons in the future..... :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!
Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!
♥ Shel ♥
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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.
"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.
"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.
"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."
He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."
Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.
"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."
"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"
"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33
loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!
I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.
He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."
She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"
He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.
"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."
"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34
Such a bittersweet chapter. I can't imagine what my Fridays will be like without this story to read.
Author's Response:
{If you're interested, I'm starting a new story a few weeks after Parachute ends. I'll be keeping the same update/teaser schedule as well.}
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.
The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"
She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."
Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"
Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"
"That you have a dad now."
"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."
"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"
Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
I hope we get to see Edward's reaction to Jack's request for a little brother. I think that was my favorite part of the chapter.
It's sad that this story is ending which is only a tribute to how much I have enjoyed it. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36
I loved this story so much. Good luck with your new project.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so sad that this will be the last chapter of Parachute, but I'm happy with where we're leaving them! The Monday teasers will go up on the up on the Blog Sunday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
There are also only a couple of days left to vote in the Walk of Fame Awards. Parachute is up for 3: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year and I am also up for 3 writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
My next fic, Rabbit Heart will start posting on February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"You're grounded until you're thirty," she murmured against his hair.
"Understood," he chuckled softly.
"I'm serious," she yawned. "Wait until your father gets home."
Jack gulped audibly and nodded. "I know."
Soon, Bella's breathing evened out and soft snores filled the air. Jack's heart clenched and he truly felt horrible for lashing out at his mother. He had no idea what made him say the things he had. She had never been anything but good to him and proved her love over and over again. The phone chirped next to him and he answered it quickly, not wanting to wake her up just yet.
"Hello?" he asked softly.
"JACKSON CHARLES CULLEN! What is wrong with you, boy? Why would say something like that to your mother?" his father's voice boomed from the phone's speaker.
"Shh, Dad, please quiet down," he replied in a hushed voice.
"Quiet down?" Edward yelled. "Are you seriously telling me to be quiet? Boy, have you lost your mind?"
"No, Dad, please," Jack whispered, "Mom is sleeping next to me."
He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15418
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Worth It?
You're doing good so far. I really like this story so far. I can't wait for you to update. I hope it's soon!
Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91321
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Looks like Mrs. White has already figured out the nature of our favorite foursome's relationship and isn't very happy about it. I love how you are writing the third enstallment to the Awakenings Series.
Great chapter. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Mmm, who wouldnt want a punishment like that? Amazing chapter and Mrs. White can go to hell if she can't be nice to innocent children.
Author's Response:
I know, right? I would take that over and over again!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Well at least the principal is understanding of different lifestyles.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C
Banner By: Rachel MS
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28911
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Poor Emmett...oh well. great job so far
Author's Response:
Emmett lost far and square. LOL He'll get his revenge I'm sure! hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 9. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 10. See You on Sunday… Hugs~Izzy _______________________________ Chapter 10 (BPOV) My Grandfather was looking at the hardwood floor. Maybe he’s hoping it’ll swallow him up now? I thought but said, “Tell me what’s going on. Why were you in my dreams? Tell me about what you, being an elf means. What do you have to do as the King? And what will I have to do as your Heir?” Hugs~Izzy
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Interesting chapter... a lot of information to take in on everyone's part I guess. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I'm really trying to udate on Sunday's and Thurs. Chapter 11 will be up on Thurs. Thanks~ Hugs~ Izzy
Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11. Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy _________________________________________________________ Chapter 11 (BPOV) Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced. Hugs~Izzy
In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 16139
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Amusing ending to a somewhat serious chapter... looking forward to your next update
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, glad you liked it!
t
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Wow... Okay, words forming any minute now to tell you how amazing these two chapters are. Can't wait to see what happens next. I love your stories!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad that you're liking it!
T
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Oh boy! Troubles coming. I love the way you write. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad that you like the story and my writing style!
T
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Just read your story and I totally love it. I hope you'll continue writing it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm trying to get it caught up. I didn't think anyone was reading it on here, so I've fallen behind in updating on here. It's also posted on FFn. I'm glad that you like it! T
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Interesting turn....hmmm...wonder how it'll play out
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
This has trouble written all over it. And Edward is such a little punk ass bitch! Anyways- I love this story so keep up the good work.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Uh-oh, that's not good. I really hope that Jasper gets to her in time. Update again soon please!
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Aww yay! They are making progress. I just hope that she is able to not serve the Volturi Guard cuz that would suck that she found him and had to leave him.
I did like how you made Jane a semi-ally though because no one ever really does.
Anyways- good job and I can't wait for more!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I love Crazy Bella!!!! She should also bring up the fact that Alice was trying to call Aro...just a thought. Anyways it was really good- can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Aww such a good fun-loving chapter. I think my favorite part was Esme's lesson at the spa. Can't wait for Jasper and Bella to do the naughty though. Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I can't wait for B & J to do the deed either--neither one of them will tell me when they're gonna do it though! LOL
Thanks for reading.
T
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Arg! Of course thats where it ends. This story is turning out to be very complex. I hope Jasper finds Bella before Edward can do any damage.
Author's Response:
The Major is coming to the rescue!
Thanks for reading hun!
T
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I loved this chapter. I couldn't tell you a favorite part because i had a couple like bossy Bella in the bedroom and feisty Bella in the garage. You're doing a great job.
Excited for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
I appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you liked. It makes writing the next chapter a little bit easier!
T
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
This chapter was really good, but i wish we could have gotten the full cirtus. But I guess it'll make the wait for the next chapter worth waiting for.
Author's Response:
Lemons in the next chapter, I swear!
Thanks for reading.
T
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I loved it! Amazing lemony goodness.... I am so excited for what you have in store for those two!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, glad that you liked it!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Such a fucking hot chapter. I sense trouble is coming though.
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Ok....didn't see that one coming...at all, but hey, now they have to be able to stand a chance. Right? .... Right?
Author's Response:
Yeah, I've got a few tricks up my sleeve! lol
Thanks for reading.
T
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I love the chapter, and as always am anxious for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, the next one will be up in a few days!
T
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I thought it was hella funny. Kudos on the chapter girlie. I cannot wait to see what happens with Jacob.
Author's Response:
Thank hun, glad you liked it!
Stay tuned for more about wolf boy!
t
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
my favorite line from this chapter was "I think I fucked you stupid." can't wait to see what Jasper has up his sleeve.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading hun!
t
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Not that I didn't enjoy it, but thats it really? Well I did enjoy all of it, and wish there was more to it because it feels like there are some loose ends. Couldn't say what they are persay, but it does feel like they are there.
Anyways, good job. Hope you post more here soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
T
Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rocking Car
Your quote is from Twilight, and please keep writing this story
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Girl
"I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can ever just be whelmed?" "I think you can in Europe,"- from 10 Things I Hate About You
Good chapter.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Black Angel
The quote was from Titanic: "You think a first class girl (straight A student) can't drink?" Good chapter!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Back to reality
I love how you worked in the quote from Twilight. It was a very good chapter. I have a feeling the while Tanya has been a good thing, James will be a problem.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
This story is getting really good. Hope that they make it through Monday though!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Rumors vs Truth
I liked the whole chapter in general. You did a really good job writing it, and I don't know if this is right, but you did have a quote from A Walk to Remember (People will see....or maybe it was can see). Well anyways, looking forward to next Wednesday
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Riding a bike
Okay, the quote is from Sweet Home Alabama. I cannot wait for some citrusy fun.
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Adult movies
I liked how Edward walked in on Bella watching porn and how he was able to educate her in the ways of her body was good. I really did enjoy it and cant wait to see what happens next.
Is your quote this week from tghe Gilmore Girls with the whole "I love you." and "Thank you." thing? Cant wait for next week?
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Give and Take
Oh boy. I get that she's embarrassed to talk to Edward about this kinda stuff, but she really should get over it. He'll most likely over-react because she tries to keep him from feeling bad.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: A Game
I loved Bella's game, even though Edward failed miserably. I also liked him waking her up because he couldn't go to the bathroom...just a thought, why didnt he rub it out? Anyways, good job and looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Shocking News
I liked it when she confided in Edward about her sex related issues. I just hope that he doesn't mention Rose's condition to anyone because it really wasn't Bella's place to say anything.
Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 135060
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Poor Emmett. But who wouldn't want such a good big brother?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
It's good to see her getting back to herself. I hope she'll be ok in that room. I know she might not be at first, but hopefully she'll be able to pull it together.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's a very interesting start. I'd like to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Still enjoying this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I feel so bad for everyone. I understand why Charlie and Renee are frustrated or however you choose to word it, but six years in what they could assume was pure hell is bound to take its toll on a person.
I hate to think of all that Bella (and by extension her family and friends) is going to have to go through. I hope that in the end she'll be ok.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I really like this story. It's heartbreaking yes, but that shows the realness that you have brought to the story. I love the relationship between Emmett and Bella as well as how you are portraying it. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Poor Bella. A granola bar as "treat". Really good chapter. I hope Renee and Charlie learn to back off a bit.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Well she seems to be adjusting a little better. I think its good that is slowly starting to open up to her friends.
Is it hard for her to be around her parents because whoever took her was an adult?
Author's Response:
That's part of it. It's more to the connection that she has with Emmett, Jasper, Rose, Alice, and Edward, though.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Aww yay! She's starting to open up more. That ending note seems a little daunting. I hope since she's given her parents an inch they don't push for a mile.
Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I loved that even just for a moment you made her normal again. It shows promise for future chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She was needing a moment of just being a carefree girl:)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Poor Bella. Kudos for trying so hard.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
That's right. We need to get a mob together. You're doing a great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Well William and Catherine definitely aren't going to be getting their way if their children have anything to say about it- hell probably if anyone else finds out about it too. It was nice to get insight into how everyone else has been taking Bella's return. I honestly question how close William and Catherine are to this group because to want to stay away from her because of what she's been through is, well, insane.
Good job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Well who can blame her for taking steps backwards...everyone is making her kidnapping about them when it barely affected anyone.
Good job.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Well that is an interesting twist. It will be interesting to see how long it takes her to get back to all of them.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Things are slowly looking up now or at least it seems so.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Oooh boy. So much for being better.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Aww poor Garrett. I hope it all works out.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Totallt didnt see that one coming. At first when I read it, it didn't make sense at all, but wow. This is sure getting complicated.
Author's Response:
I know, thanks:)
When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134480
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting so far. I haven't found many good "Bad Bella" stories, so considering I already like the way you write, this could be one of the good ones out there.
Just out of curiousity, why is Bella a Cullen instead of Swan?
Author's Response:
Because her father isn't Charlie. I promise to explain it all :)
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Hmm, well Edward sure has his work cut out for him where Bella is concerned. If it helps, you are doing a great job with the Edward POV.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.'
After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.
Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.
Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness
Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV
Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*
Good chapter....please update soon
Picks up at the end of Eclipse, where Bella is kissing Jacob and instead of discovering some love for him, she finds him just a friend. This is my version of Breaking Dawn, wherein sacrifices have to be made for eternity with the one you love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Bella's Must Reads!, Gelesen
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271871 Read Count: 43044
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Oh God did I get some good laughs out of this chapter! Is Bella ever going to be let in on the joke?
Author's Response:
She will, eventually, but Em and Jasper and even Alice need to have some more fun with it first! Glad I could nake you laugh!
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
This was a fun chapter read. Some real good family fluff.
Author's Response:
Ahh thanks, I wanted to turn them loose on humans :) They had a good time! Glad you liked it!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I love Alice. Only she could demand indulgence and get it. Great chapters!!!
Author's Response:
haha I love her too! She was out to give her sister one great entrance into vamphood! Glad you liked it!
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
When do we get to know everyone else's reactions??? I wanna know what Emmett says cause it is pretty much guaranteed to be funny
Author's Response:
Haha I'll post that chapter next :) I did it as an outtake but can put it here since it's done :)
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
Amazing chapter. You are doing a wonderful job with this. Cant wait for the next installment
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I am thrilled you're enjoying my version of how things could have gone!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Good chapter with a sad tinge to it. It is unfortunate that things have to be this way, but we know that it was coming eventually. I do really enjoy how you are writing this. The one thing that really made me sad about Breaking Dawn is that you barely got to see how Bella's relationships with the members of the Cullen family changed and developed. Like how you've really made Jasper and Emmett Bella's big brothers.
It would be nice to see some more interactions with Carlisle and Esme. Just because Bella has never really had parents because her mother was flighty and all that. Then Charlie was never really around. So it'll be kinda cool to see how she takes to her vampiric parents.
Anyways, really good chapter. Looking forward to seeing how Charlie handles everything and all that.
Author's Response:
Yes, there are a few angsty type chapters upcoming, plus some outtakes that go with them that are also a little hard to read. But it really did have to be this way in order for Bella to have her new life. I am a daddy's girl and hated doing that to Charlie but it's really how I felt the books could have/should have gone.
There are a few things with Carlisle and Esme coming up although I do admit I spent more time developing the "younger" vamps relationships than the adult ones. It was harder to write them. But there are a couple moments I do think you'll like ;)
Glad you liked it and you'll get another chapter tomorrow that will give you more of a look into Charlie. Poor guy :( Thanks for the review!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I'm glad she and Rose finally got it all out there. Maybe now Rose can be somewhat nice.
Author's Response:
It was time, they had a lot to deal with but they're taking steps toward being family now :)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Not exactly the way I thought she'd find out but it works. I hope she gets back everyone in a fun way too.
Author's Response:
Haha she will :)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Tanya got hers, and I understand why Bella feels bad, but hey, them's the brakes. I just hope she doesn't lose ground with Rosalie. Bella had no idea what she was doing.
Author's Response:
She may lose a little ground with Rose but the chasm isn't as deep. Rose has a good reason not to trust someone with Bella's ability, being out of control of her own mind would remind her of being out of control with her rape I think. So a little bit of an issue ahead but it doesn't last long ;)
Bella feels bad but she knows that she didn't mean to do it too :)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
Mmm. I like the possibilities of her power.... hmmm...
Author's Response:
Haha me too! I go way beyond where I ever thought I would with it! Can't wait to share ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Nice fluffy chapter. I'm glad Rosalie is trying to be nicer to Bella and stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you! They're trying to work toward peace and getting there now :)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Great.... problems on the horizon...
You're doing a fantabulous job!
Author's Response:
Yeah things are ramping up! I'm glad you're enjoying it :) Not too much left!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
You did a phenomenol job with this story. So much better than Breaking Dawn
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :) I'm posting the epilogue in a couple minutes, so thrilled you liked it!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Aww, I'm so glad everything worked out in the end. I think the story is much less messy without Renesmee. You did an excellent job, but I do have to admit I am very sad to see this story end.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had to give them a HEA, though there was some sadness in there too. I have several outtakes to post still and several more to write so there will be more to come when I get time again :)