Reviews by pixiewriter
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Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 62090
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OMG I think I just died laughing.  That is just priceless... can't wait til your next chapter!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

This will be interesting...can't wait til Edward finds out who Bella's friend is!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This story is really very sweet...  Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella come together sans the smoke screens

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

No!  I need to know what happens!  Please please please update soon!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start but not much to go on...I'd read more



Author's Response:

Glad you´re interested!  Stay with me and I hope you enjoy the ride!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh for the love of all things holy!!! This is gonna be epic....please please please post the next chappie soon!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMFG!!! Amazing chapters!  Can't wait for the rest!



Author's Response:

Glad you´re enjoying it! Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh boy!  You love to make us wait for the fall out.  Please give us another chapter tonight!  Please?

 

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Let's hope they never remember walking in on Da-Da masturbating!  That shit scars you good.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I'm with you, Krazi!  Screw football and bring on the chapters!  This fic is still amazing.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I was so scared you killed her....omg

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

That was so cute....  Can't wait to see how this works out!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward was 19.  Bella was 13.  They were next door neighbors.  Charlie was the chief of police.  Carlisle was a doctor at the local hospital. 

Edward’s little sister Alice was also 13 and Bella’s best friend. 

While home from college for the summer, Edward spent time with his little sister and her best friend so their parents could all go out for dinner.

Over the next several years, Edward and Bella became good friends, until the summer she turned 16 when she transformed before his eyes.

 

Banner for my story

AH, ExB, Mostly EPOV, sort of coming-of-age, hopefully a little poignant, with a splash of angst until Bella's at least seventeen.  Mature for language, eventual lemons and a very spunky Bella.

 

Banner made by yours truly!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77808 Read Count: 67190
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Race

I like the opening but are all your chapters gonna be that short?

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167465
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

i really like this story so far, but you might want to consider formatting your chapters a little more.  It can get difficult to read.



Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Year One, Day Three

Please Please Please tell me that you are going to continue this story.  I beg of you because it is really good.  I wanna see what happens next year.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Year One to Two: The Gap

Yay!!! I'm so glad you updated.  This chapter certainly did not disappoint.  I like the way you are building the relationship between Mase and Bella.  Cannot wait for your next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before

I'll never stop hoping that some day you'll come back to finish this fic.  Its such a fun read.  

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before

I'll never stop hoping that some day you'll come back to finish this fic.  Its such a fun read.  

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before

I'll never stop hoping that some day you'll come back to finish this fic.  Its such a fun read.  

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2024 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before

I'll never stop hoping that some day you'll come back to finish this fic.  Its such a fun read.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334698
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

We have to wait until next week to find out whether or not she tells her mother to take a hike or not?!?!?!

That's just not fair.  I've loved this story since I started reading it, and I really hope there is a happy ending for Bella and Edward sans Renee because honestly, who the hell doesn't know their child's allergies?  Especially if they only have one child!  

I loved Carlisle's input to Phil's theory about Renee having a medical condition.  Selfish Bitch syndrome indeed.  I think some steroids even got added to that.

I hate to see Bella having such a hard time eveytime things start going well for her.  It strikes a little close to home for me.

I cannot wait to read your next chapter, and I really hope Bella tells Renee that she isn't going anywhere.



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

The Other Woman by sdaisy76 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Bella and Carlisle were high school sweethearts that went their separate ways and later reconnect...after they both were married to other people. Is the fight to be together worth it in the end or is Bella destined to be the other woman in his life? All characters belong to S. M. I just like playing with her toys ;)


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49027 Read Count: 7327
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2014 Updated: 26 Jun 2014
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love how you are writing this story and cannot wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Shasta

DC by sdaisy76 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary:

They met online and she fell in love. He stops responding after a few months but she never knew why. Bella needs a change in her life so she moves half way across the country, will she find him again in D.C. and get her happily ever after or was that few months all she has to hold onto? S.M. owns Twilight, I just have fun playing around with her toys :)

I accidently deleted this entire story instead of just an extra chapter...this is reposting the story.  SORRY! 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64173 Read Count: 7829
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 25 Nov 2014
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Love this story.  I hope you update soon!!!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaase update soon!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope you update again soon!  I love this story, and I can't wait to see where it ends up.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Amazing chapter as per your usual.  I hope your writer's block is gone for good...at least for a while.  I missed this story.  Cannot wait to see what happens because I have a feeling Char and Peter are not going to be able to keep Jasper from finding out Bella is staying the night.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Not a Chapter...Sorry just an A/N

Sorry you have had such a rough year and a half.  That really sucks.  I look forward to your updates (hopefully)!! I really love this story!

Summary:

Charlie Swan made a deal with the devil. Owing a debt he couldn't repay, he took the cowardly way out and offered his daughter's services to pay off his tab. The rich and powerful Carlisle Cullen greedily accepts, and Bella finds herself at the mercy of a dark and violent man. Will she survive? Or will he beat the life out of her? Dark themes. NC-17 for violence and language. AU.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39293 Read Count: 72893
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2014 Updated: 19 May 2015
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting start.  I can't wait to see how Bella manages to handle all of this.

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 98049
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Poor Bella all mixed up and confused.  Hope it all works itself out.



Author's Response:

She has good friends 'm surethey will make her see sense

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

ASAP!!!!! Loved this chapter, hated the cliffhanger!



Author's Response:

Ok now but you can't really blame me x

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Funny how that seems to happen to some people.  All their problems become everyone else's and while those people get hurt the person who started it all gets nothing but relief.  

Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella move forward.



Author's Response:

Yes he seems to have gotten away without too much hassle

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Awww...  I have to say I agree with Rosalie a bit. Maybe Bella just needs to realize that they just need to clear the air and start over.  Hope you update again soon!



Author's Response:

I like Rosalie's outlook on life more people should live that way. X

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yayyy!!! Can't wait to see how Edward reacts to her reaching out.  Or Emmett's reaction to Rose... I think they are tied as to which I want to see more.  Love this story though.



Author's Response:

We can start putting them back together now yeah x

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Sneaky Edward!!! Loved the chapter.  I think you're doing a great job.



Author's Response:

Thank you x

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

As much as I hate to say it, Edward kinda deserves what he's going through.  He left way too much to chance by not being honest, but I love how its working for your story.



Author's Response:

I agree he has  taken too many chances let's hope he can talk her round 

HATE BELLA by nilo24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

 

I born in a rich family , life is not easy and i was innocent in all of it until i decide it to have one thing i cant never have. i decide it to not have heart-broken heart, my plan was to steal him, but i cant steal any men, but i did choose anorther option as you will know , HE will Hate me ...

CHARECTERS: BELLA, EDWARD, ALICE , ESME , CARLISE,CHARLIE,


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Tragic Affairs
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20791 Read Count: 1756
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2017 Updated: 15 Oct 2017
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story seems very interesting but you grammar and spelling leaves a lot to be desired.  I recommend looking into getting a beta reader.



Author's Response:

THank you for suggestion last time i use BETA , SHE DID NOT GIVE EDIT VERSION OF CHAPTERS AND I CANT ASK ANYONE BECUASE PEOPLE ARE BUSY AND THEY DONT CARE ABOUT HELPING OUT. SO I DECIDE IT TO USE WHAT I CAN DO BEST , MOST CHAPTERS ARE GREAT IN SHAPE . I READ A LOT OF STORIES IN THIS SITE THAT WRITTEN WORST THEN MY WRITING .HOPEFULLY PLOT LINE GIVES PEOPLE THE BOOST TO KNOW HOW THIS STORY GOES ON

Summary:

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Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84438
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Three ~ Faith For The Future

I really enjoyed the story but feel like everything was rushed and wrapped up very quickly.

Perfect For Me by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Perfect For Me Banner

 

Summary: After his socialite fiancée dumps him, Jasper Whitlock realizes just how superficial his love life has been. When he meets the intelligent and quirky Bella Swan, his parents instantly disapprove of her, but she just might be the making of him. Is she the one who is perfect for him? NC/AU/OOC/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33004 Read Count: 13160
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 06 Feb 2019
Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I really enjoyed this new fic, although I was disappointed that it didn't really fall into the category of a NC-17 rating (you write them so well).  Looking forward to more of your fics.