Is it just me? Or was that like really short?

It would have been really good have Edward told Rose that Emmett atleast respects Eward's girlfriend. Cuz' he sure as hell doesn't respect Rose anymore.

Oh well, hopfully this whole mess will get figured out soon.

You know the fact that she refuses to even listen to Edward makes me wonder why Edward is even trying. Like Emmett said he only knew her for three weeks and she took off without even hearing him out.

He comes back just to get her to listen and she still refuses.

Maybe he should leave the chasing after someone to Bella. She certaily knows how to run away. That's for sure.

If those pictures of Rose gets out before he can explain. Tough shit. I can't feel bad for someone who won't let anyone talk to her.

Edward should leave and wait for Bella to come to him when she wants to hear him out. Leave his phone number and address and just go with a note stating he had come there to clear a misunderstanding and if she refuses to even hear him out there was/is no point of even coming here. He has work afterall.

I have liked the story so far and I still do. I just hate hate hate when people write off a mother's intuition. Bella saw and felt herself having a boy. So in all honesty. She should be having a boy.

It really annoyed me in SM's breaking dawn as well.

I don't know one women or girl whose had children and not know off the bat. What the real gender of the baby is.

Other then that. It's all really good.

why would it matter if aro or anyone goes to far? Even if they knew they were. None of them are there willingly.

Did you learn Italian or did you use a translator? I'm just curious(sp?). I may have lived in Italy for three years but I didn't bother to learn. Italians where I lived weren't nice so I didn't realy care what they said.

I wonder if she is Italian or if she lived there a while and picked up the language. I can only imagine what her parents have done for her to be so resentful of them.

I think Edward is safe to ask her age though.I'm only saying this because I'm curious how old she is lol.

It's weird how Edward claims for the streets to be worse on girls and it's not safe. Then turns around and considers leaving her alone by this coming summer without a thought on how she will actually survive.

I also find it odd that he wants to find out things about her but doesn't really want to tell her anything.Besides his interest of course. Which if he wants her to speak up he should probably ask her about her interest rather then her past.Going straigt into it like that can't be helping him.

I wonder what that third man jerk thought he was doing when he kept watch of Edward and Bella. And to get pissed off like that. Something was up there.

what a happy chapter!!

I'm glad Bella is sticking to her guns on the Alice bandwagan. lol.

I don't care when you update. Wheneva is fine b me.

Edward needs to get ove his shit. But not for Bella. For himself.

I have no idea what Bella is doing but it's pissing me off. She is useing Jake as means to an end. And she is using Edward to make herself feel better.

I actually hate Emmett and Alice getting in either one of their business and thinking it's okay. It's not. And they all need to know it.

Emmett really needs to shut the hell up too.I'm getting really tired of is innuendos(exactly what I hated about him in the actual books). Rose is pissing me off too.

God, Rose needs to just stick with her own life issues because she is just being a pain in the ass  right now.

Edward has enough on his shoulders and he is getting it from all sides. Tanya, Emmett, Rose..Jake? I mean come on some one give the boy a break.

I think he should find his own place just so he won't have to be bothered by all these people in his business. He should find his own place and go to therapy of some kind, maybe even music classes or something. Anything that'll make him happy and cope with his own emotions.

Bella needs to get it into her head that she can't have everyone to do everything for her. She needs to be a big girl and make decions for herself. She can't really expect Edward to cofess while she is with Jake...really? Does that not sound wrong to her? Can she not grow a pair and break it off with Jake?

Edward has been amazing and has been helping himself sense she gave him sound advice and made him want to be happy. He broke it off with Tanya. He started eating unhealthy.

Bella hasn't really done a damn thing to make herself happy. She just expects happiness to come to her without lifting a finger. I get it she had it rough. But most people in her postion would rather raise their child alone then be put in the unpromising position she let herself in. She had no feelings for Jake, yet she dragged him there knowing he could help her. She didn't think things through. She just wallowed and made Jake do all the work.

I'll start respecting her more when I see her grow a backbone and start doing things on her own. I mean, she knew about James coming and it was Jake who tried to find a lawyer cause it was 'to stressful' to her. I mean..gah...I'm really not liking Bella here....

She's no better then Rose and her assumtions.(Which btw,she needs to get over it because if Edward was really that bad would the entire family be begging for his attention as much as they do?)

Bella should also tell Rose about Emmett word for word adive that Bella gave him. He is no more a saint then Edward. Though I find Edward far more tastful then Emmett. Atleast he doesn't rub it in Emmett's face what kind of girl Rose is..Hell, he never spoke a bad word to Emmett so I don't even understand his vadetta.

I reall hope Tanya grows up soon, she is just being plain childish now. And, kate needs to tell her to grow up too! She shouldn't just be listening to Tanya simply because she is related. She should tell her like it is and give her an ultimadium because it's Tanya that is breaking everyone apart. Edward just wants to be happy and she wasn't even happy with him either so I don't even get her deal...

Don't even get me started on Victoria and James....grr

*whooosh rant over*

The words can't we all just get along come to mind....You're a lovely writer and I hope this will all wrap up nicely.

Tanya,James,Victorie and maybe a little of Rose as well all get what's coming to them or you know, a dose of each there own medicine. Alice and Emmett being told to shut up in a way that will actually make them shut up would be great as well.

ps.Edward better not confess to Bella till she break it off with Jake. I don't care how much easier it would be for Bella if he did. She needs to do that shit because she wants to not because Edward is good at being persuasive.I don't wanna hear about Edward confessing then having to wait agonzingly long while for Bella to end it with Jake. When she shouldn't even have brought him with her to begin with.

Me, Kate is just jumping at straws.

I don't understand. Why didn't Edward simply state yes to Kate when she asked him if Bella was the reason. It's true. Though he didn't cheat on Tanya.

He did tell her he no longer had feelings for her. She should have just taken the hint as it was. I still don't like Kate. Apologizes or not. It's hollow if she is going to constantly take Tanya's side at the next turn.

Edward should just cut himself from that family entirlel and make sure they have nothing to do with any of his projects and work anymore.They obviously aren't to be trusted.

I'm glad Bella stood up for herself. I just wish she had done it again when Kate accused her of being with Edward when he was with Tanya.

I wonder if Feliz is a hitman and if he'll consider killing James and that fucker he is chasing.

I want to point out that Bella's screwups far out weigh Edward's.

She stayed with an abusive husband till she nearly lost Vanessa. Then proceeded to fuck things up by leading Jake on because she didn't want to man up and work on her own. And like a wrecking ball she didn't have the decency to close things off with Jake untill he nearly proposed.

And now? She leaves Edward without much thought giving him the impression she can't make it on her own. And has proceeded in his belief by telling Alice so.

I get it. She is going through a hard time and needs to get things  in order. But she should have been Vanessa's mom first before acting the way she was. And then  to give Edward the impression like it's all his fault? Was a low blow.

Like I was saying, Edward hasn't really screwed up towards any one person like Bella has.

He was in a loveless relationship for a long time. That was just as much Tanya's fault as it was his. If she has always felt the way she does now. Then she is just as much to blame for that whole situation as him.

As for the other stuff Edward supposivly did. He had cancer and a bad childhood. That pretty much trumps anything he has actually done.

Now, as for this chapter. Glad Edward is doing things besides wallowing in self-doubt and guilt. If only he could get a P.I on who rat Bella out, Although, judging from this chapter it's not hard to figure out.

I'm with Alice in this. Even if Rose did all that shit because she cared. She knows she was wrong. Yet, she won't apologize or even admit it.

So screw her and that high horse she imagines herself to be on.

I also kind of want to laugh at Rose too. Rose makes a stupid mistake by insulting Alice's other brother in front of Alice. But instead of acting like a decent person or atleast someone who knows what's good and bad to say in of others. She refuses to apologize and then ignores Alice every meeting after that. Even when she was sitting right next to Esme.

And then Rose has the nerve to be pissed when she put Alice's anger all on herself?

What a moron.

If she would just sincerely apologize and admit she was wrong. She wouldn't be having all these problems with the Cullens.

I'm still miffed she had the nerve to get mad that Edward called Bella, Alice's friend. Rose hasn't been a friend to Bella since she started dating Emmett. It's been more then a fews weeks and she didn't try making anything up to Bella then.

The fact that Rose knows she is wrong and have been wrong but won't apologize about it. Is what really gets me. And her still making excuses about the situation. I mean come on. Accept you were wrong and apologize woman. Stop being mad for being called out on your shit and accept it. Geez.

Even if Bella does listen to Rose. I hope she doesn't become friends with her again. She so isn't worth it. And Bella should tell her that too. Along with telling her she won't be at her wedding. If Rose invites and tells her about that as well.

And Emmett. You're a bad guy dumbass because your bitch of a fiance is what caused a lot of the problems between Bella and Edward. *shakes head* What an idoit.

Victoria is gong to get hers right? I mean she is going to be in pain at some point,right? I don't want to hear her walking away without a scratch in handcufs. She knows she is going to jail. That's not really going to upset her.

It would be great if she suffered a bit too.

Sounds to me like Garrett should get a taste of his own medicine as well. Instead of actually helping his daughter's mental stability. He'd rather hurt others because he isn't patient enough to act like a real father.grr lol

Why didn't he speak about these bs when he talked about Mehgan? I just don't get it.

Though Rose and Emmett constantly butting in Bella's affairs and making Bella's choices for her is getting extremly annoying.

I really hopw Tanya doesn't make things worse in the near future. And that the court case isn't screwed up somehow and makes Bella guilty.

Maybe it's just me. But isn't Bella kind of stupid in this chapter? The impatience and agitation from the cop would have given me pause.-I also wouldn't have rushed by myself, simply because some cop tells me to.

And she says Edward's stubburn? Hello, pot meet kettle.

Honestly, what on earth was she thinking? If her father really did have a heartattack. Wouldn't have been better for her to wait for Emmett and Rose to get home and drive together with them?

I don't understand her logic of needing to go that instant.

But since the cops along with Charlie is/was suppoed to be not far behind Bella. Then the guy couldn't get to far, right?

I really hope this doesn't turn to violent. And if it does. I really don't want to read the details.-Vague referrancing is fine by me. Though the descreption at the end there has me cringing. I could see why that was nessary.

But any descreption of abuse from here on out. Won't or doesn't seem nesassary, in my opinoin.

Crossing fingers Bella doesn't break any bones or get any permanant scars.

I was iffy abput Seth. I was. But I gave him a chance because of canon.

Can't believe it. Just can't.

Wonder where Edward punched him? Was it photographed?

I don't see what the company has to be mad about. If anything they should be pissed for losing a customer because of one of there employers mistake.

Threatening they're going to sue? How Hollywood of them.

And Rose? I bet if Bella knew how much Rose really disliked Edward she would have never spilled her guts to her.

Though I did think it was a bit out of line for both Bella and Rose to be pissed about Edward's job. Esp. Bella. Rose on the other hand, feels like she is just grabbing at straws here for any reason to not like Edward. His going to work seems to be the only thing she has on him.

Let it go man. let it go.

I am so glad Bella listen to reason.

I think if Edward spoke with the chick's husband about her crossing lines with his privacy and there might be a lawsuit if she doesn't drop the interview. Then her husband would shut it down and give her an ultimatum. He may not know the entertainment intrusdry. But I bet he knows damn well what that kind of lawsuit could to do him and his busness.

I also think more people would be disgusted and pissed about this kind of interview. And probably boycott it for the sake of it all.

It's kind of like that stupid Lifetime Movie the chick from Heros was in. About Amanda Knotts and none of them, who was producing the film. Did any real research. Even the actors didn't do shit real for the movie. It was all embelished and completely untrue. -Also getting promtly sued by both Amanda's perants and the British perants of the girl who was killed.

This kind of interview in real life. Would be slashed and boycotted immedatily. I don't know any company that would actually pick it up. Espeacily, if the person whom they are interviewing is a criminal talking about someone who is still alive. -That's dangerous territory there. And they are looking pretty slimy if they actually go throw with it.

Ever wonder why no one is watching Liftetime anymore? That Amanda Knott's film(which was never aired due to never getting permission from anyone who was involved in the actual case. And also because it's producer is being sued for that very same reason.) was just the tip of the iceburg of many. Which lead to an extreme decrease in audience. But the channel WE is having a blast at Lifetime's idoicy.

Anyways, given how well known Edward's perants are, along with Emmett and Charlie's police status. It's hard to believe this interview will make the light of day. I think the moment they announce the show and what that show would consist of. A lot of people would protest and some even go so far as to stop watching any other shows from that same channel. Just for crossing that line.

Crossing my fingers and hoping that the previews for the show is the only thing that gets out.

Ho Hu. I hope he doesn't pick up Jessica. Not because I'm afraid of what she'll do. But to prove a point to his parents. He is going to start doing shit his way and if they have a problem with it. Then they will be happy to know he is laving them for good once he graduates. Hell he could leave now if they agreed to a little legal work.

It would be wonderful if Edward does everything he can to embarress them enough to disown him and allow him to live on his own. He practicaly is anyway. That'll be one obstacle gone.

I want him to really humilate them too. Call them out on what kind of parents they are in an important event. Make an announcment at school on all the shit he can get away with as long as fucks whoever daddy and mommy want him too.That'll really make them look bad to. Because Jessica will them tell her parents..lol....oh the theories.

Guess I just really want some humiliation to go towards them and have them be loked down on. Like they have been looking down on him.

I'm not to worried about Charlie. Since Bella is the only one who puts any effert with  relationship with her father and does alot around the house. He is going to get all the punishment he deserves once she graduates. Since Rose fav and all. He'll know exactly what he had raised her to become and be regretful for what he put Bella through once she is no longer there to help and care for him.

I'm so happy about this chapter. Finally, Alice is going to get it! Yay! She sooo deserves it too. And it looks like Esme is going to be in for a hell of a ride and she is starting to notice it too. Wonder if she'll think the constant fighting with Edward to get him to do what she wants will be worth it for her? Hmm

I'm glad Bella has family to support her(that isn't the Cullen's.) I'm also happy that Charlie was right about Edward's fighting spirit. Go Charlie.

(I would have replied to your review reply but I  can't do that. It won't let me. Sorry. But thank you for clarifying some things for me.)

Hmm..this is such a sensitive topic on it's own. She's already to late to be considering aborition. There is one option out.

(why she didn't simply take the day after pill-the day after she was raped. Is beyond me.)

I guess the biggest issue I have is Bella's whole future revolving around a man to keep her happy. Not just any man, but a docter. Someone who isn't likely to be home often nor be able to take care of the kid as much.

Another issue is her age and career. She had a plan and it got fucked up because she was raped. Most people in her position would wind up resenting the kid from holding her back for her future. Or from holding her back from being able to act her own age.

She now(maybe) has a child to think about and keep first priority. She isn't married and her parents aren't much help. While Charlie is an 'o.k' father. He obviously doesn't know how to raise a kid. How else would Renee feel so entitled to her treatment of Bella? This can't be the first time either.

Charlie's neglact is what has me questioning his character and advice.

Then there is Edward. While he is a great guy and obviously loves Bella (even though he knows hardly anything about her). He isn't the baby's father. Nor is he married to Bella. Though he is pretty content with his life because he was able to live it to the fullest and is ready to settle down.

That doesn't, however, mean Bella is.

She has mentoned multple times how kept she has been. The moment she steps out of line she gets raped. She hasn't been able to lead a teen life or even experience life. Now she is expected to take care of another life. When she, herself doesn't know or have experienced it. (I personally think that's a bit much to ask for.)

Edward shouldn't hope for her to change her plans. He should be encouraging her in another direction. If he wants her to keep the kid. For instance, giving her advice about college online if she wants to continue it.

Though I think it still sucks that way as well. She will be at home either way with no real commincation with anyone besides the baby and maybe Edward. (This is also another reason why/how mother's resent there kids.) She won't be able to go to any college parties or stay up all hours simply chatting and doing homework with friends.

*sigh*

Bella being as smart as she is, why didn't she take the day after pill? (it's free and no docter would ever report it.) It's even mentioned in Sex Ed now in middle & highschool how to get it and everything

A baby girl. I want them to have a baby girl.

Of course, I also want Marcus's number to be up as well. Fucker needs to go. He is just making everyone miserable all around. I'm sure the place would be a lot better of without him too.

damn I was hoping to get this chapter in Edward's pov. Well, atleast we get next chapter in his pov.

I'm crossing my fingers Marcus is dead in the next chapter!

Skip to the aftermath.-Good chap