Reviews by lfcpam
Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I've Got You Under My Skin

ohh very good, I knew he would mistake her talking about someone else..glad that worked out

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84834
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

soo sweet...gotta love christmas proposals



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)  I know, right?  I got no ring, cheap motel room, and over a pizza for dinner (that *I* made since I worked in the pizza restaurant!) when he visited me the weekend after Valentine's Day at college.  haha  :D

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

So sweet..i have tears in my eyes! great job

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

OMG that was too funny...Emmett makes me belly laugh! Had tears in my eyes laughing so hard! Great chappie girl!



Author's Response:

Haha I love that you laughed that hard!  Emmett is so much fun to write.  Who knew I had such a prankster lurking in my nutty head?  Thanks for the review hon!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

aww that was cute...charlie and renee are a hoot. love the way they talked back and forth. 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  They are definitely fun to write and the banter was making me giggle!  Thanks hon!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

ohh I think I see some foreshadowing here.. great as always



Author's Response: Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades. “I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs. “Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly. “What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me. “Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Wow they are all great friends to her and its fun watching them all together..great chapter

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Bella  Im surprised Aro didnt tell Caius and Irena to shut up, he knows she is new but I understand why he cant because he is not her Dom  Wonder what happened to the collar?



Author's Response:

Your right, it wasn't Aro's place to say anything and then i think he was in shock ,,,,thanks for reading and commenting...lml

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

wow cant wait to see what happens in the playroom lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”

 

He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”

 

“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.

 

“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”

 

 I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

god I love this story..Bella;s story is so horrible. Glad she has E to keep her happy



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

Here's a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Thought the collaring was great...lemons are always appreciated LOL



Author's Response:

nothing beats a good lemon,,,lol...thanks for the comment ,,,lml

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Poor bella, I think the punishment was a little rough since she didnt seem to know what she did wrong but I understand why Edward did it.. Emmett cracks me up LOL



Author's Response:

I love Emmett he is like the best big brother, happy, funny and protective. And Bella, she did wrong without thinking about it, but she won't do it again, at least I hope she don't...

Thanks for reading, and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you..  lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wow great chapter...



Author's Response:

thanks...i am glad you like it...lml

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I cant imagine what song they would sing? The men should sing I am Woman LOL



Author's Response:

I would have made them sing something along the lines of 'You lost that lov'n feeling'... But I like the I Am Woman...that would have been funny...lol

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wow that was so sad what that bastard did to her but it was great that they professed their love to each other



Author's Response:

James is a Bastard ,,,,lml

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow I am glad it wasnt something with Bella...cant wait for the usual!



Author's Response:

yeah I think Bella is looking for the usual too...I hope she gets it.  Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Diamond in the Rough

i felt like crying for her...

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What the hell is Leah's problem??? I just want to smack her.



Author's Response:

That's another one of Bella's problems that will be coming to a head ...soon..lml

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was awesome! Enjoy your black friday shopping.. I too and one of those crazy people! See you Monday



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ... I have a teaser for you....lml

Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Great Chapter...i got the Target exclusive..:)



Author's Response:

I picked that one too...thanks for reading, here's your teaser ...lml

A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.

 

The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.

 

A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”

 

I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”

 

“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”

 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

great chapter...lots of good info



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading I have this weeks teaser for you ...lml...

“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

good chapter..loved the smut :)  Irena is up to something but I'm not quite sure if its good or bad



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment...I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Loved the usual...cant wait to see what Edward has in store for the surprise!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading ... I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

loved that chapter..it was really cute



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment. I have a teaser for you....lml

Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I always knew nothing was going on with Aro..poor Jane felt insecure..at least she learned the truth. great chapter



Author's Response:

Jane knew the truth before, you will hear from Jane soon and you will see why Aro made her speak up ....Thanks for reading and leaving me a comment, I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

 

Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

oh wow...is the collar for her or the dog?



Author's Response:

I'm not sure...I have this weeks teaser for you...

“Come back here” Her steps were less hesitant on the way back over and I figured by the time we actually have to walk by other people she would have adjusted to the feeling of the rope.

 

Holding the bag on my lap Bella stood in front of me biting her lip while eyeing the bag when I moved it closer to my body her neck strained in an attempt to see what was inside. This time I chuckled at her interest. “Well, you are nosey tonight”

 

At my words Bella dropped her eyes looking almost sad “Your girl is sorry Master”

 

Cupping her chin I wanted her to look at me to show me the excitement she just had “No...No Isabella. I told you, this is your gift. You should want to see what it is.”

 

Her eyes lit up as she once again craned her neck to see what was in the bag “Why did Master buy his girl a gift?”

 

Why?

 

“Because I can. Because I thought she would like it. Because I want to see it on her.”

 

“What is it?”

 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Great job..I like it when they talk openly..I mean the sex is great too lol but its nice to see them just be..



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I sent you an email as a thank you

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Wow great chapter..loved the zip lining..that was fun and of course all the good smexing! Poor Bella and her nightmares...



Author's Response:

glad you liked the last chapter... sorry this is so late in getting out, but here is this weeks teaser...louise.

“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Wow...so much for a quiet family weekend..lol cant believe Paul said that to charlie LOL



Author's Response:

oh ..Paul thinks himself a comedian ,,,,lol...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

loved esme..she is just too cute for words...oh Bella you screwed up again

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

eww that creepy bastard...I hope someone kicks his ass!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

aww that was so sweet



Author's Response:

They needed a good day...

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

lh

 

New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282983
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

In a word....Perfect

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ohh love it!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Aww poor tyler

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

aww loved that he gave her the kitten too cute

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

not filler just information to see where they are headed lol

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

well edward stuck his foot in it this time...what will he do??

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

wow so happy that Edward is back..why does Emmett not want Bella to be with him?

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

wow what a cliffie, wasnt expecting that

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

wow that was sweet..

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

aww edward loves her :)

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Hell yeah 3 in one day would be perfect!! The lemon drop was superb!!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

loved it  emmett having to talk to her like that  was funny 

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

awww that is so sweet

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

aww that was so sweet how he welcomed him to the family..

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

figures emmett would ruin the moment LOL  edward is just so freakin sweet

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

damn a fire too...what the heck..how are those women gonna fix that

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

wow that was intense...poor eleazar

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

oh man wait until they find out what happened at home..not gonna be pretty

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

wow good chapter.. Congrats on being in the top ten!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

wow he really is sick..great chapter.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

wow that was great..poor edward he is so upset.

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

awww that was so sweet..

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183781
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

wow what the hell is up with Marta, that was sooo not nice! Loving this story

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

great chap..loved the day with Carlie and of course the night with Dilf!!

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Settling In

ohh cant wait!!

Diamond Extra's by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 265]
Summary:

These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Daddy's boy

I loved it, their story was sweet ans sexy

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148711
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

woo nice introduction LOL



Author's Response:

Hi! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave a review. I'm glad you like what you've read so far! I have 38 chapters of this story posted over on FFN so I hope to update here pretty regularly. More to come really soon! Hope to hear from you again!

les16~~

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389603
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

WOW that was an action packed chapter! loved it btw! I cant believe how fast he wants to move hehe

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Wow lots going on...Esme is nasty!



Author's Response:

yah she's a nasty bitch.....but glad she aint his blood...xxooxoxox

Rain by Patch0341 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

For former Marine Eric Martin, life was a series of was just a lonely repetition of mundane moments. One rainy day at the bus stop is all it will take to change his life irrevocably.

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Beauty in Rain

By Kittyisme0341

Picture a priceless relic,

All covered in muck and decay.

It's beautiful splendor is hidden

All covered in drab shades of gray.

 

The Rain comes along and caresses it.

And slowly removes a lot of

The dirt that completely covered it.

And brings back the colors of love.

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Kissing in the rain


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14215 Read Count: 187
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2010
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job! You know I love it already but I wanted to tell you again! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. I have through chapter 7(ish) written, but I am trying to figure out how best to post them. I don't want to post them all and then have all you people clamoring for more. ;o)

Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved this chapter!

Summary:

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Life in Spoons Valley continues as a new generation deals with changes in their small western town.  Dr. Edward Cullen, returning after years of absence while attending medical school, believes that life back in his hometown will be boring after life in the city.  Little does he know that even though the way of things in the west are slow to change, some things remain exciting, wild, and untamed. 

This story is a continuation of my other story Lonesome Hearts.  Please read that story first.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12783 Read Count: 9739
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 02 Mar 2014
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love the chart it really does help!

Adeste Fideles by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella returns home for Christmas for the first time in 5 years. Who awaits her when she arrives?

My one shot written for The Southern FanFiction Review's Countdown to Christmas.

Rated M for lemony goodness.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 2116
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Adeste Fideles

Aww I liked that...makes me feel all Christmasy~

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wild

Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184429
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Antidote

So sweet these two are...my choices are #3 and second choice is #4

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44791
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like! cant wait to read more



Author's Response: Thanks, I was hoping it would go over well. Connie

The Loser by IBACULLEN Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 243]
Summary:

loser

 

Bella struggled with her weight throughout her life. Her problems are enhanced by the pressures society and her family place on her. How could someone like her ever find a decent husband? Her childhood best friend might have the answer to all her problems. A fake marriage. A rise in station for Bella and with the marriage, Edward stands to gain his full inheritance. How can anyone believe that a Cullen would ever want someone like Bella? Who is the real loser here? AU. Cannon. HEA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94730 Read Count: 19542
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2019 Updated: 30 Jul 2019
Reviewer: lfcpam Signed
Date: 05 May 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dont worry we are  hooked 😃