Reviews by TinyLitleDragon
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

waaaaaw, i love that you decided to give new personalities to Charlie and Carliles.. reading moore :)



Author's Response:

Be prepared. It gets a whole lot worse before it gets better.

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

oh, they are so evil.. I would be running away already..

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

RUNNING.. faaar faaar away... 

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Why she doesn't run away??? I would break my leg by jumping out of the window just to leave..



Author's Response:

You've heard the expression "Kick em when their down".  She's just lost her mom & stepdad and been reunited with a father & brother she barely remembers. She's still grieving and processing when they start in on her. She's depressed, repulsed, shocked and doesn't know which end is up. She doesn't think she has any recourse to run. They keep her isolated and she has no way to call for help.

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

honest smile looks different - we all know that..

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

:''(

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

OMG it is half past two a.m. and i want to go sleeeeep, but i have to read.. grrr

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

:) lovely

Reviewer: TinyLitleDragon Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

It's past 3 a.m. and I finally finished... Well THAT was a ride.. I think you probably received lots of bad reviews for writing about such a topic, but well, it happens in a real life (well i hope not, but it certainly can be happening), so I don't see a reason why not to write about it.. It was really unique story, I can't say i "liked" reading it (i hope no one liked the first 10 chaps, but still read it - you got what i mean), but I loved you were not afraid for putting it up there - it spoke about so many important things - the psyche of people and how easy it can be broken, how people deal, how people separete themselves psychologicaly from something happening to him, and what big influence do parents have on their childrens.. Your writing was beautiful, the story one of a kind and I think you handled it all just great :) Wish you the best in next projects ;) Oh and I really loved you give them new perosnalities (or at least to boys), it was refreshing and unpredictable.. great :) 



Author's Response:

Get some much needed sleep now!  I'm glad you made it to the end and liked the story. Please checck out my other stories as well.  I also published an original novel thru twcs "Blind Faith". Check it out if you're interested.

Take care,

Mic