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Aloha! ^^
My name is Sue, but you probably figured that out by now !^^ I´m 26 years old and I´m from Germany.
I love the Twilight Saga and it´s characters! Thank God my friends convinced (more like forced...^^ ) me to read the books ;D I just recently started to write and post fics myself, so please don´t be too harsh with your criticism ;D Honesty is appreciated but please don´t be mean ^^
-Sue
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
AAAAAAAAAAAAARGH!!!! OH.HELL.NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.!!!!!!!!!!! I can´t believe you guys just did that!!! Fucking Aro - stupid psycho is smart ebough to sell it to the others that Edward wanted to rape BElla!!! WTF!!!!!And there is only a two-man-army outside of the gates consisting of Felix and Charlie!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions
HOLY SHIT!!!! What.the.hell.?!?!?!? That better be Edward and he comes along witha good plan to get them all out of there!!! Oh god- you guys just sealed my downfall!!! I´m doomed with horroble nightmares for at least a month-A.Month.- with images of a naked *shudder* Aro in several states of arousal *gag*.......ewwwww.......Aro´s member...*vomit* ......GROSS!!!!! The fucker is so delisional and sick!!! GOD- they need to get out of there!!! NOW!!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
Yeah- I knew Carlisle´s story had to be bad for him to join this fuckery...-but THAT was really....harsh!!!! What the hell happened to poor BElla!?!?!?!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey
Motherfu****!!!!!!That little piece of shit!!!! This is soooo not going to sit well with Edward and the rest!!! And there it is again- the image of Aro doing the dirty...*vomit* Poor Jasper and Alice!!!
Blessed be!!! ;D
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family
What.the .hell.?!?!? Aro is such a fucked up...fuck up!!!( I´m so eloquent,am I not?!?! ;D;D;D;D;D Yay me!!! ^^ ) This is like a twisted version of " The Village"...or well, an even more twisted version!!! Geeeez....Aro must have been a real outcast/loner/socially disfunctional being in real world for getting sooo psycho! And since he was such a loser/loner/sorry- excuse- with- a- dick- that- has- some- serious- issues- with- women he founded this mindfucked cult where women are nothing and he can do as he pleases....Fucker!!! His obsession with Bella gets worse and worse by the chapter!!! Is he actually going to give her away to Edward?! Somehow I doubt it from the way he is acting!!! I was actually wondering what would happen when Bella would meet Renee again..and if they´d really recognize each other but since Renee did not see her I guess I have to wait and see! ;d
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement
Holy mindfuckery!!! Like...literally..mindfuckery!!!! Am I the only one who somewhat sees a pissing contest between Aro and Edward coming along?!?! Aroalready admitted that there is more to Bella to him than there should be and Edward went a wee bit protective/possessive of her instantly....Though I thought that Edward was really sweet, due to the circumstances everything is left with a bitter aftertaste! I´m not quite sure what to make out of the characters,yet! As I said it is hard due to them all being part of Aro´s Cult or whatever you wanna call it...but Esme is still the motherly mother-hen type and Edward was still...well...Edward ^^ Can´t wait to see where this is going!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands
Holy shit!!! That is all so insane!!! But unfortunately enough- not that far away from fiction!!! Yak- now I have the image of an sexually active Aro in my head...*puke* (Sorry-I know this is not meant to be funny- but in my mind Aro is as erotic/sexual as a piece of toast....!!!)
Your storytelling is really good! DIrsturbing,but good!!! I somehow hope that Felix will do the right thing and tell somebody about all that!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings
Just stumbled across your story!!! OMG- Poor Bella(coz it´s absolutely clear that bad things are going to happen to her) and poor Charlie(since he won´t find her when he comes around to visizt them...or will he?!?! That´s what I thought!! ;D) Don´t get me started with Renee!!! How can somebody be so dense?! (Yeah..I know...fiction...AND fictional characters....yada yada ^^ Still- it´s my goddamn right to get pissed! ;D ;D ;D ) Phil really played her well but the little performance of the father really should have made her alarm bells ringing...loud!..Like "We will rock you" style or something!!! Phew...up to the next chapter!
After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry
OMG- the last dream really was intense/mean!!!
I really, really like this story !!!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking
Wow- that was beautiful and emotional! Really have to continue reading- therefore, the review is rather short ^^
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors
DId Alice really just appear in 1918?!?! ;D
This is just getting bette and better!!! I´m really curious about how evrthing will turn out! All this excitement here!!! And a drunk Edward to top it all ;D
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions
Uhm...ok...first of all- The Edward/Bella make-out sessions are absolutely hot! ^^^
Alice´s visions are really freaking me out,though!!! And I guess it´s safe to say I´m a bit confused also but that is more due to my brain than to your story ;D
I don´t know why but I get the feeling that Alistair could be the guy in the alley or is at least up to something else...maybe...?!?!
Really love this story
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls
What the Hell?!?! JAMES!!!!!!! You´re really in for the kill,huh?!?!? OMG
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons
Whew...ok- an intense chapter!!! I have to admit I kinda shared a tear...maybe two.... when it came to Alice´s goodbye! That really was sad!
And OMG- the whole James incident! Effing James!!!^^
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Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...
Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.
Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?
Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71569
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
OMG- How funny was all that?!?! Three chapters into the story and so far i loved evry bit of it!!!! The storyline sounds really good and interesting! Edward´s inner ramblings were soo funny- though he was right for being a jerk towards Jasper...!^^ Can´t wait for everyone to get more involved ;D
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
What the hell?!?! Definately haven´t seen that coming!! At least not that soon!!! Not that I mind...*cough*... ;D ;D ;D Those two are really playing with fire, though!!! ^^
Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.
This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!
Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!
This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......
I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*SQUEEEAAAAAAL* YAY-An Update!!!! *jumps up and down and let inner Alice take over for a moment* ;D Let me tell ya- there was a goofy ass grin plastered on my face as soon as I saw that there was a new chapter!!! AGAIN.!!!You just made my day a wee bit better ;D ;D ;D
First things first- Edward and Bella were just...awwwwwww!!! When he asked her to repeat what she told him again and again- that was sooo cute!It was like Longing and sexual tension galore!!! My heart beat a little faster when I read that.^^ Too bad they were interrupted by that stupid ass skunk and her stupid ass titties shoved into the faces of Mike and Tyler!Bitch really has to go!!! Like NOW!!!!I´d do it myself but I´m not a fictional character!!! ( If I was- Bella would have never made it into Edwards pants =P ^^ )*giggle* I meank ok- the boys were just ewww and JEssica and Lauren would have thrown the bitch tantrum of the century if Irena would have had her way...but kiling them?! I absolutely love the idea of Irena being secretely bad! That means Bella and the Cullens won´t need to feel much remorse when they end her!^^ But the others would need to know that beforehand....Anyway- I can´t wait to see bitch royale go!!! And as if Irena wouldn´t be enough trouble- Vicky is working on her Army!!!!! GAH!!!Sounds like fun...NOT!!! As it seems she can´t control herself enough to not drain her victims completely but I guess that is just a matter of time....Uh-Oh!!!Her doing should actually bring the Volturi to the picture....but since Aro turned all loco (yeah well I guess he´s always been like that but now he´s not holding back anymore) and all his minions are on the loose...that´s the last thing the Cullens would need right now! Their encounter is inevitable and probably not even that far away anymore...BUT if they hear word of Vicky and her doing and they stop by on their way to the Cullens and confront her and Aro sees or gets to know and she is after the same target....Aro could easily make Vicky join them (he´d most definately end her afterwards)...to be more powerful against his"enemies" and at the same time she´d make a nice little distraction...OH hell no!! *bites fingernails* Stop! Let´s not even go there.....(my imagination took over once again...^^ ;D )
Anyway...Charlie was absolutely cute also!!!It was so said when he said he couldn´t stand to be in the house so much while Bella was gone....poor Papa Swan!!!He and Bella really deserve a little more time with each other!Or he and the whole Cullen family in general! I think it would make things easier for him if he gets to get to know the Cullens more and become more of a part of them!For Bella also!Emmet would probably have a blast with that also ;D ;D *cough* I´m thinking about his not so subtle hints about Ed and Bella in bed in BD....*giggle* that was hilarious!!! Anyway- the note Bella left him was really sweet! ^^ God- Alice cracked me up when she talked a mile a minute!! ;D She reminded me of the squirrel in "Over the hedge"....;D ;D ;D ^^ The image of Bella pinching her cheeks....lmao!!! I can´t wait for Bella to become a vamp and actually do stuff like that!! ;D
I´d really like to know what Marcus is up to,though!!! I mean, what would ne need his robes for when he wants to enjoy his now found freedom!?!?!? He even admitted that he´d turn semi-veggie!!! This better be good,missy!!!! *raises eyebrow in a daring way* :D
I´m not sure if I want to know exactly how naughty you have been to receive coal from Santa.....that cracked me up,also!!! *gigglesnort* I hope you still had very nice Christmas holidays!!! ;D Thanks for the chapter!!! I can´t wait for the next one and when Bella and Edward officially tell everyone about their news!!! *Sigh*if I would have been smart I had read your story at a slower pace....*pout* Don´t get me wrong-I don´t mean to be rude or put you under pressure for sooner updates- that was not my intention!!!!!!This story is just soo good that I really can´t wait to see how everything is going to turn!! But at the same time I don´t want it to end!!!!UNGH- yeah, I´m desperate!!! ;D ;D ;D I can imgaine that your probably stressed out with the holidays and your own story- but if you have the time and in need for a new fic to read-check out "The Geheime Vernitiging" by amoredjenau! The story is full of lemony goodness and suspence- it´s killiing me!!!^^ The storytelling is really good and storyline just as much!!!
I´m despertaly but patiently waiting for the next chapter!!! You rock!!! ^^
Happy new year and a big ass smoochie!!! ;D MWAH!!!!
Sue <3
Author's Response:
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW OMFG!!!! You think I made your day a little better, and you had a smile on your face when you saw my update, well let me tell you dear one the instant I saw your first key strokes I knew I was in for some major laughs and you didn't dissapoint. sQuEaL OMG I made your heartbeat change from just reading my story that is amazing, I figured Edward needed to know that she knew exactly what she was saying because he didn't know she could speak French so it seemed like he would want it repeated in English just to be sure he wasn't mistaken, but yes they had to be interupted, you should know me by now hehehehe I'm not one to let the dust settle before the next drama happens where would the fun be in that HAHAHHAHA... (gasps and raises an eye brow at you) HANDS OFF MY EDWARD!!!!! if he were real he would be MINE!!! *chuckle* SO FUNNY!!!! Yup Irina needs to go, and I'm thrilled you like her evil but before she goes I have a few more plans for her but I promise in the end it will be worth the wait.... Yup Victoria has started but I don't know how long it will take until she can control herself, *SQUEAL* (claps hands) YAY I like that your inagination ran away with you, its ace, but I can say that Victoria will lay pretty low until she has backup so Aro won't cross her path.... so stop biting your nails and have another smoke!!!! OMG Seriously the first thing I'm going to get Bella to do when she becomes a Vamp is pinch the pixie's cheeks LMAO.... I agree Bella needs to spend more time with Charlie, I'm thinking a Cullen/Swan Camping Trip, not sure how I will work it in but I like the idea.... FUCK too many ideas not enough fingers to type with hehehehehhe..... *GASP*SQUEAL*GIGGLE* OMFG I'm laughing sooooo hard at your attempt to threaten me that I'm crying.... Seriously The words this better be good missy killed me, then you just had to go one step further and raise that daring eyebrow... HAHAHAHAHA I LOVE IT!!!!
Thanks for the story you suggested I will check it out at some point, the problem is I get obsessed so if I start reading something I can't stop until I get to the end so I will leave it until I get more writing done otherwise you may try to hunt me down hehehehehe, PMSL I was joking about the coal, I got quite a bit of good shit this year but I figured if I pouted I might score a few extra reviews heheheheheh
Have a great New Year & Thanks a bunch your a hoot... MWAH!!!
PS.... Now that Alice will be blocking in German you have been promoted to translater hehehehhehe
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*sigh of reliev* Oh thank gor Victoria didn´t show up again!! Your story makes me paranoid... -.- ^^ ;D (Could have happened though.... *pout*) ;D
And Jeeeeeeez- will Bella and Edward ever get the chance to make out for good without Alice or any other member of the Cullen´s interrupting, blood or any other kind of distraction?! ;D At least Bella got some action with with his shirt^^ ... I would so do that,too ;D (TMI- I know ;D ) ^^
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA, I sooooo love your responses, and you are right to be paranoid just not yet hehehehehe... OMG if you stopped reading to go to sleep or work after Bella's shirt time I am going to hunt you down and kick your ass, heheheheh I soooo can't wait for you response to Edward's arrival hehehehehe MWAH for all your kind words and for taking the time to review!!!! I am grinning from ear to ear!!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Oh hell no!!!! If the end of the chapter has anything to do with a certain red head...Im gonna...grrrrrr!!!!!
Here I was relieved that James and Laurent were gone- although I have to ssay that I thought that James´inner ramblings were kind of funny ;D , and then there is another twist...... you.are.evil. -.- ^^ Maybe I´m overreacting...?!
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!! LOVE the grrrrr at your thoughts of the red head hehehehehe and I have to say that you are not the first and I doubt you will be the last person to call me evil hehehehehe I love the reaction I can get from my readers and my nasty side love to come out every now and again hehehehehe I can't wait until you catch up and are left hanging for my updates, I have a feeling that your threats will be extremly entertaining....
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Oh I can´t wait for Tania to arrive! This is going to be lgood!!! ;D ;D Awesome chapter and really nice and easy chapter after all of the..ungh..tension ;D
Can´t wait for everybody´s reation to Bella´s makeover; the Prada wearing Devil (aka Tania...) and what is going on with Charlie ^^
Author's Response:
I have already sent you the links for B's makeover and the other link in one of my other responses, I would love to know what you think of the outfits and the ring.... make sure you check out the $$$$$ as well hehehehehehe MWAH MWAH MWAH, I can't believe how fast you are going through these chapts, OMG at this rate it won't be long until you are hunting me for more....
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*lights cigarette*....ungh....!!! That.was.hot.!!!! ^^As much as I would love for them to get more one-on-one time together, cockblocking them (AGAIN!!! ^^ ) definately was for the best! I have to say that I really thought they would go...erm...all the way ;D but Im glad they didn´t. Don´t get me wrong- Edward letting loose was hot...like..a lot...but, in my opinion, they need to get closer a little more before they can do the dirty for real ;D *wiggles eyebrows* Sooo, he is is considering to ask her to marry him,yet .... ;D
As for Carlisle´s idea to make Balla let the house "disappear"(or better to say to get it covered by Bellas shield)- I can totally picture ths! Harry Potter would be sooo jealous ;D ;D ; D
I also thought that Emmet thanking Bella for making Rose realise how much she really loves Emmy was just sweet as honey ;D It always bothered me in the saga when they said that Rose would trade him for a mortal life in no time!!! Sooo, thank you for that!!!^^
There are also a few things I´d like to say regarding your comments ob my reviews... : 1. Yep- I totally had to go to sleep before I could Edwards POV of Bella...taking care of herself.....^^ So yeah- I´m patiently waiting for that ass kick- but keep in my mind that if what you´re saying is right and that as soon as I picked up chapter-wise with the rest of them and have to await the next chapter...I might return the favor!!! ;D ;D ;D
2. As much as I can picture myself doing it- I haven´t jumped up and down in my seat yet while reading this awesome story of yours!(sorry) However- as soon as this is going to happen I´m gonna let you know,though ;D I can guarantee you though, that I do the grinning from ear to ear thing when I read your comments!!! ;D I really love that you seem to like my reviews and that you think I´m a...what did you call it...a smart cookie ;D ^^ I especially like that you really seem to take your time to aswer all of those reviews you get from your readers!! ^^
3.You mentioned that we´re going to see a more serious and emotional side of Emmet- I´m really looking forward to that! Don´t get me wrong! I LOVE Emmet the way he is as goofy but protective cuddle bear just fine- but this other side of him would fit perfectly into this story as far as I see it!!! Aaaaaaand- the idea of Jasper and Bella having an as close bond as Edward and Alice is just awesome!!! As I said- I always thought that Jasper was kind of left out in the saga!! (yeah..I know....the papercut...yada,yada.... ;D ;D ; D)
And last but not least I want to say, after you told about your inspiration of this story, I was speechless for a moment! I don´t want to get all emotianal here but let me just say this : I absolutely admire you for your strength and that you, apparently, kept your sense of humour after what happened to you!´I´m sorry that you had to experience something like that-nobody should! The fact that you found an outlet for your thoughts and that you share this so openly here just demonstrates your hoe strong you are! ( I hope that came out the right way- I sometimes lack the right words in English and besides- I really didn´t want to get it too emotonal nor did I want to get too deep into it here in the open!)Thank you !
Sue
Author's Response:
OMGHOLYSHIT!!!! My smile couldn't get any bigger MWAH!!!!! I agree with you completely, stacks of people were pushing me for E & B to get it on but I couldn't bring myself to do it, after everything B has been through I just didn't think she was ready, so this was my compromise to keep my readers happy, I'm pretty sure a few of them are still scowling at me though hehehehe... Sm's Rose bothered me too, I think thats why these scenes came so easily for me, I'm glad you liked them... OMG I have no idea how you could have gone to sleep... I hope you had sweet dreams hehehehehe... but I do owe you an ass kicking... OK I will wait for the bouncing because I have a feeling its coming... and I really do love my reviewers, not only does it inspire me to write but I get a heap of ideas from people, even when they don't mean t give me ideas they do... I think its only fair that if someone takes the time to press that little button that I respond to them, no matter how big or small the review is they all make me do a happy dance... Ah Emmybear sweet, kind, loyal and prankster... LOVE HIM... & Jazzy yum yum, he is without a doubt my fav....
Final note: your comments were lovely, thank you... it took years for me to realise that the past was still an issue, but I finally reached a point where I knew it was once I knew that it helped and now with this story I have opened up a heap and things are much easier... (Thanks for not getting deep.... Laughter is a fantastic way to release tension) MWAH AGAIN
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Ahm...ok...it´s not really eloquent, but what the hell happened to Bella?!?! ^^
The little hints left some suspicions in my mind but I can´t be completely sure yet!
Definately going to conzinue reading since I have to figure this out ;D
Author's Response:
sQuEaL!!!! OMG thanks soooooo much for taking the time to push that little button, I know you have left a few reviews for the chapts you have read so I will respond to them in order, this being the first..... hehehehehe I'm thrilled you have choosen to continue reading and you will get a few more glimpses into what happened to Bella, you will find out the whole story if you keep readiing I promise.... MWAH!!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
That was just funny and heartbreaking at the same time!!!
Jacob playing puppy dog for Bella is just too cute and funny! As for the heartbreaking part...well, I guess that one was quite obvious!
I really like the way you write,btw!^^
Author's Response:
YAY!!!! I am thirlled you like my writing, it improves greatly as you continue also, you will probably notice as you read that I tend to throw some light-hearted stuff in with the bad stuff, it sort of helps me to be able to write the bad without feeling awful, trust me there is bad to come hehehehehe, Thanks for pushing that little review button, I'm on to your next review now
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Wow- so Bella has a super powerful shielding git of sortss taht keeps harm away from her!!! I love this adaption of SM´s idea! She´s probably going to need it in the future since I don´t think a story couls start like that and end without a big mean Bang!!! (Please don´t let it be too harsh!!!! ^^)
Author's Response:
hehehehehe, you catch on fast, OMG I can't wait until you get to my current chapts.... indeed Bella will need it, there are several big bangs on the way... HAHAHAHAHA... But my Bella will cope Thanks again MWAH
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Uh-hu ;D
Soooo.....Edward is a Peeping Tom and Bella enjoys herself.. ;D ;D ;D lol ^^ Am I the only one who thought that the whole Jasper and Emmet in the woods getting pretty aroused incident was too funny?! I´m not sure if I´m supposed to laugh so much considering the content of the story so far..... ^^
Author's Response:
PMSL.... trust me feel free to laugh... and no you weren't the only one, you will see a few funny moments involving Jasper and Emmett in the future (one of my readers refers to them as the peanut gallery which totally cracks me up.) As serious as this story is and the things that happen in the future, like I said in my last review I felt I had to lighten it up with some silliness and or hot sex to break the tension.... I'm glad you are still reading and I can't wait to respond to more of your reviews...MWAH!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
I´m kind of speechless...really!!! I actually skipped reviewing on the last chapter so that I could continue reading in no time since I had to know what would happen only to be met with Aro´s Pov...wtf!!! Jeeeeez!!! So Bella is some kind of lab rat of Aro who also gave her his gift?! (Please tell me if I misunderstood something here) I...um..yeah...I REALLY need to continue reading now- just wanted to drop my two cents in ^^ Awesome!
Author's Response:
sQuEaL!!!!! Speachless WOW that's soooo cool!!!! HAHAHAHAHA OMG you my dear lady are soooo switch on, Yes Bella is a lab rat of Aro's, and yes she has his gift, but my lips are sealed as to the how's and why's... you will find out in coming chapts, but well done for coming to that conclusion, I really don't think anyone else did that fast.... MWAH for the two cents you have made my day!!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Holy...! Sooo, Bella actually absorbs the gifts/abilities from others?! Aro´s definately going to fight hard to get her back.....oh oh
Really good chapter! Need to read on ( I promise- as soon as all this crazyness slows down a bit Im gonna review in more sentences ;D )
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA, you crack me up... but I have to say that the crazy in my story never seems to die down, hahahahaha I must be warped or something because shit just keeps happening hehehehehe, I'm thrilled you are enjoying and excited to read your next review.... MWAH for taking the time to oush that button BTW
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Ungh...what a great finale for a great chappie ;D *smirk* ^^
I really loved the Bella/Rose bonding time and of course that Emmy finally got to know her!^^ I´m looking forward to some Bella/Edward bonding ;D ^^
I really love this story so far even if I´m kind of confused about a lot of things- but since I just started reading the story not many riddles could be connected,yet!!! Yeah- Im so gonna continue reading ;D
I´m glad you seem to like my reviews as much as I like to read your story;D I´m sorry for all those writing mistakes,though!! Seems as if I was kind of in a rush while writing...hmmm...I wonder why .... ;D ;D ;D
Sue
Author's Response:
YAY!!!! I'm thrilled you like the R/B bonding, my Rose is not as bitchy as SM's Rose but I think that has more to do with what B has lived through more than anything else, Rose knows the pain of betrayal so that little fact softens her towards Bella... I know your confused now but you're a smart girl and I just know you will connect the dots easily as they appear... Oh I LOVE your reviews and honestly was too excited by them to notice any writing mistakes.... hehehehehe
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
HA!!! Edward&Bella bonding time!!!! *sigh* what an almost-kiss followed by some almost-make-out.....!!!!! ;D Damn you, Alice!!! ;D
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA!!! Yeah Alice is the QuEeN of cock blocking... hehehehehe
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Erm...ok...so Bella must have been the one who killed Phil- since Aro said there were no signs of any damage I guess she used her shielding powers or whatever one can call it! She must have send one of her energy waves to him since she waas scared and tried to protect herself! (I don´t think its hard to guess why since Phil was in her bedroom...)
Aaand- Aro "changed", as a lack for a better word, his lad rats during their mom´s pregnancy....wow! For a split second I thought Renee got raped by vamps and Charlie wasn´t even Bella´s father!!! Btw Aro- I´m not trying to offend anybody here BUT to me Aro is soooo asexual! Reading about him and his...member..*shudder*...was just disturbing ( for me at least ;D ;D ;D )
As for the whole Renee...situation- that was just repulsive!(I´m talking only about this scene )! And Jane that little..... Thanks for the warning,though!^^ You know, I always wondered why Jane actually speaks the word "pain" out loud!? It was just weird,but well..., fitting for her ^^
What the hell did Bella see in her/Alice´s vision ?!?!?!?!
Author's Response:
See I told you.... connecting the dots already, Yes Bella killed Phil and Yes it was with her shield but it was accidental and at the time she had no idea what had happened... This will be explained further soon, keep reading.... Yup Aro altered Bella during the very early stages of Renee's pregnancy and you aren't the first person to think that Aro was the daddy... a few of my really switched on readers saw the possibility of that... hehehehe... HAHAHAHAHA I'm with you on being disturbed about Aro's "member" hehehehehe try writing those scenes *GAG* but it has to be done hehehehee.... There are a few scenes that I felt needed the warning, I didn't want my readers to read that if it would be too much for them but I didn't want them to have to give up on my story if they were enjoying the other parts... As for what Bella saw in Alice's vision, sadly everything!!! MWAH I'm on to your next review now!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Holy....!!! This is going to be a quick one since I hve to cintinue reading...
Triple Helix?!Wtf?! ^^
I loved the "Connection Scene of the Cullen Cult" (sorry- couldn´t help myself ;D ) that was beautifully described^^
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA, I love that you paused long enough to type anything.... Thank you for your kind words *CULT* HAHAHA that's funny, and I'm glad you liked the connection and my description I wanted my readers to feel it too..... MWAH
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
HOLY S***!!!!!! Remember when you said your crazyness won´t slow down in this story...?!?! Erm...yeah....YOU WERE TOTALLY RIGHT!!!! Jeeeeeee-heeeeeeez!!! James is already so close?! And of course he wants Bella for himself- as for the one he couldn´t have...Alice is in some deep shit as well, I guess!!! Oh boy!!!! Gah! Yup- loosing my mind over here.....^^
Thanks for the little biology 101 btw!! You explained it in a way that even I could understand it ( I was concerned since Biology never was my best subject in class and English is not my mother language that I may would miss importnt things from that discribtion- so thanks for that ;D ) Sooo...very early in the pregnancy Renee was kidnapped by vamps with a god complex so that they could implant this synthetic stuff which caused some kind of artificial mutation within the embryo (or embryos since Aro said there were more than just one lab rat....) A few years after Bella was born Phil sweet talked Renee into leaving Charlie and run away with Bella and him- he did that since the Volturi promised him immortalitiy in return....since Phil never loved Renee he molested and abused and god knows what Bella instead.....until she killed him for that and ran anway...!!! Please tell me if I got something wrong here... ;D
I´ve got two questions: 1. How many chapters are there going to be ?! ( I need to know so that I can mantally prepare myself for everything that could pissibly happen in the amount of remaining chappies....my guess at the moment : a lot!!! ^^ ) 2. How did you come up with this?!?! The story is really good so far and I´m just curious to know how you ended up with this storyline!!?
Sue
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAH, Yup and the crazy doesn't end anytime soon.... I am sooooo LOVING how expressive your reviws are, I can totally see you bouncing up and down biting your nails needing to figure it all out... WOW so awesome!!! I did the DNA stuff in BPOV because I wouldn;t have been able to pull it off writing it from Carlisle, I did a fair amount of research for this ch but I am no science nerd so I had to break it down like this so I could understand it myself hehehehehe, thankfully so far everyone has understood what I was trying to portray.... So far you are spot on and have grasped every detail in this story correctly, I will just point out though that Bella didn't kill Phil on purpose, and she struggles with the knowledge that she is capable of such a thing... Oh I really have no idea how many ch are remaining, honestly when I started this story it was not this big... As for how I came up with the story, well honestly I'm not sure, this story is sort of therapy for me in a way... I had a general concept and had written several plots that I wanted to include, and I have stuck with that concept but as I have written the story has taken on a life force of its own, sometimes I sit down to write with ideas in my head but by the time the ch is finished its gone in a completely different direction than I thought it would, my fingers at times don't seem to be connected to my brain, sounds weird I know but sooooo true... I also have some wonderful readers who inspire my mind and give me soooo many ideas and perspectives that I may not have thought of and with their permission I grab those ideas and my story is soooo much better because of them... I guess to answer your question honestly as to how I ended up with the story line, as I said this is therapy, I was taken advantage of as a child by a family member and though it didn't ruin my life it had stuck with me but I have never spoken about it, I know it wasn;t my fault but at times I feel guilty, that's where the story started, but as I wrote and kind of purged, as I became stronger so did my Bella, hence the kick ass powers.... I guess this forum is a safe way for me to get it off my chest without feeling too exposed, no-one knows who I am.... *sigh* Sorry if that was too much information but again my fingers have engaged and my brain is rolling her eyes... MWHA!!!!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Holy....!!! Ahm...ok....maybe my imagination is getting the best of me...BUT....I just thought about Bella´s black eyes and her constant need for water....it´s her thirst,isn´t it?! I mean like vampire thirst!!!! Since she isn´t a vampire (yet...^^ ) she wouldn´t know that she is longing for blood and only blood couls ease her throat but the symptomes are just like the ones from any thirsty vamps....Gah- please tell me I´m wrong ;D
Author's Response:
AH... hehehehehe, yup you are one smart cookie!!!! yes and no... it is vampire thirst but no exactly how I'm sure you are thinking... you will find out very very soon... YAY!!! I acn't wait.... MWAH
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Oh no you didn´t !!!! Why oh why was interrupting this hot make out session neccessery,hmm?!?! Give them a break already!! ;D ;D At least they finally got to kiss properly.. ;D
Ahm...yeah....James on a mission....that basically means it´s getting mean! Poor Cullens, poor Bella and poor Alice!
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA!!! Like I said Alice is just one huge cockblocking pixie.... but it will be worth the wait I promise... NO... you will see soon enough it will be poor James hehehehehe
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Umm...yeah- question: are Bella and Edward so connected with each other that Bella is thirsty whenever Edward is thirsty?!?!?! Jeeeeeeeeez!!! ;D
Aand Jacob returned!! It is amazing how calm and understanding he is in your story! But than again- a raging and jealous Jcob would probably been a drama overkill,right ;D
Sue
Author's Response:
OMG!!!! You are more switched on than I thought, NOONE and I mean NOONE made the connection that quickly to her thirst and their connection.... sQuEaL!! That's ACE!!!! LOL I didn't want the usual love triangle in my story, and I felt that once you took out his love for Bella that the hostility would disapear also, I figured that as the true Alpha and with the blood of his ancestors flowing through his veins he would be a smart and fair man.... MWAH
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Holy S*** - James was near the meadow! He is sooo close!! Oh oh!!!
OMG- I absolutely love that you put a Bella vs. Emmet into your story!!! Always been one of my favs!! ;D Soooo funny!!! Aaaaand definateky exciting towards the end!!!!
Author's Response:
You have no idea how big my smile is, I love Em and I have always felt he was under valued in SM's story, he is more than a joker you will see a completely different Em in this story, don't get me wrong he is still a joker but he has a sensitive side, I hope you like it.... MWAH
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
...that was just heartbreaking! Thanks for the advise to have tissues nearby!!
Author's Response:
*Sigh* not much I can say here.... This was one of the hardest chapters fo me to write, the emotions were both a blessing and a curse, but a weight was lifted and as hard as it was for me to write, looking back now I am thankful I was able to get that on paper... Sorry my brain just engaged and I need to just clarify, this story is largely fictional, though I sustained abuse as a child myself it was no where near the extent Bella has in this story, however the emotions and feelings portrayed here are largely mine, the guilt and reasons for it are mine and it has taken me writing this story to understand it... I hope that makes sense....
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Sooo.... Marcus is a potential friend and we just got a glimpse of what James has in store for Bella and the Cullens...(that would be my guess for Bella´s vision)Jeeeeeeez!!!! I´m kinda dreading to continue reading since I know it is going to get ugly....butt then again- there is no way I would just stop reading here!!^^
As for Bella´s guardian angel- there is only one possibility and that would be Edward! Since he knew her face all along since 18 years why not her also! But then again- why are the eyes green and how come she doesn´t realize it is Edward?!?!?...Maybe I´m just lost here...!!!^^ I really can´t figure out the thing with her angel and the thing about her eyes/thirst....!!! *pout* ;D ^^
Author's Response:
Marcus is interesting, he despises Aro but is trapped in his own hell, you will hear more from him a little later in this story so I won't give too much away now... HAHAHAHA your lucky atleast you can go to the next ch for amswers, wait until you catch up with me, I'm pretty sure you will join in on the mob that keeps threatening to fly to Australia to hunt me down because of the cliffies hehehehehe... HAHAHAHHA I LOVE the pout hehehehehe I know you have moved on to the next chapt so I don't need to comment on her angel... except yo say you crack me up!!! MWAH
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
OMG!! Oh.My.God!!! I am speechless!!! That was absolutely beautiful!!! At first I was confused when BElla referred to her angel as "she" and then its Edwards mom!!! But the explanation for Bella being half of Edwards soul and vice versa...*sigh* Awwwww.....^^
I swear to you- as I started reading this chapter I was wondering if Laurent and Victoria would appear in this story also...and BAM- James calls them!!! Grrrrrr.....why can´t it all be rainbows and butterflies,hmm?!?!?! ^^ I´m dreading it!Since Aro now knows that James betrayed him there is a possibility that the nomads die by the hands of the Volturi but...probably not...that would be a little too easy if the Cullens wouldn´t have to defend themselves....*sigh* I guess I have to continue reading to find out....cya ^^
Author's Response:
sQuEaL!!! see I told you thing would be revealed eventually... I'm sooooo happy you liked that chap and the explaination of their connection, now does Bella's thirst make any more sense???? if it doesn't it will eventually... hehehehehe... HAHAHAH Yup James calls in backup, hahahaha rainbow and butterflies that wouldn't make for an entertaining story... it will all come together soon but I will say that you shouldn't fear, the cullens will be fine
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Wowt!!! Ok- Bella the super mutant almost vampire ;D I´d really like to believe that all is going to be good now that Bella can control her shield and all - but I still think that would be too easy....so I´m still dreading for the worst while chain smoking and biting my fingernails...(are you happy now?!?!?! ;D ;D ; D ^^ )
I really,really love the fact that Jasper and Bella get along so well and that they trust each other so much! I always thought that Jasper was a little left out in the Saga ^^
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA I totally called the bitting your nails chapters ago, That's AWESOME!!!! hummmmm Jasper LOVE that vamp I am more Team Jasper than Team Edward so I may be a little bias but I can tell you that the bond you see with J & B will only gain strength as time goes on, Edward and Alice have always been close as siblings and communicated on a higher level, I want that for Jasper and Bella.... Keep reading, oh and I should give you fair warning here, I hope you like a little dominance because Master Jasper comes out to play later... hehehehehe
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Awesoome chapter!! But this is really killig me right now so yeah...gotta continue reading!! ;D
Have I mentioned btw that I really love the switching POV`s ?!?! If I haven´t- I really love the switching POV`s ;D
Author's Response:
Why thank you dear lady, I have fun writing in the different POV's but it also helps to keep me flowing, when I get stuck I find that if I change POV my mind flows again and more ideas come... it is hard sometimes to channel the different personalities, I hope I do them justice... MWAH
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*hits herself in the forehead with her hand* I totally forgot that Bella touched effing James!!! Ungh- so she has tracker abilities now also?!?! W.T.F.?!?! Maybe I´m getting a little too far ahead here...but is it possible that Aro is going to bite his own ass...has he digged his own grave....did he not think this "I´m bored-let´s play God"- thing through well enough...,hmmm?!?!?! ^^ *raises eyebrow cockily* (I now I´m to late for the given task from you but maybe it still made you laugh a bit.. ;D )
I knew there would be a return of Vicky in some way or the other!!! ^^
Yeah....and I´m confused (AGAIN!!! ^^ ) who else could Bella been in contact with for the other gift?!?!?
Author's Response:
hahahahaha, yes she picked up James talent, and yes Aro won't know what hit him when he finally finds Bella, he has no idea what her gift is he just knows that his experiment worked and that she has one... Nah he was too power hungry and those who think they are god don't believe that they can come to harm... here is the links for the chapts after your hard work in reviewing you could never be too late...
ch 51 - Bella Make Over
http://www.polyvore.com/never_say_ch_51/set?id=23875706
Ch 54 - Bella & The Ring Vs Tania
http://www.polyvore.com/neversaynever_ch_54_vs/set?id=24232674
MWAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Oh no you didn´t !!!!!!! eeeeeeviiiiiiiiiil!!!!*sigh*Uhm...I guess you are aware that I have to continue reading...like..NOW...so this is a quick one....*smirk* ungh...yeah....(since I have to cool down a bit.... can you please warn me next time when there is more of Aro and his....little friend?! THAT is a safe way of child birth protection...for me,anyway...) I´m not sure of what to think of Renee,yet. At first, I disliked her a lot since the wouldn´t believe Bella but noe seeing her in this situation and trying to protect Bella the only way she can even if it is in vain...my opinion clearly changed.!!!
Ok, lets get back to happier things....and fair bits coming...*giggle snort* ;D (yea- I actually just did that!!! )
Author's Response:
hahahahahahaha, LOVE IT..... Sorry I should have warned you.... Most people don't like Renee so don't feel bad, I am still in two minds about her, it may be to little too late, I pity her if she comes face to face with Esme.... HA I'm thrilled I made you snort thats sooooo cool....
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
HolymotherofChristandeverythingthatisholy......*squeal* THAT.WAS.SO.FUCKING.HOT.!!!!!! OMG!!!! Where the hell are my ciagrettes?!?! Damnit!!!! A litte disappointed that Edward had to be the spoilsport yet again and can´t just do what we all want and get the hell naked already.....but that was so good!! Oh yeah- I´m a woman of my word and I said that when the time comes I´d let you know...so here it comes...*jumps up and down in her seat, claps her hands frantically with a shit eating grin on her face and squeals like a 13 year old girl at a Justin Bieber concert...(since I refuse to openly admit that Rob and other things Twilight may made me squeal here and there I had to come up with something else...and no- I do not like Justin Bieber,thank you very much ;D ; D ;D).* I can´t believe you put the POV`s of the other Cullens into this!!! I had to laugh so hard- I think I peed my pants a bit!! ;D ; D; (TMI- I know...but you have to live with the consequences of your actions ;D ) THAT WAS JUST EPIC!!!!!:D I´m still laughing!!! That was soooooo hilarious!!! Who would have thought that Jasper grunts...?! *wiggles eyebrows* OMG- my face hurts from all my laughing!!! I can´t stop laughing! I´m so glad I read this while at home and not somewhere in public...*gigglesnort* OMG- I can´t even continue reading because I´m still laughing and my eyes are teary from that!! You are a genius...and my personal hero....I think I just fell in love with you!!!! Jeeeeeez...I need a distraction.....something to make it stop....ah yeah...Aro and his little friend....*shudder*
In case you haven´t noticed by my subtle review...-I absolutely loved this chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
sQuEaL!!! OMGOMGOMG..OMFG!!!!! SO LOVING YOU RIGHT NOW!!!! HAHAHAHHA I'm a smoke too so I can picture you exactly!! I was going for super hot but FUCKING HOT is just sooooo much better hehehehehe and YAY *SCREAM* you bounced HA I told you it was coming, and I have to say that my hubby (who hates my addiction / obsession) is staring at me like I have 2 heads because of the tears running down my face and my laughter over you justin bieber comments.... *deep calming breath* sigh* LMAO this is where the peanut gallery comments came in from one of my fav reviewers, she got so excited by the different POV's she almost peed her pants LMAO... I'm thrilled you liked it too... "EPIC" OMG WOW your ace.... HA of course Jasper grunts hahahahaha LMAO.... Seriously if you keep writing these things my head is going to get so big that it will explode and then no more chapts will be written hehehehe... (You stroke my ego so well) YAY MWAH
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Ungh.....HoLy ShIt!!!!! Since there isn´t much left to say can you just take what I wrote in my last review and multiply it by 3 ?!?!? ;D
I can tell you this much...If I would have a hubby or a boyfriend..I would so NOT review your story right now....*cough* if you now what I mean ;D *shit eating grean*
I absolutely love that Bella talked him in in letting her watch! That´s what I had in mind the whole time for them since it´s only fair! (And pretty hot...^^) Tit for tat ;D
Author's Response:
I surely can, I honestly can't take anymore praise from you....
HAHAHAHAHA, I hope you have a good toy atleast, if not let me know I'm sure Master Jasper can recommend some for you. Trust me you will need one.... hahahahaha....
And the tit for tat was only fair, I had sooooo much fun writing those chapts
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*Sigh*....Charlie finally knows (almost) everything and even gave his blessings to Edward and Bella...verything is good.....NOT ^^ Don´t get me wrong- I really loved these parts of the chapter... BUT
Why did yo have to plant the imaga of Aro and Jane together in my head?!?! Yuk! That´s just wrong!!!! I need to wash my mind out with soap...*shudder*^^
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA Sorry my dear, but that was just to point out further exactly how wrong Aro is, he is one sick and twisted evil fucker, but he will get his in the end I can promise you that..... MWAH
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Holy S*** ^^ Bella the little seductress ;D little minx,indeed ;D lol ^^Her plan for Tania is a wee bit evil but,...oh well...serves her right ;D
The idea with the meadow and the fact that Emmet prepred everything for them is just soooo sweet!! Awww.... ^^
Need to continue reading ^^
Author's Response:
*sQuEaL* Evil yes but oh so perfect hehehehehe, and Emmy is a sweety, this was just his small way of saying thank you... I have some ideas for the future on B and lets just say that if you think that was seductive later you are not going to know what hit you heheheheheh Thanks soooo much for your reviews I LOVE THEM
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*squeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaallllllll* OMFC!!!! THAT.WAS.SO.AWESOME.!!!!!! :D :D :D Not only was it absolutely hot but also extremely funny- again!!! I learned a lesson the hard way,though...:do not smoke while reading how Tania rubbed herself off, how she wants to have a threesome with Bella and Edward and Alice telling the whole Cullen familiy about it!!!!!!!!!! I coughed so badly!!!;D Definately worth it,though!!! OMG- best Edward-going-down-onBella-on-a-piano-in-the-meadow-while-being-eavesdropped-on-by-Tania EVER!!!! *gigglesnort* !!! I really thought nothing could top the Edward-and-Bella-make-the-family-come-incident.....WRONG!!! Damnit-you´re awesome!!! ;D
And OMG- Edward asked and she said YES!!!! *doublesqueal* ;D (That was my inner Alice speaking here... ;D ^^ ) That was sooo.....awwwww ^^ (for a lack of a better word)
Gotta continue reading now - need to see Tania having a bitch fit ;D^^
Sue
Author's Response:
OMG you are one naughty girl!!!! The first line of this review made me laugh soooo hard I think I broke something, its just tooo much, I read one and giggle then go to the next and fuck... My stomach hurts, my head has grown twice its normal size, I have tears running down my cheeks and I swear I almost wet myself...... then I read the smoking comments and laugh even more... YOU"RE KILLING ME!!!! BUT I'm soooo glad you liked that ch.... and SQUEAL that was so hot to write, i had to take several breaks.... did you think for a second she would have said no to Edward, *sigh* chuckle* I love the double squeal... MWAHHHHH
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
GoodmotherofChristandeverythingthatisholygoddamnitwoman!!! WHAT.THE.FUCK!!!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D If you are going to continue like this I may gonna end up dead since I can´t breathe anymore from all the laughing!!!! I never thought Tanya could be so damn funny!!Just thinking about her needing to rub one out every ten seconds leaves me in hysterics again!!! *screeeeech* and the all her misguided ideas and the fact that she wants Bella,also....sweet Jesus!!! You.are.killing.me.!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D Apart from that-Tania is a narcisstic bitch and she is gonna go down!^^
I just hope that Bella and her suggestion for Tania won´t cause more unnecessary drama than that needs to be ;D
God, I really,really loves those last chapters ^^ And there are a good distraction for what is still to come..... *sigh*
Oh yeah...and btw....I can totally understand why you like Jazz so much...*cough*...first the grunting...and now....*smirk*
Author's Response:
I CAN"T TAKE ANYMORE LAUGHING!!!!! *gasp* HA I'm killing you, I already told you you were killing me... hehehehehe.... I am struggling for breath right now and you have turned my brain to mush... I think I need to book you in for some punishment with Master Jasper!!!! MWAH to you.... you are a superstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Holy.....!!!! (I´m seriously running out of terms here...^^) Did we just witness good ol´Edward turning into develish teasing and dirty talking Edward?! Well..HELL YEAH,I think we did !!! ;D *whoooooop*
Wonder what Markus and Tanya are up to! Dreading the moment Aro and gang arrive in Forks.....
Another reeeaaaallly awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHAHA I'm with ya, you have left me speechless and at a loss for words, I'm loving you right now and I can't get rid of my smile, you my dear girl are awesome.....
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Umm....ok...first things first....Holy effing Whitlock...that was just....*need a cigarette*^^ And the moment Jazz and Alice stood naked in front of the other Cullens-hilarious ;D
But....
Ok, I admit it- I misjudged Tania!The fact that she doesn´t have much choice once she is drawn to someone...that´s just..harsh....You really don´t seem to give anyone a break here,hmm?!?! And oh my god- when Edward was about to end her-that was heartbreaking!
And what the hell happened to Bella?! (I lost count on how many times U actually asked this question...^^) I knew something was about to happen when he left her alone in the forest- but I thought Tania would make a move or stuff like that!! Jeeeeeeez....is it Victoria?!?!
Since there´s only one way to find out.... cya^^
Author's Response:
I love that I can make you laugh and get you all hot and bothered at the same time.... HA OMG I have to let you in on a little secrect.... I was getting soooo many reviews about how much everone hated Tania and that was before she even appeared in the story so I set myself a challenge to see if I could sway peoples opinions on her.... now it didn't work on everyone but I'm excited to say that I managed to change a lot of peoples feeling towards her... its a awesome feeling to get such reactions from people just because of my little story... sQuEal.... hahahahaha
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Erm yeah...I have no idea what to say...which sucks pretty much for a review....^^ The only things I can come up with are.... God daminit Woman! You´ve got to be kidding me! and Oh no, you didn´t !!!!!
I´m pretty much fighting the urge to just press the "next" button..but I have to say real quick a) *whooop* one threat less- only about one million more to come ;D b) did Aro seriously bit Renee?! Like in-making her a vamp?! wtf!?!?! c) go Jacob and change that damn treaty- we all know you want to!!!d) I know it´s the only way out as it seems...but did BElla really just asked Tania to do the dirty with Edward?!?!? e) you really don´t waste any time,hmm?! One minute I´m peeing/wetting my pants (yeah- I guess I joined the club of those who had to change their panties while reading this story for various reasons... ;D ) by laughing ..and other...erm...*cough* things...like hard...and the next minute Ißm back to chain smoking and biting my nails!!! You got it, girl ;D
Sue
"Next"!
Author's Response:
HAHAHA.... speechless works for me... HAhahahahaha... hummm yup Aro bit Renee, but we don't know if she is dead or on her way to becoming a VAMP... heheheheh only time will tell and my lips are sealed.... OMG NOOOOO not the dirty as such she just needs Tania to use her gift... hehehehe all will work out take a deep breath my lady... hahahahahah I never did get an email from anyone letting me know where to buy cheep panties from... hahahahahah LMAO.... I'm SO loving you....
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Phew- what a chapter! My emtions were kind of all over the place, yet again!!! Balla calling Esme "Mum"?! Really Touching!!! Bella playing her prank on Emmy while everybody had a blast?! Hilarious!!!Carlisle´s explaination for the tug of war inside Bella /her and Edward´s soul?! Agian absolutely beautiful! Jasper´s worry about how much more Bella can handle?! That was just awwww...^^ ( I haben´t een thought about being a possible problem!!! ....oh well... I guess that´s why You are the author and not me ;D ;D ;D )
*screeeeech* only a few more chapters left and I really have to wait until you update....-.- *pout* ;D
Author's Response:
See this is why I throw in the jokes, hehehehehe and I love being able to draw you in and play with your emotions... I know I'm cruel but its sooooo much fun..... and I love the wacky reviews.... HAHAHAHAH like I said I get a lot of ideas from my reviewers so as much as I would like too I can't take all the credit for this story, and as I think I mentioned before half the time my fingers type stuff that my brain can't even explain where it came from.... OMG slow down girl.... you are going to stalk me when you have nothing left to read... heheheheheh MWAH onve again love reading your comments...
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
A big ol`*whoooooop* for the chapter and Jacob!
The idea of a casual dressed Volturi is too funny! Hmmm....I wonder if Marcus would turn all vegetarian....Who knows- I can never tell when it comes to that wicked mind of yours.. ;D ;D ;D
Please!!! Pretty please with whipped cream, chocolate chips and a cherry on top- please let Emmet hold the wedding ceremony!!! That would be just epic ^^ But then again...maybe Carlisle would be more reasonable! Or Eleazar maybe?!?! hmmmm.....
Don´t let me start with Irina....that little....wtf?!
Oh...erm...yeah....I noticed in your a/n at the top that one can apparently apply for some...erm...quality time...with the Cullen Guys...erm....do I really have to finish this sentence?!?! I know you know what I want!!! *shit eating grin*
Author's Response:
YAY!!!!! I could just see Marcus in my mind striping off his Volturi robes the first chance he could.... *sigh* I think in the end Marcus is going to be one of my favs, I just got the feeling from SM that there was soooo much more to him so I want to expand his POV's.... oh I love the begging but I can't make any promises on the ceremony yet, I see a few different scenarios in my mind, it will just depend on whats going on when we get to that point...... HA Irina all I can say is she needs to die hehehehehe... HAHAHAHAHAHA and I will see what I can do about booking you in for some loving or punishment .... hummmm I think it will be punishment because my stomack still hurts..... MWAH
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
*sigh*... wow this chapter really was emotional!! (for me,anyway)! A big *whooooop* for Jasper^^ First he kicks the skank out and then he goes on and explains how the whole family needs her....awwwwww <3 And then there was the end and Bella admitting her biggest fear to Carlisle..*sob* what can I say- that was just heartbreaking! Her fears are comprehencible,though, aren´t they?! I mean what chance would they stand against her if she was turned into a newborn vampire - raging strenght and her various gifts? Yeah, we all know that Bella has a whole lot of self control but up to this point neither her nor probably the Cullens would know that she could/can stand her bloodlust...right?! There is just no way in hell that you would let Bella destroy any of the Cullens- but they don´t know that,yet ;D
I absolutely love the idea that Bella wants to work in hospitals just like Carlisle- that is really fitting for her (in my opinion)
I also absolutely love the idea of seeing the whole Cullen Clan/Cult *giggle* let loose ;D That would be just awesome....provided, of course, that a certain someone..*raises left eyebrow in a daring way and looks at you* won´t end up spoiling all their fun by sending another crazy vamp their way... ;D ;D (just kidding- you know perfectly fine that I love this story perfectly fine no matter how many maniacs on the loose you send their way or how much I´m complaining... ;D ) that would be just awesome!!! I could totally see them either in a game of baseball ( I mean, come on- one of the scenes in the movie^^ Bella can produce the right weather and there anough players and NO *wink* interferance by certain nomad vamps ....^^) or maybe clubbing or something?! In my opinion Bella needs to let loose just as much as the other Cullens and dancing your ass off could be good! First I thought a little come-together (I´m talking the traditional way-NOT the way Emmy would like to have it...that follows later ;D ) including Charlie and Jacob would be nice also...but then again, that would probably be quite weird.....what would they talk about?!;D
Oi- only one chapter left....
BTW- I think it is absolute hilarious that we both put on quite a show when we are reading what the other wrote...(that sounded kind of weird....) Not only this story puts a big as smile on my face (most of the time....^^ ) but your comments also! ;D And hey- as long as it´s gonna help you continue with this fuckawesome story I´m gonna continue stroking your ego ;D ;D
Oh and yeah...about the quality time *giggle* (god- I really am behaving like a 13 year old...*eyeroll*....)..... BRING IT!!! ;D *squeals and clapps hands* ....
Sue
Author's Response:
OMG I'm sad because I know you only have one more review for me to read and then I will have to wait until I post more... *pout* stamps feet* sigh* giggle.... I'm happy to hear that you found this ch emotional that means I did a good job... hehehehehe... That's the big question isn't it, if she turns out the same as a normal uncontrollable newborn that would be a disaster and I can't see how any of the Cullens would survive her gifts... she is very worried about that, but the family doesn't seem to be concerned... You can be fairly certain things will work out because this story would be finished if all the Cullens were distroyed but it may not be an easy road, or then again she could be totally born for this life and skip being a newborn... we will both have to wait and see what ny fingers come up with when the time comes, I honestly don't know how it will turn out yet.... YAY!!!! I can totally see Bella using her talents to help people and working next to Carlisle would be awesome hehehehe..... Oh you just wait, it won't happen in the next ch but the one after it's fun times, I am thinking Karaoke, and Bella may have a suprise for Edward.... OK OK I got the warning glare you threw my way, I promise I won't let Irina be too much of a pain.... I will have to do some baseball in the future, with Bella's talent it makes perfect sense... this is why I love reviews because I am soooo busy with all the drama that I wouldn't have taken time out to do that... MWAH to you for the suggestion!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA LMAO I know what you mean it is funny but I get such a kick out of reading reviews like yours and I can't help getting excited and making a dick of myself hehehehehe.... YAY!!! Can't wait for more ego stroking.... *Snort*shakes head and chuckles* You really do need a session with Master Jasper you naughty little thing you!!!! MWAH MWAH MWAH
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Alter Falter!!!! (German for something like "holy shit"....sorry- I needed to come up with something new... ;D ) I have no idea where to start here....the best would be with something ease...erm....yeah...Irina is an effing bitch!!! How dare she?! I really thought Tani was bad, but by now I actually feel sorry for her since it is not her fault anymore!!! Isn´t there some harmless and sex addicted vampre running through the woods somewhere or a random human moron she can seduce and live happily ever after with?!?! Where the hell is Mike Newton when you need him?!?! *gigglesnort* ;D But seriously- Irina has it coming!! If she´s really going after Bella, getting kicked out of the house by Jasper again would be the least of her concerns.....!! Can´t wait to see that...bring it,skank!!! *grrrr*
I loved Eleazar!!! We haven´t seen that much of him yet but I really liked him and his POV ^^ Bella obviously has the power to turn our beloved vamps more human again or better to say awakens some of their human habits ( I just refer to Edward fidgeting around in his seat while he waited for her to wake up in the last chapter....soooo cute...*gush* ^^ or all the other things the others have demonstrated) but seeing Eleazar rambling and actually choking- that was just too funny ;D Please let him be around for a while ;D I´m absolutely clueless and confused about how and why Bella is so familiar to him...(I know you did that on purpose... ^^ ) So, I´m dying to know about thei connection!!!
The bonding scene of the Cullen Clan/Cult *wink* was really beautiful and touching! As was to get to know that Bella "inherited" abilities from Emmet and Esme as well!! I could totally picture Emmy running around proudly with his fist up in the air showing off about it just like Eleazar said he would picture him to;D I wonder what Carlisle and Rose gave to Bella,then.?! I think absolute controlover his senses/instincts from Carlisle is obvious and from Rose maybe an even stronger sense of loyalty?! But then again, Bella´s always been pretty loyal.... . Hmmmm.....she doen´t need the beauty...maybe more confidence?!
Anyway, I loved this chapter a lot!!! And oh boy, I´m so gonna fidget around here until the next chapter ;D Can´t wait for it ;D
Sue
Author's Response:
OMG You can speak german to me anytime hehehehehe and than you for the translation.... It's hard to believe that english is not your first language going by your reviews, HAHAHAHAHA I love the ease you went from not knowing what to write to bashing Irina that's soooo funny, Tania is a ho and she has a bitchy side but she does have feelings, Irina doesn't have feelings she is a ho bitch that needs to be taken down!!!!! LMAO!!!! OMG Mike Newton, your not the only one that has mentioned him getting it on with either Tania or Irina hehehehehe I think I'm going to have to make that a reality very soon..... I'm glad you liked ELPOV you will hear some more from him in my next ch... I never thought of it that way, I think maybe because of their veg diet and the fact that they live in the real world with all the human that they display more human traits but Bella being Bella has no doubt brought out more and the fact that EL is soooooo shocked doesn't help... I'm pretty sure that what happens after his talk with Carlisle in the next chapt will make him want to stick around for as long as possible hehehehehe.... things will start to make sense in the next ch or two but if I don't explain everything in the next 3 chs let me know, because I would say you won't be the only one confused.... I so love your Cullen Clan/Cult hehehehehe funny.... I promise Bella's confidence won't be an issue forever something will happen in the near future that will change her slightly... ok no more clues hehehehehe MWAH MWAH MWAH, the last week has been so awesome, you have made me laugh cry and bounce up and down.... the is a tribute to you in my next chapt... Its pretty obvious so you won't miss it... just know that I put that in to make you squeal because lord knows you have made me squeal so much reading your reviews..... Keep your eyes open I have almost finished the next ch so it will be up in a day or two..... MWAH
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
.........................I think I just had a seizure....!!!!!.*tries to calm herself*...... HolyEffingMotherlovinShitSweetJesusBuddhaGodAllahAllSaintsAndSinnersAndEverythingThatIsLeftGodDamnItWoman!!!!!!!!!!That was soooooo fucking hot!!!!*light`s yet another cigarette*... I had to change my panties twice...TWICE...while reading Bella´s POV!!!!!! The first time was due to this fuckawesome demanding DOMINANT EDWARD *shudders just by thinking of it* and his *cough* oral skills!!! *shit eating grin* It seems a certain someone had a little nice chat with Master Whitlock....*smirk*!!! And YOU call ME naughty!!!! Gah!!! I soooo need to apply for some uality time with all different sides of Edward as well ;D ^^ The second time I had to change my knickers *gigglesnort* was due to all the different POV`s that came in!!! I laughed so hard I peed my pants!!! You are a genius- you put the term "multiple orgasms" under a whole new light!!! *squeal*
I also thought that Carlisle advising Eli to spend some quality time with Carmen or he would regret on missing out on some dirrrrty sexin was sooo hilarious!!! Gotta love a naughty Dr. C ( or Mc Vampy ^^ ) ;D
I´m really curious to find out what is going to be revealed/discoered by Eli and the others within the next chapters and how the remaining dots will be connected! We already knew that Bella had to have physical contact with Aro at least once since she has his ability and since Renata is his shadow she must have come really close to her,too...hmmm....but physical contact?! Oh well, we will see abou that as well ;D
One thing that came up in this chapter bothered me though, since I up until now never spend too much thought of it.....is it actually possible for Bella to become a vamp since she has the pack´s self-healing ability?! It is said that the venom immeadiately starts to destroy the organs one by one....but then again, Mc Vampy said that he observed while operated on Bella after her accident that her organs and injuries slowly healed themselves!!! *bites nails* Does that mean changing Bella would take longer than usually since there would be a struggle within her....or would it be a quicker turn ?!?!?!Oh boy....now THAT left me confused!!!! ^^
OMG- I can´t wait to see if and how you are going to put Mike Newton into the picture and with who is going to end up with!!! ;D Will Tania and Irina throw the bitch fight of the century or are tehy going to end up in a poly-relationship ?!?!? LMAO!!!! *squeal* Can´t wait to read that!!! On the other hand, I´m really dreading the moment Bella has to face her vampire mother!!! I have the bad feeling that Bella would end up killing Renee if the latter longs for her blood and there would be no easier solution...That would be just devastating- but what else could there be done?!
I absolutely love the idea of a vampire-baseball-scene-reloaded-wombat-style!!! If you are really going to do this- I know it would be a BLAST!!!! ;D ;D
Last but not least.....
*SQUEAL* OMG!OMG!!OMG!!!OMFG!!!! I can´t believe you put that Justin Bieber thingy into your story!!!! *bounces up and down and clapps hands frantically* My eyes popped out and I had to cough (yeah...I was smoking while reading that...I really should have known better..;D .....) and laughing so hard when I read that!!!! I swear, I almost fell to the floor because I lost my balance when I doubled over....(who the hell loses their balance when they are sitting on a chair?!?! YOU do that to me ;D ) due to my laughter!!! And not only that but you also popped my shoutout cherry!!!! Thank you soooo much!!! *squealscreech* You definately stroked MY ego with all those kind things you said!!! Fat ass fucking smoocher for that!!!! <333 Trust me when I say that the feeling is mutual and that I had a really awesome week with you and this fuckawesome story as well!!! I was always sooo excited to see you commented on my reviews!!! I anticipate those in the future!!!
If my German would lead to you giving an even quicker update- I´d write the WHOLE Twilight Saga in German in my next review.... ;D *cough* erm...no....but maybe something else ;D Sample ?! " Und so verliebte sich der Löwe in das Lamm" *sigh* (Trans. " And so the lion fell in love with the lamb")
Really can´t wait for the next chapter!!! Greetz to your hubby who had to endure your stomach aches ;D ;D MWAH (yep- I stole that one from you ^^ )
Sue
Author's Response:
*GASPS bounces up and down* HoLyFuCkInGsHiT!!!!!!!!!! OMG woman where the hell do I start with you????????????????????? Firstly please please please take a slow deep breath.... PMSL... Twice seriously that's priceless and I love it... hehehehehe *sQuEaL* I'm soooooooo happy you liked that chap and thrilled I was able to get you all hot and bothered, *shiver* yeah I wouldn't mind getting me some E loving in any way shape or form possible.... *sigh* It's nice to dream!!!!! *giggle* HA I almost didn't put all those POV's at the end but just before I updated I threw them in at the last second hoping for some laughs.... I still have to do a big bad naughty Carlisle/Esme scene, I know they have it in them to get down and kinky hehehehehe... There is still some EL stuff to come but to get the complete picture you are going to have to wait until Aro himself tells that story, heheheheheh as for Renata well she had her very own POV that you will hear when Aro is taken down... I am really excited by her POV I can't wait to write it....
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*GASP*CHOKE*SQUEAL* OMFG...WTF... WOW... Just when I thought you couldn't get any smarter FUCK ME DEAD!!!!! You hit the nail on the head, and I am stunned, I didn't think anyone would pick up the fact that her healing gift has to cause problems with the change... SQUEAL!!!! I'm not going to tell you what happens but I have been working on this chap constantly since I stared this story I want her change to be different from all other stories and I have a bunch of things in the works, let me just say that the healing won't be the only gift to cause her problems.... hehehehehhe
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HA I'm still trying to work out the who's and how's with Mike hehehehehe, it should be interesting at the very least...and as for Renee only time will tell, but Bella being Bella would probably sacrifice herself before she killed her own mother, Esme or any of the Cullens for that matter wouldn't let her do that though.... OH DEAR I think you put toooooo much faith in my abilitles hehehehehe I think when I write the baseball scene you may be disappointed... I will do my very best though I promise... OMG I did warn you that there was a tribute to you in that chapt and you still nearly killed yourself... hahahahahahaha... imagine what your reaction would have been without the warning... OMG not only has your review made me laugh a bunch but I just realised I have this dumb grin stuck on my face... HAHAHA I look like an idiot!!!!! OMG *Scream* FUCK No way.... I popped you cherry thats the funnist shit I've EVER heard *panting* doubles over in pain* FUCK YOU I can't take this, my stomach hasn't healed from your last reviews and you do THIS to me..... grrrrrrrrrr that's it... you really do need to be put over Master Jasper's knee, 20 strokes for you!!!!!!!
ah the german... yummy... I may need to get Alice to start blocking Bella in German from now on then Bella will know 2 languages and I can get german translations from you!!!!
*giggle sigh*
Ok I'm off to write the next ch so I can post asap and get more of these painful reviews hhehehehehehehe
MWAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never
Would you believe me if I told you that I squealed when I saw there was a new chapter up?! Like, before even reading the chapter....I squealed...*eyeroll for myself* ;D ;D ;D
I can understand that you as the author are naturally critical when it comes to your story when you say that you are not too happy with the outcome of this chapter because real life interfered and kept your mind preoccupied. I can honestly tell you though, that i really liked this chapter, even somewhat shorter than the last ones (maybe I´m just spoiled rotten...;D )or maybe it just seemed shorter than the others....ungh...I´m not sure I made sense?! ^^ Tell me if not! ;D
Bella cooking for Charlie was really cute! Especially the fact that all the other Cullen females helped her with the chopping! Well, except for Irina, but who cares about bitch ho royale anyway?! I really would have liked to know what the skank was thinking about,though! God- I´m waiting for her asskick!!!! *grins evilly* Oooooooooooh- I can´t wait for the engagemant spectacle ;D
You cracked me up once again! ;D Firstly, because one moment Master Whitlock *sigh* (my left ass cheek will never be the same again ....*giggle*) is in full force with Alice anf the next moment he is on stage with Emmet and sings Madonna!!! I imagine them singing with extra high pitched and girly voices ;D and then there was a moment my wicked and one tracked mind decided to make an appearance.... do you know Andy Samberg?! (If not- he is an american comedian and he is absolutely hilarious and the shit! Let me tell ya- he cracks me up so much. ;D ;D ;D Yeah, I know....hard to believe that someone can make me laugh *gigglesnort*....Anyway....not only is he part of Saturday Night Live but he also has some kind of side project in which he makes music that is not really supposed to be taken seriously....it´s called The Lonely Island or something like that.....and there is this one song called "Jizz in my pants" ...yeah I know, the title is pretty much self- explanatory...but it´s sooo funny because the song is basically about men being so easilly aroused that they, well...jizz in their pants during / due to the most random things!!! ;D It´s probably not so funny when i explain it- maybe you should youtube it or something!!^^ ) ....Anyway....in EPOV when he said that he is aroused by just feeling her presence and then seeing her on stage an getting a hard on....guess what I had to think about!!! Yeah- the song!!! I´m sorry!! I couldn´t help myself!! Or my twisted mind for that matter!!!*walks over to the nearest corner and feels ashamed*...*snort* yeah,right! ;D
I love Alice´s new nickname for Bella! "Little one" is my fav but twister is cute also ;D And fitting ^^ Bella finally singing for Edward...that moment was just sweet as sugar! ;D My French is really horrible, in fact, I can hardly say my name in French but my guess for what she said in the end to him would be "Edward, I love you" and than something like "I want to be with you for eternity"...^^ *sigh*
You know, I spent the whole week trying to figure out what else could complicate Bella´s change other than what you already confirmed but came up with nothing! Soo I´ll just gonna wait and see what you and that wicked mind of yours have in store!!! ;D Also, with or without the baseball scene or Mike effing Newton- I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY !!! And you, my fair lady with the wicked mind, are an effing superstar!! ;D ;D ;D
Goddamnsweetfuckery - there are still soooooo many things to come! The suspence and anticipation is killing me!! Both, for all the funny stuff and "awwwwwwww"-moments where you wish that you could somehow make Edward and the other Cullens real and switch places with Bella, as much as the moments where it´s going to be angsty and full of dread! I Thought about what you said about Bella and Renee and you are definately right! Although your Bella is a little different from SM´s , she´d still sacrifice herself for her mother!
What else is there to say?! Erm....oh yeah- if you were serious about the German stuff it would be my pleasure to help you ;D And in case you don´t know Andy Samberg and what I rambled about earlier in my review please check it out so you know what I have been talking about!! The video is soooo funny and I bet could understand why Edwards situation made me think about the song/video!;D ;D ;D BTW, I think the song choice for Bella was absolutely fitting! ;D
In case we are not going to read each other *giggle* before xmas, I wish you a merry christmas for you and your family and that you have a good old time with lots of food and presents!!! Can´t wait for the next chapter and your response!!! Frohe Weihnachten!!! (Ger. "Merry Christmas") MWAH SMOOCHIE MWAH
Sue <333
Author's Response:
WHAOOOOOOOO!!!!! Yup I left your review til last..... MWAH!!!! I wanted to make sure I had plenty of time so I could respond properly because YOU ARE JUST AWESOME!!!!!!! Now where to start????? YUP I would believe I made you squeal but only because I'm pretty sure I have created a monster on you....LMAO So glad about that by the way it a great feeling heheheheheh.... That ch was shorter than the last few but I had to get it out before HaleyAlice18 Birthday or I would have felt bad hehehehehe.... I am doing BPOV next ch so I will try to fill in some of the blanks, You can thank one of my lovely reader for the Charlie cooking scene, OMG I checked out Andy Samberg and FUCKFUNNY!!!!! *snort*giggle*PMSL* I almost decided on Emmett singing Material Girl but I thought that was just tooooooo mean HAHAHAHAHAHAHA but I could soooooo see it in my head..... SQUEAL****** NOOOOOO get out of the corner little girl HAHAHA you have nothing to feel ashamed of that was some priceless giggles shit..... SEEEEEEEEE what you do to me now I'm not making sense..... *sigh* well as bad as your french is you nailed it hehehehehehehe... I was going to translate it but I was feeling snarky so I decided to make everyone wait until my next ch... I know I am such a nasty bitch *grins evilly* hehehehehehe I can't believe my little story inspires your mind to try and figure out whats going to happen, it sooooo ace to hear that even whan you aren't reading a chapt that you are thinking about it WOW seriosly that just WOW as Em said Sends me to the moon or some shit hehehehehhehe but don't worry I'm sure my wicked mind will come up with something over the top hehehehhe *jumps up and down screaming.... YAY its ace to know that you love my story even if I can't get my head around baseball heheheheh... I am constantly wishing the Cullen Men were real, hey I'm not greedy one would do heheheheh... Ok OK I need to get back to writting the next chapt because I am hoping I can post again before Xmas, If I don't though BE SAFE & ENJOY MERRY XMAS!!!! MWAH like time 10000... I thank you for not hurting my stomach this time but I have to say my cheeks are sore froom smiling...
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never
Ok, first of all....*SQEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAL* OMG!OMG!!OMG!!! OH.MY.GOD.!!!!! I can´t belive there is an update and I almost missed it!!! ARGH!!! I wasn´t expecting it and BAM- there it is!!!! *Sqealscream so loud, it puts Alice to shame, while jumping up and down and clapping hands* YAY!!!! I´m grinning so much, my face actually hurts!!! ;D ;D ;D With that being said....
*narrows eyes, scowling; points finger accusingly in your direction* -.- WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!?!?! ARGH!!! A.BLOODY.CLIFFIE.!!!! WHAT.THE.FUCK.!!!! UNGH *throws hands dramatically in the air and starts pacing* Soooooo UNCOOL!!!! -.- And to top it off, the cliffie is like mid-action!!! GRRRR......How the hell am I supposed to live with all this suspense until the next update,huh?!?!? YOU.ARE.EVIL.!!!!!!! EEEEEEVIIIIIIIIL!!! With capital letters!!!! *flicks hair over shoulder,sticks tongue out and turns around* =P Goddamnit,woman!!!! *SIGH* * realizing that my desperation for new chapters can only be eased by YOU and your WICKED MIND posting updated I decide to end my tantrum and get back in your good graces; eyeroll* Seriously, that was mean!!! I mean, I really don´t think that there is any chance that Irena is going to make it out of there alive, now that even Tania turned her back against her and she has to face the wrath of the whole Cullen family plus allies!!!! OMG- bitch is sooo going down!!! Not only did she piss Bella off enormously...oh hell no, she had to bring things to a whole.new.level. when she attacked Bella!!! As for now, I couldn´t even tell who would have ripped her arms out and who would most likely be the one to actually end her (besides Bella herself,maybe?!)- the WHOLE FAMILY is most likely to do it!!! To/for Emmet,Jasper and Rosalie = nobody messes with Baby Sis!!!! Alice = nobody messes with Baby Sis, best friend, Twister!!! Carlisle & Esme = nobody messes with their beloves and precious baby daughter!!!! And as for Edward... ALERT!ALERT!! Nobody touches or even thinks about touching his Bella!!!! Argh- so many possibilities!!!!! So yeah- I really can´t wait for the next chapter from someone elses POV to see that shit happen!!! I need some kind of warning so I can get myself a bowl of popcorn beforehand,though!!!! ;D ;D ;D
Oooooo....I can´t wait for Marcus to come along!!! Not only do I really want to see/read how he is going to react when gets to meet Bella but also how he is going to take being around the Cullens and see them all together!!!! And of course I want to see what he is really up to!!!!Can´t. wait.!!!
Aro really has no idea what he is in for and what is going to hit him when he confronts the Cullens!!! I think Esme is going to take him down single-handedly!!! The way she talked when Carlisle and Eleazar talked about his plans!!!! WHOOOOOP- Aro beware!!! Momma Bear is on a mission to protect her baby cubs!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ...... Yeah...no way in hell it´s going to be that easy!!!
*Gigglesnort* BTW Carlisle and Eleazar - they cracked me up!!! They are like the über-nerds of the vampire world!!!! I had to laugh so hard because I had to think about the TV show "Big Bang Theory" ( in case you don´t know it- it´s about a bunch of young neurotic science/technology/comic nerds who struggle dealing with their freaky ways in the "real world" - soooooo hilarious!!!) Anyway, I so had to picture Eleazar and Carlisle doing their rendition of this show but with everything vampire-related instead of science and stuff!!! ;D ;D ;D Sorry.....I´m rambling...^^
OMG!OMG!!OMG!!! *Sqeal**Jump**Clap* The baseball scene was soooooooo awesome!!!! I loved how Alice and Jazz were "fighting" over who got to have Bella in their team!!! And that Bella and Alice were playing against each other because they both can tell the future!!! And oh my god- I almost peed my pants in laughter when Bella tricked/pranked Emmet for being too cocky!!! That was soooo hilarious!!! *snort* I almost felt bad for Emmy!!! And then the thing with Alice!!! Ooooh...they are going to have so much fun in the future whenever they play Alice and Bella against each other!!! ;D ;D ;D Just as good as Alice vs. Edward!!!! I have to say though, when I read that they would let Bella play ( i absolutely love that you did that) I REALLY hoped that she would play against Edward to teach him a thing or two!!! ;D ;D ;D But Emmet nearly killed me!!! ;D THANK YOU!!!! ^^
And oh hot damn!!!! Naughty Edward and his dazzle-kissing ways!!!! I´d sooo sacrifice myself to work on this...*cough*...technique!!! ;D ;D ;D Hmmmm....Edward!!! <3 ^^
Anyway...!!! Thank God the word count for reviewing isn´t limited!!! ;D I absolutely loved this chapter-just like pretty much every chapter before!!! ^^ I can´t belive it´s almost 70 chapters now AND that you are close to hitting 1000 reviews!!!!! YAY YOU!!!!! ^^ I´m desperately awaiting the next chapter!!!! ;D MWAH with a cherry on top!!!
-Sue
Author's Response:
*COUGH*GIGGLE*SNORT* OMG You really are trying to kill me woman.... hehehehehe, I was soooooooooooooo fuckin excited when I started reading this that I nearly fell up the escalator I was on.... I soooooo don't need a trip to the doctors because I have a new chapt to finish before I get hunted down and slaughted.... I must say that your description of your response when you saw my update is pretty much the same as me when I saw your review, except I had the pleasure of getting wierd looks from strangers while I was as the shops..... hehehehehehe..... BUT IT WAS SOOOOO WORTH THE STARES!!!!!!
HAHAHAHAHA OMG ok *cringe* Nah I'm laughing toooooo hard at your words to be scared of you right now, seriously thats some funny shit you were shouting at me, I would say sorry but fuck I'm not because how can I be when I get such drama filled pouting and feet stamping from you!!!! hehehehehe, SOOOOOO LOVE YOUR ANGRY SIDE and the eyerolling is AWESOME!!!!!! YUP EVIL is my middle name, and that cliffie was soooooooooo worth your wrath..... MWAH!!!!! You totally need to get the popcorn ready for the next chapt but I will warn you, maybe you should get some tissues too you may need them... hehehehe.... Marcus isn't too far off but probably a few chapters away....I'm looking forward to writing that...
No matter how you look at it Aro is fuck but I think Esme will hold her wrath for Renee... OMG I LOVE BIG BANG It's one of my fav shows hehehehehe, I can totally see what you mean about Carlisle & Eleazar hehehehe sQuEaAaAaAaL I was sooooo worried about the baseball because being Aussie I have no idea how that game is played so I tried to make it a little fun to take the focus off the rules *it's happy dance time* I'm soooooooo glad you liked it...YAY.......
ahhhhhhh dazzleward hehehehhe I soooooo wish he was real......
OMG you're not the only one who is glad there is no word count on reviews, FUCK GIRL I hang on every one of your words....
SQUEAL GASP FIST PUMPS IN AIR!!!! OMG I knew I wasn't far off hitting 1000 reviews but I only get between 10-17 for every chapt I post... but I just got a new reader too who is reviewing so I'm gonna get there soooooo super fast now its AWESOME..... I can't believe the ride this has been, when I first started writing I had all these ideas but there is NO way I would have thought I would be at 67 chapt with still no end in sight.... WOoooOoooOo HoOOooOooO....
MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!!! YOU ROCK !!!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Never Say Never
OMG! OMG!!OMG!!! There you are!!! I was just about to write you a mail because I was kind of worried that something bad happened! I´m so glad to hear that you are ok !!! Jeeeeez- I missed you a.fucking.lot. but I can totally understand that there are more important things that have to come first!!! If anyone is giving you a hard time about it- send them my way ! ;D
As for the chapter...HOLY SHIT INDEED!!! What the fuck happened there? I never, for once thought, that Bella would inherit Irena´s succubus- spell or whatever it is like that! I even reread my review for the last chapter, but nada! I knew that something happened when Irena grabbed her, but I thought she hurt her physically and not implant her demon seed into her!! ( eh..is it just me or did that really have a double meaning?...ooops! ;D ) Especially since Bella seemed so scared and the demon thing was so dominant!!! Oh boy...!!! And the way she lured Edward in? And that her physical appearance actually changed? For the better according to Hornyward... ;D Lol!!! But seriously, I´m not quite sure if it´s a good thing or a bad thing that that happened!!! Don´t get me wrong - Hprnyward having fun is definatly...ungh...nice...and interesting...and fuckhot!! (I´m just saying how it is! ;D ) BUT since Bella´s new 'roomie' took over, I´m not so sure and a little concerned how the real Bella feels about this! I mean, they had some funtime before- but Edward´s reaction towards her new appearance and demonic spell may make the real Bella feel a bit insecure about how it was before?....Ungh..I don´t know, maybe I´m rambling againg because I still try to wrap my mind around what just happened!! ;D
The last part of EPOV really left me wondering...but I´m sure whatever the fuck happened- it has to do with the light and the feeling that Marcus saw and effected!!! What else could it be? But that onl left me more confused ...! Grrrrrrrrrrrrr!!! *sigh* What am I gonna do with you and your crazy yet brilliant ways???? At first I thought Marcus couldn´t attack the man because of the animal blood he had for some time now and the 'veggie conscience' had set in, but I´m not so sure anymore...or at all!!! ;D
No matter what it was - I´m looking forward to find out! I´ll just add it to my list of things to be solved! ;D
Even if you don´t get to read or reply to this - the chapter was really good and lef me even more intrigued! And I never thought that this was possible! ;D Same old, same old - the story and the author are fucking awesome! ;D
Mwah! Mwah! Mwah! <3 ^^
-Sue
Author's Response:
MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!! had to give you a quick reply, you kill me with your words lady hehehee.... Trust the author Bella will be more than fine with this curse hehehehe.... In fact, due to her pure heart the curse/demon is no longer a threat, and when you read Bella's POV you will get a better understanding of how it all plays out... Yes Bella is scared, but once she embraces her new side she will be even more amazing than before... giggle... Just imagine a Bella so loving, kind and generous that is now totally sensual and erotic to boot.... OHHHHH Edward's a lucky luck man heheheheh.... SQUEAL... Marcus POV will all come together very soon, maybe after BPOV you will get a better understanding through another family members POV as to WTF is going on hehehehe.... ALL WILL BE EXPLAINED...
MISSED YOU!!!! thanks a bunch for bringing a smile to my face....
YOU ROCK
FBI psychologist Bella Swan is being stalked by one of criminals she helped put behind bars. When she is forced to leave her home town to lay low for a while, she meets the most gorgeous man she has ever seen. Is he really who he says he is, or is he working for the stalker?
Thank you NoelleSeven for the banner!!!!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 277257 Read Count: 40875
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Haunted
Really nice chapter/introduction!!! I really liked what I read so far!^^
I absolutely love that you switched the position of Bella and Edward (as in Bella being the gifted one but not being able to read Edward)! Jake was creepy and soo deserved his kick in the nats ;D
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Black Holes and Revelations
And here we go.....I was dreading this moment.... *pout* ;D
I´m really curious about what is to come now!!! My guess is on Black being the mole....^^
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Secrets
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! And BAM- here we go!!! While reading the last bit of the chapter I was thinking that they all are going to be pissed at each other when they find out what the other haven been doing...especially Bella...but finding out like THAT?!?!? Holy fuckery!!!
Slowly, the bits are coming together!! So Bella looks like James ex-girlfriend...and all his other victims....Is it just me or does that sound bad?!?!? ;D ;D ^^ Maybe I was a little too hasty saying Jake was the mole- but the way he behaved in the elevator was a wee bit intence and suspicious!! Oh well...I´ll just have to sit and wait here patiently to out....;D
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Everybody's Fool
*Sigh* what can I say...I know it was unevitable that Bella would find out and the way she found probably importan in itsself since she wouldn´t have gotten to know certain things about Edward and the case...but still...-it´s just sooo frustrating!!!! I have though that they will come along...and soon!! ;D
Author's Response:
Hi, Frist let me say that I have tremendously enjoyed reading all of your reveiws over the last couple of days. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave them. Nope it wasn't good the way she found out. But I can promise you they will work it all out. I am a HEA kind of girl.
Thanks again for reading and for alll your awsome reviews. I can't wait to see what you think of the rest.
EA~
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 False Pretense
Whew...you really weren´t lying when you said that there was quite a bit of info in this chapter! ;D I still have no real idea who the accomplice could be- there are so many possibilities/ suspects! You are really evil ;D
Poor Bella- she never stood a chance against the force of a doubled cullen- charme ^^ Especially not when the manipulative pixie was involved ;D Nice to see that Bella made first contact with Edward´s family and that she FINALLY got to meet Jasper ;D I thought that would never happen ;D
Is it just me or was Edward´s reaction towards invitation to join her,Jasper and Chelsea and Marcus for dinner a wee bit...off?! Is there a little bit more to their story?! Hmmm....(I´ve read a quite stories recently which were a bit mysterious, meaning it took a while for all the dots to be connected...so yeah...I may be a bit paranoid by now and see things and get suspicious about them when there actually nothing about it...*eyeroll*...- just ignore my ramblings if it gets too much ;D )
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 My Last Breath
*phew*...really good chapter!!! My emotions were all over the place! From gushing over Edwards sweetness to suspense when they entered the house to dread when Bella sank to the floor/ when Edward and Emmet shot at the door..(because of the gas- could have been inflammable)^^
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Used To
Holy Shit!!! Duuuuuuuuude!!!!Where the hell did you got the idea for the closet trap from?!?! That could have come straight from CSI (insert city name here ....^^) or something like that! Thumbs up for that one!!! ;D I still have no idea what to think of Jake....is he the accomplice or is he just a jerk?! Yeah, he got injured, but that could have been a sacrifice for the cause...but then he went to find out if Bella was ok....grrrrrrr....I´m getting frustrated over here ;D Oh well, I still love the story!!!
Edward was as sweet as honey as always!! ^^ And yeah, Bella made a step in the right direction by talking some stuff with Edward out...but goddamnit girl, grab that guy and give him a gig ass smoochie!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Never Say Never
Sooo....meeting the parents prt. 1 went really well!!^^ Charlie and Landon really were sweet ;D
Is it bad that I kinda want to give Bella a slap in the back of her head for not saying those three little words to Edward?!?!?!. Like in his face and not just his bedroom door!! Yeah, I know she had a lot to deal with and she has still a lot to struggle with....but give that man a break! Impatient much?! Why yes, I am, thank you very much ;D ;D ;D There were at least three moments in this story I thought she would do it....but no! ^^ I know, it´s porbably going to happen really soon, but still!! ;D
Anyway, looking forward to Bella meeting Edward´s family and everything else! ^^
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Love You Out Loud
FINALLY!!!! *happy dance* And it was worth the wait!
Wow, the whole Garret thing is nothing but a great piece of fucked up shit!!! It is so much more understandable now why you made Bella have trust issues now. I somehow wish that Garret is in any way involves with James and they find out or that he at least makes an other appearance so that they all can kick his sorry ass all the way to next Easter!!! He wouldn´t know what hit him!!! ;D
Not that I had expected anything else, but good to see that Bella meeting the Cullens went well,also!! Their issues with Edwards career was somewhat understanable but pretty harsh nevertheless!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Monsters
Wow- that was a really interesting and intense chapter! I´ve been waiting for James to make an actual appearance- and I was definately not disappointed! That was just creepy! I wonder if it was so smart for Edward waiting outside for Bella and James saw it! Since he was around the office a lot now too...he could become a target also...right?! I mean, James wants Bella after all and James saw them together...or James could change his demeanor since in his eyes, Bella could be a whore now too since she was there with another man when she is supposed to be with him! (that was from James POV- not mine)
Jacob really pisses me off!! Not only from what he did again in this chapter, but also because there seems to be more off about him than he being a big jerk and total pain! What the hell is wrong with him?!?!? *grrrrrr* But then again, his name was not on the log in list.....so either he uses some fake ID or something (but I doubt that that is possible while visiting someone like James in prison) or he just isn´t the accomplice! Yeah,...simple as that ^^ ;D ;D ;D
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Lady in Red
Holy Shit!!! WTF?!?!? Someone was in her house?!It keeps on getting better and better! Oh boy....! You are evil!! ^^ I really can´t wait to find out who that damned accomplice is!!!
Wow...Chelsea relly is a bitch!!! Jealous much?!?!
I really,really,really can´t wait for the next chapter!!! the suspense is going to kill me slowly while my paranoia will get the best of me until then ;D ;D ;D
Sue
Author's Response:
HI, I know it’s been a while since the last update, but the wait will soon come to an end. I hope you all had an awesome Christmas is you celebrated it. I know I had a great time with my family. So even though it’s a little late, here is a little gift from me in the form of a teaser form the next chapter of TLA.
The next chapter will post on Friday morning and we will then get back to our regular routine.
I can’t begin to tell you how much your support and love of this story means to me and how much I appreciate your patience while I took this short break.
~Eternally Addicted~
Here’s your teaser.
“What are you up to, Cullen?”
“Just wanna help my girl relax before she goes to bed. I know this has been hard for you and I want to take care of you. Is that so bad?” he asked as he took my hand and pulled me up off the bed and held me tightly against him.
“Mmm, nothing wrong with it at all,” I said as I reached up and placed a soft kiss where his jaw and neck met. “I just have one request though.”
“And what would that be, Sweetness?”
“That you join me.”
“I think I can arrange that,” he said lowering his face and covering my lips with his. Without breaking the kiss, he picked me up and carried me to the bathroom.
Setting me back down on my feet, we began to undress each other, taking our time and savoring every moment as we kissed and touched until we were both bare. Edward had dimmed the light in the room, giving it a soft glow similar to that of candle light.
“No candles?” I teased, leaning my head back, allowing him better access to the spot on my neck where he was currently placing languid open mouthed kisses.
“Nope. Remember you are the only woman who has ever been here. So I am totally unprepared for setting up romantic moments. But you can be sure I will rectify that as soon as I can because I plan to have plenty of them here with you.”
“You’re gonna spoil me, Edward.”
“That’s the plan, Sweetness. Now let’s get you in the water before it gets cold.”
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238931
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Jellllllllllls!!!!
OMG, what a chapter that was!!! A lot to take in, but there is so much going in- it makes sense! Oh boy...I don't even know where to start! Oh well, how about the beginning- WTF?! That scene was just so...GAH! The idea of choking from your own blood, basically drwoning in it...damn! And all S.M. had was a loudy papercut! =) Poor Edward was utterly helpless and Rosie had to save the day be feeding on Bella! That one really had me wondering- since the feeding created this special bond between them- with all that shit that's lurking around the corner and wating to attack, shouldn't they all just feed on her? Only for safety reasons, of course =) LIke a Blood Bar de Bella lol! ^^
But seriously, there so much stuff threatening to happen! It's not even a question about who is going to attack them (except you have more villians up your sleave we don't know about yet! *raises eyebrow*) or the how, it's about the when! When are they going to attack, or better, in which order!!!! Ungh...don't they have any rainbows and butterflies in Vampiro World? Must there always be a dark cloud of foreboding hanging over their heads?! Damn you! I fthis all just foreplay, I'm not sure I can handle the main act/ climax =) Bb, You. Are. Killing. Me! But I still luv ya and your crazyness lots! Kepp your madness coming!
Mwah ~ Sue
Author's Response:
SUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry for the late effin' response. Between RL and working on a chapter for LAH made me crazy busy. It was nutz >:(
LOOOOOOOOOOOVE your comment!
Hehe you're absolutely right, they all shoudl take a bite outta Bella. Coudl you imagine all the overprotectiveness over her? They'll all me crazy, but she'd be super safe =) Love the way you think. LOLOL@ Blood bar de la Bella!
Yep...there's more villians...and some are not what you expect...and when they will strike *shrugs* *laughs*
Anyhoooooooooooooooooo, when R U POSTING???? I'm dying here. U R Killing me missy! I have some time to read now, and u haven't posted =(
Thanks again,bb! Your comments always make my day/nite/ afternoon whatever the time of day it is =)
XxoO
Jells
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
!!!!!!
Why you evil, little.... GAH! By now, I should really be expecting you leaving chapters with an effing cliffie, but I'm still falling for it every damn time... -.-
I seriously can't decide what you are more into: looking for the best way possible to end a chapter with an evil cliffie just so you can make your readers (totally talking about myself here...) growling at their laptop in frustration, OR looking for/ finding all the ways Bella Swan could die from! I mean, there she was minding her own business, coming down from that intense high that fuckhawt sex in the woods got her, and then you have to get in that car- I mean, send that bear along her way! =)
Oooh, that whole Bella/James thing is getting scarier and weirder with every chapter, too! What the hell is going on with that! Oh, and don't get me started with Bree! Never saw that coming- I thought Riley would be the one to join in in James little psycho games! Well, he probably did too, but Bree...gah!
Damn you, there so many different thing sgoing on at once in your story, I forgot half the things I wanted to say! I couldn't even tell you what I'd like to get solved first! The whole Aro debacle, Tanya's deal, the drama with James, the trial,... OMG, I sooo hope that they'll grant Bella true mate-rights, but knowing all the shit that you're throwing out there for her left, right and center, she /Edward will probably get denied!!! EEEEEVIIIIIIIIL!!! Seeing Purrward behind bars and Bella forced to be with someone else would make me so sad, but it's obvious it would be better and safer it it came down to it. But seriosuly, DON'T DO IT!!!! =)
Wonder what's going down in the Cullen house...Ben finding out about Angela's pregnancy--> could be a happy roar, right?! =) =) Or maybe, Ben's father found to get to them undetected?!?! Ooooh, boy! Can't wait to find out!
Awesome sauce, bb!
Mwah!
-Sue
Author's Response:
LMAO!! I am evil *snickers sadistically* I'm like the Cliffie Queen, don't you know already? lmao
Yeah, the James thing will be wrapped up soon actually....ch 26 I believe. Things will go down south pretty quickly. Charlie is running an investigation on James and the Beirs-Tanner family. He knows something is up as well. But that will be revealed in like ch 25 or so.
Lmao you think Edward will get denied? Hmmm... you'll see, you could be right *zips lips* lol
I will say this, the pregnancy with Angela is actually a good thing ;D lol See? Not that evil, right? lmao
Anyhoo, I gotta get going
Did you ever get my email? I wasn't sure bc I have been having problems with it.
TTYL
xoxo
Jells
Oh I though this was cute...lol
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
GAH!!!
OMG!!! Ungh...what? Seriously?! Do you really Bella that much?! You just as might hit her with a car and then hit reverse just to do it again! And again. And again!! =) Eeeeviiiil! Somebody should start a list with all teh things you had her going through...so far! ( I just know there is more coming...) And now she is stuck with Riley-who is kinda shady on his own- an his cousin...JAMES! GAH!
Let that poor girl become a hybrid already! =)
No time for a long review- need to know wtf is going to happen!!! Your own faul! =P
-Sue
Ps. Oooh, Angela might be preggers! Oo
PPS. Thanksfor the Rob Fangcandy! =)
Author's Response:
Suuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeee *Hugs you* Sorry for teh late reply =(
Lmao, I know, everything always shitty happens to Bella. Ain't that a bitch. LOL Things will get better...soon. But shit will hit the fan very soon, possibly ch 22 already.
Thanks bb!
TTYL
Mwah
xox
Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Oh. My. God!!!! I don´t even know wht to say right now! I´m speechless!!!Mike AND Tyler?!?! WTF??? (I know it was only said that Tyler only distracted Chrlie, but still he must at lest know about it!!!) Oh my....Ben and Edward or Anybody! better get their asses there and soon!!! Well, I´m waving my hand and say "Bye, bye, MIKE!"
Angela and Ben were really cute!! The whole instant marking/mting was sooo awesome!!!! ;D Especially Ben´s ' "Ram, bam, hello Ma'am " !!! ;D LOl!!!
As for Aro...Jeeez! That is going to be something!!! I´m both anticipating and dreading it!!!
Please update soon!!! This story is soo awesome!!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much=)
I will post more asap.
Thank you for reading and all the comments along the way =)
xo
~Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Well, damn it all to hell!!!! This is soooo good!!!! Sending Bella to a all-vampire- town to visit a all-vampire high school!!! That´s like presenting the sacrificial lamb on a silver plattern in the lions den!! Jeeeeez!!!! ^^ The storyline so far definately seems interesting so say the least, and from what I´ve read so far it didn´t disappoint!!!
I like your idea of the vampire-race and that they are even able to reproduce! I have to admit though, that I need some time to get used to the extendable fangs! I think the idea is awesome, but my wicked mind makes me depict them always huge, like a sabertooth or something like that!!! I KNOW you said they aren´t THAT big- but my stupid mind just won´t listen!!! ;D ;D ;D Oh yeah, and the idea of a Bloodsicle freaked me out a bit!!! ;D
Charlie and Renee as vampires is definately interesting also!
Hmmm....Victoria, James and effing Tanya....sounds like a lot of fun....NOT!!!!^^
Can´t wait to see more of the Cullens!!! ;D I´m so curious to see all the things going to happen!!! I definately have some ideas (most of them involving this smooth and confident Edward.....;D ) but you never know!!! ;D
Really awesome so far!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you are enjoying the story so far. It's quite different and my mind is umm...kinda twisted. lol
Yeah, lol, the fangs aren't too long. I probably make them sound really long like you said, a sabertooth. They're just average size...think of True Blood. It's sort of like that. lol
Thanks again,
Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
HOLY HELL!!! I sit wrong that I find this Edward extremely sexy?!?! Like, A. Fucking.Lot. !!! ^^ I´d let him mark me!! ;D And you made him some kind of vampire - wunderkind ?!
I really wonder if that was the last we´ve heard from Tanya... Hmmmm.!!!!
Can´t wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
LOL. Thank you =) I'm glad that you find him sexy. Actually, i'm relieved. Sometimes I doubt myself about Edward's sexyness. lol Hehe at vamp wunderkind.
I just hope that you'll like ch 10. It's.....different. That's all I'm going to say, that's unless you'll still like this story of course and continue to read. lol
Thank you
~Jells
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
*lits cigarette* Fuck me, that was hot!!! Jeeeeez!!! Not that vampire sex itself is wild and crazy in itself, nooo! Edward and Bella need to include bear-foreplay, threesome-mastorbation (kind of ;D ) and Edward adding little facts like his dick having fucking barbs that could tear her up from the inside, like they werre nothing here and there!! Damn, if that ain´t adventorous than I sure as hell don´t know what is!!! But seriously, the barbs freaked me out bit!!! ;D ;D ;D
I may have to rethink my opinion about Mike Newton...he IS pretty creepy and/or really, really dumb ... I mean to taunt and spur Edward on like that?! He definitely has it coming if he keeps that up!!!
OMG, the fight was really good! But I´m freaked out about what Aro will do now...Geeeeez!!
Where does the language come from, btw?! It kinda seems like a mixture of Latin and English ^^
Really good chapter! Looking forward to the next one and the Ben/Ang encounter!! ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you Sue!!! =) I'm happy you liked. So yeah the barbs...lol...that's why I tend to get nervous when ppl read ch 10. It's....umm..different. lol
The language is a mix of Serbian, Romanian, some English and a teensy bit of Russian and Latin. But I mix around the letters. lol
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Hey!!!
Please don´t think I´ve abandoned your story, since I suddenly stopped reviewing hust after you told me chapter 10 possibly could be a little too much for me!!! I was just preoccupied with other stuff and fully intend on finishing reading this story!!! ^^
With that being said.. I´love your vampires,even if I´m only a few chapters into the story! But theres something about them...They are dangerous, animalistic even but caring, gentle ,teasing and playful at the same time! Oh yeah, and they are pretty damn hot ;D
I wonde if it is actually allowed for Bella and Edward to mate, since she is a human and whether it would be allowed for her to be turned?! I mean, they can´t have forever if she is mortal and vamps do mate for life...because if not, they are pretty much playing with fire, aren´t they?! Bella stated that she ´d get punished for giving birth to a hybrid, but can the vamp government actually forbid mates to reproduce because one partner is human?! Or did I get something wrong?! Sorry for the rambling! ;D
Geeez, Jasper claiming Alice without so much as an hello was brilliant! ;D
Oh God- Bella´s blood danation kind of remembered me of myself!! Not that I´m donating blood on a regular bases to vampires, but the nurses always have a hard time taking blood from me, which pisses me off because it takes for ages and I had needles...
Something about the whole situation with the new pills and having to donate twice a month is absolitely fishy!! Oooooh and Edwards is there and not too happy!!! Hmmm...angry Edward!!! ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Hiya Sue! *waves*
Thank you for letting me know. That was so kind of you =) I appreciate that.
Thank you so much =) I'm happy that you like my vamps. I always get nervous since they are so different than SM's.
No you're not rambling. I love questions. Vamp law is very strict, and unfortunately a human is not allowed to have offspring, but they can sex with a vampire just as long there is no hybrid created between them. And as of now, humans aren't allowed to be turned. Aro is one crazy vamp. But since I want a HEA, I think there's a way around this crazy vamp law. lol I do want them to be together for forever.
Thank you. =)
LOL. Could you imagine if you had to donate blood to vampires? OMG! lol Awww I would be pissed too. I mean to poke at your skin the entire time. Ugh!
Thanks again,
Loved your comments!
Thanks again,
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Well shit, the ending only confirmed that stuff was going on!
Oh yeah...Eff. Me. Sideways!!!! The making was really,really hot!!! James is freaking me out, since there is no way in hell that he learned his lesson by now, but the marking was hot! And it was in front of the whole school! ;D
The tattoo-carving was an amazing idea!!! Effing brilliant!!!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh shit!!!! Edward is going to go ballistic when he finds out what happened!!! Geeez!!! That poor girl!!! Really every bad thing that could be after is actually after her!!!
Do you want my suspicion as to who the killer may be?! JAMES!!! He is so obsessed with her, wants her as his mate but can´t have her, so he does teh next best thing and kidnappes, rapes and then kills girls who look like her, pretending it was Bella!!!! Some fucked up shit that is!!!!
I´m so impressed with how much thought you put into this vampire world with all its little datails- i mean c'mon blood chewing gum?! Or the fact that the vamps actually eat certain food as long as blood is in it etc....not everybody could make stuff like that up!!! As I said before- effing brilliant!!!
Those ignorant vamps pissed me off to no end!!!
I loved Charlotte, Pete and Ben, though!!! Especially Ben!! Is it just me or will he get to know Angela when she come to visit Bella?!?!? ;D ;D ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =)
James is one sick twisted vamp that's for sure. But my lips are sealed. lol You'll see soon enough. lol I love the guess =)
And thank you, I try to think of everything that I can to create this vampire world. There's soooo much more I need to cover. lol I'm not even halfway there yet.
I adore Ben. I like the way you think. Angela....will visit soon ;)
Thanks again. I enjoy hearing from you
~Jells
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Holymothereffingshit!!!! What the hell is going on?!?!? *Grrrrrr*
Wow, A.Lot. was going on in this chapter!!! I don´t even know where to begin!!! Jeeeeeeez! ^^
I know, it´s part due to the fact that he is the usual suspect/villain, since he already was in SM´s version, but I really do think that James killed the Bella -Doppelgänger and Victoria! Besides, no ther suspicious characters were mentioned yet. Except for Laurent and wel Mike but I don´t think Mike would do that,...or would he?! ^^
Don´t ask me why, but whenever it is mentioned that Edward is markind Bella or licking her cheek, I can´t help but get the picture out of my head how Bella does the same to him ;D Of course, she can´t mark him like that since she is neather a vamp nor does she have any venom to insert, but I still see it! Like she playing to be the vamp and claims him?! ;D ;D And I absolutely love how they are teasing each other and that Bella isn´t really that shy when jit comes to Edward ;D
Oh yeah, their little 101 stunt was prety damn hot!!! ;D
I really, really wonder how you are going to make Bella a vamp without sealing her fate!!! And what was up with her being sick?! And who the hell is watching her?! And who is coming for the Cullen house?!?! Soo many questions!!!^^
-Sue
Author's Response:
LOLOLOL!
Yeah, it's almost information overload. I'll cover more about Bella's "illnes" in ch 13 or 14.
Hmmmm... i love the way you think.....you'll see soon about the vamp killer...really soon.
Hehehe. Yeah, when Bella becomes a hybrid. Which you'll find out the physical characteristics in ch 12. You'll see when the time comes for her, how animalistic and playful Bella will be, even more so than now...including Edward.
Thank you =)
~Jells
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
OMG! I don't even know where to begin here...Jeeeez! :) Hmm..ok, first of all- THAT'S what I call a long ass chapter! Thank God that there isn't a word limit for chapters ;)
Oh my...so much happened in this chapter!!!I'm soo glad that Renee, Angela and Bella are fine and that Edward ended Mike's sorry ass excuse of an existance! That's what you get for pulling a stunt like that! That's waht you get for messing with feral Vampward's true mate...*snapping my fingers in a zig-zag movement* I can't belive that this psyco actually tried to force mate her!!! WTF?!
Then there was the whole blood donation thing! Oooh, how I would have loved to actually see Em interacting with the little girl!! That was sooo cute ;) But then the stupid ass nurse and the other staff members in the hospital screwed it all! At least Carlisle is allowed to draw Bella's blood...you've got to start somewhere, right?!^^ I loved how adamant Carlisle was about the nurse calling Bella by her name and not her registration number! And how protective he- they all are about her!! And Angela as well! Hope she can move to Forks with her family soon! ;D Forcing her and Ben apart would be just too cruel! I wonder if his family is going to come around some day!!! Ooooh...and I'm curious to see how the other vamps in town (especially at school) will react towards more humans around!!
Btw school...do I really have to get started about the little incident I like to refer as 'the day Bella got her period and effectively made all the male students - and teachers!- at school go nuts'! ^^ That was so crazy...it was like one of those AXE commercials, where the guy uses the stuf and instantly every girl he passes starts salivating and gets aroused..(this could also be called the Edward Cullen effect!!! ;) Lol ),...only Bella put things to a whole new level with her little stunt!!! As for the cherry lemonade...that was a wee bit freaky..(to me, anyway^^)...but I guess from a vampire's position (or better to say Edward's position^^) that was the ultimate experience ;D ;D ;D Have I actually mentioned before that I love his little animalistic quirks, like licking her cheek and the purring? I think that is soo good! ;) I also love the way he (or they all) switch from being this feral predators to loving and gentle lovers/protectors! ^^
I also liked Bree- I think she is quite cute, but I'm not sure what to think of Riley yet...he doesn't seem too nice at first sight, but that could just be you trying to trick us! ^^ We will see about that...but I think somethimg is up with him! Ooooh...and Aro will grace us all by making an appearance next chapter? Oh my...that could get ugly, too!...More like, probably...actually?! Oh Jeeez- can't wait to read that! Aro has a lot to loose on the one hand but I don't think he'd like to mess with Edward and the Cullen's just for fun...I. Can't. Wait!!!
Reeeaaaaalllyyyyy awesome chapter! You should reward yoursel with a big bowl of ice cream for this! ;) I lobed every bit of it!! ;) Oh, and congratulations for the nomination- you totally deserve it!^^
-Sue
Author's Response:
Hiya Sue!!
OMG! I LOVE your comment. Thank you so much =)
BTW I'm lovin your story! I'm going to finish it prolly by tomorrow. Once I got to reading I couldn't stop. I adore your dark Cullens. Truly unique story you have there. =)
So yeah, IKR? Thank goodness for no word limits. lol It was crazy to write. I kept editing and editing...it was exhausting. lol
Yeah, Mike is finally gone for good. He had to go. Edward was acting on his vamp instincts.
Aww thanks. I'm happy you enjoye dteh blood donation scene. I actually had two versions of it. I'm glad I picked the right one. Phew. lol
Yeah, Ben and Angela are in for some tough times. But I hate to keep them apart. I think the move to vamp tonw will happen soon. I wonder what the vamps will say to that. lol
LMao! It's just like the AXE commercials. Hehe
Hahah yeah the cherry lemonade....it is quite freaky. But I guess to vamps it could be described as a treat. Like....dessert. OMG that sounds so wrong. lol
Thank you. I'm happy you like Edward's vampire side...his animalsiticness <-- is that a word? lol
Yeah, I'm nervous for the Aro scene. It's nervewracking and idk why. lol Lots of pressure, I guess. Bree is sweet....and Riley....well you'll see.
Again, Thank you soooo much! I enjoy hearing your thoughts. =)
*hugs*
Jells
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
JELLS!!!!!
What the hell was that?! OMG!!! Yeah I SO NOT saw that coming! At all! Jeeeez...Bella's driving all the males crazy- we already knew that! But the principal?! Sweet baby Jesus! Yikes! Whose idea was it again to sent the poor girl to school while aunt Flo was visiting?!?!? Seriously though, another reason to curse out her menstruation- you can't leave the house whatsoever because your male mate might end up in a fight with half the male population of town over you!!! =) I don't think I'd return to school ever again if I was her...poor girl is cursed- there's always something going on with her! Even why she finally tried to hide in the car, she was in danger! Honestly, I was waiting for James to show up...that would have been just her luck! Oh boy.... I'm glad he didn't!!!^^
I do get why she was upset with Edward and his behavior, but damn girl, that poor boy almost killed me. And what an effing way to end the chapter!!! GAH! My guess- Edward was so unsure, sad and insecure in regards to Bella and their relationship, was afraif of losing his true mate -and that did a number on him! Hence the writhing on the floor in agony! I think... That is, of course, unless you have something else planned for him/them! Ah dang, do I even want to know?!-Why yes, I do! Tell me NOW!!!!! *growls* =)
I really, really,really can't wait for the next chapter! And the one after...^^ This story is so damn good!!! And what is this about another story?! Jeeeez- do you guys ever sleep? Or eat? Drink? Oh wait a second....I know what you guys are...(you have to imagine we're having this conversation somewhere in the woods of a small and rainy little town....=) =) =) lol) Seriously though- you guys are nuts!!! But I admire your guys willpower and your fuckawesome creativity!!!
Luy ya,bb! Can't wait to read your mail! ^^ I'm still on my Rob at the MTV Movie Awards induced high! lol =)
Mwah!
-Sue
Author's Response:
SUE!!!!
Thank you soooooooooo much, bb!!! Your comment rocks!!! Love it!!!
LMAO! That's what I ask myself --> WTH was that? lmaooooo Told ya it was a strange chapter. But.................ch 15 will be stranger. But I need to do this to set the stage. Be prepared, it will get kinky. lol
LOL. Yeah, the principal was a perv. lmao He couldn't control himself. What a douche. lol LMAO@ Aunt Flo. <--- I love that.
James will appear soon. Well, maybe not that soon. But let me tell ya, when the James scene arrives, Bella's world will fall apart and Edward's. Yep. *nods sadly* The Mike Newton thing was nothing. James is a part of something so sinister, it's crazy.
Great guess. But nope, something is happening to Edward and he needs help fast or else.....
LOL. No, we hardly ever sleep. lol Buahhaa we are nuts. And I think i may get nuttier and be brave enough to post Love of a Fighter- that Human dominating vampire world fic. But idk...that will be too much to update. I'm drowing as is. Oh and speaking of stories. Where's my RITD? *scowls at you* lmao j/k
I'll write you back this week. I'm sooo effin sorry I haven't yet. My new job and trying to catch up with writing has taken my free time.
IKR? I'm still in a Rob high state. lmao Sooo effin' hawt that man is.
Thanks again, love hearing from you and I'll talk to ya soon.
Love ya!!!!!
XxOO
Jells
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Jells.....
First off- I'm so, so, so, so terribly sorry that you're still waiting for a response to your lovely mails and that I only now found the time to read your new chapters!!!! I'm working on rectifying it right now! First reading and reviewing and I give you a pinky swear to mail you as soon as I can- weekend the latest!!! I would have done so earlier but there really was hardly any time- too much shit going down here... ANYWAY- as for the chapter....
OMG- I blushed so hard reading this! Seriously! I thought Bella turning on every male Vamp in town with her period-causing them to absolutely freak out over it- and everybody knowing about it in the last chapter was bad. BUT trying to have sex with your new, improved, stronger and foremost bigger mate, who happenes to be a horny vamp, while your soon-to-be father-in-law, supported by your soon-to-be brothers-in law try to prevent that from happening! Like, literally pulling you and said horny and lus-crazed mate apart from each other- while your doing it.... Yeah, stuff like that would do that to me...!!! =) =) =) OMG!!! That scene was so wrong in all the right ways!!!!!
And the fact that Edward went through The Change already....tells me, that he needs to be prepared for whatever shitstorm is going to come upon them and already know you have in mind for them! Don't even try to deny it- you admitted as much =P The whole Aro thing is so shady- nothing good can come out of it when he is involved! We already know that Edward and Bella both are part of this prophacy- so he is definately after them! GAH! Yeah, I'm really curious to see what the heck will happen to them all! BUT they should definately make sure that Bella gets somewhere secluded from the very beginning in 28 days- so much drama will avoided then!^^^
Awesome chapter,bb! You're doing an amazing job, but you already know that! Up to read the next chapter now, so- read me in a few! =)
Luv ya!
-Sue
Author's Response:
Sueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee OMG *waves like a crazy nut*
No problem, bb! Take ur time. No rush. I totally understand the RL thing. I've been crazy busy myself. Write when you have time. =)
LOOOOOOOOVED ur comments!!! *giggles* IKR? I'm such a perv, I couldn't help myself. Daddy C, Emm and Jasper just had to pull Bella away from Edward. And Edward's still trying to thrust. lmao *hides face and blushes* I have my pervy moments...err...correction, Edward AND Bella have their pervy moments. I just write what they do *looks innocent and grabs halo* =P
Thanks again,
Hope all is well
Love ya, bb!
XxOo
Jells
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
What the hell, Jells?!?!?!?! Cliffy bitch, much?! That was so bad- downright cruel!!!! OMG!!! Isn't there enough on their plate as it is?!?! GAH!!!! Bella's eyes bleeding...what?....hell to the motherloving no!!!! I remember that bleeding from the nose,ears and eyes was one of the first sideeffects of the meds the humans have to take to increase the red blood cell count or something like that AND that it will eventually lead to the death of the victim once it developes further...! So once again- WHAT THE HELL,JELLS?!?!?! If that's really the cause why her eyes bled (not that I could think of anything else that would cause such a reaction) and there is no way to cure it- Bella needs to be turned into a hybrid, asap! Like, now!!! Aro is after them anyway- why not give him a reason, at least?! Speaking of the devil- that sick fuck! Public execution of his own son?! I don't think that will sit too well with his 'fellow vampires'.... Serves him right!
Ungh...I have absolutely no idea what to fear the most that could possibly happen to our beloved vamps (first, that is!)!!!! The list just keeps on getting longer and longer!!! Right now we have Aro, the possibility of Bella being really sick, a certain vamp that is on the loose and now that you also mentioned the werewolf-species- which is in a constant battle with the vamps over dominance- and could come down to good old planet earth and start another war...who also happen to be carnivores...so- doubled thread for all humans to get eaten!!!! GAH! GAH! GAH!!! Hells Jells, really? You're such a damn devil! You and that wicked brain of yours!!! =) Jeeez- the suspense is effing killing me!!!
I serioisly can't wait to read the next chappy!!! I love your twisted yet brillaint mind, bb!!! Oh, did I mention that the shower scene was damn hot? If not- the shower scene was really, really hot!!!
Biting my nails until the next update! Luv ya,bb!
-Sue
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO!!!!
*waves* =)
IKR? I LOVE cliffies as much as I LOVE mindfuckery. And the funniest part was that it wasn't even an intentional cliffy, I was going to keep writing..Buuuttt...I got tired *grins* So yeah lmao
But no worries, I should have ch 17 up this week sometime *crosses fingers*
Yes, exactly, it could be the medication.....but *shrugs* maybe not. I do live a good mindfuck, ya know. lol
I think Bella will be human for another 11 chapters at least. lol Yep. So much more to cover, but you never know...I don't always stick to my outline. The ending is the same, nothing changes there, but what happens in between tends to be twisted. I have like 3 outlines for this story. lol
*giggles* at wicked brain. You should see my dvd collection, it's mostly horror.,,,99.9 % of it. lol
Yeah, there's so much going against them. And the werewolves, if they decide to invade....things will get really messy. Sooo idk...we'll see.
Thank you so much. Glad you liked teh shower scene. That was such a pain in the a** to write. So thank you, that means a lot to me.
Anyways, I LOVE your comments. They make my day!
I'm anxiously awaiting an update for RITD! I'm having withdrawals. =(
Hope to talk to you soon, bb!
Love ya, smooches! <3
XxOo
Jells
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!
Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards. See banners below.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark
Whew- Edward is pretty much intense and pretty much out there,isn´t he?!?! ;D ;D ;D
Like the vibes of the story very much so far!! Curious of waht is baout to happen and what had already happened.... ^^
Author's Response:
I hope you like the next chapters! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass
Awwwww - the thing with the Bella / Emmet painting was really just too sweet!!!^^
Author's Response:
Thanks. I enjoy writing thier backstories.
It has been an utter loss to Twilight fans that Stephanie Meyers did not finish Midnight Sun. I know I was devestated and could not let it end where she did. That is where my obsession began and it ended with the next three stories from EPOV. Sorry, but I couldn't help myself, I needed to know how it ended. But what came as the biggest surprise to me was how it did end... I never would have guessed after writing for the next three books it would have ended this way.
So join me on this most intriguing journey of Edward's. I promise some surprises, some good, some not so good. I do promise to give you an end, one hopefully you will enjoy.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Man Of Faith
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74360 Read Count: 3200
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Balance
OMG- I´m such a moron...I must have overread that you continued Midnight Sun when I started reading Dark Moon!!! Ugh...*eyeroll* So glad I read your comment to my review!!!! ´So, I will continue MSC first and then return to DM !!!
It took me a moment to figure out/remember where MS left off^^ Again, I think you did a really good job!
Sue
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Mind over Matter
I absolutely love those last chapters!!!!The meadow / first real date scene was always the one I most longed to read in EPOV!!!! OMG- you did soooo good!!! I really can´t belive it!!! I love the way you captured the contradictions within Edward between his reasonn to stay away from her and his desire to be as close as he can manage! And his inner ramblings and the way he scolds himself....awesome^^
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found this story and love it so. I loved writing it. Thanks again for reading and hope the rest is everything you hoped for.
Renee
Can Bella overcome the destiny that has been laid out for her and find the Promised One in time?
The Prophecy
The one with balance will seek out the Promised one.
She shall find him in a forest of rock and steel.
This warrior is a child of the Goddess, yet will be raised far away.
He will return and aid his people in sweeping the darkness from the land.
He will place the one with balance upon her throne and will stand by her side for many years.
OOC for some characters
Some Human, Many Mythological creatures, not the world you are used to.
Complete 01/07/2011: Prophecy; Part One
Up Now: Part Two; True North
Character List for Part One & Two
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103125 Read Count: 31122
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: C21 Proving Edward
Oh boy...that was wuite the pissing contest!^^ Hmm...excited to see where this is going to lead and with whom Bella will end up with! This story is awesome! Jeez!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: C17 Truth Hurts
OMG!!! Did I get this right? Aro is Alice?! Or well, Aro disguise dhimself as an Alice?! WTF?!?!?! OMG! ^^
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: C13 Jelous Boys
Ungh...yeah,I know..the male pride and all...but seriously, Jasper can be quite the prick!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: C12 Betting Against Alice
Ooooh- this keeps on getting better and better!!! ^^
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: C2 Fates Collided
Oh my... I just started reading this, and it's been amazing so far!!! I thought it was soo beautiful that little Isabella was accompanied and guided by the Uleyth!! I absolutely admire your imagination! (Even though I'm only 2 chappies in^^)
-Sue
Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.
This story is about how the strength that family love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.
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Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Speak copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27175
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Oh sweet Jesus, I think I just had a sugar induced seizure!!! Could Edward get any sweeter?! How cute was it when he bathed Ant and the little boy rambled along and then got insecure about Leah wanting to be his friend!! Oi, and Ant already started with the matchmaking, huh?!?! ;D
But, Edward and Leah took it to a whole new level! How he instantly felt protective of her and wanted to make her smile all the time? He totally developed instant fatherly feelings for her! And he was sooo good with her! Without even knowing about her 'special situation' ( for a lack of better words ^^) he did everything right and until Emmet explains the whole situation to him (and ME!!!) he won´t even realize how big of a deal it actually was that she opened up to him like that!! Awww...and when Leah took his hand and later came back running to and hugging him??? Jeeeeez!!! ;D ;D ;D
I can understand why Bella reacted the way she did, but I bet she feels reaaaallllyyyyy sorry for that now!!! ;D How funny was Edward when Bella kept on jabbing him in the chest and he got turned on by it?! Hmmm...I can tell that there´s gonna be a lot of fun along the way with Emmet randomly licking windows and Edward sporting boners in inappropriate situations ( there was a child around after all...^^)
Seriously can't wait for more! This sooo good!! I'm glad you like my rambling, btw!! ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
Lol, love it, your going love the breakfast meeting that coming up. Pancakes and the cullen boys mmm make the dentist appointment now lol :-)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Oh my!! That´s not good! I bet she is playing with Ant inside his house or somewhere outside besides his ship! Poor girl! And poor Bella! I really, really want to know what happened to all of them!!! (Yeah I know...it´s only been 4 chapters....) SORRY!!! I can´t help myself!! ^^
Keep the chapters coming!!! ;D
-Sue
Author's Response:
next chapter up in couple of days. thanks :-)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
Awwww... Edward and Anthony together is just as sweet as sugar!! Sooo cute! <3 ^^ I really wonder what the deal with Ant´s mom is though, when Edward says that he wants to come up with a way to ban her from his life?! Must be something bad!!! I also wonder if Em and Ant are going to play matchmaker for Edward and Bella.... ;D ;D ;D
As for the diffrerences between the relationships of Bella/ Leah and Edward/Ant..well, Ant and Edward definitely seem more carefree from what was to see so far. But I would say that that´s more due to the character traits of the kids?! But both parents are really protective of their kids! And that´s exactly how it´s supposed to be!^^
Hmmm...I wonder if Ant and Leah end up in the same class at school?! Oh, and I bet, Esme is so gonna join Ant and Emmet playing matchmaker...^^
Aaaaand.. -I can´t belive that Carlisle would set Edward up with Lauren!!! I bet there will be an encaounter with her and Bella later on! Maybe even Mike (and Jessica) too ?!?! Lauren is sooo gonna turn green when she sees that Edward and Bella get along just fine... ;D
-Sue
P.S. Only one chapter left to read so far...bummer! ^^
Author's Response:
i love your rants, i wish more people reviewed like this. I also like where you train of though is going, mmm Anthony matchmaking, I wonder.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 -
Yep, my interest is definately piqued! ;D I love Emmet!! Jeeez, licking the car door window?!?! ;D ;D I´m already anticipating the first encounter of Bella and Edward...! ;D ^^ Hmmm...I hope that Rose will follow them to Forks as soon as possible!
Really good! ^^
Author's Response:
lol, love your review. thank u, I aim to please