Reviews by FlSunshine
Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 - Surprises

ok so forget my last review question.  You have an amazing talent/gift.  Thank you so much for sharing with us.



Author's Response:

I knew you'd find it, so I stayed quiet. ;) Thank you so much for the compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading. I hope to have the next one out as soon as I can. :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Really loving this story, do you have the name for the third segment yet?

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - Forgiveness

Too funny with the Rpatz joke !!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

uh oh................whats going on???????  Love the update wish it was alittle longer.

Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

love the intensity of the story, the feeling you can give to Edwadr and Bella and Emmett in this chapter, very very good.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow what a beautiful chapter, a little stalkerery ? is that a word?  Btu it explains everything so well.

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47777
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

great story, really loved it !!!!!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171465
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

wow, very involved story. So many plots and twists.  I am encouraged that youare an Edward/Bella HEA girl.  please don't let me down.  Thanks for sharing your story ,

ps. please let Edward get to 2nd base !!!!! He deserves it !!!!  Dinner cruise and all !!!! 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great chapter , Bella with a hotgun i can see her as annie oakley i just doubt many of the readers will know who that is,  ah the wonders of google

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76225
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Two Steps Forward, One Step Back

great chapter, loved the way Edward talked to her about his past, wish we could get to her story thou........

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1

Welcome back, glad you are ok hope RL hasn't been treating you to bad. Thanks for the chapter !!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Getaway

great update, hope rl is treating you well !!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer Outtakes for the story Femme Docs and Kevlar Knights.  It all began the year her parent's died.  The boys took her to the beach that first summer trying to cheer her up.  It ended up being a yearly tradition for Bella and her boys.  Watch as their relationship matures and develops from one end of the pendulum swing to the other until they finally find equilibrium.  These outtakes also fill a few of the gaps between the wedding and the epilogue.  Come enjoy the angsty, hot, and volatile journey.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69300 Read Count: 26418
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Last Summer With FDKK

Wonderful story, thanks for the outakes !!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AH After Bella Swan's best friend releases a portrait of her, it is purchased at an auction by Edward Masen, famous photographer and notorious modelizer.  Edward seems to have an irresistible draw to Bella. Can Bella accept Edward's attention? Is there more to Edward's attentions than meet the eye? Originally by xx.Nikteche. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, TBR
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161174 Read Count: 174120
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Feb 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Definitive Beauty

wow, love this story so far !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Candid

gotta love a story with a gay Jacob !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue: Three decades of Wedded Bliss later....

Wonderful story !!!!   Beautifully written, love the details, and the flow of story line !!

Sinful Thoughts by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Sinful Thoughts

 

Edward is adopted by the Swans at birth. A growing attraction threatens to destroy a family.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84224 Read Count: 25615
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

wow, loved your story from chpt 1 even thru REnees admission.  Loved that ending !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed.

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55106
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Little Things

Wonderful chapter, lvoe your story !!!! 

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

wow loved the update,  and we understand that rl takes precedent ad sorry it has been kicking your ass lately.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the understanding. Its all good, and i am glad you enjoyed the update. Cheers for the coffee cups. I love those suckers.

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

WOW, I found your story yesterdy and have been reading it since. So much emotion, I had a feeling on what Esme's problem was from the beginning.  Hope Edward can understand Bella leaving, please don't make it too hard on them.  Eagerly awaiting an update.



Author's Response:

thanks! :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

wow, thanks for the update, i had almost given up on your story.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Wonderful update, laughter, terror, and Edward all that was missign was lemons, but next chapter.  Merry Christmas to you as well !!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27772
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3, Friends

wow, so much to this story, and i know unless we have divine intervention i will need a box of tissues, please just make sure you give me a warning in the a/n

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995723
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Well thank you to Fiorella for her help, but thank you to you too, for our PLU World !!!!!



Author's Response:

Well FIS, if it wasn't for all of the encouraging pm's and reviews, I don't think that we would be here - so my love, thank you for your faithful readership!

xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

well thank god, he woke up before you ended this chapter, because I woudl have come to your house to say wtf????     Kisses for having him wake before the end of the chapter !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh Sunny, THIS RIGHT HERE??  This is why I don't do angst (too much) - we don't do angst well around here do we? And I was too pissed off with his stupid sense of protectiveness that i had to shoot the little shit!!!  But the fun and games are not over - he is a horrible patient!  See you next week - this was just a bonus xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh i forgot, beautiful wedding details,  and the honeymoon is hawt !!!!!!   Loved it

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

oh wow,  baby time, sweet sexy edwar dbuying those baby outfits  !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I love your story!!!  Can't wait for the next updte !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Wonderful story, alot to cover ina chapter, and you do it so well.  Hope Edward proposes soon, i guess nextg we have the interview with V F   And then the awards show !!  how often do you update?



Author's Response:

thank you - I update every Saturday morning (my time) - which is 2 hours ahead of Greenwich Meantime

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Favorite parts - Esme talk with Charlie

Not so Favorite - bella crawling, will try to understand this better it justs seems so demeaning, maybe in the next chapter youcould explain her veiw and Edward's view so i can better understand.

Worries - i hope that edward makes sure during the party that bella looses no respect and doesn't get hurt.  She tries so hard to eb the best sub for him let them have a good night / good time / with perfect behavior.  Thanks !!!

 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

wow, so many ups and downs in this chapter,  hell yea the Bella for Slapping Edward, she needed that and so did he.  Glad Garrett was there to help them.  Like the talks she had with Jasper, Alice and Esme and Carlise.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for review

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Oh my ?!?!?!?   Poor Bella never gets a break.



Author's Response:

she will - promise!

 

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Loved the chapter, and the munch !!!!!  So glad they were able to have a great tiem and pocitive experience for them at the party.  She behaved wonderfully and he protected her and did his job too.  !!  Loved it, gonna borrow Edward now until your next upate Thanks!!!! 



Author's Response:

Go for it!!! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

loved the chapter,   i would sell my soul to have Edward as my slave for a weekend. Thanks for giving me lots to dream about !!!! You rock !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

good chapter, lots of hard things covered, i think it will help them grow to a more loving couple !!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

great chapter, loved Alice's reaction to Bellas UPS comment.  IT was priceless !!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

it was something that I would say, and alice's reaction would me my daughter's!!  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

loved the chapter so much in it.  Very much wondering what did MR C. do with Esme?????   Loved Bellas scene with Kate watching.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Love this story, your chapters are long and very full so i find no problem with updates every 2 weeks.  Have a Merry Christmas



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your understanding and support. the outtake will be up in the week

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I believe the punishment fit the crime.  It seems more severe buit they upped their relationship to the next level. sort of like amateure to professional.  Love that Charlie is getting better and the peek at their life.  Love Seth to pieces.  Glad Bella got closure with Billy, very smart throwing him in there.



Author's Response:

thank you for the comments and the review.  Billy is a part of Charlie's life and Bella knew that she would have to face him sometime.  See you in a couple of weeks.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

loved the chapter, so sweet Edward and anderson, emmett and the brain damage i was in tears and had to explain it to my husband.  loved the proposal, have seen the business with the floods, so very sorry and will keep you in our prayers and help where we can.



Author's Response:

I couldn't resist doing that bit with Emmett - I was giggling to myself when I imagined him explaining it all to first Bella and then Carlisle! thank you so much for your comments.

love,

Michele

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

wow, Thank you for Brian having the talk with Edward, i think it went great.   was Charlie wedding was great, poor Bella I cried with her over charlie leaving her and goign to do things with Seth.  And I cried when she todl Edward.  Why would they hurt her liek that?  Love the talk about finances.  Great chapter



Author's Response:

thank you FIS, it's good to know that you felt what I did when I wrote it xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

loved this chapter, so much it was worth the wait !!!!!  But Brian still needs to have his say with Edward. 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

????????  how in the world did she pull that off.  Wonder who the mother is???????  great update !!!!!!! Hope you are feeling better



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review - she is one evil bitch that's how!! Fee is feeling better, thanks so much.

Update soon xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

Absolute best chapter so far !!!!!   i willa dmit i skipped thru the Alice and Jasper part, just not interested i am kind of just an Ed and Bell gal.    So wedding and baby,  i think for the scene it shoudl be the shirobi ( isn't that the rope tying one?)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

ok holy crap a 10lb baby, Em should give Rosie a medal.  Bella deserves a trophey for dealing with Alices wedding.  Edward gets a blow job for being so good with Bella.  Still interested in what the play party scene will be.  Great chapter !!!



Author's Response:

thank you! play party up next

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

there was sex, just nto alot,  great chapter, what was Edwards gift did i miss it?



Author's Response:

thanks for review and I'm glad you liked it. The pics of the gifts, dress etc up next.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

wonderful update, added you to my prayer list.  Sorry for the death threats last update.  :)



Author's Response:

hey there sweetie, I will pass on your good wishes to Fiorella and don't worry about the death threats - I've had worse!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

wow this was one long ass great chapter !!!!  i think Bella has baby fever. 



Author's Response:

hmmm

:)

Thanks for the review xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

oh i ove it !!!!!!   I was right !!!!!  she was having baby fever. !!!!!  I get Edward for one night for having the correct answer right ?!?!?!?!?!?     Shit i know Bella won't share, if i had him i woudln't let him see daylight, we would be under the sheets forever !!!!Wow, somuch in this chapter you really worked your ass off.  Thank you!!  it was wonderful !!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, you were right, but I couldn't give all my secrets away!  thanks so much for the review and comments

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

hmmm, strange way for the chapter to end in the middle of a sentence.

Bella shivered in delight at the vibration of his voice in her back, "I don't know about

 

????????  maybe there was a problem with the update.  hope for an update soon.



Author's Response:

THERE WAS A PROBLEM FI, BUT I HAVE FIXED IT AND REPOSTED IT!  thanks for bringing it to my attention.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

glad it was fixed,  car and esme going threu some issues,  i think she is way overreacting and he is feeding off of that.  lovein Edward Bella and thepossums



Author's Response:

thanks for the review fis xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

wow, hoyl crap nthat was long, but wodnerfu;.   and merry christmas to all !!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

wow loved this chapter,  christnas, new years and checking out a ranch.  oh and don't forget the spankings.   love it !!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

really great chapter !!!!  I rate it a 25 on a one to ten.  Can't pick a favorite part, from the dr appt with felix, to getting her clothes at pea/pod, love how he shows her she is beautful, love her standing up for herself.  love your dana or dan dan.  and the new car.     speechless !!!  out does the guardian ha ha ha

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

wow, great update, sonot sure about thenew arrangement, i can see it going either way,  really really well, where they become so muchmore closer and devoted and passinate, that is the wayi hope it goes, but can also see it being a bomb.  With only 4-5 chapters left that is not alot to put in Edwards new project with garrett and a couple more babies, unless she does twins again.????  Love your thinking and ideas and story !!! Thanks again for sharing !!!!



Author's Response:

Hey there Sunshine,

Thanks for the great review and comments - it will all come together, I promise! 

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

oh shit if you are menaing what i think you are meaning, i don't know if i can read it. Please pm me if Edward is going to be infaithful so i can skip that chapter.



Author's Response:

oh FIS - have you not learned by now? Have a little faith in me, Darlin'!  Do you honestly think that after EVERYTHING we have all been through with this family that I would allow one of them to stray???  Not bloody likely sweetheart, so relax and I know that you will love the next chapter.

Michele xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

i will keep reading this story as long as you keep writing, my favs from this chapter, "Bella says why woudl I believe anyhting you guys write about my husband" and her defending herself on the dance floor.   .   This story is my number 1 favortie of all time and all sites.   Thanks for sharing !!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, FIS - you are the best!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Those uncles are heros,  I love them.  I really enjoyed this chapter, so glad that Edward and Bella are doing so well. Makes me wonder if her delivery will be textbook or if there will be a hitch, maybe Edward sits and prays and thinks back over all his time with her and their relationship while waiting for her to wake up or something similar, nothing to scarey  just somthing to give him the time for reflection.  



Author's Response:

I love the characters of Ernest and Nicholas that I created - they are such fun!  OOhh you love the drama, don't you?  Okay so let me see what I can do about that, then!  xoxo

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

wow, lady you have outdone yourself with this chpater, amazing we had lemons and more lemons, childbirth, more lemons, cranky toddlers, beautiful babies. the uncles !!!! and nominations for academy awards.  you rock sister !!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Wow, I had a feeling it woudl end in Italy as that was where it started !!!!!  Amazing journey you took us on.Thank you for that !!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

game

Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77092
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Epilogue

grreat story, i really enjoyed how you weaved the characters together and your story line.  Great mix of everything, and loved thelemons.    I would love a sequel to this one!!!



Author's Response:

I am working to try and get my co-author to either agree to continue it with me or to give me the ok to do so. Thanks so much for the reveiw and for reading.

 

EA~

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Hall of Fame Induction Outtake

so beautifully written. loved it !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

EA

Summary:

SEQUEL to "Dance with Me." Bella & Edward have found their happily ever after, but life still isn't easy as the two try to start a family around Bella's medical history. Will the stress of it & Edward's career be too much for them? And what does life have in store for our favorite couple.  AH/AU/Canon*LEMONS*

 

tfymBANNER


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101525 Read Count: 19465
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2013
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: I Would Die for That

was there a tissue warning at the beginning of this chapter?    Eagerly awaiting an update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/11066/images/Tasteofinnocencejpeg.jpg

Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

good chapter !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

yes yes yes,  I;ll marry you



Author's Response:

Hehe don't make Bella kick your butt :)  I'd say yes too though!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue 2

awww.  I loved this.  you are wodnerful, thanks for sharing !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  So glad you loved it, this was my favorite chapter by far.  Thanks for the review ;)

Summary:

To keep Edward--a freshly graduated police officer--from getting underfoot in a break in, Charlie sends him to 'baby sit' a barely legal Bella. Love ensues. Lemons. Lots and lots of lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130777 Read Count: 21097
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Mar 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow, Anal sex first before vaginal sex, and for a virgin.  Don't thinki woudl have gone in that order.  but we are talking walking sex god here  EDWARD !!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When they move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlise's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness. Will he be able to resist? AU/EPOV

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80415 Read Count: 18444
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Great story, really loved it !!!!!!Well written.

First & Ten by Nolebucgrl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 828]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback.  Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two?  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons.  An entry in The Sport of Love contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Leaping

Wow, loved this update.  And she got darn close to the package !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Haha I'm so glad you loved it!  She did get close indeed! :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Fumble Recovery

wow, footbaALL field sex !!!!!!  I woudl rather have pillows.  But then again anywhere with Edward woudl be good i guess



Author's Response:

Haha well it wouldn't be something I would do a lot but totally worth it for a once off!  I've always wanted field sex and I gave it to them. hehe

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Grounding

i loved it, nto esme's cancer scare but showing the way  is changing in his feelings, his reactions, growing up, leaning on bella emotionally.  A+   could have used a bigger juicer lemon thou



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you loved it.  I'm not happy about Esme either but I really loved the way Edward handled things as well.  Juicy lemons will come, my dear.  Thank you!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 Roughing the Passer & His GF

omg, i have been laughing my ass off !!!!!!



Author's Response:

I love hearing that!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 Blindsided

loved it !!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible

i liked it,  love that buddy character !!!!!!!   and Edward getting shit from players..... hmm guess i never thought of that



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Buddy's a blast to write.  I love him. 

Edward was bound to hear it from fellow players.  They live to get in your head ;)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long

great lemon reunion !!!!!  glad they are getting together



Author's Response:

Thank you!  They needed some citrusy times!  They're taking that next step!  Thanks so much for the review :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher

omg   i almost peed my pants !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Heheh I'm hearing a lot of that!  Love it :) Thank you!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer

bravo bravo bravo ..  loved it !!!  And what the guys did was great !!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you loved it :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass

oh i can't wait charlie and renee in person, that will be great, i bet renee grabs Edward package saying she just wnated to get a vibe from it ?!?!?!?!!!!  soudns good huh!!!!!   love it



Author's Response:

Haha I think Bella would kill her if she tried!  But it would be funny.  Glad you're excited for it!  Thank you!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields

omg, rofl !!!



Author's Response:

Hehe so much fun!  Love Emmett's antics!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground

love the phone call with her parents !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I thought it was a lot of fun :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag

i had forg ot all about the commercial,  well done !!!!!!



Author's Response:

TY :)  I try to bring everything back around!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout

really great update, glad esme was ok.  She did tell the truth right?   loved the intricities of their relationship.  i hadn't really thought about him having a bad day and a terrible  game because of it, and then she had to write about it.    Very good plot this chapter 



Author's Response:

She did tell the truth.  I wouldn't have her lie about that.  I'm glad you liked the plot.  I was very much looking forward to writing this work conflict for both of them.  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs

very exciting, great update !!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  Thank you :)  More soon!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Conference Championship

oh wow great update !!!   can't believe Emmett added Edward to that tape.  hmmm wonder how Edward will propose????



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Of course Em had to bring Edward into it!  And Darnell.  Anything he could get :) 

We'll see! He has a plan :)

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Super Bowl XLVI

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you hon! :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

wonderful as always !!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 Mile High

nice,  very nice !!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Super Bowl XLV

well written



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Faithfully by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 774]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/10011/images/faithfully.jpg

Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC

Banner by: Evilangel813

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2016
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Patience

youhave got to be kidding me....... WTF??   Is she serious or just insane????  Poor Bella hope she doesn't lose the baby fromthe stress  please don't go that way.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Hit Me With Your Best Shot

well she is young, she does have the preg. hormones,  and that would be a lot of shit for nayone to handle,  so i don't believe she was a brat, maybe just scared.

Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

banner

SIAU

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

loved it, never had a story with these type of character personalities.  It works, wish JAsper woudl step and maybe stand with Edward thou, maybe the four coudl put up an allied front B & E / J & A



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  Hope you read on!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

really loving your story, glad they are getting their own group, and I like Jasper.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  I'm glad you like Jasper.  :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love that he is going to figure (finger) out how to give Bella an orgaism.  



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing!  Almost done with the next chapter...hopefully you'll be as amused as I am :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So funny, google, is Edward's best friend huh.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

very cute chapter !!!!!!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

great chapter !!!



Author's Response:

Thanks :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

good chapter,  too funny--   a basket of condoms,   Edward's talk with his parents.  on adam - i couldn't care either way.  Love how he is taking her to the bath after.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

aww that was so sweet, poor bella the talk with charlie   colossal peen  lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading & reviewing!  I'm glad you liked it :-)

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i understand, but don't you think that he is a little young to figure that out???



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & revieiwing!  And no...I don't think he's a little young.  I work primarily with 14-18 year olds, you'd be amazed how many of them already know.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

you have a true gift. a wonderful imagination, and a VERY LOVING AND SINCERE HEART. Thank you for your story, I love it.  Can't wait for your next update !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth